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Love Chalo Aaj Dard Bante................! - 26th July 2007, 08:54 PM

DOSTON,
kehte hai khushi bantne se badhati hai,aur DARD bantne se kam ho jata hai.........hum chahte hai ki is jahan mai har ek insaan khush rahe.......aur is ke liye hum ek dusre ka dard bant le............hum apne doston ke liye itna to zaroor kar sakte hai........hai na?............
to chaliye yaha is GAME ke zariye hum sher-o-shayri main ek dusre ka dard bante............
is SHAYRI .COM ka har member apna dard yaha bayan kar sakta hai........humare paas kisi DARD ka MARHAM to nahi,par ek waada zaroor kar sakte hai ki aap apna dard bantege to woh zaroor kam ho jayega aur yakeenan aap ke dil ka booj halka ho jayega...............
shart ye hai ki hum jo bhi bayan kare SHER-O-SHAYRI mai kare............
chaliye shuruwat mai karti hoooooo.........

na jane kyon ye ankhen udaas rehti hai,
in ankhon mai kisi ki pyaas rehti hai,
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kehte hai khushi bantne se badhati hai,aur DARD bantne se kam ho jata hai.........hum chahte hai ki is jahan mai har ek insaan khush rahe.......aur is ke liye hum ek dusre ka dard bant le............hum apne doston ke liye itna to zaroor kar sakte hai........hai na?............
to chaliye yaha is GAME ke zariye hum sher-o-shayri main ek dusre ka dard bante............
is SHAYRI .COM ka har member apna dard yaha bayan kar sakta hai........humare paas kisi DARD ka MARHAM to nahi,par ek waada zaroor kar sakte hai ki aap apna dard bantege to woh zaroor kam ho jayega aur yakeenan aap ke dil ka booj halka ho jayega...............
shart ye hai ki hum jo bhi bayan kare SHER-O-SHAYRI mai kare............
chaliye shuruwat mai karti hoooooo.........

na jane kyon ye ankhen udaas rehti hai,
in ankhon mai kisi ki pyaas rehti hai,
ye jankar bhi ki woh meri kismat mai nahi,
phir bhi kyon unhe paane ki aas rehti hai...

Lamha Mein Apka Naam To Nahin Jaanta Per Mujhe Aapke Khayal Bahut Pasand Aye aur Aisa Laga Ki Mere Dil Ki Baat Kisi Ne Mjhse Pehle Pehchanli Ho....I Like It Very Much...Shayad Hi Isse Pehle Mujhe Kisi Aur Ki Shayri Pasand Aye Ho Sach...Rahul


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26th July 2007, 10:34 PM

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kehte hai khushi bantne se badhati hai,aur DARD bantne se kam ho jata hai.........hum chahte hai ki is jahan mai har ek insaan khush rahe.......aur is ke liye hum ek dusre ka dard bant le............hum apne doston ke liye itna to zaroor kar sakte hai........hai na?............
to chaliye yaha is GAME ke zariye hum sher-o-shayri main ek dusre ka dard bante............
is SHAYRI .COM ka har member apna dard yaha bayan kar sakta hai........humare paas kisi DARD ka MARHAM to nahi,par ek waada zaroor kar sakte hai ki aap apna dard bantege to woh zaroor kam ho jayega aur yakeenan aap ke dil ka booj halka ho jayega...............
shart ye hai ki hum jo bhi bayan kare SHER-O-SHAYRI mai kare............
chaliye shuruwat mai karti hoooooo.........

na jane kyon ye ankhen udaas rehti hai,
in ankhon mai kisi ki pyaas rehti hai,
ye jankar bhi ki woh meri kismat mai nahi,
phir bhi kyon unhe paane ki aas rehti hai...
bahut khoob lamha ji accha likha hai apne dard ko bahut ki khobsurti ke saath bayan kiya hai unhi likhti rahiye.............aap ka dost


