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hi - 22nd August 2007, 11:41 PM

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sorry JAWED.........i have been sooooooooooo busy.......couldnt reply ur mails................anyways talk to u soooooooon ................


bahut khub sher likha aap ne..........ab hum kya jawaab de is lajawaab sher ka..........fir bhi koshish karte hai.............umeed hai aap ko pasand aayega..........


guzarta hai meri har saans se tera naam aaj bhi,
dhalti hai tere intezaar mai meri har shaam aaj bhi,
tujko mujse bichade ek zamana ho gaya,
par hoti hai tere naam se meri pehchan aaj bhi..........

Lamha ji aap ka yeh pura silsilaa padhaa to mehsos hua ki maine sach men kuchh miss kar diyaa jo aap ke is kalaam men hissa nahi liya,anyway aap ke sher kaabil-e-taariff hai aur is ke jawaab men apna likhaa hua ek sher yaha arz kar raha hoon jis ke upar men ghazal bhi likh chukaa hoon, aur is ke upar abhi ek aur ghazal likhne kaa kaam kar raha hoon.

ummid kartaa hoon aap ko pasand aayega



JuZ is ke aur isbaat-e-vafaa kyaa hai
Khudaa se puuchh baithe ham khudaa kyaa hai

Lagaa kar aag kyaa paaya mahoobbat ki
Na sochaa sang dil ke aur jalaa kyaa hai


isbaat-e-vafaa= proof of devotion, vafaa ka saboot
regards
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mera gam - 23rd August 2007, 03:53 PM

dard-e-dil suna baithe
ham tamasha bana baithe.....

dillaggi hii dillaggi mein yaaro
ham dil ko lagga baithe......

ik zara sii roshni ke liye
ham ghar apna jala baithe......

ho gaye gulaam ham unke
do ghadii paas kyaa baithe......

bhool gaye dard-o-alam saare
jo maikadde mein aa baithe......


dosto bhut late haazri lagwa raha hoon apne gam ke saath....umeed hai aapko iska ehsaas hoga......raj........


un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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dard-e-dil suna baithe
ham tamasha bana baithe.....

dillaggi hii dillaggi mein yaaro
ham dil ko lagga baithe......

ik zara sii roshni ke liye
ham ghar apna jala baithe......

ho gaye gulaam ham unke
do ghadii paas kyaa baithe......

bhool gaye dard-o-alam saare
jo maikadde mein aa baithe......


dosto bhut late haazri lagwa raha hoon apne gam ke saath....umeed hai aapko iska ehsaas hoga......raj........

sare tasleeme kham hai jo mizaze yaar mein aaye...

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sorry JAWED.........i have been sooooooooooo busy.......couldnt reply ur mails................anyways talk to u soooooooon ................


bahut khub sher likha aap ne..........ab hum kya jawaab de is lajawaab sher ka..........fir bhi koshish karte hai.............umeed hai aap ko pasand aayega..........


guzarta hai meri har saans se tera naam aaj bhi,
dhalti hai tere intezaar mai meri har shaam aaj bhi,
tujko mujse bichade ek zamana ho gaya,
par hoti hai tere naam se meri pehchan aaj bhi..........

No Problem Lamha ji....jab aap free ho jayengi hum tabhi baat karenge.....
bahut lajawab sher likha hai aapne.....
ab iske aage....

fizaayen rukatii hain raahon par jin se ham guzare
ghaTaayen aaj bhii jhuk kar salaam karatii hain
har ek shab ye sunaa hai falak se kuchh pariyaaN
vafaa kaa chaand hamaare hii naam karatii hain


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25th August 2007, 06:03 PM

CHALATHA DARD BAATNE
PAR THODI KHUSHIYA KOI LE AAYA

DARD BHARA THA DIL-E-DIYE ME
PAR USME PYARKI ROSHNI KOI LE AAYA

UUDASI KA PEHRA THA MERE CHEHRE PE
PAR CHORISE MUSKURAHAT KOI LE AAYA

HUMTO NAFRAT KARTE RAHE DUNIYA KO
FIR BHI US NAFRAT ME PYAR KOI LE AAYA


Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai
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Lamha ji aap ka yeh pura silsilaa padhaa to mehsos hua ki maine sach men kuchh miss kar diyaa jo aap ke is kalaam men hissa nahi liya,anyway aap ke sher kaabil-e-taariff hai aur is ke jawaab men apna likhaa hua ek sher yaha arz kar raha hoon jis ke upar men ghazal bhi likh chukaa hoon, aur is ke upar abhi ek aur ghazal likhne kaa kaam kar raha hoon.

ummid kartaa hoon aap ko pasand aayega
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JuZ is ke aur isbaat-e-vafaa kyaa hai
Khudaa se puuchh baithe ham khudaa kyaa hai

Lagaa kar aag kyaa paaya mahoobbat ki
Na sochaa sang dil ke aur jalaa kyaa hai


isbaat-e-vafaa= proof of devotion, vafaa ka saboot
regards
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hey manu(MANISH),
aap ko ye mehfil pasand aayi..........uske liye mai aap ki shukra-guzaar hoo.........aap ka tahe-dil se swaagat hai hamari is mehfil mai...........aap ke sher hume bahut ache lage...........lajawaab hai.........inka jawaab dene ki ek koshish kar rahi hoo...........
gaur farmaye................


falak ke teer ka kya nishana tha,
idhar mera ghar, udhar uska aashiyana tha,
pahunch rahi thi kinaare pe kashti-e-umeed,
usi waqt is toofan ko bhi yahaan aana tha.................

