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5th December 2010, 07:09 PM
aadaab dosto ek ghazal leke haazir ho rahaa hun ummeed ki tawajjoh den ge khomaar e dard se mahboob ho gayin aakhen kisi ki chaah me majzoob ho gayin aanken khomaar e dard ...dard ka nasha ,,, majzoob .. apne aap ko bhool janaa nazar ne orh li manzar ki aatisheeN chaadar gham e hayaat se martoob ho gayin aankhen manzar ... jo nazar aaye ,,, aatisheeN .... aag se bharee ,, .. gham e yahaat ... zindagi ka gham ,,,,,, martoob ,,,,,,aansoo aajaanaa saraab ban ke manaazir nazar me hain raqsaan milan ki aas pe masloob ho gayin aankhen saraab ... registaan ki wo chamak jise peyaasaa paani samajh le ,,,,, manaazir .. wo tamaam cheezen jo nazar aayen ,,,, raqsaan .. naachnaa masloob ... jise faansee de di jaaye roodaad ishq ki nao khez hai abhi saaqi abhi se kis liye mahjoob ho gayin aankhen roodaad ... kahaani ,,,,, nao khez ...teen ager ... mahjoob ... pardah kar lenaa har ek khel me aankhon me bughz dar aayaa nazar ke khel me mahboob ho gayin aankhen bughz .... keenaa kapat ,,, dar aayaa .. andar aa gayaa badha jo maamila to isqadar huwa hassaas ki gaam gaam pe kiya khoob ho gayin aankhen hassaas .. sensitive ....gaam gaam .. qadam qadam ... |
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5th December 2010, 07:25 PM
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qafiya ko bahut achhe se nibhaya hai aapne, maza aa gaya aapki ghazal padh kar... daad haazir hai, qubuul kijiyega... aapka dost, vikram Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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5th December 2010, 08:14 PM
Masood Bhai ... Aadaab !
Aapki ek aur dilkash ghazal padhke mazaa aa gaya ... sabhi ashaar bahut khoobsurat lage mujhe ... matle se maqte tak ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... duaaon ke saath ...  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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6th December 2010, 08:25 AM
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hassas bhayee bahut acha laga padh ke naye kafiyoN se parichaye kara diyaa aapne shukriyaa lkhte raheN |
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6th December 2010, 12:32 PM
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ASSLAM-o-ALAIKUM…! Janab Mohtram Masood Hassaas Saheb….! Aap Ke Kalaam Ki Taareef K Shayan-e-Shaan Mere Paas Alfaz Nahi Hain… Bas Itna Kahun Ga K Ap K Kalaam Em jo Jiddat Or Gehrayi Payi Jati Hai ….. Wo Aap He Ka Khaasa Hai..Hr Hr Shair Apni Misaal Aap Hai… Qafiya Or Radeef Boht Mushkil Chuna Aap Ne Or Usay Itni Khoobi Se Nibhaya Hai KeAap Ki Shukhanwari Pr Rashk Aanay Laga Hai…. Yaqeenan Aap Fun-e-Ghazal Pe Mukammal Dastarass Rakhtay Hain…. ALLAH AAP KO MAZID NAWAZAY Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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6th December 2010, 01:15 PM
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bahut khoob............................................. ......... Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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6th December 2010, 08:05 PM
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Aadaab kya kehna janab aapke is kalaam ka... MashaAllah bahut khoob... ab aapki taarif naa kare to aur kya kare... aap kuch aise shabdon ke jaal bunte hai jisme hum jaise kai log phas jate hai...   ... aapke ehsaas bahut dilfareb rahe aur aapka andaaz-e-bayaan to kya kehna,wahhhhhhhhhhhhh ! dil se dhero daad hazir hai.. yuhi likhte rahiye... khush rahiye...  "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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11th December 2010, 03:01 PM
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vikram bhai ajeeb ittefaaq hai ki main ye bhool hi gayaa thaa ki kabhi main ne aankhen ke naam se sdc pe koi ghazal daala thaa ... magar aaj jab nigaah paree to bada afsoos huwaa ki kitne saare mohabbat karne walon ne doa di hai aor main shukriyah tak na adaa kar sakaa main ma"azarat ke saath aap ki mohabbaton ka shukriya bhi adaa kartaa hun aor doa hai ki khodaa aap ko itnee tarqqi de ki asmaan bhi naz kare apka masood |
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11th December 2010, 03:05 PM
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aadaab maaf kijiye gaa mehraa saahab main dekh hi na paayaa ki aap ki doaa meraa intezaar kar rahee hai main ma"Azarat khowaah hun aap ka behad shukriya ki aap ne ghazal ko pasand kiyaa is se meree dil ko sokoon milaa aor aap jis peyaar se daad dete hain wo bazaate khud kisee haseen ghazal se kam nahi bhagwaan aap ko sukhi rakhen aap ka masood |
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11th December 2010, 03:22 PM
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aadaab taakheer ki maazarat aap ki daad ne sokoon bakhshaa khosoosan qaafiyah ke hwaale se jo baat aap ne ki achhi lagi main chaahitaa thaa ki is me ek sher aor daalun magar us se itnaa mutmain nahi thaa is liye nahi daalaa haan magar ab aap ko sunaaye detaa hun jabhi wafaa se daghaa se kabhi to chughlee se kabhi to qatl se mansoob higayeen aankhen apnaa khiyaal rakhiye gaa mukhlis masood |
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11th December 2010, 07:40 PM
masood sahaab aadaab..
