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WAH WAH WAH MERE DOST KYA BAAT KAHI HE AAPNE

THIK HE CHALO SUCIDE KARNE KE LIYE HUM DONO PREMI SIRF AAPKO HI YAAD KARENGE LEKIN YEH TO BATAIYE KI AAP KO SUCIDE KARWANE KA KITNA EXP HE
WAR NA PANACHALA KI USME BHI AAPNE GALTI KARDI TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
HUM TO ZINDA HI REH JAENGE NA................................................ .

LO AAPKE LIYE MERA LIKHA HUWA SHER AARZ HE ZARA GOUR FARMAIYEGA JANAB


DOST HO AAP JAISA

TO AAUR KYA CHAHIYE

DOST HI NIBHAE DUSMANI

TO DUSMAN KISI CHAHIYE.

janaab mujhe lagta hai ap ko koi ghalatfaimii hui hai

aap ne likha hai "ham dono" premi, plz dhukaa mat khaaiyega yeh sirf game hai,ok ise game hee rehne deeji ye to jyada achaa hai,

aur yeh meri ghazal intelligent and mature friendlamha ke liye



"Kabhi yoon bhi aa meri aankh mein k meri nazar ko Khabar na ho
Mujhe aik "lamha" navaz de magar uske baad sehar na ho

Woh bara rahim-o-karim hai mujhe ye sifat bhi ataa kare
Tujhe bhoolne ki dua karoon to dua mein meri asar na ho

Mere bazuon men thaki thaki , abhi mahav-e-Khvab hai "lamha"
Na uThe sitaron ki palaki, abhi ahaTon ka guzar na ho

Kabhi dhoop de, kabhi badaliyan, dil-o-jaN se donon qubool hain
Agar us "lamhe" men na qaid kar jahan zindagi ka Guzar na ho

Kabhi din ki dhoop men jhum ke kabhi shab ke phool ko chum ke
Yoon hi "lamha" sath chalen sada kabhi Khatm apana safar na ho

Mere paas mere habib aa , zara aur dil ke qareeb aa
Tujhe dharkane bana lu main k bichharne ka kabhi Dar na ho

Hai chasm-e-baddur tu, apni aankho mai saja lu tujhe,
Khwaabo par mere lamha teri yaado ka Qahar na ho

Aa Ruh mai bas ja meri, ,apne aksh mai lamhabharchhupa lu tujhe
Fir chahe gujroo teri rahgujar se to lamha tanha meri dagar na ho

Tere aansu ka samandar pi gaya , yaado ke sahaare ji gaya,
Ab is dil ki muhobbat maar sake aisa koi zahar na ho

Jo baat maine kahi thi kabhi,ke tu is dil mai rahi thi kabhi.
Vo dil-e-jazbaat ka sanam gam mujhe umrabhar na ho.


Lamha ji aap jaroor bataye ap ko yeh ghazal kaisee lagi
regards
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janaab mujhe lagta hai ap ko koi ghalatfaimii hui hai

aap ne likha hai "ham dono" premi, plz dhukaa mat khaaiyega yeh sirf game hai,ok ise game hee rehne deeji ye to jyada achaa hai,

aur yeh meri ghazal intelligent and mature friendlamha ke liye



"Kabhi yoon bhi aa meri aankh mein k meri nazar ko Khabar na ho
Mujhe aik "lamha" navaz de magar uske baad sehar na ho

Woh bara rahim-o-karim hai mujhe ye sifat bhi ataa kare
Tujhe bhoolne ki dua karoon to dua mein meri asar na ho

Mere bazuon men thaki thaki , abhi mahav-e-Khvab hai "lamha"
Na uThe sitaron ki palaki, abhi ahaTon ka guzar na ho

Kabhi dhoop de, kabhi badaliyan, dil-o-jaN se donon qubool hain
Agar us "lamhe" men na qaid kar jahan zindagi ka Guzar na ho

Kabhi din ki dhoop men jhum ke kabhi shab ke phool ko chum ke
Yoon hi "lamha" sath chalen sada kabhi Khatm apana safar na ho