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dost, mera naam "LAMHA" hi hai.........shukriya aap ko mera khayal pasand aaya...........par sirf tarif karne se nahi chalega........aap ko is GAME ko aage badhana hoga.........meri likhi shayri ke jawab main koi sher likhana hoga........is silsile ko continue karna hoga...........aap samaj rahe hai na?..........to chaliye apna koi zabardast sher ya shayri hume bhi sunaye.................
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bahut khoob lamha ji accha likha hai apne dard ko bahut ki khobsurti ke saath bayan kiya hai unhi likhti rahiye.............aap ka dost
hey KASHIF,
aap ko mera likha acha laga ,is ke liye shukriya.............par ye kya baat hui KASHIF......aap ko is ke jawab mai kuch likhana hai..........aap aise nahi chut sakte hai........aap ko dard ka ye silsila zaari rakhana hai..........to ho jaye.........aap ki taraf se koi dil ko chu jane wala sher ya shayri......................
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Bahut khoob Lamha ji.....mujhe apka khayaal kaafi pasand aaya ...
to leejiye hum is bazm mein ise aage badhaate hain is sher ke saath:

Wahi mahsoos kerte hain mohabbat ki tadap apne DIL mein...
Jo apne aap se badhker kisi ko PYAAR kerte hain.....

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Bahut khoob Lamha ji.....mujhe apka khayaal kaafi pasand aaya ...
to leejiye hum is bazm mein ise aage badhaate hain is sher ke saath:

Wahi mahsoos kerte hain mohabbat ki tadap apne DIL mein...
Jo apne aap se badhker kisi ko PYAAR kerte hain.....

Jawed....
HEY JAWED,
aap ke is sher ka jawab dena chahungi..........gaur farmaye.........

tumne na kiya yaad kabhi bhulkar humein,
hum ne to teri yaad mein sub kuch bhula diya,
mitne lagi hai dil se tere ab to parchaiya humari,
par ho saka na dur tu humse,humne khud ko mita diya..........
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HEY JAWED,
aap ke is sher ka jawab dena chahungi..........gaur farmaye.........

tumne na kiya yaad kabhi bhulkar humein,
hum ne to teri yaad mein sub kuch bhula diya,
mitne lagi hai dil se tere ab to parchaiya humari,
par ho saka na dur tu humse,humne khud ko mita diya..........

bahut khub lamha ji. aapki soch humein achi lagi.

dard ke barre mein hum likh nah payenge
ek aansu baha...to dariya ko rock nah payenge
tumhara daman geela ho jayega
aur sharm se hum kuch bol nah payenge

mohabaat mein ibadaat ki thi uski
hooton par naam uska, dil mein tasveer thi uski
par mohabaat k badle mein humein mohabaat nahi mili
jiss mehfil mein khade khade lut gaye.......wo mehfil thi uski........


Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little...



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28th July 2007, 08:37 AM

Beautiful thread...

Kal raat janay kya hua...

Kuch der pehlay neend say,

Kuch Ashq milnay aagaye...

Kuch khwaab bhi tootay huye,

Kuch log bhi roothay huye,

Kuch raasta bhatki hui,

Kuch gard mein lipti hui,

Kuch Be-tarha pheli hui,

Kuch khol mein simti hui,

Be-rabt si sochein kayee...

Bhooli hui batein kayee...

Aik shaks ki yaadein kayee...

Phir dair tak jaagi rahi,

Sochon mein Gum bethi rahi,

Ungli say thunday Farsh par...

aik naam hi likhti rahi,

Kal raat bhi woh raat thi...

Kuch Der pehlay neend say,

MEIN DER TAK ROTI RAHI....


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Main zameen pe tanha, aur woh aasmaano mein...
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28th July 2007, 10:35 AM

helo lamha ji aap muje nahi janti lekin yaha k bahut purane memb. muje acchhi tareh jaante he..vaise me yaha bahut arse baad laut k aayi hu..aur khud se hi umeed karti hu ki ab shayed ye aana-jana laga rahega.

lol lamha ji apka idea muje bahut pasand aaya aur ab me ise aage badate hue apne khayaal kuchh u paish karti hu...

Din Bher ki udaasi u nikli ki aankho ka sagar chhalak gaya..
dil aaj toot kar u bikhra ki dard chhalak chhalak k roya kiya..



