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Bahut Khoob Lamha ji.....
Baat niklegi to bahut door talak jayegi...
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iske aage ki daastaan yeh rahi....

Zindagi jaise ek sazaa si ho gai hai ,
Gum ke sagar mein is kadar kho gai hai ,
Tum aa jaao vapis yeh gujaarish hai meri ;
Shaayad muje, Tumhaari aadat si ho gai hai...



Jawed..

kya baat hai JAWED,
IS KA JAWAB DENA CHAHUNGI.......................
TO SUNIYE........................



mehfil mai to kabhi hume yaad karoge,
tanhai mai bhi tum fariyaad karoge,
hum-sa na mila tha kabhi,aur na milega,
kabhi to apni kismat pe naaz karoge................
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kya baat hai JAWED,
IS KA JAWAB DENA CHAHUNGI.......................
TO SUNIYE........................



mehfil mai to kabhi hume yaad karoge,
tanhai mai bhi tum fariyaad karoge,
hum-sa na mila tha kabhi,aur na milega,
kabhi to apni kismat pe naaz karoge................

Bahut khoob Lamha ji....
Main bhi iska jawab dena chaoonga...
mulaiza fermayen.....

Jab Teri Dhun Mein Jiya Karte They
Hum Bhi Chup Chaap Phira Karte They
Aankhon Mein Pyaas Huwa Karti Thi
Dil Mein Toofaan Utha Karte They
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6th August 2007, 04:10 PM

Namashkaar doston,
Ab mai bhi kuch likh du:

Jaane kis janam me tumne meri zindagi ki duwa maangi,
Ke aaj mere marne ki duwa me kuch asar nahi...

Mohobat ke siwa aur kya jurm karu marne ke liye,
Meri iss ek gunaah me kuch asar nahi...

Meri jaan, tum aur sietam karo hum par,
Itna dard me abhi kuch asar nahi...

Reshma,


Dunya ke sitam ka koi hisaab nahi,
Lekin meri houslo ka bhi jawaab nahi...
   
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Namashkaar doston,
Ab mai bhi kuch likh du:

Jaane kis janam me tumne meri zindagi ki duwa maangi,
Ke aaj mere marne ki duwa me kuch asar nahi...

Mohobat ke siwa aur kya jurm karu marne ke liye,
Meri iss ek gunaah me kuch asar nahi...

Meri jaan, tum aur sietam karo hum par,
Itna dard me abhi kuch asar nahi...

Reshma,

gr8 job RESHMA,
ab is sher ka jawab gaur farmaye...........


zakham itne gehre hai izhaar kya kare,
hum khud hi nishana bangaye ab vaar kya kare,
marne ke baad bhi khuli rahi ye ankhen,
ab is se zayada unka intezaar kya kare......
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gr8 job RESHMA,
ab is sher ka jawab gaur farmaye...........


zakham itne gehre hai izhaar kya kare,
hum khud hi nishana bangaye ab vaar kya kare,
marne ke baad bhi khuli rahi ye ankhen,
ab is se zayada unka intezaar kya kare......

Bahot accha LAMHA ji,
Aap ka jawaab:

Mout se ham ko dar nahi


Sirf aap se ruswaai ka dar hai…


Aap mere jism par laakho zakhm lagaa do,


hame sirf dard e dil ki gahraai ka dar hai…



Dunya ke sitam ka koi hisaab nahi,
Lekin meri houslo ka bhi jawaab nahi...
   
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gr8 job RESHMA,
ab is sher ka jawab gaur farmaye...........


zakham itne gehre hai izhaar kya kare,
hum khud hi nishana bangaye ab vaar kya kare,
marne ke baad bhi khuli rahi ye ankhen,
ab is se zayada unka intezaar kya kare......

Hi Lamha ji,

Zakhm jitne gahre hote hain bhoolna utna hi mushkil hota hai............
aapne to kucchh aisa likh diya jahan per aaker to sare derwaze band ho jate hain...
fir bhi kuchh na kuchh koshish to kerni hi padegi...
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Yeh ashar ghalib ji ke hain.....

kisi ko bhoolna mumkin nahi hai
warna humne to chaaha bahut hai
tere jaisa koi milta nahi hai
tere jaisa magar dhoonda bahut hai

Aaap ka Dost

Jawed..........

