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**Mere ghar ki deewaro mein ** -
25th February 2006, 11:05 AM
Aadaab Dosto
aaya hu ish mehfil mein fir se kuch naya lekar Umeed hai pasand aayega apko.Aur agar kahi kuch galat likh diya ho to plz bataiyega
Shukriya
"Phool na sahi kaanto ko chum leta hu
Tere dard ko teri mohabbat keh deta hu
Jab kabhi yaad teri hadd se gujar jati hai
Band kamare mein simat kar do pal ro leta hu"
Mere ghar ki deewaro mein chhupi hai kahani meri
Aansoo kahi dard aur tanhaiyo se bhari hai zindgi meri
Kya kya naa gujra saath mere ye humse kya poochte ho
Wo raat wo chaand bhi de raha hai gawahi meri
Roya tha main saath mere mera bistar bhi roya tha
Aasmaan se barsa tha paani hui thi jaghasai meri
Kab ka dafna chuka us dil ko jo kabhi dhadakta tha
Lekin ghar ki dar-o-diwar mein nazar aa jati aashanna-ii meri
Har Patthar ka butt khuda nahi hota ye jante the hum
Fir bhi humne usko khuda mana ishse jhalakti hai nadani meri
Mere ghar ki deewaro mein chhupi hai kahani meri
Aansoo kahi dard aur tanhaiyo se bhari hai zindgi meri
Navard-e-ishq mein kya hua kya bataye hum
kabhi humne yu khud ko harata naa dekha
Kaise Samjhau Dil-e-hasarat-nasiib Ko Apne
K Sab Kuch Milta Nahi Chah Lene Se Ish Zamane Mein..... "Diggaj"
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25th February 2006, 08:38 PM
Aadab Mere yaar mere dost !
bada achha likha hai , Mere ghar ki deewaro mein chhupi hai kahani meri,Aansoo kahi dard aur tanhaiyo se bhari hai zindgi meri,
Wah ! Wah Wah !!!!!!! kaafi feelings hai in shabdon mai ,
aap ke liye kuch kikha hai dil se kabool kijyega :-
diggaj likhte raho tum sada,
hum sada padhte rahenge
kal hogi buland zindagi tumhari
kal aasman chuoge tum
aaj bada apne kadam tu aage
kal salam karu tuhe mai.
Khozii
You can't buy love, but you can pay heavily for it.
***khozii***
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Re: **Mere ghar ki deewaro mein ** -
26th February 2006, 12:54 AM
Mere ghar ki deewaro mein chhupi hai kahani meri
Aansoo kahi dard aur tanhaiyo se bhari hai zindgi meri
Har Patthar ka butt khuda nahi hota ye jante the hum
Fir bhi humne usko khuda mana ishse jhalakti hai nadani meri
Khoobsurat aashaar... bahut pyaara likha hai...
Phool na sahi kaanto ko chum leta hu
Tere dard ko teri mohabbat keh deta hu
Jab kabhi yaad teri hadd se gujar jati hai
Band kamare mein simat kar do pal ro leta hu"
Waaaaaaaahhh...this is truly fab...
Hi Diggaj,
Bahut khoobsurati se ehsaas piroye hain... Oopar quoted kucch aashaar mujhe khaas pasand aaye.. vaise poori rachna hi acchi thhi... likhte raho yun hi... TC..
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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Re: **Mere ghar ki deewaro mein ** -
26th February 2006, 01:47 AM
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Originally posted by Diggaj_Dave
Aadaab Dosto
aaya hu ish mehfil mein fir se kuch naya lekar Umeed hai pasand aayega apko.Aur agar kahi kuch galat likh diya ho to plz bataiyega
Shukriya
"Phool na sahi kaanto ko chum leta hu
Tere dard ko teri mohabbat keh deta hu
Jab kabhi yaad teri hadd se gujar jati hai
Band kamare mein simat kar do pal ro leta hu"
Mere ghar ki deewaro mein chhupi hai kahani meri
Aansoo kahi dard aur tanhaiyo se bhari hai zindgi meri
Kya kya naa gujra saath mere ye humse kya poochte ho
Wo raat wo chaand bhi de raha hai gawahi meri
Roya tha main saath mere mera bistar bhi roya tha
Aasmaan se barsa tha paani hui thi jaghasai meri
Kab ka dafna chuka us dil ko jo kabhi dhadakta tha
Lekin ghar ki dar-o-diwar mein nazar aa jati aashanna-ii meri
Har Patthar ka butt khuda nahi hota ye jante the hum
Fir bhi humne usko khuda mana ishse jhalakti hai nadani meri
Mere ghar ki deewaro mein chhupi hai kahani meri
Aansoo kahi dard aur tanhaiyo se bhari hai zindgi meri
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adaab,,,
kaya baat hai... aaj to kuch hat kar nazar aa raha hai aapka andaaz...hamari daad kabool kijiye bas issi khoob surti se likhte rahiye...
saakib...