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bahut khub lamha ji. aapki soch humein achi lagi.

dard ke barre mein hum likh nah payenge
ek aansu baha...to dariya ko rock nah payenge
tumhara daman geela ho jayega
aur sharm se hum kuch bol nah payenge

mohabaat mein ibadaat ki thi uski
hooton par naam uska, dil mein tasveer thi uski
par mohabaat k badle mein humein mohabaat nahi mili
jiss mehfil mein khade khade lut gaye.......wo mehfil thi uski........
Wah......... kya baat hai...........MANISH,
daad kabul kijiye.................aap ka koi jawab nahi.................yu hi is dard -e -mehfil ko aage badhate rahiyega.......
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Beautiful thread...

Kal raat janay kya hua...

Kuch der pehlay neend say,

Kuch Ashq milnay aagaye...

Kuch khwaab bhi tootay huye,

Kuch log bhi roothay huye,

Kuch raasta bhatki hui,

Kuch gard mein lipti hui,

Kuch Be-tarha pheli hui,

Kuch khol mein simti hui,

Be-rabt si sochein kayee...

Bhooli hui batein kayee...

Aik shaks ki yaadein kayee...

Phir dair tak jaagi rahi,

Sochon mein Gum bethi rahi,

Ungli say thunday Farsh par...

aik naam hi likhti rahi,

Kal raat bhi woh raat thi...

Kuch Der pehlay neend say,

MEIN DER TAK ROTI RAHI....



HI NAINA,
thanx a lot for joining us..........aap ke ehsaas bahut pyaare hai..........bahut saadgi hai inmein...............par phir bhi dil ko ajeeb sa dard de gaye................great job.........keep it up................
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helo lamha ji aap muje nahi janti lekin yaha k bahut purane memb. muje acchhi tareh jaante he..vaise me yaha bahut arse baad laut k aayi hu..aur khud se hi umeed karti hu ki ab shayed ye aana-jana laga rahega.

lol lamha ji apka idea muje bahut pasand aaya aur ab me ise aage badate hue apne khayaal kuchh u paish karti hu...

Din Bher ki udaasi u nikli ki aankho ka sagar chhalak gaya..
dil aaj toot kar u bikhra ki dard chhalak chhalak k roya kiya..

kya baat hai..........main aap ko nahi janti,par aap ke ehsaas bahut khubsurat lage..........



chale is silsile ko aage badhaye.....................



woh to khushbu hai,hawaoon main bikhar jayega,
par humara ye dard se sarabor dil,kidhar jayega,
hum to samje the ke ek zakham hai, bhar jayega,
kya khabar thi ke rug-e-jaan main utar jayega...........
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28th July 2007, 09:24 PM

Awww!!! Aaooo dostooo DARDDD BAATEE (great idea LAMHA dear *hugs*)

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Jab Jab hum humare naye dosto ko Shayri.com mein ONLINE Paate Hai


thanx ALBELI,




thanx u so much .....aap ko ye idea acha laga......yu hi dosti barkaraar rakhiyega............
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29th July 2007, 12:41 AM

humare likhe ka jwab kahan hai????????????


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humare likhe ka jwab kahan hai????????????
sorry baba............ye raha aap ka jawab............

jab jab tumhe bhulaya,tum aur yaad aaye,
jaate nahi hai dil se abtak tumhare saaye,
tumse bichadne ka jab bhi khayal aaya,
tanhai to kya ,hum mehfil mai bhi ghabaraye..............
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29th July 2007, 12:59 AM

tumhari aankhon mein ek alag sa raaz hai
dil ki baat ya mohabaat ka khwaab hai
hum to nahi samaj payenge
tum hi batayo ...........LAMHA..........yhe kya baat hai


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HEY JAWED,
aap ke is sher ka jawab dena chahungi..........gaur farmaye.........

tumne na kiya yaad kabhi bhulkar humein,
hum ne to teri yaad mein sub kuch bhula diya,
mitne lagi hai dil se tere ab to parchaiya humari,
par ho saka na dur tu humse,humne khud ko mita diya..........
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Bahut khoob Lamha ji ....