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Hi Lamha ji,

Zakhm jitne gahre hote hain bhoolna utna hi mushkil hota hai............
aapne to kucchh aisa likh diya jahan per aaker to sare derwaze band ho jate hain...
fir bhi kuchh na kuchh koshish to kerni hi padegi...
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Yeh ashar ghalib ji ke hain.....

kisi ko bhoolna mumkin nahi hai
warna humne to chaaha bahut hai
tere jaisa koi milta nahi hai
tere jaisa magar dhoonda bahut hai

Aaap ka Dost

Jawed..........


WAH..........JAWED,
kya baat hai............gr8 job..........



hazaro manzilein hogi,hazaro karvan hoge,
nigahein humko dhundhegi ,
na jane hum kaha hoge...........



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WAH..........JAWED,
kya baat hai............gr8 job..........



hazaro manzilein hogi,hazaro karvan hoge,
nigahein humko dhundhegi ,
na jane hum kaha hoge...........




Bahut khoob Lamha ji......

Ta umre dhoondhta raha main Ishq ki manzil ...
Manzil to na mili , haan ye huaa gher se bahut door aa gaye hum...
   
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Bahut khoob Lamha ji......

Ta umre dhoondhta raha main Ishq ki manzil ...
Manzil to na mili , haan ye huaa gher se bahut door aa gaye hum...
kya baat hai JAWED,
aap ka jawaab padhke hum to kuch kehne ke laayak hi nahi reh gaye...........wah...............
agar ishq ki manzil pana itna aasan hota ,to shayad zindagi mai koi dard hi na hota........hai na JAWED?.....


ab aage suniye.............



bhule hai rufta-rufta unhe muddatton ke baad,
ke kishton mai khudkhushi ka mazaa humse poochiye...

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kya baat hai JAWED,
aap ka jawaab padhke hum to kuch kehne ke laayak hi nahi reh gaye...........wah...............
agar ishq ki manzil pana itna aasan hota ,to shayad zindagi mai koi dard hi na hota........hai na JAWED?.....


ab aage suniye.............



bhule hai rufta-rufta unhe muddatton ke baad,
ke kishton mai khudkhushi ka mazaa humse poochiye...

Bahut khoob Lamha ji.....yeh sher "Khumar Barabanki" sahab ki ghazal se hai...aur mujhe bahut pasand hai.....main poori ghazal aapse share kerna chahoonga....

ek pal me.n ek sadii kaa mazaa ham se puuchhiye
do din kii zindagii kaa mazaa ham se puuchhiye

bhuule hai.n unhe.n raftaa raftaa mudatto.n me.n ham
qishto.n me.n Khud_kushii kaa mazaa ham se puuchhiye

aaGaaz-e-aashiqii kaa mazaa aap jaaniye
anjaam-e-aashiqii kaa mazaa ham se puuchhiye

jalate diyo.n me.n jalate gharo.n jaise zau kahaa.N
sarakar raushnii kaa mazaa ham se puuchhiye

vo jaan hii gaye ke hame.n un se pyaar hai
aa.Nkho.n kii muKhbarii kaa mazaa ham se puuchhiye

ha.Nsane kaa shauq ham ko bhii thaa aap kii tarah
ha.Nsiye magar ha.Nsii kaa mazaa ham se puuchhiye

ham taubaa kar ke mar gaye bemaut ai 'Khumar'
tauhiin-e-maikashii kaa mazaa ham se puuchhiye


   
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kya baat hai JAWED,
aap ka jawaab padhke hum to kuch kehne ke laayak hi nahi reh gaye...........wah...............
agar ishq ki manzil pana itna aasan hota ,to shayad zindagi mai koi dard hi na hota........hai na JAWED?.....


ab aage suniye.............



bhule hai rufta-rufta unhe muddatton ke baad,
ke kishton mai khudkhushi ka mazaa humse poochiye...

Sahi kaha aapne Lamha ji...."agar ishq ki manzil pana itna aasan hota ,to shayad zindagi mai koi dard hi na hota"
Ab iske aage....

