[QUOTE=sameer'shaad';475047]Madhu saahibaa tak Shaad kaa aadaab pahoche..........
Sach kahun to aaj ka din itnaa khoobsurat na thaa is ghazal ko padhne se pahle.... magar jo ispe utartaa gayaa , lamhaa dar lamhaa iski khoobsurtee mujhe ghertee gayee aur main us rang me rang gaya jisme aapne is nayaab ghazal ko rangaa hai.....
ye ek karishmaa ssa lagtaa hai ke aap jaisii nayee shaayraa itnii jaldii muqammal ghazal ki taraf apna kadam badhaane me kaamyaab huii hain....
Sach kaha hai kisii ne ke koshish karne walon kii kabhii haar nahii hotii... dusrii sabse zaruurii baat hai lagan aur mehnat.... mujeh khsuhi hai is baat ki ke aapne apnii pahlii koshish itne acche se nibhaaya hai ke kahne sunne ko kuch baaaki nahi hai......
gair muraddaf ghazal likhnaa amooman aasaan nahi hotaa, aur aisaa lag rah ahai ke aapne pahli ball par hi sixer maara hai.....
merii bharpoor daad aur duaaen pesh hain aapki khidmat me..... aur guzaarish hai ke aage se behar me hi ghazal likhiyegaa.....
10/10 from my side.......................................... cheersss.....
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Shaad....[,QUOTE]
Adaab shaad jee..
aapne is kadar tareef kar dee...meri mamooli si koshish ki..
sach kahoon alfaz nhi hai...shukriya kahne ke liye..aap doston ke sath aur bharose ki badaulat hee aaj kuch kachcha pakka sa likh pane me kaamyaab huyi hoon main...ummeed hai apka sath aise hee milta rahega mujhe...aur main zaroor aage se behr me likhne ki koshish karoongi...aapne meri koshish ko saraha bahut shukriya...koi galti ho to vo bhi bejhijhak batayein.......
dher sari duayein aapke liye..
khushh rahein....