Mere paas mere habib aa , zara aur dil ke qareeb aa
Tujhe dharkane bana lu main k bichharne ka kabhi Dar na ho

Hai chasm-e-baddur tu, apni aankho mai saja lu tujhe,
Khwaabo par mere lamha teri yaado ka Qahar na ho

Aa Ruh mai bas ja meri, ,apne aksh mai lamhabharchhupa lu tujhe
Fir chahe gujroo teri rahgujar se to lamha tanha meri dagar na ho

Tere aansu ka samandar pi gaya , yaado ke sahaare ji gaya,
Ab is dil ki muhobbat maar sake aisa koi zahar na ho

Jo baat maine kahi thi kabhi,ke tu is dil mai rahi thi kabhi.
Vo dil-e-jazbaat ka sanam gam mujhe umrabhar na ho.


Lamha ji aap jaroor bataye ap ko yeh ghazal kaisee lagi
regards
manu


BAHUT KHUB.....MANU,
i hope ab ye post pe koi galat fehmi na ho..........plz har koi is baat ko thik se samaj le ki ye wakehi ek game hai aur use game hi rehne de..........kisi ka bhi naam na uchale,taki koi bina wajah badnaam na ho jaye.............i hope mere sabhi doston ko ye baat samaj aagayi hogi...............thanx...............

MANU aap ne bahut hi pyaari ghazal pesh ki hai..........achi lagi...............shayad is ghazal ka jawaab dene ke liye mai itni expert nahi hoo.............



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10th September 2007, 11:05 AM

NAJANE KAHA KAHA HUMARI NAZAR KO
TUMHARI TALASH REHTI HE

NAJANE KAHA KAHA HUMARI NAZAR KO
TUMHARI TALASH REHTI HE

JAHA BHI PAHUCHE HUMARI NAZAR BUS
WAHI SIRF TUMHE DEKHNE KI AAS REHTI HE


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10th September 2007, 12:09 PM

HAR KISIKO AAPNE DIL E DASTA SUNAYA NAHI KARTE

AAPNE NAYNO KE ASHQ HAR KISI KE SAMNE GIRAYA NAHI KATE

AAPNE ZAKHMO KO JO DIL ME DAFAN KIYA KARTE HAI

YAARO WOH KABHI KISIK0 DARD PAHOCHAYA NAHI KARTE

MILTI HAI MANZIL UNHIKO JINKO MANJIL SE CHAH HO

HARKISIKO AAPNI MANJIL KA HUMSAFAR BANAYA NAHI KARTE


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AARE YARO HUM KAISE KAHE KI HUM KAISE JIYE JA RAHE HE

GHAM KE SAMUNDAR KO HAR EK GHUT ME PIYE JA RAHE HE

TARAS GAYE HUM MOHABBAT KI HAREK BOOND KE LIYE

FIR BHI DUNIYA ME PYAR KO LUTAE JA RAHE HE

KAMBAKHAT ZINDAGI DETI NAHI NIHAR KO SHAAN SE MARNE

ISILIYE UNKI YOODO KE SAHARE ZINDAGI JIYE JARAHE HE


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janaab mujhe lagta hai ap ko koi ghalatfaimii hui hai

aap ne likha hai "ham dono" premi, plz dhukaa mat khaaiyega yeh sirf game hai,ok ise game hee rehne deeji ye to jyada achaa hai,

aur yeh meri ghazal intelligent and mature friendlamha ke liye



"Kabhi yoon bhi aa meri aankh mein k meri nazar ko Khabar na ho
Mujhe aik "lamha" navaz de magar uske baad sehar na ho

Woh bara rahim-o-karim hai mujhe ye sifat bhi ataa kare
Tujhe bhoolne ki dua karoon to dua mein meri asar na ho

Mere bazuon men thaki thaki , abhi mahav-e-Khvab hai "lamha"
Na uThe sitaron ki palaki, abhi ahaTon ka guzar na ho

Kabhi dhoop de, kabhi badaliyan, dil-o-jaN se donon qubool hain
Agar us "lamhe" men na qaid kar jahan zindagi ka Guzar na ho

Kabhi din ki dhoop men jhum ke kabhi shab ke phool ko chum ke
Yoon hi "lamha" sath chalen sada kabhi Khatm apana safar na ho