aapki ghazal ne bahot mutaasir kiya..aur yeh do sher dil ke behad kareeb rahe..allah barkat de..daad.. roodaad ishq ki nao khez hai abhi saaqi abhi se kis liye mahjoob ho gayin aankhen har ek khel me aankhon me bughz dar aayaa nazar ke khel me mahboob ho gayin aankhen aapka dost, Pradhyuman gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai? musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai? -------------------------------------------------- |
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11th December 2010, 11:05 PM
Hassaas Saheb Salaam Valekoom,
Aap ke likhe ko paDh ne ka mauka mile yeh hi khush kismati hai, Aur aapki BBC par telecast huee Ghazlein bhi sunee aur aapki awaaz bhi. Beshak dil-o-zehen parr gehraa asar karne wala kalaam hota hai aapka.. yeh ghazal bhi behad pasand aayee khusoosan darj-e-zel sher zyaada purasar payaa.. roodaad ishq ki nao khez hai abhi saaqi abhi se kis liye mahjoob ho gayin aankhen waah ..bohot khoob.. aapki shaayri paDh karr kuch ghanToN takk ek sher-o-shaayri ka khumaar chaa jaata hai..kuch puuraane kalam yaaad aa jaate hai.. kalaam paDh ke ho hassaas dil to behtar hai, ho ashqbaar tau marghoob ho gayee aahkein. ..agar ho sake tau hamaari rehnumaayee kiyaa karein, beshaq hum jaante hain ke aap kaafi masroof rehtein hain lekin phir bhi..hasb-e-fursat jabb bhi munaasib ho..filhaal chaltaa hoon..Allah kare zor-e-kalam aur ziyaada. Talib. |
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11th December 2010, 11:14 PM
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nice ..... har ek shabd ko badhe hi pyar se sawanra gaya hai .... saraab ban ke manaazir nazar me hain raqsaan milan ki aas pe masloob ho gayin aankhen good one  na rok saka maalik ki ibadat se use koi ye banda hai us parwar digaar ka dafan har riwaj ab us kabra me hai jis par chada hai kafan us pahredar ka.. |
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13th December 2010, 01:35 AM
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waah waah hassaas sahab !! hairatanghez aur lajawaab ghazal kahee hai aapne. behad nafees aur pukhta. har sher hi nahiin har lavz bhi beshkeemtee hai. saikadon daad aur duaaon ke saath .... zarraa |
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13th December 2010, 03:48 AM
appke liye daad kubool kijiye
खुमार-ऐ-दर्द से महबूब हो गयीं आखें किसी की चाह में मजज़ूब हो गयीं आँखें नज़र ने ओढ़ ली मंज़र की आतिशीं चादर ग़म-ऐ-हयात से मर्तूब हो गयीं आँखें सराब बन के मनाज़िर नज़र में हैं रक्सां मिलन की आस पे मस्लूब हो गयीं आँखें रूदाद इश्क की नाव खेज़ है अभी साकी अभी से किस लिए महजूब हो गयीं आँखें हर एक खेल में आँखों में बुगहज़ दर आया नज़र के खेल में महबूब हो गयीं आँखें बढ़ा जो मामिला तो इस्कादर हुवा हस्सास की गाम गाम पे किया खूब हो गयीं आँखें हर बेकस मज-ज़ुब रूह को उसके रब से जोड़ दे |
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13th December 2010, 05:02 AM
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aadaab janaab aap ke andaaz ne hamaaraa dil jeet liyaa ham ab wo alfaaz kahaan se laaye jo aap ke kholoos aap ki inaayat aap ki mohabbat ka badal ban sake aisaa lag rahaa hai ki tamaam lafzon ne ham se be rukhee akhtiyaar kar lee hai ham aap ke aabhaaree hain ye aap ka upkaar hai aaj se ham aap ke qarz daar hain ye udhaar us waqt utre gaa jam ham aap ki shaan ke motaabiq koi kaam kar jaayen plz aap apnaa naam bataayen aor darmeyaan ke parde uthaayen aap ke jawaab ke intezaar me masood hassaas |
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13th December 2010, 05:05 AM
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aadaab ghazal jab tamaam lof pasand karen tab us kiizzat me izaafah hojaataa hai aor belaa shubha aapki daad se aisaa huwaa hai mainaap ka shukr guzaar hun khair andesh masood hassaas |
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13th December 2010, 05:13 AM
