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ne>>>

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kya hai??? mujhe lagta hain last word "ne" hain

Neendon se khali hain ankhen
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kya hai??? mujhe lagta hain last word "ne" hain

Neendon se khali hain ankhen
Chat par jaaye,ghazale gaye


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sahii kaha., 'ne' hai, Ghalti ho gayee aur jp aap ko lagta hai bilkul sahii hai....

ye>>>>

ye aish-o-tarab ke matavaale bekaar kii baate.n karate hai.n
paayal ke Gamo.n kaa ilm nahii.n jha.nkaar kii baate.n karate hai.n

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hai tasavvur mein sanam,aur tu hi koshish mein
meri koshish bhi yeh kaise gul khilati hain

Roz marta hoon main,koshish main apne jeene ki
phir teri ek jhalak yeh bharam mitati hai


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hai tasavvur mein sanam,aur tu hi koshish mein
meri koshish bhi yeh kaise gul khilati hain

Roz marta hoon main,koshish main apne jeene ki
phir teri ek jhalak yeh bharam mitati hai


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'hai" again

hai mashq-e-suKhan jaarii chakkii kii mushaqqat bhii
ek turfaa tamaashaa hai "Hasrat" kii tabiiyat bhii

[mashq-e-suKhan=drill of poetry; jaarii=running/in operation]
[chakkii kii mushaqqat=grinding of the mill]
[ek turfaa tamaashaa=a strange or wonderous feat/a sight to see]
tabiiyat=dispositon]

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'hai" again

hai mashq-e-suKhan jaarii chakkii kii mushaqqat bhii
ek turfaa tamaashaa hai "Hasrat" kii tabiiyat bhii

[mashq-e-suKhan=drill of poetry; jaarii=running/in operation]
[chakkii kii mushaqqat=grinding of the mill]
[ek turfaa tamaashaa=a strange or wonderous feat/a sight to see]
tabiiyat=dispositon]

bhi>>>
bhiid mein ik ajanabii kaa saamanaa achchhaa lagaa
sab se chup kar vo kisii kaa dekhanaa achchhaa lagaa


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bhiid mein ik ajanabii kaa saamanaa achchhaa lagaa
sab se chup kar vo kisii kaa dekhanaa achchhaa lagaa

ga>>>>

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taras rahaa huu.N unhii.n kii hasiin baaho.n ko

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ko>>>
Koi aahat koi awaaz koi chaap nahin
Dil ki galiyan badi sunsaan hain aye koi.....
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Koi aahat koi awaaz koi chaap nahin
Dil ki galiyan badi sunsaan hain aye koi.....parveen shakir
Doston main ye to nahin janta ki is thread mein mera aana wajib hai ya beinsaafi kyonki maine kabhi kisi bade shayar ko nahin padha... Par aap sabko dekhkar bahut mann hai ki main bhi kuch likhoon. Kuch Apna hi likh deta hoon....

Koi shikayat nahin koi ranjish nahin
Na hi koi gila ya shikwa hai ab
Har Wo zakhm jo usne ne diya tha kabhi
Wo dard bhi achha lagta hai ab

Mujhe dawa na dena zakhm nasoor hain mere
Dawa se har zakhm aur Sulagne laga hai
Kuch de sako to maut ki duayein de do
Mujhe Zindagi se darr lagne laga hai

Sukoon dhoondhte dhoonte ye jaana hai maine
Ab har Raqeeb mera yaar ho gaya hai
Mujhe khushi na dena doston mujhe iski aadat nahin
"Ehsaas" ko Gammon se pyaar ho gaya hai

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Doston main ye to nahin janta ki is thread mein mera aana wajib hai ya beinsaafi kyonki maine kabhi kisi bade shayar ko nahin padha... Par aap sabko dekhkar bahut mann hai ki main bhi kuch likhoon. Kuch Apna hi likh deta hoon....