Mere paas mere habib aa , zara aur dil ke qareeb aa
Tujhe dharkane bana lu main k bichharne ka kabhi Dar na ho

Hai chasm-e-baddur tu, apni aankho mai saja lu tujhe,
Khwaabo par mere lamha teri yaado ka Qahar na ho

Aa Ruh mai bas ja meri, ,apne aksh mai lamhabharchhupa lu tujhe
Fir chahe gujroo teri rahgujar se to lamha tanha meri dagar na ho

Tere aansu ka samandar pi gaya , yaado ke sahaare ji gaya,
Ab is dil ki muhobbat maar sake aisa koi zahar na ho

Jo baat maine kahi thi kabhi,ke tu is dil mai rahi thi kabhi.
Vo dil-e-jazbaat ka sanam gam mujhe umrabhar na ho.


Lamha ji aap jaroor bataye ap ko yeh ghazal kaisee lagi
regards
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hey MANU,
aap ki is ghazal ka jawaab dene ki koshish kar rahi hoo.......umeed hai aap ko pasand aayegi.........actually aur koi jawaab suj nahi raha tha to i thought ye jawaab thik rahega.............gaur farmaye.............


har ek baat pe kehte ho ki "tu mere liye khuda hai",
tum hi batao ki ye andaaz-e-guftgu kya hai,
ragoon me daudte rehne ke hum nahi qayal,
jab aankh se hi na tapka to fir wo lahoo kya hai............


"LAMHA"

mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
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NAJANE KAHA KAHA HUMARI NAZAR KO
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JAHA BHI PAHUCHE HUMARI NAZAR BUS
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HAR KISIKO AAPNE DIL E DASTA SUNAYA NAHI KARTE

AAPNE NAYNO KE ASHQ HAR KISI KE SAMNE GIRAYA NAHI KATE

AAPNE ZAKHMO KO JO DIL ME DAFAN KIYA KARTE HAI

YAARO WOH KABHI KISIK0 DARD PAHOCHAYA NAHI KARTE

MILTI HAI MANZIL UNHIKO JINKO MANJIL SE CHAH HO

HARKISIKO AAPNI MANJIL KA HUMSAFAR BANAYA NAHI KARTE
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AARE YARO HUM KAISE KAHE KI HUM KAISE JIYE JA RAHE HE

GHAM KE SAMUNDAR KO HAR EK GHUT ME PIYE JA RAHE HE

TARAS GAYE HUM MOHABBAT KI HAREK BOOND KE LIYE

FIR BHI DUNIYA ME PYAR KO LUTAE JA RAHE HE

KAMBAKHAT ZINDAGI DETI NAHI NIHAR KO SHAAN SE MARNE

ISILIYE UNKI YOODO KE SAHARE ZINDAGI JIYE JARAHE HE





hey NIHAR,
aap ki har shayri kabeel-e-tarif hoti hai........aap ki har baat ka sirf ek jawaab dena chahungi.........hope u'll like it.....


aa jaye kisi din tu ,aisa bhi nahi lagta,
lekin wo tera waada jhootha bhi nahi lagta,

milta hai sukoon dil ko us yaar ke kooche mein,
har roz waha jana magar acha bhi nahi lagta,

dekha hai tujhe jabse bechain bahut hai dil,
kehne ko tujse koi rishta bhi nahi lagta,

bare me uske soche bhi to kya soche,
wo gair nahi lekin apna bhi nahi lagta.......................( NOT MINE )


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mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
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bahut khub....MANU,
ye yadon ki baat to kabhi na khatam hone wala silsila hai........to mai bhi is silsile ko jari rakhati hoo........
gaur farmaye.........


jab jab tumhe bhulaya , tum aur yaad aaye,
jate nahi hai dil se ab tak tumhare saaye,
tum se bichadne ka jab bhi khayal aaya,
tanhai to kya ,"LAMHA" hum mehfil me bhi ghabraye............