Hamien aapka jawab bahut pasand aaya.......per yeh raahen yahan khatm nahin hoti hain....aakhir is bazm ko hamein aage bhi to badhana hai.....to leejiye is silsile ko aage badhhate hain is sher ke saath....

Woh na sahi unki yaad hi sahi
kam se kam itna to mere naseeb mein tha
Tamam umre kati hai unki yaad mein
Jo bachi hai woh bhi kat jayegi unki yaad mein.

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Hi Rahul,

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i m new user from this site and i want to share something
can you join me
"abke sawan me ye srarat mere sath hui,
humare ghar ko chhod ke sare saher me barsat hui"
rahul pandit

Bahut khoob rahul ji...
Aapka swagat hai is mahfil mein....aise hi likhte rahiye....aur is mahfil ko apne kalam se sajate rahiye...

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hi lamha ji - 30th July 2007, 07:01 PM

hallo h r you
i send you my 1 gazal i hope you like
Intezaar to kareiN ke jab vo aaye bhi
Bhool jaayeiN hum chhodeiN jo mere saaye bhi

Kal subah yeh zindagi jo na rahi
Tamaasha dekheNge apne aur paraaye bhi

Vo gair hai to gair ban-na bhi seekh le
YaadoN meiN aake baar-baar aazmaaye bhi

Kehta hai duniya ko chhoD dega humeiN
MuD ke dekhe baar-baar, ghabraaye bhi

Yeh kaisa khuda hai mere dosto
Khud hi lagaaye aag, khud hi bhujaaye bhi

Shikwa bhi to kya kareiN hum kisi se
Khoya ik humsafar to lakhoN rehnuma paaye bhi
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hallo h r you
i send you my 1 gazal i hope you like
Intezaar to kareiN ke jab vo aaye bhi
Bhool jaayeiN hum chhodeiN jo mere saaye bhi

Kal subah yeh zindagi jo na rahi
Tamaasha dekheNge apne aur paraaye bhi

Vo gair hai to gair ban-na bhi seekh le
YaadoN meiN aake baar-baar aazmaaye bhi

Kehta hai duniya ko chhoD dega humeiN
MuD ke dekhe baar-baar, ghabraaye bhi

Yeh kaisa khuda hai mere dosto
Khud hi lagaaye aag, khud hi bhujaaye bhi

Shikwa bhi to kya kareiN hum kisi se
Khoya ik humsafar to lakhoN rehnuma paaye bhirahul pandi

Bahut khoob rahul....

Bas iase hi sajate rahiye is mahfil ko.....
   
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tumhari aankhon mein ek alag sa raaz hai
dil ki baat ya mohabaat ka khwaab hai
hum to nahi samaj payenge
tum hi batayo ...........LAMHA..........yhe kya baat hai
HEY,MANISH,
aap janna chahte hai na ki kya baat hai,to lijiye suniye.....................


saamne na ho tum, to tarasti hai ankhen,
yaad mai teri barsti hai ankhen,
mere liye na sahi,inke liye aa jao,MANISH,
aap ka bepanah intezar karti hai ankhen............



MANISH,
ye sirf sher hai ok..............dont mind...........
aap ke sher ka jawab hai,is liye aap ka naam use kiya maine................i know u understand....................
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hallo h r you
i send you my 1 gazal i hope you like
Intezaar to kareiN ke jab vo aaye bhi
Bhool jaayeiN hum chhodeiN jo mere saaye bhi

Kal subah yeh zindagi jo na rahi
Tamaasha dekheNge apne aur paraaye bhi

Vo gair hai to gair ban-na bhi seekh le
YaadoN meiN aake baar-baar aazmaaye bhi

Kehta hai duniya ko chhoD dega humeiN
MuD ke dekhe baar-baar, ghabraaye bhi

Yeh kaisa khuda hai mere dosto
Khud hi lagaaye aag, khud hi bhujaaye bhi

Shikwa bhi to kya kareiN hum kisi se
Khoya ik humsafar to lakhoN rehnuma paaye bhirahul pandi


hey RAHUL,
bahut khub...............aap ka tahe dil se swagat hai humari is mehfil mai.....................aap ne to aate hi dhum macha di.........................thank u.....................uhi likhate rahe aur is mehfil pe chate rahe..............
aap ki dost,
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chale aur ek dard bhare sher se mai is mehfil ko aage badhati hoooo.......................


