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Dil meiN ye malaal nhi rakhtaa..... - 16th September 2014, 11:52 AM

Dil meiN ye malaal nhi rakhtaa..
Ki koi meraa khyaal nhi rakhtaa..

Malum hai jaawaab nhi aayegaa
Tabhi to koi sawaal nhi rakhtaa

Waakif haiN hm unki har ek chaal se
Esliye to wo koi nyi chaal nhi rakhtaa...

KhaNjar tham liya najuk haathoN meiN
kyoN haathoN meiN gulaal nhi rakhtaa ?

Aakhir ek din mout se mulaakaat honi hai
"Raj" bachne ke liye ab dhaal nhi rakhtaa...


maNzil pr nazar rakhtaa huN
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Bohut khoob Rajeev ji.

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16th September 2014, 12:56 PM

Malum hai jaawaab nhi aayegaa
Tabhi to koi sawaal nhi rakhtaa

wahh! Rajeev bhai..

Kia kehne.. bohat umdaaH khayaalat aur jazbaat ..
superb!

Likhte rahiye,

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Dil meiN ye malaal nhi rakhtaa..
Ki koi meraa khyaal nhi rakhtaa..

Malum hai jaawaab nhi aayegaa
Tabhi to koi sawaal nhi rakhtaa

Waakif haiN hm unki har ek chaal se
Esliye to wo koi nyi chaal nhi rakhtaa...

KhaNjar tham liya najuk haathoN meiN
kyoN haathoN meiN gulaal nhi rakhtaa ?

Aakhir ek din mout se mulaakaat honi hai
"Raj" bachne ke liye ab dhaal nhi rakhtaa...
bohat khoob rajeev ji....................




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Dil meiN ye malaal nhi rakhtaa..
Ki koi meraa khyaal nhi rakhtaa..

Malum hai jaawaab nhi aayegaa
Tabhi to koi sawaal nhi rakhtaa

Waakif haiN hm unki har ek chaal se
Esliye to wo koi nyi chaal nhi rakhtaa...

KhaNjar tham liya najuk haathoN meiN
kyoN haathoN meiN gulaal nhi rakhtaa ?

Aakhir ek din mout se mulaakaat honi hai
"Raj" bachne ke liye ab dhaal nhi rakhtaa...

waahhhh kya baat hai Raj saahab..... pahli baar aapki shayri ka jo lutf mujhe aaj milaa hai wo yaqeenan sab se behtar raha hai........ aapne kaafi had tak khud ki shaayrii me sudhaar laaya hai jo ki saaf nazar aa raha hai....

meri duaa hai ke din dooni raat chougnii badhtii rahe.....

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17th September 2014, 10:41 AM

bahot khub, Rajeevji.....

shaayad ye aapki pehli koshish hai urdu shaayrii meN aur kya khubsurat kaavish kii hai........

hamaari jaanibse dheroN dheroN daad.....

likhtey rahiye..

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बेहद खूबसूरत लिखा है राजीव जी...

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Dil meiN ye malaal nhi rakhtaa..
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Mubarak ho
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wahh! Rajeev bhai..

Kia kehne.. bohat umdaaH khayaalat aur jazbaat ..
superb!

Likhte rahiye,

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Hassan bhaai.......hoNsalaa afzaai ka shukrguzaar huN.....
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Dil meiN ye malaal nhi rakhtaa..
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Malum hai jaawaab nhi aayegaa
Tabhi to koi sawaal nhi rakhtaa

Waakif haiN hm unki har ek chaal se
Esliye to wo koi nyi chaal nhi rakhtaa...

KhaNjar tham liya najuk haathoN meiN
kyoN haathoN meiN gulaal nhi rakhtaa ?

Aakhir ek din mout se mulaakaat honi hai
"Raj" bachne ke liye ab dhaal nhi rakhtaa...

wahhh bahut khoob..............!


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