Bazm-e-anjuman se nazar ghoom ke laut aayi hai
Phir vahi men hoon vahii aalam-e-tanhaayi hai
Lamha-lamha bin tere zindagi sazaa kyaa hai
Jaise gulshan men Phir khizaaN sii chaayi hai



khizaaN=patzad
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hey MANU,
aap ki is ghazal ka jawaab dene ki koshish kar rahi hoo.......umeed hai aap ko pasand aayegi.........actually aur koi jawaab suj nahi raha tha to i thought ye jawaab thik rahega.............gaur farmaye.............


har ek baat pe kehte ho ki "tu mere liye khuda hai",
tum hi batao ki ye andaaz-e-guftgu kya hai,
ragoon me daudte rehne ke hum nahi qayal,
jab aankh se hi na tapka to fir wo lahoo kya hai............

Lo aaj ham Un ko hee phir apna khudaa kehte hai
Un ki parashtish men doob jaane ko vafaa kehte hai

jalaaye dil meraa voh bhi to gilaa koi nahee hame
ham to is gham ko bhi jeene ki vajaah kehte hai

jab bhi milo bas ek baar dost bas mushkuraa dena
tere tabbasum ko ham gulshan ki fizaaN kehte hai


tabbasum= smiles
fizaaN = season of flowers,gives fragrense and blooms
rehards
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bahut khub MANU,
aap ka jawaab.............


koi dikhake roye,koi chupake roye,
hume rulane wale rulake roye,
par mazaa to tab hai dost,
jab kaatil bhi janaza uthake roye...............

lo aap ne rone ki baat ki to meraa yeh jawaab hai aap ke sher par
ghaur farmaayiyega , aur pasand aaye to dil men basaaiyega.

khudaa kare ki nigaah teri na kabhi ashkbaar* ho
Raaho men khushiyaan teri is kadar beshumar ho
aaye na gham ke saaye dost kabhi saamne tere
Agar aaye to dil meraa hee beech deewaar Ho


ashkbaar= stream of tears (aansoo ka zarna)

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Bazm-e-anjuman se nazar ghoom ke laut aayi hai
Phir vahi men hoon vahii aalam-e-tanhaayi hai
Lamha-lamha bin tere zindagi sazaa kyaa hai
Jaise gulshan men Phir khizaaN sii chaayi hai


khizaaN=patzad
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bahut khub MANU,
aap ka jawaab haazir hai.............

ek lamhe me unhone hamari zindagi savaar di,
ek lamhe me unhone hamari zindagi ujaad di,
kasoor unka nahi , hamara tha,
jo un do lamho me humne apni zindagi guzaar di.........


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Lo aaj ham Un ko hee phir apna khudaa kehte hai
Un ki parashtish men doob jaane ko vafaa kehte hai

jalaaye dil meraa voh bhi to gilaa koi nahee hame
ham to is gham ko bhi jeene ki vajaah kehte hai

jab bhi milo bas ek baar dost bas mushkuraa dena
tere tabbasum ko ham gulshan ki fizaaN kehte hai


tabbasum= smiles
fizaaN = season of flowers,gives fragrense and blooms
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HEY MANU,
bahut ache ehsaas hai...........aap ka jawaab.......gaur farmaye...........


sapno se dil lagane ki aadat nahi rahi,
har waqt muskurane ki aadat nahi rahi,
ye soch kar ki koi manane nahi aayega,
ab hume ruth jane ki aadat nahi rahi...............


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lo aap ne rone ki baat ki to meraa yeh jawaab hai aap ke sher par
ghaur farmaayiyega , aur pasand aaye to dil men basaaiyega.

khudaa kare ki nigaah teri na kabhi ashkbaar* ho
Raaho men khushiyaan teri is kadar beshumar ho
aaye na gham ke saaye dost kabhi saamne tere
Agar aaye to dil meraa hee beech deewaar Ho

ashkbaar= stream of tears (aansoo ka zarna)

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hey MANU,
aap ki dua o ka shukriya.........bahut acha sher hai ......thanx............


manzile bhi uski thi,raasta bhi uska tha,
ek mein hi akeli thi,kaafila bhi uska tha,
sath sath chalne ki soch bhi uski thi,
fir raasta badalne ka faisla bhi uska tha,
aaj kyo akeli hai tu LAMHA,ye dil sawaal karta hai,
log to uske the,kya KHUDA bhi uska tha?...........




