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Ek dil ka shahar, -
5th July 2004, 01:39 PM
Ek dil ka shahar
Ek shaks Gum-e-haal me bhee hansta raha, Usske dil ka shahar,ujadta raha,basta raha, Aage badhte badhte wo akser mud ker dekhta thaa, Jaane kyaa dekhne ko wo raah bhar palat-ta raha, Ek dil ka shahar ,ujadta raha,basta raha, Jaane kitne tez waqt ke toofan chale, Roshni bujh gayi or diya jalta raha, Ek dil ka shahar,ujadta raha,basta raha Wo jisski zindgi per akser log rashk fermate thai Wo jiya kuch iss kadar,ki saans saans marta raha Ek dil ka shahar,ujadta raha basta raha Kaise kahen kiss kadar usski zindgi raayga hui, Umr bhar khud ko dafnane ka intzaam kerta raha Ek dil ka shahar,ujadta raha,basta raha Karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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nice,very nice! |
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nice,very nice! -
5th July 2004, 11:00 PM
damn gud,aaj to kamal kar diya yaar!
baaki iski tareef main yahoo messenger par karoongi! aik mutthi main kaid kar loon, yeh aasman hai jitna!" |
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glad to see you here |
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glad to see you here -
5th July 2004, 11:37 PM
Tum bhee apni jubaan me tarif kerti ho.. alag andaaz hain tumhare lafz cum or baaten jayada.. chalo let me read some of your poetrys
izzajat karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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hii ppl |
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hii ppl -
17th March 2005, 12:34 AM
here.. once again..
Ruchika at her best some ppl asked me to post my old poertys here i thought this is the best way to do it izzajat karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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17th March 2005, 12:47 AM
Hi Karan,
Its fantastic. its tooo good. Regards Nidhi Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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Hii Nidhi |
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Hii Nidhi -
17th March 2005, 07:23 PM
Hmmm
I m told i write best when i write about chrachter's ye bhee kissi shaks per he likhi hai khair.. aayi .. accha kiya Ek baar phir datkhat kiye Apni taarifon se mere sadaa panno per izzajat karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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