woh tabbasum teri.... -
2nd January 2006, 08:33 PM
..slam ahal-e-bazm.....kuch membaran ko shikayat hai ke...mujhse shayri paida nahin hoti....khair..bahut deeno ke baad .kuch mukammal teen ..ghazalein likh payan hoon..aur ek ..nazm ..likh raha hoon..
pahli ghazal yahan post kar raha hon....jo koi bhi .....apni achci buri rai dena chahe ....main hazir hoon..:-)
zist-e-biwafa talab tak mere sath hai
warna ye sangdil kab tak mere sath hai
tujhe bhule gaye, tere naksh bhi tere lams bhi
ek tabbasum magar teri ab tak mere sath hai
jitne hai yaar ke ahbab ke rafeeq mere
janata hoon sab tarab tak mere saath hai
main ashk-o-gham hoon jab uske sath hoon aur
woh khamosh khulos hai jab mere sath hai
chalna hai aur jalna hai hum dono ko
chand ka bedar safar shab tak mere saath hai ....
lams =touch,zist=zindagi,ahbab=dost,khulos=love,bedar=s leepless
...............ghazal kuch ..bojhil ban gayi hai ....kyuki is kafie-o-radeef ko nibhana bada mushkil tha...khair.. sirf ek sher ke liye ghazal likhi thi ...umeed hai ..aap use ..oasand kareinge
usne chukar mujhe pathar se insan kiya
muddaton baad meri aankhon mein aansoon aaye
dr.bashir badr
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