waade bhi yaar ne kya khub nibhaye,
zakham muft mai aur dard tohfe mai bhijwaye,
is se badkar wafa ki misaal kya hogi,
maut se pehle hi 'LAMHA' woh kafan le aaye.......................
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guzri raat ki kya baat karu..
apne toote armano ki kya baat karu..
tamaam raat ashk takiya bhigote rahe.
uthti rahi tees teri bewafai ki jo..
vo kaise biti raat..kya baat karu..???



DIL KI TANHAAI KO AASHAAR BANA LETE HAI....
DARD JAB HAD SE GUZERTA HAI TO KUCHH LIKH LETE HAI....
   
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chale aur ek dard bhare sher se mai is mehfil ko aage badhati hoooo.......................


waade bhi yaar ne kya khub nibhaye,
zakham muft mai aur dard tohfe mai bhijwaye,
is se badkar wafa ki misaal kya hogi,
maut se pehle hi 'LAMHA' woh kafan le aaye.......................

Hogi kabhi inteha mere bhi intezaar ki
Khalegi kabhi kami unko mere bhi pyaar ki
Abhi maut ko rok rakha hai "Jasdeep" unke liye
Par kabhi to nikal hi jayegi jaan unke is yaar ki



Badnaseeb bhi nahi par mera naseeb bhi nahi
Maana ke main ameer nahi par gareeb bhi nahi
Dil ki gehraaiyon mein chhipaya hai jise
Woh door bhi nahi mujhse par kareeb bhi nahi
Chahta to hoon dena usko khushiyan saare jahan ki
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Hogi kabhi inteha mere bhi intezaar ki
Khalegi kabhi kami unko mere bhi pyaar ki
Abhi maut ko rok rakha hai "Jasdeep" unke liye
Par kabhi to nikal hi jayegi jaan unke is yaar ki

Wah...........JASDEEP......KYA BAAT HAI.......aap ke sher ka jawab hazir hai...............



guzarta hai meri har saas se tera naam aaj bhi,
dhalti hai tere intezaar mai meri har shaam aaj bhi,
tujko mujse ruthe ek zamana ho gaya,
par hoti hai tere naam se meri pehchaan aaj bhi......


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Aadaab - 1st August 2007, 03:36 AM

Sab logo ko Aalam ka salaam aur namaskar. Sabhi ne bahut khub likha hai. Main bhi kuchh pesh karta hoon:

Is Dil ko Pyaar mein dhadakne ki Sazaa to milni hi thi,
Ishq ki Bahaaron ko ek na ek din yeh Khizaa to milni hi thi,
Yeh to humne haske Zindagi ko gale laga liya "Aalam",
Warna dhundhne par Marne ki ek Wajah to milni hi thi.


Is ranj-o-gam ke daur mein sivay jaam ke kuchh yaad nahi,
Hua karta tha fakr humein jis naam par "Aalam",
Aaj to yeh Aalam hai ki woh Naam bhi yaad nahi.
   
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Wah...........JASDEEP......KYA BAAT HAI.......aap ke sher ka jawab hazir hai...............



guzarta hai meri har saas se tera naam aaj bhi,
dhalti hai tere intezaar mai meri har shaam aaj bhi,
tujko mujse ruthe ek zamana ho gaya,
par hoti hai tere naam se meri pehchaan aaj bhi......