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dard-e-dil suna baithe
ham tamasha bana baithe.....

dillaggi hii dillaggi mein yaaro
ham dil ko lagga baithe......

ik zara sii roshni ke liye
ham ghar apna jala baithe......
ho gaye gulaam ham unke
do ghadii paas kyaa baithe......

bhool gaye dard-o-alam saare
jo maikadde mein aa baithe......


dosto bhut late haazri lagwa raha hoon apne gam ke saath....umeed hai aapko iska ehsaas hoga......raj........


wah..................RAJ,
aap ke kisi kalaam ki tarif karna yani suraj ko diya dikhana.............humare pass alfaaz nahi aap ki tarif ke liye................bahut khoob............aur kehte hai na ki"DER AAYE,DURUST AAYE" aap chahe der se hi aaye par aaye to sahi...........aap ne is bazm ki shobha badha di............shukriya..............


sham hote hi chirago ko bujha dete hai,
ye dil hi kafi hai teri yaad mai jalne ke liye,
ye teri bhi ankhon ka kasoor tha,
mai tanha gunehgaar to nahi....................

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No Problem Lamha ji....jab aap free ho jayengi hum tabhi baat karenge.....
bahut lajawab sher likha hai aapne.....
ab iske aage....

fizaayen rukatii hain raahon par jin se ham guzare
ghaTaayen aaj bhii jhuk kar salaam karatii hain
har ek shab ye sunaa hai falak se kuchh pariyaaN
vafaa kaa chaand hamaare hii naam karatii hain

Aapka Dost..
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wah JAWED,
aaj aap ke mizaaz kuch alag hai............kya baat hai?........bahut acha laga aap ka ye sher padhkar........
ab aage humse suniye...............


jis sham mai mere lab pe aap ka naam na aaye,
khuda kare ki kabhi aisi sham na aaye,
ae janewafa,ye kabhi mumkin hi nahi ki,
afsana-e-mohabbat likhu aur aap ka naam na aaye.......

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CHALATHA DARD BAATNE
PAR THODI KHUSHIYA KOI LE AAYA

DARD BHARA THA DIL-E-DIYE ME
PAR USME PYARKI ROSHNI KOI LE AAYA

UUDASI KA PEHRA THA MERE CHEHRE PE
PAR CHORISE MUSKURAHAT KOI LE AAYA

HUMTO NAFRAT KARTE RAHE DUNIYA KO
FIR BHI US NAFRAT ME PYAR KOI LE AAYA

kya baat hai NIHAR,
waise aap ki baton se lagta hai ki janaab ko pyar hone laga hai.........hai na?.............par zara sambhal kar karna ye khata................wo kehte hai na "YE ISHQ NAHI AASAAN ITNA TU SAMAJ LE,EK AAG KA DARIYA HAI AUR DUB KE JANA HAI"...........samje barkhurdaar........ anyways mai aap ke sher ke jawaab mai sirf itna hi kahoongi ki.........

jab raat hogi to chand bhi duhaai dega,
khawabon mai tumhe wo chehra dikhai dega,
ye mohabbat hai zara soch ke karna,
ek ansoo bhi gira to sunai dega..........

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waah waah - 1st September 2007, 12:08 AM

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hey manu(MANISH),
aap ko ye mehfil pasand aayi..........uske liye mai aap ki shukra-guzaar hoo.........aap ka tahe-dil se swaagat hai hamari is mehfil mai...........aap ke sher hume bahut ache lage...........lajawaab hai.........inka jawaab dene ki ek koshish kar rahi hoo...........
gaur farmaye................


falak ke teer ka kya nishana tha,
idhar mera ghar, udhar uska aashiyana tha,
pahunch rahi thi kinaare pe kashti-e-umeed,
usi waqt is toofan ko bhi yahaan aana tha.................

waah waaah lamha ji kyaa bat hai aap to badii pahunchhi hui adaakaara lagti hai bahoot hee unchaa sher maaraa hai ab hame jawaab bhi kuchh hat ke dena padegaa chalo aap ke saamne ham ek teenke ke siwaa kuchh nahee, aap to hawaa ka zhonkaa ho hame to udaa le hii jaayegi ,lekin fir bhi koshish karte hai aap ke samane teekane kee

ajee jaate hai kahaaN hamaara jawaab bhi padhate jaaiye jaraa.