Bujha sakaa hai bhalaa kaun waqt ke shole..
Ye aisii aag hai jis mein Dhuaan nahin miltaa
Tere jahaan mein aisaa nahin ki pyaar na ho
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Bahut khoob Lamha ji.....yeh sher "Khumar Barabanki" sahab ki ghazal se hai...aur mujhe bahut pasand hai.....main poori ghazal aapse share kerna chahoonga....

ek pal me.n ek sadii kaa mazaa ham se puuchhiye
do din kii zindagii kaa mazaa ham se puuchhiye

bhuule hai.n unhe.n raftaa raftaa mudatto.n me.n ham
qishto.n me.n Khud_kushii kaa mazaa ham se puuchhiye

aaGaaz-e-aashiqii kaa mazaa aap jaaniye
anjaam-e-aashiqii kaa mazaa ham se puuchhiye

jalate diyo.n me.n jalate gharo.n jaise zau kahaa.N
sarakar raushnii kaa mazaa ham se puuchhiye

vo jaan hii gaye ke hame.n un se pyaar hai
aa.Nkho.n kii muKhbarii kaa mazaa ham se puuchhiye

ha.Nsane kaa shauq ham ko bhii thaa aap kii tarah
ha.Nsiye magar ha.Nsii kaa mazaa ham se puuchhiye

ham taubaa kar ke mar gaye bemaut ai 'Khumar'
tauhiin-e-maikashii kaa mazaa ham se puuchhiye



WOW..............JAWED,
what a wonderful ghazal..................thank u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooo much 4 sharing with me..............i loved this ghazal..............thanx once again...................
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Sahi kaha aapne Lamha ji...."agar ishq ki manzil pana itna aasan hota ,to shayad zindagi mai koi dard hi na hota"
Ab iske aage....

Bujha sakaa hai bhalaa kaun waqt ke shole..
Ye aisii aag hai jis mein Dhuaan nahin miltaa
Tere jahaan mein aisaa nahin ki pyaar na ho
Jahaan ummid ho is kii vahaan nahin milta..
kya baat hai JAWED...............aap to is mehfil pe cha gaye hai...........................bahut khub..............
ab aage......................





rone se gham-e-dil ka guzara nahi hota,
har shaksh dil ka sahara nahi hota,
us roz lagta hai bekaar jiye hum,
jis roz zikr tumhara nahi hota..................
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kya baat hai JAWED...............aap to is mehfil pe cha gaye hai...........................bahut khub..............
ab aage......................





rone se gham-e-dil ka guzara nahi hota,
har shaksh dil ka sahara nahi hota,
us roz lagta hai bekaar jiye hum,
jis roz zikr tumhara nahi hota..................

Bahut Khoob Lamha ji....Ab iske aage...aur agar aap ise aur meri pichhli post ko mila den to "sharyaar" sahab ki ek mukammal ghazal ban jayegi....

kabhii kisii ko mukammal jahaan nahiin milataa
kahii.n zamiin to kahiin aasmaan nahiin milataa

jise bhii dekhiye vo apane aap mein gum hai
zubaan milii hai magar ham_zubaan nahiin milataa


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NA KOI AAPNA HE,
NA KOI PARAYA HE,
FIR BHI HUMNE YAHAPE
SAB KO AAPNA DOST BANAYA HE.
DARD TO DIL ME PHUT PHUT KAR BHARA HE
FIR BHI HUME DIL PE TALA LAGAYA HE
SAB SAMAJTE HE KI HAMARE CHEREPE MUSKURAHAT HE
PAR US MUSKURAHAT KE PICHE HI TO HUMNE AANE DARD KO CHUPAYA HE
YAAD AATE REHTE HE WOH DIN HARPAR
JISKO HUMNE MAJBOORI ME BHOOLAYA HE
KYA BATE DARD AAP SABSE
AAP ME BHI TO DARD KA SAMUNDAR SAMAYA HE
YAAD HE HUME KI
KHUDANE HI TO INSAN BANAYA HE
PAR KAISE BHOOL JAE KI KHUDANE HI INSAN KO SULAYA HE
LIKHNA TO BAHOT KUCH HE
PAR NIHAR NE ITNEMEHI AAPNE HATHO KO RUKAYA HE


Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai
Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai

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hi lamha ji - 13th August 2007, 04:42 PM

hi lamha ji h r you
i hope you r fine
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NA KOI AAPNA HE,
NA KOI PARAYA HE,
FIR BHI HUMNE YAHAPE
SAB KO AAPNA DOST BANAYA HE.
DARD TO DIL ME PHUT PHUT KAR BHARA HE
FIR BHI HUME DIL PE TALA LAGAYA HE
SAB SAMAJTE HE KI HAMARE CHEREPE MUSKURAHAT HE
PAR US MUSKURAHAT KE PICHE HI TO HUMNE AANE DARD KO CHUPAYA HE
YAAD AATE REHTE HE WOH DIN HARPAR
JISKO HUMNE MAJBOORI ME BHOOLAYA HE
KYA BATE DARD AAP SABSE
AAP ME BHI TO DARD KA SAMUNDAR SAMAYA HE
YAAD HE HUME KI
KHUDANE HI TO INSAN BANAYA HE
PAR KAISE BHOOL JAE KI KHUDANE HI INSAN KO SULAYA HE
LIKHNA TO BAHOT KUCH HE
PAR NIHAR NE ITNEMEHI AAPNE HATHO KO RUKAYA HE



kya baat hai ..........NIHAR...........
gr8 job............keep it up.............



dil woh hai ki ,fariyad se bharpur hai har waqt,
hum woh hai ki,dil se kuch nikalne nahi dete...........



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hey RAHUL.......i m fine........thank u...........
bahut khub ..........aap ne kamaal ka sher likha hai......




woh ruthe is kadar ki manaya na gaya,
dur itne ho gaye ki paas bulaya na gaya,
dil to dil tha, samundar ka saahil nahi,
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Bahut Khoob Lamha ji....Ab iske aage...aur agar aap ise aur meri pichhli post ko mila den to "sharyaar" sahab ki ek mukammal ghazal ban jayegi....

kabhii kisii ko mukammal jahaan nahiin milataa
kahii.n zamiin to kahiin aasmaan nahiin milataa
jise bhii dekhiye vo apane aap mein gum hai
zubaan milii hai magar ham_zubaa nahiin milataa

Jawed......


bahut khub JAWED,
ab aage gaur farmaye..........................


sapno se dil lagane ki aadat nahi rahi,
har waqt muskurane ki aadat nahi rahi,
ye soch kar ki koi manane nahi aayega,
ab hume ruth jane ki aadat nahi rahi..............
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RUTH KAR TO DEKHO MANANE HUM AAENGE
DUR HI SAHI AAPSE PAR AAPKE KHAYALO ME AAENGE
LAMHA (WAQT) RUTH JAE HAMARA HUMSE
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ye soch kar ki koi manane nahi aayega,
ab hume ruth jane ki aadat nahi rahi..............
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RUTH KAR TO DEKHO MANANE HUM AAENGE
DUR HI SAHI AAPSE PAR AAPKE KHAYALO ME AAENGE
LAMHA (WAQT) RUTH JAE HAMARA HUMSE
PAR LAMHA(JI) TUM NA RUTH NA
TUM TUT KAR TO DEKHO
TUMHE SAJANE HUM AAENGE.
AARE HUMTO YAHA TAK KEHTE HE
TUM POOKAR KAR TO DEKHO HUME
HUM AAPNI DUNIYA CHOD KAR AAENGE.

Bahut achche Nihar Ji...

hum to majboor hain ....
khud apne halaat se...
hum kya kisi ko aawaz denge..
hum to khud apni aawaz kho baithe hain...
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lekin kahiin qaraar na paa_uun to kyaa karuun


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RUTH KAR TO DEKHO MANANE HUM AAENGE
DUR HI SAHI AAPSE PAR AAPKE KHAYALO ME AAENGE
LAMHA (WAQT) RUTH JAE HAMARA HUMSE
PAR LAMHA(JI) TUM NA RUTH NA
TUM TUT KAR TO DEKHO
TUMHE SAJANE HUM AAENGE.
AARE HUMTO YAHA TAK KEHTE HE
TUM POOKAR KAR TO DEKHO HUME
HUM AAPNI DUNIYA CHOD KAR AAENGE.

wah NIHAR...........bahut khub................
aap ka jawab haazir hai.................



dil ko manana agar hota aasaan,
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tanha na rehta ye bhari mehfil main,
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h r you dear
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TUJHE DEKHE BINA TERA HAAL BATA SAKTA HOON,
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TUJHE DEKHE BINA TERI TASWIR BANA SAKTA HOON,
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HOGI ITNI TAKAT SANDY KI DOSTI MEIN
KI TERI AANKH KA AANSU APNI AANKH SE GIRA SAKTA HOON