Naam saanso mein bas jana hi to zindagi nahi
Har sham ko intezaar mein bitana bhi to zindagi nahi
Kuch kamiyan bhi dhoondhani padti hai jeene ke liye
Har khushi ko pana bhi to zindagi nahi



Badnaseeb bhi nahi par mera naseeb bhi nahi
Maana ke main ameer nahi par gareeb bhi nahi
Dil ki gehraaiyon mein chhipaya hai jise
Woh door bhi nahi mujhse par kareeb bhi nahi
Chahta to hoon dena usko khushiyan saare jahan ki
par mil jaayein unke gham "Jasdeep" itna khushnaseeb bhi nahi
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Naam saanso mein bas jana hi to zindagi nahi
Har sham ko intezaar mein bitana bhi to zindagi nahi
Kuch kamiyan bhi dhoondhani padti hai jeene ke liye
Har khushi ko pana bhi to zindagi nahi


Yeh DIL nahin jaanta kuchh bhi siwa mohabbat ke
Yeh DIL to sirf mohabbat kerna jaanta hai
Ishq ki manzil pe aage bahut aage jana chahta hai
Na do ise yun saza ,yeh DIL to tumpe jaan deta hai


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Sab logo ko Aalam ka salaam aur namaskar. Sabhi ne bahut khub likha hai. Main bhi kuchh pesh karta hoon:

Is Dil ko Pyaar mein dhadakne ki Sazaa to milni hi thi,
Ishq ki Bahaaron ko ek na ek din yeh Khizaa to milni hi thi,
Yeh to humne haske Zindagi ko gale laga liya "Aalam",
Warna dhundhne par Marne ki ek Wajah to milni hi thi.

hey AALAM,
aap ka is mehfil mai swagat hai..............bahut khub likha hai aap ne..............u hi likhate rahe aur is mehfil ki shan badhate rahe...........
aap ki dost,
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Yeh DIL nahin jaanta kuchh bhi siwa mohabbat ke
Yeh DIL to sirf mohabbat kerna jaanta hai
Ishq ki manzil pe aage bahut aage jana chahta hai
Na do ise yun saza ,yeh DIL to tumpe jaan deta hai


Jawed...

bahut khub,JAWED............
ab aage gaur farmaye..................


na reh jaye koi aas tere baad fir,
na reh jaye koi pyaas tere baad fir,
hai meri ye hi aarzoo ae mere humnashi,
na reh jaye zindagi bhi tere baad fir......................
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bahut khub,JAWED............
ab aage gaur farmaye..................


na reh jaye koi aas tere baad fir,
na reh jaye koi pyaas tere baad fir,
hai meri ye hi aarzoo ae mere humnashi,
na reh jaye zindagi bhi tere baad fir......................

Bahut khoob Lamha sahiba......
iske aage ki daastan humse suniye...
sun ke teri aankhen dabdaba jayengi...
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Nakaam si koshish kiya karte hain,
Hum hain ki unse pyar kiya karte hain,
Khuda ne taqdeer mein ek tuta tara nahi likha,
Aur hum hain ki chaand ki aarzu kiya karte hain ..

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Bahut khoob Lamha sahiba......
iske aage ki daastan humse suniye...
sun ke teri aankhen dabdaba jayengi...
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Nakaam si koshish kiya karte hain,
Hum hain ki unse pyar kiya karte hain,
Khuda ne taqdeer mein ek tuta tara nahi likha,
Aur hum hain ki chaand ki aarzu kiya karte hain ..

Jawed....
wah.........JAWED..........kya baat hai............
ab aage..................


tere bagair kaise bitegi ye zindagi,
zinda magar rehna hoga hume,hai kaisi ye bebasi,
kya jane ab kabhi milenge bhi ya nahi,
tere milne ki ye aarzoo magar ,chutengi na kabhi.........
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wah.........JAWED..........kya baat hai............
ab aage..................


tere bagair kaise bitegi ye zindagi,
zinda magar rehna hoga hume,hai kaisi ye bebasi,
kya jane ab kabhi milenge bhi ya nahi,
tere milne ki ye aarzoo magar ,chutengi na kabhi.........

Bahut Khoob Lamha ji.....
Baat niklegi to bahut door talak jayegi...
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Zindagi jaise ek sazaa si ho gai hai ,
Gum ke sagar mein is kadar kho gai hai ,
Tum aa jaao vapis yeh gujaarish hai meri ;
Shaayad muje, Tumhaari aadat si ho gai hai...


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