Utare hai dil men sidhi tirchhi nazar tumhaaree
Dil aarzoo karega ab to umrabhar tumhaaree

Kahte hai pyaar kis ko? ham kyaa kahenge is ko?
Tum ko pataa hai mera mujh ko khabar tumhaaree



aage aur hai magar aap ke jawaab par depend kartaa hai Yaani aap kaisa jawaab dete hai , us ke hisaab se sher change hogaa is liye yahaa abhi nahee rakh rahaa

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wah JAWED,
aaj aap ke mizaaz kuch alag hai............kya baat hai?........bahut acha laga aap ka ye sher padhkar........
ab aage humse suniye...............


jis sham mai mere lab pe aap ka naam na aaye,
khuda kare ki kabhi aisi sham na aaye,
ae janewafa,ye kabhi mumkin hi nahi ki,
afsana-e-mohabbat likhu aur aap ka naam na aaye.......

Wah wah!!!

Bahut khoob....UFFF.....Yeh Andaaz -e- bayan bhi kuchh alag hi hai......
Ab iske aage ka bayaan kuchh is tarah se humse suniye .....

saaGar se lab lagaa ke bahut Khush hai zindagii
sahan-e-chaman mein aake bahut Khush hai zindagii
aa jaao aur bhii zaraa nazadiik jaan-e-man
tum ko qariib paake bahut Khush hai zindagii.....

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waah waaah lamha ji kyaa bat hai aap to badii pahunchhi hui adaakaara lagti hai bahoot hee unchaa sher maaraa hai ab hame jawaab bhi kuchh hat ke dena padegaa chalo aap ke saamne ham ek teenke ke siwaa kuchh nahee, aap to hawaa ka zhonkaa ho hame to udaa le hii jaayegi ,lekin fir bhi koshish karte hai aap ke samane teekane kee

ajee jaate hai kahaaN hamaara jawaab bhi padhate jaaiye jaraa.


Utare hai dil men sidhi tirchhi nazar tumhaaree
Dil aarzoo karega ab to umrabhar tumhaaree

Kahte hai pyaar kis ko? ham kyaa kahenge is ko?
Tum ko pataa hai mera mujh ko khabar tumhaaree


aage aur hai magar aap ke jawaab par depend kartaa hai Yaani aap kaisa jawaab dete hai , us ke hisaab se sher change hogaa is liye yahaa abhi nahee rakh rahaa

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hey manu,
aap ne to kuch zyada hi tarif kar di hamari................i dont deserve this.........anyways thanx.............aap ka sher bahut acha laga..........is ka jawaab haazir hai.............
gaur farmaye.........



chehre pe ashko ki lakeer si ban gayi ,
jo na chaha tha wo taqdeer si ban gayi,
hum ne to yuhi feri thi ret par ungliya,
gaur se dekha to unki tasveer si ban gayi.................
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Wah wah!!!

Bahut khoob....UFFF.....Yeh Andaaz -e- bayan bhi kuchh alag hi hai......
Ab iske aage ka bayaan kuchh is tarah se humse suniye .....

saaGar se lab lagaa ke bahut Khush hai zindagii
sahan-e-chaman mein aake bahut Khush hai zindagii
aa jaao aur bhii zaraa nazadiik jaan-e-man
tum ko qariib paake bahut Khush hai zindagii.....

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hey JAWED,
its always soooooooooo nice to read ur replys and shayri.....u r truly a gr8 shayar..........
ye raha aap ka jawaab...........


har aahat ehsaas hamara dilayegi,
aur hawa kissa hamara sunayegi,
hum itni muhabbat bhar denge aap ke dil me,
na chahte hue bhi aap ko yaad hamari aayegi........
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hi - 4th September 2007, 07:24 PM

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hey manu,
aap ne to kuch zyada hi tarif kar di hamari................i dont deserve this.........anyways thanx.............aap ka sher bahut acha laga..........is ka jawaab haazir hai.............
gaur farmaye.........



chehre pe ashko ki lakeer si ban gayi ,
jo na chaha tha wo taqdeer si ban gayi,
hum ne to yuhi feri thi ret par ungliya,
gaur se dekha to unki tasveer si ban gayi.................
lamhaa ji aap ke kyaa kehne sone par suhaaga hai aap ka sher magar hmaaraa bhi reply padh li jee ye chun chun ke labzo ko piroyaa hai aap ke liye in Jazbon ki maala men, khud apni hee likhi ek kaavish paish karta hoon,



Teri tasweer meri Nigaaho mai hardam kyun haiN
Aaine to tutate rahte haiN tumhe gham kyuN haiN

Wohi "lamha" wohi manjar wohi yaado ke hujjuM*
Aur kya chahiye? Maayus mere sanam kyuN haiN

Mere na hone se shayad raahat haiN zamaane ko
Shor ye kaisa hangaama-e-maatam kyuN haiN

Har mulaaquaat pe mujhko ye hota hai gumaaN
Faasley furkat ke ye itney beraham kyuN haiN

Dil ko sadalakht* kiya sine ko bhi sad chaak kiya
Ab bhi dilresh* mai dhadkati tu paiham* kyuN haiN