Koi shikayat nahin koi ranjish nahin
Na hi koi gila ya -shikwa hai ab
Har Wo zakhm jo usne ne diya tha kabhi
Wo dard bhi achha lagta hai ab

Mujhe dawa na dena zakhm nasoor hain mere
Dawa se har zakhm aur Sulagne laga hai
Kuch de sako to maut ki duayein de do
Mujhe Zindagi se darr lagne laga hai

Sukoon dhoondhte dhoonte ye jaana hai maine
Ab har Raqeeb mera yaar ho gaya hai
Mujhe khushi na dena doston mujhe iski aadat nahin
"Ehsaas" ko Gammon se pyaar ho gaya hai

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hai>>>>>
hairaa.N huu.N dil ko rouu.N ki piituu.N jigar ko mai.n
maqaduur huu.N to saath rakhuu.N nauhaagar ko mai.n

(Ghalib)


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hai>>>>>
hairaa.N huu.N dil ko rouu.N ki piituu.N jigar ko mai.n
maqaduur huu.N to saath rakhuu.N nauhaagar ko mai.n

(Ghalib)


maiN>>>>
main uski parchai hoon ya...woh mera aaina hain
mere hi ghar me rehta hain..mere jaisa jaane kaun
by nida fazli

n>>>>


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main uski parchai hoon ya...woh mera aaina hain
mere hi ghar me rehta hain..mere jaisa jaane kaun
by nida fazli

n>>>>
Phir Apna Hi Likh Raha Hoon....

Na keh gaya na sun gaya na naam bata gaya
Main kya kahoon mera dil kaun chura gaya....
Mat ilzaam do mere mehboob ko meri ruksati ka doston....
Wahi qatil to mujhe jeene ka sabab sikha gaya...

Next: "Ya"


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Mat ilzaam do mere mehboob ko meri ruksati ka doston....
Wahi qatil to mujhe jeene ka sabab sikha gaya...

Next: "Ya"
Yaad aata hain suna tha pehle
koi apna bhi khuda tha pehle

main woh maqtool jo katil na bana
haath mera bhi utha tha pehle!


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main woh maqtool jo katil na bana
haath mera bhi utha tha pehle!


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le>>>>
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beqaraarii tujhe ai dil kabhii aisii to n thii
Bahadurshah Zafar

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"Bahadur Shah Zafar"
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hai mauj_zan ik qulzum-e-KHooN, kaash, yahee ho
aata hai abhee dekhiye kya-kya mere aage

mauj_zan = exciting, qulzum = sea, KHooN = blood ]

(ghaalib)

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hai again
hai>>>>

hai mashq-e-suKhan jaarii chakkii kii mushaqqat bhii
ek turfaa tamaashaa hai "Hasrat" kii tabiiyat bhii

[mashq-e-suKhan=drill of poetry; jaarii=running/in operation]
[chakkii kii mushaqqat=grinding of the mill]
[ek turfaa tamaashaa=a strange or wonderous feat/a sight to see]
tabiiyat=dispositon]

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[ek turfaa tamaashaa=a strange or wonderous feat/a sight to see]
tabiiyat=dispositon]

bhi>>>>
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Ab se dhyan rakhna...................

main fir se maine jo sher likha hain type karti hoon...............

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main fir se maine jo sher likha hain type karti hoon...............

bhiigii hu_ii aa.Nkho.n kaa ye ma.nzar na milegaa
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ga>>>

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jhuuThii sachchii aas pe jiinaa kab tak aaKhir kab tak
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bhii.D me.n ik ajanabii kaa saamanaa achchhaa lagaa
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lagata hai kii ham dono hiiii baitbaazi khel rahe haii.n

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gaa........
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zindagii tera cheharaa badal jaayegaa

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again........gaa


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bhiigii hu_ii aa.Nkho.n kaa ye ma.nzar na milegaa
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gaa........
ga>>>>

gaye dino.n kaa suraaG lekar kidhar se aayaa kidhar gayaa vo
ajiib maanuus ajanabii thaa mujhe to hairaan kar gayaa vo

vo>>>



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gaye dino.n kaa suraaG lekar kidhar se aayaa kidhar gayaa vo
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vo>>>


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