Bahut khoob sandyrana ji....

har ik apane hii Gam me.n mubtilaa hai
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h r you dear
i send you sayri i hope you like it


Arzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz hai


Mil ke usne dil ke ahsas ko doona kar diya,
dil kiya Abad kuch aise ki soona kar diya

rahul pandit



kya baat hai .....rahul........bahut khub...............



fir ansuo ke kuch fasane nikale,
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TUJHE DEKHE BINA TERI TASWIR BANA SAKTA HOON,
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HOGI ITNI TAKAT SANDY KI DOSTI MEIN
KI TERI AANKH KA AANSU APNI AANKH SE GIRA SAKTA HOON


ofcourse u can join us...........u r most wel come...............aap ka sher hume bahut pasand aaya...yuhi likhate rahiyega....................



tum mano ya na mano ye hakikat hai,
hume aap jaise doston ki zaroorat hai,
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har ik apane hii Gam me.n mubtilaa hai
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mere naqqaad merii shaayarii to
mere TuuTe huye dil kii sadaa hai

Jawed..


hey JAWED,
how r u ?...............
nice sher............



mushkilein dilo ke irade aazmayegi,
khawabo ke parde nigaho se hatayegi,
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khud apne halaat se...
hum kya kisi ko aawaz denge..
hum to khud apni aawaz kho baithe hain...
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ik pal bhii us ko bhuul na paa_uun to kyaa karuun
sochaa to thaa ki chhod duun us kii galii .......
lekin kahiin qaraar na paa_uun to kyaa karuun

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MAJBOOR TO HAR KOI HOTA HE
AAPNE HALAT PAR HAR KOI ROTA HE
DOSTI ME AAWAZ DENEKI ZAROORAT NAHI
MERE DOST
DOSTI ME TO ISHARA HI BAHOOT HOTA HE


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aap ka jawab haazir hai.................



dil ko manana agar hota aasaan,
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tanha na rehta ye bhari mehfil main,
na hoti woh haalat jo ho na bayaan............





MANAO AAGAR DIL SE
TO KHUDA BHI MAAN JATA HE
DIL CHEEZ HI KUCH AAISA HE
JO SAMAJ ME NAHI AATA HE
KYO REHTE HO TANHA
TUM BHARI MEHFIL ME
KYA TUMHE HUMKO YAAD
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hey JAWED,
how r u ?...............
nice sher............



mushkilein dilo ke irade aazmayegi,
khawabo ke parde nigaho se hatayegi,
gir bhi jao to hosla mat haarna,
ye thokarein hi tuje chalna sikhayegi.................


HUM MUSKILO KO AAZMATE HE
YE MUSKIL HUME KYA AAZMAEGI ?
RAKHTE HI NAHI HUM KOI PARDE KHWABOME
YE NIGAHE DIL KO KYA SAMAJ PAEGI ?
GIR TE HE HUM PAR HAMARA HOSLA NAHI GIRTA
KON HE AAISI JO HAMARE HOSLE KO HILA PAEGI ?
THOKAREIN KHA KHA KAR CHALNA CHOOD DIYA HUMNE
AAB YE TOKAREIN KYA CHAL NA SIKHAYEGI ?


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tum mano ya na mano ye hakikat hai,
hume aap jaise doston ki zaroorat hai,
kisi din aao humari mehfil mai,
jaan jaoge zindagi kitni khubsoorat hai.................




AATE HE DOST ZINDAGI ME
SAB DIL TOD JATE HE
SAZA KAR AAPNI MEHFIL
SAB HUME AAKELA CHOOD JATE HE
KAI SE SAMJAE DIL KO KI
DOST BANANA CHOOD DE
IN DOSTO KI DUNIYA ME
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bazm-e-mehfil ko ghayal ka aadaab,

umeed karta huN ki aap is nacheez se abhi tak anjaan hiN haiN, waise ek baat farmaana chahuNga, aaj gum baaNtna aur aur use samjhna aur use ghatana ye sab kitaabi baateN, sach ka saamna kariye....!!! ab aap khud hiN dekh leN, yahaaN kisi ne v khul ke apne gum ki bayaani nahi ki hai....!! yahaaN koi ghalib nahi, ya shayad ye ghalib ke liye v mumkin nahi ha ki ek sher me apna saara dard piro de.....!! yahaaN sirf bait-baazi ho kar reh gayi hai, jaanta huN mere khayalat duniya se mel nahi khaate par haaN yahi sach hai.......!! agar kisi baat se aapke jazbatoN ko thes pahuNche to maafi ka talabgaar rahuNga.....!!! apni chand lafzoN ko saamne rakhte hue jaauNga....!!