Maine sincha haiN apne ashqo se dil ke gulshan ko
Baag-e-hasti* mai khizaaoN* ka mausam kyuN haiN


Hujjum= crowd
sadalakht= dil ke sau tukre karna/ dil ko cheerna
Dilresh=zakhmi dil
Paiham=continues,constant
Baag-e-hasti= garden of life
KhizaaN=patzad


Ashaa kartaa hoon aap ko pasan aayi hogi
Khudaa kher kare
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lamhaa ji aap ke kyaa kehne sone par suhaaga hai aap ka sher magar hmaaraa bhi reply padh li jee ye chun chun ke labzo ko piroyaa hai aap ke liye in Jazbon ki maala men, khud apni hee likhi ek kaavish paish karta hoon,



Teri tasweer meri Nigaaho mai hardam kyun haiN
Aaine to tutate rahte haiN tumhe gham kyuN haiN

Wohi "lamha" wohi manjar wohi yaado ke hujjuM*
Aur kya chahiye? Maayus mere sanam kyuN haiN

Mere na hone se shayad raahat haiN zamaane ko
Shor ye kaisa hangaama-e-maatam kyuN haiN

Har mulaaquaat pe mujhko ye hota hai gumaaN
Faasley furkat ke ye itney beraham kyuN haiN

Dil ko sadalakht* kiya sine ko bhi sad chaak kiya
Ab bhi dilresh* mai dhadkati tu paiham* kyuN haiN

Maine sincha haiN apne ashqo se dil ke gulshan ko
Baag-e-hasti* mai khizaaoN* ka mausam kyuN haiN


Hujjum= crowd
sadalakht= dil ke sau tukre karna/ dil ko cheerna
Dilresh=zakhmi dil
Paiham=continues,constant
Baag-e-hasti= garden of life
KhizaaN=patzad

Ashaa kartaa hoon aap ko pasan aayi hogi
Khudaa kher kare
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wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow manu,
u r toooooooooooooo good...........kya ghazal likhi hai apne..........padhkar bahut acha laga........ek zamana ho gaya itni khubsurat ghazal padhe hue.......thank u so much 4 sharing this with me............ab itni pyari ghazal ka mai kya jawaab du, par koshish karti hoo........
i hope u'll like it...........


kis ko khabar thi kis ko yakeen tha,aise bhi din aayenge,
jina to mushkil hoga,mar bhi na payenge,
hum jaise barbaad dilo ka jeena kya aur marna kya,
aaj teri mehfil se uthe kal duniya se uth jayenge......


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this one is one of my favourite sher..........i wrote this.........and i love this...........i hope u like this............

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wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow manu,
u r toooooooooooooo good...........kya ghazal likhi hai apne..........padhkar bahut acha laga........ek zamana ho gaya itni khubsurat ghazal padhe hue.......thank u so much 4 sharing this with me............ab itni pyari ghazal ka mai kya jawaab du, par koshish karti hoo........
i hope u'll like it...........


kis ko khabar thi kis ko yakeen tha,aise bhi din aayenge,
jina to mushkil hoga,mar bhi na payenge,
hum jaise barbaad dilo ka jeena kya aur marna kya,
aaj teri mehfil se uthe kal duniya se uth jayenge......


MANU,
this one is one of my favourite sher..........i wrote this.........and i love this...........i hope u like this............


lamha ji aap ne sher bahut achaa likhaa hai dil se dad kabool karen, magar yeh jaan kar mujhe dukh huaa ki aap hamaare jaise aur kahi dosto hote hue bhi marne ki baat karten.Aap se gujaarish hai ki aap marne ki baate na kare, kaap ko abhi bahut hee jenaa hai ,aur khudaa kare aap ko hamaree Umra lag jaaYe, aakhir dost hote kis liye hai................khair choriye in sab baato ko zendagii hosale se jiye hamare duaa aap ke saath hai, hamare sari khushiyaan aap ko mil jaaye yeh haamre mahobbat aur dostee ka nageena hai ise padhiyegaa aur jeevan men utaar deejiyega, jab bhi maayus ho ise padh lijiyega. mai apni hee ghazal aap ko sunaata hoon jo maine kabhi aap ki trha maayusi men likhi thi,jo zindagi ko hosala adaa karti hai.




Khud se jo Mahobbat agar nahin hoti
Zindagii khubsurat is qadar nahin hoti

Mere habib mere hosleN hua karte haiN
Ab koshish koi bhi be-asar nahin hoti

Chain milta nahi kahi bhi "Lamha Lamha"
Hasratre apne bas mai agar nahin hoti

Naa chhupate aap ko ham palko maiN
Noor-e-khuda si yeh nazar nahin hoti

Dard sah hi nahi paati dil ki deewaareN
Teri rafaaqut gar hamsafar nahin hoti

Khun-e-jigar dobo k mashale jalayi haiN
Besabab munnavar rahgujar nahin hoti

Haar kar jitney ka jazba ham rakhte haiN
Har taqdeer maiN roshan jafar nahin hoti