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aap ki dua o ka shukriya.........bahut acha sher hai ......thanx............


manzile bhi uski thi,raasta bhi uska tha,
ek mein hi akeli thi,kaafila bhi uska tha,
sath sath chalne ki soch bhi uski thi,
fir raasta badalne ka faisla bhi uska tha,
aaj kyo akeli hai tu LAMHA,ye dil sawaal karta hai,
log to uske the,kya KHUDA bhi uska tha?...........





LO MADAM JI AAPKA REPLY
JARA GOUR FARMAIYE GA


AARE YAARO

HUME TO NA MAZIL KA PATA THA
NA RASTE KA ANDAZA THA
CHALE THE UN RASTOON PER MUSAFIR BANKAR
HUMNE TO UNKO AAPNA HUMSAFAR BANAYA THA
KHUDA GAWAH HE NA RASTA HUMNE DIL SE BADLA THA
WOH TO HALAT NE HUKUM FARMAYA THA
AAJ HUM AAKELE HE AUR UNKO BHI
HUMNE AAKELA PAYA THA
JO JO SAWAL NIHAR PUCHNA CHAHTA THA TUJSE E KHUDA
AAJ WOHI SAWAL HUMSE PEHLE UNKI ZUBAN PAR AAYA THA.




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LO MADAM JI AAPKA REPLY
JARA GOUR FARMAIYE GA


AARE YAARO

HUME TO NA MAZIL KA PATA THA
NA RASTE KA ANDAZA THA
CHALE THE UN RASTOON PER MUSAFIR BANKAR
HUMNE TO UNKO AAPNA HUMSAFAR BANAYA THA
KHUDA GAWAH HE NA RASTA HUMNE DIL SE BADLA THA
WOH TO HALAT NE HUKUM FARMAYA THA
AAJ HUM AAKELE HE AUR UNKO BHI
HUMNE AAKELA PAYA THA
JO JO SAWAL NIHAR PUCHNA CHAHTA THA TUJSE E KHUDA
AAJ WOHI SAWAL HUMSE PEHLE UNKI ZUBAN PAR AAYA THA.

Achha likhte hain Nihar Ji aap. Padhkar apna ek ehsaas yaad aa gaya...

Jo kehta hai bewafa dagabaaz hota hai
Wo dekhe aakar meri mehbooba ko zara,
Itni shiddat se nibhayi usne bewafaii ke
Isi ada se Uski humein pyar ho gaya...



Mohabbat ka humpar kya khoob Suroor chhaya
Khali Jaam bhi lagta ek bhara Paimana hai
Tum the to Dhool bhi achhi lagti thi apne Aashiyane ki
Ab na tum ho, Na Aashiyana hai.....


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Achha likhte hain Nihar Ji aap. Padhkar apna ek ehsaas yaad aa gaya...

Jo kehta hai bewafa dagabaaz hota hai
Wo dekhe aakar meri mehbooba ko zara,
Itni shiddat se nibhayi usne bewafaii ke
Isi ada se Uski humein pyar ho gaya...



Mohabbat ka humpar kya khoob Suroor chhaya
Khali Jaam bhi lagta ek bhara Paimana hai
Tum the to Dhool bhi achhi lagti thi apne Aashiyane ki
Ab na tum ho, Na Aashiyana hai.....


thanx janab aapne humko padha isliye aap ka tahe dil se shukriya and aapko humari shayri pasand aai woh toh aapna baddapan he
warna humjaise shayar ki kadar kon karta he janab
khair chodiye in baato ko


aapka jawab hazir he



UN BEWAFA NE BHI KYA BEWAFAI NIBHAI

AAPNA PAN CHOD KAR DUSMANI NIBHAI

UNKI BEWAFAI ME BHI HUM WAFA DHUNDTE REHGAYE

NAFRAT KI UNHONE HUMESE DIL O JAAN SE

FIRBHI HUM NIHAR UNKO PYAR KARTE REHGAYE


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thanx janab aapne humko padha isliye aap ka tahe dil se shukriya and aapko humari shayri pasand aai woh toh aapna baddapan he
warna humjaise shayar ki kadar kon karta he janab
khair chodiye in baato ko
Aisa na kahein dost. Is duniya mein hum hain iska matlab yahi hai ki humari bhi kuch ehmiyat, koi pehchaan hai. Ye baat sach hai ki sabko humari kadar nahin hoti par agar sochein to humein bhi to sabke hone na hone se fsarak nahin padta. Zaroorat bas itni hai ki jise hum chahein wo bhi humari izzart kare. Humein mohabbat kare...