Yaad teri dilayeN fizaayeN,to kya KareN,…
Ashk nazroN ko sajaayeN to kya kareN….

Fasl-e-gul mai baha bhula dete gum unka,…
Gir ke tasweer unki banayeN to kya kareN…

Milti hai saza jhakhm dikhane ki bhi yahaN…
Phir dard-e-dil na chupaayeN to kya KareN...

kehate hai log tamanaye liye jite raho “ghayal”,
jab tamnna hi humeN mitaayeN to kya kareN…

Sach…!

saanseN YuN jism ko sataayeN to kya kareN..
HaN Ashk nazroN ko sajaayeN to kya kareN….



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hi lamha dear - 18th August 2007, 04:05 PM

hi
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Dil-e-Tabaah ne b kyaa Mijaaz paya tha

Maaf karna saki Meri Zindagi Mujh ko
Wo ek lamha, k mai Tujh se Tang aaya tha

Shagufta Phool Simat ker Kali bane jese
Kuch is tarah se Tum ne Badan churaaya tha

Guzar gaya hai koi Lamha-e-Sharar ki tarah
Abhi to mai use Pehachaan b na payaa tha

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Zara si Baat per her Rasam tor aayaa tha
Dil-e-Tabaah ne b kyaa Mijaaz paya tha

Maaf karna saki Meri Zindagi Mujh ko
Wo ek lamha, k mai Tujh se Tang aaya tha

Shagufta Phool Simat ker Kali bane jese
Kuch is tarah se Tum ne Badan churaaya tha

Guzar gaya hai koi Lamha-e-Sharar ki tarah
Abhi to mai use Pehachaan b na payaa tha

Pata nahi k Mere baad un per kyaa guzri
Mai chand Khuwaab Zamaane mai chor aaya tha


sorry to offend u sir, but i think itz not written by u, n itz a very strict offence to write some1 elses line as urs, try give some credit to d original writer....!!

hope no1 wud say nething after these links...!!

http://www.ananthapuri.com/board/top...=1222&ARCHIVE=

http://www.bollywoodheaven.com/forum...hp/t-5999.html

http://www.fullhyderabad.com/discuss...ic.php?t=43040

http://www.lakesparadise.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=2892


n sir take it as ur 1st n last warning....!! thi should not b repeated....!!! or strict action could b taken against....!!



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khawabo ke parde nigaho se hatayegi,
gir bhi jao to hosla mat haarna,
ye thokarein hi tuje chalna sikhayegi.................

Hi Lamha ,

I am fine and hoping same for you.....
u didn't replied to my mail...
anyways.....bahut badhiyan sher raha aapka......

Yeh leejiye ek sher hamari taraf se.....ummeed kerta hoon pasand aayega.....

yun to akser woh tanhaai mein yaad aate the.
najane kyun aaj bhari bheed mein yaad aagaye.
lekin doston main us bheed mein bhi tanha tha.
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Hi Lamha ,

I am fine and hoping same for you.....
u didn't replied to my mail...
anyways.....bahut badhiyan sher raha aapka......

Yeh leejiye ek sher hamari taraf se.....ummeed kerta hoon pasand aayega.....

yun to akser woh tanhaai mein yaad aate the.
najane kyun aaj bhari bheed mein yaad aagaye.
lekin doston main us bheed mein bhi tanha tha.
Woh jab bhi mujhe tanha pate hain bas chale aate hain......


sorry JAWED.........i have been sooooooooooo busy.......couldnt reply ur mails................anyways talk to u soooooooon ................


bahut khub sher likha aap ne..........ab hum kya jawaab de is lajawaab sher ka..........fir bhi koshish karte hai.............umeed hai aap ko pasand aayega..........


guzarta hai meri har saans se tera naam aaj bhi,
dhalti hai tere intezaar mai meri har shaam aaj bhi,
tujko mujse bichade ek zamana ho gaya,
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