Rahnuma hai teri khusbu in hawao maiN
ManzileN hamse ab bekhabar nahin hoti

Har safar haiN aasan jo gar saath chale
kisi bhi faasleN ki koi sargujar nahi hoti

Is Muskaan se hi sajati hai kalbonazar
Bagair iske boo-e-gul si sahar nahin hoti





aainda se aise marnewali shaayri nhi likho to achha hai
regards
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hmmmmmm....Acha hai log agar aise hi dard bantey toh duniya mein dard naam ki cheez hi nahin rahegi....
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lamha ji aap ne sher bahut achaa likhaa hai dil se dad kabool karen, magar yeh jaan kar mujhe dukh huaa ki aap hamaare jaise aur kahi dosto hote hue bhi marne ki baat karten.Aap se gujaarish hai ki aap marne ki baate na kare, kaap ko abhi bahut hee jenaa hai ,aur khudaa kare aap ko hamaree Umra lag jaaYe, aakhir dost hote kis liye hai................khair choriye in sab baato ko zendagii hosale se jiye hamare duaa aap ke saath hai, hamare sari khushiyaan aap ko mil jaaye yeh haamre mahobbat aur dostee ka nageena hai ise padhiyegaa aur jeevan men utaar deejiyega, jab bhi maayus ho ise padh lijiyega. mai apni hee ghazal aap ko sunaata hoon jo maine kabhi aap ki trha maayusi men likhi thi,jo zindagi ko hosala adaa karti hai.




Khud se jo Mahobbat agar nahin hoti
Zindagii khubsurat is qadar nahin hoti

Mere habib mere hosleN hua karte haiN
Ab koshish koi bhi be-asar nahin hoti

Chain milta nahi kahi bhi "Lamha Lamha"
Hasratre apne bas mai agar nahin hoti

Naa chhupate aap ko ham palko maiN
Noor-e-khuda si yeh nazar nahin hoti

Dard sah hi nahi paati dil ki deewaareN
Teri rafaaqut gar hamsafar nahin hoti

Khun-e-jigar dobo k mashale jalayi haiN
Besabab munnavar rahgujar nahin hoti

Haar kar jitney ka jazba ham rakhte haiN
Har taqdeer maiN roshan jafar nahin hoti

Rahnuma hai teri khusbu in hawao maiN
ManzileN hamse ab bekhabar nahin hoti

Har safar haiN aasan jo gar saath chale
kisi bhi faasleN ki koi sargujar nahi hoti

Is Muskaan se hi sajati hai kalbonazar
Bagair iske boo-e-gul si sahar nahin hoti





aainda se aise marnewali shaayri nhi likho to achha hai
regards
manu

hey MANU,
this 1 is tooooooooo good........fantastic........beautiful feelings..........thank u soooooooo much 4 sharing....
ab aage gaur farmaiye...........


aansoo ko bahut samjaya ki "tanhayi me aaya karo,
mehfil me aakar hamara mazaak na udaya karo",
is baat par aansoo tadap kar bole,
"itne logon me aapko tanha pate hai isliye,
aap ka saath dene hum chale aate hai".....................
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aansoo ko bahut samjaya ki "tanhayi me aaya karo,
mehfil me aakar hamara mazaak na udaya karo",
is baat par aansoo tadap kar bole,
"itne logon me aapko tanha pate hai isliye,
aap ka saath dene hum chale aate hai".....................

Hi everyone.
Manu Ji Lamha Ji aap log bahut achha likh rahe hain. Mujhe abhi tak yahan aane ka mauka nahin mila. Aaj ye post padhi to aa gaya..

Lamha Ji Shuruat is baat se karoonga ki agar aap kisi aur ka sher likhein to please not mine likh dein....
Ab is khoobsurat sher ka jawab deta hoon .....

Tanhai se itni mohabbat karne laga hoon main
Ke mefilon mein bhi ab ashq chipaye nahin jaate
Itna namak ragda hai raqeebon ne inpar
Ke doston ko bhi ab zakhm dikhaye nahin jaate

Lagti hai boli aur kaudiyon mein hota hai nilaam
Wo Fasana jise koi Mohabbat koi junoon kehta hai
Ye pyaar ye yaar ye mohabbat ka jo falsafa hai
Tum jiste kehte ho Ishq use "Ehsaas" Khoon kehta hai.
Bas ek ehsaan kar do mujhpar do duayein mujhe maut ki
Ke Tum jise kehte ho majaar use "Ehsaas" Sukoon kehta hai...
Tum jise kehte ho Maut use "Ehsaas" Sukoon kehta hai...


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Hi everyone.
Manu Ji Lamha Ji aap log bahut achha likh rahe hain. Mujhe abhi tak yahan aane ka mauka nahin mila. Aaj ye post padhi to aa gaya..

Lamha Ji Shuruat is baat se karoonga ki agar aap kisi aur ka sher likhein to please not mine likh dein....
Ab is khoobsurat sher ka jawab deta hoon .....

