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tha>>>

thar_tharii sii hai aasamaano.n me.n
zor kuchh to hai naatavaano.n me.n

[thar_tharii = tremors; naatavaa.N = weak]



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tha>>>

thar_tharii sii hai aasamaano.n me.n
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[thar_tharii = tremors; naatavaa.N = weak]
me>>>>>>>>>>>

mere chehre pe ghazal likhatii gai_iin
sher kahatii hu_ii aankhe.N us_kii

Shokh lamho kaa pataa dene lagiin
tez hotii hu_ii Saanse.N us kii


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me>>>>>>>>>>>

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Shokh lamho kaa pataa dene lagiin
tez hotii hu_ii Saanse.N us kii


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Kii>>>>>>

kisii ra.njish ko hawaa do ki mai.n zi.ndaa huu.N abhii
mujh ko ehasaas dilaa do ki mai.n zi.ndaa huu.N abhii


>sudarshan faakir

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>sudarshan faakir

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bhe>>>>

bheegta badan...mehakta aanchal...julf ghata si....
aur jheel si uski ankhon main mujhko doob jaana tha

bheegte hue hi mila mujhe mera "saccha pyar"
tabhi to mushkil us manzar ko bhool jaana tha


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bhe>>>>

bheegta badan...mehakta aanchal...julf ghata si....
aur jheel si uski ankhon main mujhko doob jaana tha

bheegte hue hi mila mujhe mera "saccha pyar"
tabhi to mushkil us manzar ko bhool jaana tha


tha>>>>>>>>


Friends, ChuN kii 'tha' lafz se bohat kam Sher hai, ess liye ham aage se 'tha' kii 'Tha'('Tha' of Thandi,) se Shuruaat kar sakte haiN... ok? filhaal usi lafz se sher haazir hai:

Thakii huii sii hawaa meiN tarang aane de,
Chaman se jaa kahiiN, PhooloN ke raNg aane de.[NM]



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Friends, ChuN kii 'tha' lafz se bohat kam Sher hai, ess liye ham aage se 'tha' kii 'Tha'('Tha' of Thandi,) se Shuruaat kar sakte haiN... ok? filhaal usi lafz se sher haazir hai:

Thakii huii sii hawaa meiN tarang aane de,
Chaman se jaa kahiiN, PhooloN ke raNg aane de.[NM]
ji sir,,age se aise hi karenge

de>>>

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Socha to har kisii se mera sil-silaa milaa


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ji sir,,age se aise hi karenge

de>>>

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Socha to har kisii se mera sil-silaa milaa


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la>>>

laakho.n kii sunaa tum ne taqadiir sa.Nvaarii hai
mujh se yahii kah dete ab ke terii baarii hai

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la>>>

laakho.n kii sunaa tum ne taqadiir sa.Nvaarii hai
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haiu>>>
humse na sahi gairo.n se sahi, tumhe dil ka lagana aa to gaya,
dunia mei.n kisi ke ho to gaye, tumhe pyar nibahna aa to gaya...

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aaj tahktey nahi jo waffa ki kasme khatey huey"

-sunita virender singh
ey>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Ey dil itna bhi bada dil na ban
ke woh apni chal chal jaye khub
haath mein thama de apni tasveer
or kehta jaye lo ab ho jao khush
rakho hamesha apni nazar ke saamne


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Ey dil itna bhi bada dil na ban
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or kehta jaye lo ab ho jao khush
rakho hamesha apni nazar ke saamne


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humne teri ankho ki nami aapne naam kar li"

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humne teri ankho ki nami aapne naam kar li"

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likhte hain ret per wo mera naam,
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gar tu rutha kabhi mar jaungi kasam se,
kabhi tu mujhe be-waffa na samjna,
mohabat hai tere diye huey har gum se"

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kabhi tu mujhe be-waffa na samjna,
mohabat hai tere diye huey har gum se"

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Kasm-e-ulfat,waada-e-wafa
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hame to jindgii main bhii jindgii nahi dikatii.....................


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uffffffffffffffff

wo kya hai na mousam jii aaj kal pata nahi dimag kahan hai
per accha hai aapne kam se kam mujhe bata diya

waqt ki kami ke chalte main abhii doosra to nahi likh sakta so aapka sher hi yahan continue karta hoon

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Chehre par dikha,kuch bhi nahin

Kasm-e-ulfat,waada-e-wafa
Tumne diya kuch bhi nahin


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uffffffffffffffff

wo kya hai na mousam jii aaj kal pata nahi dimag kahan hai
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waqt ki kami ke chalte main abhii doosra to nahi likh sakta so aapka sher hi yahan continue karta hoon

Seene me sailaab-o-toofan,
Chehre par dikha,kuch bhi nahin

Kasm-e-ulfat,waada-e-wafa
Tumne diya kuch bhi nahin


thnx


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hii>>>
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hai>>>
hai>>>>>>>>>>>>>

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hai>>>>>>>>>>>>>

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ke>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

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Ke har gujra lamha hum lagta hai essa !
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"ti"se mujhe kuch word na mila .....so ta se likhti hoon

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Wahi hain zameen wahin hai aasman
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Zururto^n ne simta diya waqt "sanju"
Warna milta tha main apno sa har kanhii

sorry main 1 sher ke badle 3 sher likh diye..

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Zururto^n ne simta diya waqt "sanju"
Warna milta tha main apno sa har kanhii

sorry main 1 sher ke badle 3 sher likh diye..

hi>>>>>>>>>
hmm.. har dil azeez Sanju bhaaii ka likha huaa... woh to saath nahiiN lekin un ke nagme saath haiN....

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hmm.. har dil azeez Sanju bhaaii ka likha huaa... woh to saath nahiiN lekin un ke nagme saath haiN....

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yeh "ii" ka "ek" bhi ho sakta hain...very smart...

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yeh "ii" ka "ek" bhi ho sakta hain...very smart...

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haaN jee dono ek hii haiN

ne>>>

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ye aur baat hai duniyaa nazar na pahachane

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