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15th January 2011, 06:58 PM
ਅੱਜ ਹੋਇਆ ਅਹਿਸਾਸ,
ਕਿ ਮੈਂ ਕਿਥੇ ਤੇ ਮੇਰੀ ਕੀ ਓਕਾਤ ਏ..
ਚੰਨ ਪੂਰਾ ਚੜੇ ਯਾ ਅਧੂਰਾ,
ਰਾਤ ਤਾ ਰਹਿਣੀ ਰਾਤ ਏ..
ਕਿਨੀਆਂ ਮਨਵਾਂ ਲਈਆ ਬਿਨਾ ਕਿਸੇ ਹੱਕ,
ਕਿਨੀਆਂ ਕਹਿ ਛੱਡੀਆ ਏਹੀ ਤਾ ਬੂਰੀ ਬਾਤ ਏ,
ਬਸ 'ਕੌਸ਼ਲ' ਅਪਣੇ ਤਕ ਰਹੀਏ,
ਬਿਨਾ ਰਿਸ਼ਤੇ ਬਹੁਤਾ ਹੱਕ ਜਤਾਉਣ ਵਾਲੇਆ ਦੀ ਆਹੀ ਓਕਾਤ ਏ.
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16th January 2011, 12:55 PM
excellent kaushal ji, bahut hi badiya likhya hai tussi. rab tuhanu khush rakhe. thanks for sharing.
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16th January 2011, 03:37 PM
thanx very much ji....to say this.....its jst starting ji ajje ta bht kuch sikhna main thode sarea to ji
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17th January 2011, 03:38 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by
vimalkaushal
ਅੱਜ ਹੋਇਆ ਅਹਿਸਾਸ,
ਕਿ ਮੈਂ ਕਿਥੇ ਤੇ ਮੇਰੀ ਕੀ ਓਕਾਤ ਏ..
ਚੰਨ ਪੂਰਾ ਚੜੇ ਯਾ ਅਧੂਰਾ,
ਰਾਤ ਤਾ ਰਹਿਣੀ ਰਾਤ ਏ..
ਕਿਨੀਆਂ ਮਨਵਾਂ ਲਈਆ ਬਿਨਾ ਕਿਸੇ ਹੱਕ,
ਕਿਨੀਆਂ ਕਹਿ ਛੱਡੀਆ ਏਹੀ ਤਾ ਬੂਰੀ ਬਾਤ ਏ,
ਬਸ 'ਕੌਸ਼ਲ' ਅਪਣੇ ਤਕ ਰਹੀਏ,
ਬਿਨਾ ਰਿਸ਼ਤੇ ਬਹੁਤਾ ਹੱਕ ਜਤਾਉਣ ਵਾਲੇਆ ਦੀ ਆਹੀ ਓਕਾਤ ਏ.
Dear Vimal.....bahut vadiya lag reha hai ki tusi apne ahsaas saade naal, SDC te share kar rhe ho, parmatma tuhadi kalam vich hor nikhaar deN.
vasde raho...khush raho
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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