Tanhai se itni mohabbat karne laga hoon main
Ke mefilon mein bhi ab ashq chipaye nahin jaate
Itna namak ragda hai raqeebon ne inpar
Ke doston ko bhi ab zakhm dikhaye nahin jaate

Lagti hai boli aur kaudiyon mein hota hai nilaam
Wo Fasana jise koi Mohabbat koi junoon kehta hai
Ye pyaar ye yaar ye mohabbat ka jo falsafa hai
Tum jiste kehte ho Ishq use "Ehsaas" Khoon kehta hai.
Bas ek ehsaan kar do mujhpar do duayein mujhe maut ki
Ke Tum jise kehte ho majaar use "Ehsaas" Sukoon kehta hai...
Tum jise kehte ho Maut use "Ehsaas" Sukoon kehta hai...


kya baat hai AMIT,
bahut khub......zindagi ki sabse badi sachhai samne laakar rakh di aapne.......bahut hi umda hai aapki shayri aur aap ke ehsaas......is bazm mai aakar apne ehsaas bantne ka bahut bahut shukriya..........umeed karti ho ki aap uhi aate rahenge aur hume apne sundar ehsaas se wakif karate rahenge.........thanx 4 sharing........

aap ka jawaab haazir hai....gaur farmaiye........


dard hai,khushi hai ya hai dil ki pukaar,
ye ishq bada zaalim hai, na karna kisi se pyar,
zindagi se to ab koi shikva nahi koi gila nahi,
fir bhi tere bina kyo meri ye zindagi hi nahi,
raat to rukti nahi kabhi,savera ab hone ko hai,
aa bhi ja ek baar,ab saanse bhi umeed khone ko hai,
bas teri hi justjoo ki humne,aur hamari khata kya hai?
teri yaado se saji hai humari mehfil,varna "LAMHA" ab zindagi me rakha hi kya hai................


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hey MANU,
this 1 is tooooooooo good........fantastic........beautiful feelings..........thank u soooooooo much 4 sharing....
ab aage gaur farmaiye...........


aansoo ko bahut samjaya ki "tanhayi me aaya karo,
mehfil me aakar hamara mazaak na udaya karo",
is baat par aansoo tadap kar bole,
"itne logon me aapko tanha pate hai isliye,
aap ka saath dene hum chale aate hai".....................

yeh rahaa aap kii shayrii ka jawaab lamha ji, ummid kartaa hoon aap ko pasand aayega.



Jab bhi mujhe tanha paate hai gujarate "lamhe"
Teri yaad sii meri raaho men bichha jaate hai
Tere rukhsaar ka men pitaa hoon jaam aankho se
Tere khayaal se hee kadam ladkhada jaate hai
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Jab bhi mujhe tanha paate hai gujarate "lamhe"
Teri yaad sii meri raaho men bichha jaate hai
Tere rukhsaar ka men pitaa hoon jaam aankho se
Tere khayaal se hee kadam ladkhada jaate hai



bahut khub....MANU,
ye yadon ki baat to kabhi na khatam hone wala silsila hai........to mai bhi is silsile ko jari rakhati hoo........
gaur farmaye.........


jab jab tumhe bhulaya , tum aur yaad aaye,
jate nahi hai dil se ab tak tumhare saaye,
tum se bichadne ka jab bhi khayal aaya,
tanhai to kya ,"LAMHA" hum mehfil me bhi ghabraye............

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hum jalte he kisi ki bato se
to woh jalate he bar bar
hum marte he kisi pe tahe dil se
to woh marte he bar bar
hum jite he jinki yaado me tarbator ho kar
woh hume tadpate he bar bar


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hum jalte he kisi ki bato se
to woh jalate he bar bar
hum marte he kisi pe tahe dil se
to woh marte he bar bar
hum jite he jinki yaado me tarbator ho kar
woh hume tadpate he bar bar

hey NIHAR,
ye kya baat hui.......mare aap ke dushman........ye jalna ,tadapna aur marna aap ke liye nahi hai.........aap ke liye hamara ye jawaab hai..........
gaur farmaye............


khuda ki ibaadat me jab bhi haath uthaya yehi dua maangi,
ki har khushi "NIHAR" tumhe mil jaye ,
meri zindagi se tum jiyo,
tumhari maut se hum mar jaye..................




"LAMHA"

mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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hey NIHAR,
ye kya baat hui.......mare aap ke dushman........ye jalna ,tadapna aur marna aap ke liye nahi hai.........aap ke liye hamara ye jawaab hai..........
gaur farmaye............


khuda ki ibaadat me jab bhi haath uthaya yehi dua maangi,
ki har khushi "NIHAR" tumhe mil jaye ,
meri zindagi se tum jiyo,
tumhari maut se hum mar jaye..................


yeh kyaa bat huii Phir marne ki baat, ok as u wish,agar sucide karne kee hiimat na ho to mujhe bolna mai kuchh help kar doongaa
here is my reply to both posts on me and on nihaar.

