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Beetay huay maazi kay advaar badal gae -
26th June 2009, 08:28 PM
Beetay huay maazi kay advaar badal gae
Raastay vohi hain laikin sawaar badal gae Badlain hain na badlain gay kehtay thay jo sabhi Mausam ki aarh mein vo sab yaar badal gae Tum kaisay khud ko apnay pehchaan pao gay Eik ainay mein chehray soo baar badal gae Chuu ker mujhay theein uski nigaheein jhuki jhuki Shaid us nigaah kay haqdaar badal gae Kerta hai kyun baatain devaaron say to 'Haider' Is zamanay kay sab dar o deevaar badal gae |
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26th June 2009, 08:40 PM
haider sahab....
apne bahut acchi ghazal likhi hai..... sare sher ek se bar kar ek hai.......khaskar ap ka matla to lajawab hai... bahut dinon baad kuch accha padne mila aaj regards |
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26th June 2009, 09:25 PM
Nice ghazal, all the lines r very beautiful, feelings r very good.
Daad. एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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26th June 2009, 10:17 PM
AadaaB Hyeder sahab
Aaj paheli baar aapko padha aur yakinnan aapki gazal ne mere dil mein ghar kar liya Subhan AllaH...........  Waise main nukhta chini karta hun aisa logon ka manna hai but apki is gazal ne mujhe bahut muttasir kiya hai.... Aapke ahsaas dil ko lage hai Dil se daad kabool kariye....... Likhate rahiye khush rahiye... Ummid jald hi aapke aur kalamon se ruberu hone ka moka milenga.... Aur yeh sher Subhan Allah.... Chuu ker mujhay theein uski nigaheein jhuki jhuki Shaid us nigaah kay haqdaar badal gae 
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1st July 2009, 10:04 PM
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Aap ka bohat shukriya jo aap ne meri ghazal ko apna time diya .... Hopefully u will hear some good stuff from me ... Thankx to all ... |
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1st July 2009, 10:05 PM
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aap k liye he ghazal likh detay hain .... Shukar hai aap logon ko ghazal pasand a gae !! |
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1st July 2009, 10:07 PM
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Aap ko issi tarah achi poetry dekhnay ko millay ge ... Aajkal mere papers ho rahay hain ... poetry filhaal nahi ho rahi ... INSHALLAH 2 days tak aik new ghazal milay ge aap ko meri taraf se !! |
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2nd July 2009, 02:19 PM
bahut khoob likha hain aapne
badalna wah kya mazmoon hain |
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5th July 2009, 04:11 PM
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my shayari -
29th July 2009, 11:38 PM
Hey all!!!!!
I have started documenting my shayari and poems on my blog at http://beingnostalgic.blogspot.com Plz Have a look and comment. Its in Hindi. |
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