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aadaab kiyaa baat hai janaab bahot khoob aap se mulaaqat huyi ye hamaare liye fakhr ka moqaam hai aap hamaare bade bhai hain aor khair se hamaare jaise hi hijr ka dard sah rahe hain wo bhi UAE me to ek padosee hone ke naate aap kaa naam dil ke daftar me khaas moqaam pe aa gayaa hai aap ne ghazal ko pasand kiyaa pazeeraayi bakhshee achha lagaa main aap kaa shukr guzaar hun aor janaab main kiyaa meree besaat kiyaa ..taaham mujh se jo bhi ho sake gaa main aap ka taabedaar rahun gaa zaraa taakheer se jawaab de rahaa hun is kaa dil me malaal na ho to behtar hai khair andesh masood hassaas |
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13th December 2010, 05:15 AM
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aadaab yaaqeen karen kuchh samajh me nahi aarahaa hai ki kin lafzon se aapkaa shukriyaa adaa karun jis kholoos se aap ne nawaazaa hai us ne apnaa ghulaam bana liyaa hai bas itnaa hikahun gaa parwardigaar aap ko us moqaam pe le jaaye jis pe har koi naaz kare mukhlis masood hassaas |
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13th December 2010, 05:18 AM
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aadaab zarrah bhai aap ki daad dil ke nehaan khaanon me sanbhaal ke rakh lee hai taake waqtan faoqtan is se ltf andoz hote rahen aap ka qalam nazm aor nacr me yaksaan kamaal ka haamil hai allah aor nawaaze mukhllis masood hassaas |
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13th December 2010, 05:22 AM
[QUOTE=ISHK EK IBADAT;417217]bahut khoob............................................. ........
bahot shukriyah janaab |
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13th December 2010, 05:25 AM
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aadaab shakil bhai bas janaab ye aap ka husne zann hai aor aap ki inaayaten hain aap ka kholoos hai ki aap is adnaa se kalaam ko itnee faraakh dilee se daad de rahe hain main aap ki inaayaton ka dil ki ameeq gahraaiyon se mamnoon hun aap ka masood |
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13th December 2010, 05:28 AM
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adaab aji janaab ham kiyaa jaanen ki lafzon ka jaal kise kahte hain ye to aap jaisee shaikhsiyat ka kamaal hai ki adnaa ko arfaa banaakar pesh kar rahee hain sachh baat to ye hai ki ham aap ke andaaz ke sehr me kho ke rah gaye hain aap ki daad dil se qabool hai aor dher saaree doaayen bhi aap ke liye mukhlis masood hassaas |
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13th December 2010, 02:23 PM
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orr isse logon ko kam dikkat hogi or ke iss shndaar byan ko log zyada acchi trah se smjh payenge issme maine koi bada kaam nahi kiya mujhe achcha laga mere dil ne kaha ki agar yeh hindi mai post hota t phadne mai orr bhi maza atta orr log iss behtar tarike se smjh pate to mai bas likh diya kyn ki iss behtareen kalam ko sab tak usske pure ehsaas ke sath phuchna zaroori hai issle abb bas yahi guzarish hai ki app issii trah behtareen kalaam likhte rahe kush rahe appka dost yasir हर बेकस मज-ज़ुब रूह को उसके रब से जोड़ दे |
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13th December 2010, 05:45 PM
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na rok saka maalik ki ibadat se use koi ye banda hai us parwar digaar ka dafan har riwaj ab us kabra me hai jis par chada hai kafan us pahredar ka.. |
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13th December 2010, 06:31 PM
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waah waaah.. janaab Masood saahab bahot khoob kalaam likha hai aapne.. bamushkil alfaazonn ko bhi aapne jazbaton ke saath bilkul aasaan bana diya.. kamaal ka likhte hain.. yoonhi apne kaalaamon se mahfil ko roshan karte rahen.. khush rahen.. shaad... |
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14th December 2010, 11:54 PM
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aadaab shaad bhai kabhi kabhi aisaa ho jaataa hai ki mushkil tareen qaafiyaf radeeb daanton se paseenaa nikaal deta hain un me se ek ghazal ye bhi thee majboor ho kar kuchh naye arbi alfaaz istemaal karne pare jo ki omooman urdu me istemaal nahi hain magar ye dekh kar khushi huyi ki logon ne use bhi khush aamdeed kahaa main tahe dil se aap ki daad ka aor mohabbat ka shukr guzaar hun mukhlis masood hassaas |
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