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26th February 2006, 06:42 AM
wahhhhhhhh my little bro
bhaut khoob kya hua janab se isaq se dard mai keese ?
kidding
bhaut achha likha hai tumne
Kab ka dafna chuka us dil ko jo kabhi dhadakta tha
Lekin ghar ki dar-o-diwar mein nazar aa jati aashanna-ii meri
ye sher dil ko payaa laga
shrdh
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26th February 2006, 10:39 AM
dear diggaj sahab sach kahoon to aapke is kalaam ka koi jawab nahi.kuch kahne ke layak nahi chhoda.uff itna dard itna emotion.great one yaar.all aashraas are good but specially this line i like the most.
Har Patthar ka butt khuda nahi hota ye jante the hum
Fir bhi humne usko khuda mana ishse jhalakti hai nadani meri
keep writing man.i love u &take care
shoaib
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26th February 2006, 11:44 AM
Diggaj Bhaaii..
Kya kya naa gujra saath mere ye humse kya poochte ho
Wo raat wo chaand bhi de raha hai gawahi meri
<<<<<<<<Aray waaH! huzoor .... Yah sher to dil ko chir gayaa.. Kya khooB ehsaas hai... Ek kasak, dard, saaf jhalak raha hai aap ke har aashar maiN... Likhte Rahiye...
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Hi -
26th February 2006, 03:59 PM
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Originally posted by khozii
Aadab Mere yaar mere dost !
bada achha likha hai , Mere ghar ki deewaro mein chhupi hai kahani meri,Aansoo kahi dard aur tanhaiyo se bhari hai zindgi meri,
Wah ! Wah Wah !!!!!!! kaafi feelings hai in shabdon mai ,
aap ke liye kuch kikha hai dil se kabool kijyega :-
diggaj likhte raho tum sada,
hum sada padhte rahenge
kal hogi buland zindagi tumhari
kal aasman chuoge tum
aaj bada apne kadam tu aage
kal salam karu tuhe mai.
Khozii
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Bohat-2 shukriya khozi jee.Meri ish rachna ko pyar dene aur mere liye likhe apke un lafzo ka shukriya..Aate rahiyega..
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bahut achhe -
26th February 2006, 04:11 PM
Har Patthar ka butt khuda nahi hota ye jante the hum
Fir bhi humne usko khuda mana ishse jhalakti hai nadani meri
Mere ghar ki deewaro mein chhupi hai kahani meri
Aansoo kahi dard aur tanhaiyo se bhari hai zindgi meri
bahut pyara bahut sundar likhte ho tumahre apne dil jaisa
Anil
mere ashar ko mahoob samjh ke chhoomte the jo
kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai
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26th February 2006, 04:14 PM
dear Diggaj ji
aapka kalaam padaa bahut hi pyara or dilchasp hai...
sacch bahut hi khoobsoorat kalaam hai yeh..
aap bas yu hin likhte rahiye
take care
bye
SHWETA
jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai
uth jati hai kalam likhne ko
wo pyar deewana hota hai
kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan
wo kalaam shayraana hota hai
jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai...
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
duniya mein kitna gam hai
apna gam phir bhi kam hai
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Re: Re: **Mere ghar ki deewaro mein ** -
26th February 2006, 06:58 PM
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Originally posted by Pulkit_gupta
Mere ghar ki deewaro mein chhupi hai kahani meri
Aansoo kahi dard aur tanhaiyo se bhari hai zindgi meri
Har Patthar ka butt khuda nahi hota ye jante the hum
Fir bhi humne usko khuda mana ishse jhalakti hai nadani meri
Khoobsurat aashaar... bahut pyaara likha hai...
Phool na sahi kaanto ko chum leta hu
Tere dard ko teri mohabbat keh deta hu
Jab kabhi yaad teri hadd se gujar jati hai
Band kamare mein simat kar do pal ro leta hu"
Waaaaaaaahhh...this is truly fab...
Hi Diggaj,
Bahut khoobsurati se ehsaas piroye hain... Oopar quoted kucch aashaar mujhe khaas pasand aaye.. vaise poori rachna hi acchi thhi... likhte raho yun hi... TC..