Door reh kar bhi tum paas rahti ho
is dil men ban kar ahsaas rehti ho
Har duaao men hai naam tumaaraa
Ban kar jeene ki tum aas rehti ho


Mujhko vo lajjat* millee ehsaas mushkill ho gaya
Rehte-Rehte dil men tera dard bhi dil ho gaya
Ibtidaa* vo thi ki tha jeena mahobbat men muhaal*
intihaa ye hai ki ab marna bhi mushkill ho gaya


lajjat*= joy
Ibtidaa*=initiation
muhaal*= hard
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yeh kyaa bat huii Phir marne ki baat, ok as u wish,agar sucide karne kee hiimat na ho to mujhe bolna mai kuchh help kar doongaa
here is my reply to both posts on me and on nihaar.

Door reh kar bhi tum paas rahti ho
is dil men ban kar ahsaas rehti ho
Har duaao men hai naam tumaaraa
Ban kar jeene ki tum aas rehti ho

Mujhko vo lajjat* millee ehsaas mushkill ho gaya
Rehte-Rehte dil men tera dard bhi dil ho gaya
Ibtidaa* vo thi ki tha jeena mahobbat men muhaal*
intihaa ye hai ki ab marna bhi mushkill ho gaya

lajjat*= joy
Ibtidaa*=initiation
muhaal*= hard
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THIK HE CHALO SUCIDE KARNE KE LIYE HUM DONO PREMI SIRF AAPKO HI YAAD KARENGE LEKIN YEH TO BATAIYE KI AAP KO SUCIDE KARWANE KA KITNA EXP HE
WAR NA PANACHALA KI USME BHI AAPNE GALTI KARDI TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
HUM TO ZINDA HI REH JAENGE NA................................................ .

LO AAPKE LIYE MERA LIKHA HUWA SHER AARZ HE ZARA GOUR FARMAIYEGA JANAB


DOST HO AAP JAISA

TO AAUR KYA CHAHIYE

DOST HI NIBHAE DUSMANI

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hey NIHAR,
ye kya baat hui.......mare aap ke dushman........ye jalna ,tadapna aur marna aap ke liye nahi hai.........aap ke liye hamara ye jawaab hai..........
gaur farmaye............


khuda ki ibaadat me jab bhi haath uthaya yehi dua maangi,
ki har khushi "NIHAR" tumhe mil jaye ,
meri zindagi se tum jiyo,
tumhari maut se hum mar jaye..................








AARE YAAR AAP KA JAWAB ZARA GOURSE
PADHIYEGA MADAMJI



DUNIYA ME HUME PEHCHANTI SHAAAN HO TUM

NEYNO ME BASE HUMARE AARMAN HO TUM

SWAPN LOK ME REHNE WALI SWAPNESHWARI HO TUM

DUNIYA KE LIYE INSAAAN PAR MERI PARI HO TUM

AASMAN ME TAHELTE HE KAYI MUJ JAISE BAADAL

PAR ISBADAL PAR KADAKNE WALI BIJLI HO TUM

SHARDIO ME BACHANE WALI GARMI HO TUM

BARISH KI GIRTI PEHLI BOOND KA AAHSAS HO TUM

SAGAR SE BHI GEHRI PYAR KI GEHRAI HO TUM

NIHAR KE JISM SE BHI KIMTI NIHAR KI JAAN HO TUM


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zindagi me muskurate he hum har pal
is muskurahat ke piche rushwai hai

mehfil saza kar baithte he dil - e - dosto ki sada
kyoki humne dil - e- kabar me dafnai tanhai hai


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8th September 2007, 03:08 PM

AAPNE KYA PUKARA
LO HUM FIR CHALE AAYE HE
NASAMAJ NADAN WALE
KAI SHER LE AAYE HE
TUTE HUWE DIL KO JODNE
DIL-E DARD DAWA SATH LAYE HE
AAZAD KARDO DOSTO DARD KO
DARD KE HAMRAZ NIHAR AAYE HE


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KHUSBU MANGI THI KHUDASE
WOH HUME PHOOL THAMA GAYE
BUS THODISI KHUSHI MANGI THI DUA ME
TO LAAP KA PYAR DE KAR
NIHAR KO KHUSNASHIB BANA GAYE


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KYA PATA AAJ HUME KYA HUWA HE
BUS KUCH NA KUCH SOCHE JA RAHE HE
RUK RUK KAR CHAL RAHI HE KALAM NIHAR KI
FIR BHI HUM KUCH NA KUCH LIKHE JA RAHE HE


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LIKHTE HE KAI SHAYRI
DARD-E-DIL KI DAWA BANAKAR
PAR USE PADHTA HE KOI KOI

LIKHE HE KAI NAGAME KISIKE
HUSN-E-TARIF BANAKAR
PAR USE SAWARTA HE KOI KOI

MILTE HE KAI AACHE DOST ZINDAGI ME
ZINDAGI-E-HUMSAFAR BANKAR
PAR USE DEKHTA HE KOI KOI

PYAR KA DAWA KAI KARTE HE
MOHABBAT-E-AASHIQ BANKAR
PAR USE NIBHATA HE KOI KOI


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yeh kyaa bat huii Phir marne ki baat, ok as u wish,agar sucide karne kee hiimat na ho to mujhe bolna mai kuchh help kar doongaa
here is my reply to both posts on me and on nihaar.