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Pulkit bhai Bohat-2 shukriya Aap aate hai dil ko acha lagta hai..Aur mera hosla badhta hai..Yuhi aate rahiye..Take care
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Re: **Mere ghar ki deewaro mein ** -
26th February 2006, 07:54 PM
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Originally posted by Diggaj_Dave
Aadaab Dosto
aaya hu ish mehfil mein fir se kuch naya lekar Umeed hai pasand aayega apko.Aur agar kahi kuch galat likh diya ho to plz bataiyega
Shukriya
"Phool na sahi kaanto ko chum leta hu
Tere dard ko teri mohabbat keh deta hu
Jab kabhi yaad teri hadd se gujar jati hai
Band kamare mein simat kar do pal ro leta hu"
Mere ghar ki deewaro mein chhupi hai kahani meri
Aansoo kahi dard aur tanhaiyo se bhari hai zindgi meri
Kya kya naa gujra saath mere ye humse kya poochte ho
Wo raat wo chaand bhi de raha hai gawahi meri
Roya tha main saath mere mera bistar bhi roya tha
Aasmaan se barsa tha paani hui thi jaghasai meri
Kab ka dafna chuka us dil ko jo kabhi dhadakta tha
Lekin ghar ki dar-o-diwar mein nazar aa jati aashanna-ii meri
Har Patthar ka butt khuda nahi hota ye jante the hum
Fir bhi humne usko khuda mana ishse jhalakti hai nadani meri
Mere ghar ki deewaro mein chhupi hai kahani meri
Aansoo kahi dard aur tanhaiyo se bhari hai zindgi meri
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waah diggaj...........
kya baat hai...mashallah bahaut sahi jarahe ho...bada pasand aaya mujhe yeh kalaam..dard me doobe kalaam mujhe hamesha choo jate hain...
yuhin likhte raho aage bhi..lekin dua yahi rahegi hamesha ke tum sada haste muskurate raho...
"Roz Kii Taraah Aaj Bhii Taare
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN
Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN
Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN."
**~*FaRhAnA*~**
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Re: Re: **Mere ghar ki deewaro mein ** -
27th February 2006, 12:05 AM
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adaab,,,
kaya baat hai... aaj to kuch hat kar nazar aa raha hai aapka andaaz...hamari daad kabool kijiye bas issi khoob surti se likhte rahiye...
saakib...
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Saakib bhai jab bhi apko meri post par dekhta hu khushi hoti hai..Hosla badhane k liye Shukriya..Aate rahiyega..Take care
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27th February 2006, 02:44 PM
shrdh [/B][/QUOTE] Apno ka shukriya ada karne ki kya jaroorat..Jab aana ho aa jaya kijiye hamari post par..Apke liye dil k darwaze hamesh khule rehte hai
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Hi -
27th February 2006, 07:22 PM
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Originally posted by sameer'shaad'
dear diggaj sahab sach kahoon to aapke is kalaam ka koi jawab nahi.kuch kahne ke layak nahi chhoda.uff itna dard itna emotion.great one yaar.all aashraas are good but specially this line i like the most.
Har Patthar ka butt khuda nahi hota ye jante the hum
Fir bhi humne usko khuda mana ishse jhalakti hai nadani meri
keep writing man.i love u &take care
shoaib
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Mere dost mere bhai tum aate ho meri post par to meri mehanat safal ho jati hai..Shukriya bhai
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Hi -
27th February 2006, 07:26 PM
[/B][/QUOTE] Hamari khushnaseebi ki mayank bhai hamare dawaar aaye..Shukriya mere dost..Kush raho
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Re: Re: **Mere ghar ki deewaro mein ** -
27th February 2006, 07:30 PM
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Originally posted by farhana
waah diggaj...........
kya baat hai...mashallah bahaut sahi jarahe ho...bada pasand aaya mujhe yeh kalaam..dard me doobe kalaam mujhe hamesha choo jate hain...
yuhin likhte raho aage bhi..lekin dua yahi rahegi hamesha ke tum ho...
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Tumhara to hamesha intezar rehta hai mujhe tumhi se hosla milta hai likhne ka..Shukriya farhana
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Re: bahut achhe -
27th February 2006, 07:33 PM
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Har Patthar ka butt khuda nahi hota ye jante the hum
Fir bhi humne usko khuda mana ishse jhalakti hai nadani meri
Mere ghar ki deewaro mein chhupi hai kahani meri
Aansoo kahi dard aur tanhaiyo se bhari hai zindgi meri
bahut pyara bahut sundar likhte ho tumahre apne dil jaisa
Anil [/QUOTE] apno ka shukriya ada karta nahi..Apna aashirwad dene aa jaaya kijiye bhai
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:) -
27th February 2006, 07:37 PM
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dear Diggaj ji
aapka kalaam padaa bahut hi pyara or dilchasp hai...
sacch bahut hi khoobsoorat kalaam hai yeh..
aap bas yu hin likhte rahiye
take care
bye
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