Door reh kar bhi tum paas rahti ho
is dil men ban kar ahsaas rehti ho
Har duaao men hai naam tumaaraa
Ban kar jeene ki tum aas rehti ho

Mujhko vo lajjat* millee ehsaas mushkill ho gaya
Rehte-Rehte dil men tera dard bhi dil ho gaya
Ibtidaa* vo thi ki tha jeena mahobbat men muhaal*
intihaa ye hai ki ab marna bhi mushkill ho gaya

lajjat*= joy
Ibtidaa*=initiation
muhaal*= hard
regards
manu


bahut khub MANU,
aap ka jawaab.............


koi dikhake roye,koi chupake roye,
hume rulane wale rulake roye,
par mazaa to tab hai dost,
jab kaatil bhi janaza uthake roye...............



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mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
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AARE YAAR AAP KA JAWAB ZARA GOURSE
PADHIYEGA MADAMJI



DUNIYA ME HUME PEHCHANTI SHAAAN HO TUM

NEYNO ME BASE HUMARE AARMAN HO TUM

SWAPN LOK ME REHNE WALI SWAPNESHWARI HO TUM

DUNIYA KE LIYE INSAAAN PAR MERI PARI HO TUM

AASMAN ME TAHELTE HE KAYI MUJ JAISE BAADAL

PAR ISBADAL PAR KADAKNE WALI BIJLI HO TUM

SHARDIO ME BACHANE WALI GARMI HO TUM

BARISH KI GIRTI PEHLI BOOND KA AAHSAS HO TUM

SAGAR SE BHI GEHRI PYAR KI GEHRAI HO TUM

NIHAR KE JISM SE BHI KIMTI NIHAR KI JAAN HO TUM


wahhhhhhhhhhh nihar,
bahut pyaare ehsaas hai.........bahut pasand aayi aap ki ye ghazal.............


koi aankho hi aankho me baat kar leta hai,
koi aankho hi aankho me mulakaat kar leta hai,
mushkil to tab hota hai jawaab dena,
jab koi khamosh rehkar bhi sawaal kar deta hai.......



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mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
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zindagi me muskurate he hum har pal
is muskurahat ke piche rushwai hai
mehfil saza kar baithte he dil - e - dosto ki sada
kyoki humne dil - e- kabar me dafnai tanhai hai


NIHAR.........kya kahe hum aap se..............aap ki baat ka jawaab haazir hai...........


dil jeet le wo jigar hum bhi rakhte hai,
katl kar de wo nazar hum bhi rakhte hai,
waada kiya hai kisi se sada muskurane ka,
varna in aankho me samandar hum bhi rakhte hai......



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AAPNE KYA PUKARA
LO HUM FIR CHALE AAYE HE
NASAMAJ NADAN WALE
KAI SHER LE AAYE HE
TUTE HUWE DIL KO JODNE
DIL-E DARD DAWA SATH LAYE HE
AAZAD KARDO DOSTO DARD KO
DARD KE HAMRAZ NIHAR AAYE HE


hey NIHAR,
gr8 job...........aap ka jawaab.....


khuda se thoda rehem khareed lete,
aap ke zakhmo ka marham khareed lete,
agar kahi bikti khushiya humari,
to sari bech kar aap ka har ghum khareed lete........



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KHUSBU MANGI THI KHUDASE
WOH HUME PHOOL THAMA GAYE
BUS THODISI KHUSHI MANGI THI DUA ME
TO LAAP KA PYAR DE KAR
NIHAR KO KHUSNASHIB BANA GAYE


dua karte hai khuda se hum sar jukaye,
ae dost, tu apni manzil ko paaye,
agar kabhi teri rahon me andhera aaye,
roshni ke liye khuda hum ko jalaye..........


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KYA PATA AAJ HUME KYA HUWA HE
BUS KUCH NA KUCH SOCHE JA RAHE HE
RUK RUK KAR CHAL RAHI HE KALAM NIHAR KI
FIR BHI HUM KUCH NA KUCH LIKHE JA RAHE HE


kya baat hai NIHAR,
aisa kya ho gaya hai aapko?..........ki aap itni soch me dub gaye hai.........i hope everything is fine ...................


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LIKHTE HE KAI SHAYRI
DARD-E-DIL KI DAWA BANAKAR
PAR USE PADHTA HE KOI KOI

LIKHE HE KAI NAGAME KISIKE
HUSN-E-TARIF BANAKAR
PAR USE SAWARTA HE KOI KOI

MILTE HE KAI AACHE DOST ZINDAGI ME
ZINDAGI-E-HUMSAFAR BANKAR
PAR USE DEKHTA HE KOI KOI

PYAR KA DAWA KAI KARTE HE
MOHABBAT-E-AASHIQ BANKAR
PAR USE NIBHATA HE KOI KOI
nihaar aap ne bahut hee khoob likha hai kabil-e-tarif hai aap ka kalaam
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