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UN BEWAFA NE BHI KYA BEWAFAI NIBHAI

AAPNA PAN CHOD KAR DUSMANI NIBHAI

UNKI BEWAFAI ME BHI HUM WAFA DHUNDTE REHGAYE

NAFRAT KI UNHONE HUMESE DIL O JAAN SE

FIRBHI HUM NIHAR UNKO PYAR KARTE REHGAYE
Fir wahi likhta hoon jo pehle bhi kai baar share kar chuka hoon...

Meri koi mehbooba bewafa nahin
Phir bhi bewafaai ki baat karta hoon
Ashq maine kabhi bahaya hi nahin
Phir bhi ye halaat samajhta hoon
Gunah sehna meri fitrat nahin
Na hi meri mashooqa harjaai hai
Ye jo bewafaai ka jazba hai
Ye mere hi ateet ki parchayi hai...


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Aisa na kahein dost. Is duniya mein hum hain iska matlab yahi hai ki humari bhi kuch ehmiyat, koi pehchaan hai. Ye baat sach hai ki sabko humari kadar nahin hoti par agar sochein to humein bhi to sabke hone na hone se fsarak nahin padta. Zaroorat bas itni hai ki jise hum chahein wo bhi humari izzart kare. Humein mohabbat kare...



Fir wahi likhta hoon jo pehle bhi kai baar share kar chuka hoon...

Meri koi mehbooba bewafa nahin
Phir bhi bewafaai ki baat karta hoon
Ashq maine kabhi bahaya hi nahin
Phir bhi ye halaat samajhta hoon
Gunah sehna meri fitrat nahin
Na hi meri mashooqa harjaai hai
Ye jo bewafaai ka jazba hai
Ye mere hi ateet ki parchayi hai...




kya baat kahi aap ne...........AMIT,
bahut khub .........aap ki is baat ka jawaab dena chahungi.........umeed hai aap ko pasand aayega......


ek khushi ki chaah me har khushi se dur huye hum,
kisi se kuch keh bhi na sake itne majboor huye hum,
na aayi unhe nibhani pyaar me wafaa,
aur zamane ki nazar me bewafaa ke naam se mashoor huye hum......................



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thanx janab aapne humko padha isliye aap ka tahe dil se shukriya and aapko humari shayri pasand aai woh toh aapna baddapan he
warna humjaise shayar ki kadar kon karta he janab
khair chodiye in baato ko


aapka jawab hazir he



UN BEWAFA NE BHI KYA BEWAFAI NIBHAI

AAPNA PAN CHOD KAR DUSMANI NIBHAI

UNKI BEWAFAI ME BHI HUM WAFA DHUNDTE REHGAYE

NAFRAT KI UNHONE HUMESE DIL O JAAN SE

FIRBHI HUM NIHAR UNKO PYAR KARTE REHGAYE


bahut khub NIHAR,
aap ki is baat ka jawaab haazir hai...........gaur farmaye..........


teri nafrat me wo dum nahi,
jo meri chahat ko mita de,
ye mohabbat hai koi khel nahi,
jo koi haskar bhula de....................



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ek khushi ki chaah me har khushi se dur huye hum,
kisi se kuch keh bhi na sake itne majboor huye hum,
na aayi unhe nibhani pyaar me wafaa,
aur zamane ki nazar me bewafaa ke naam se mashoor huye hum

Kya Baat hai Lamha. Bewafaai ke aashaaron ke baad smiling smileys.. Khuda aapki muskaan yun hi banaye rakhe...

Ehsaas kehta hai Bhi kehta hoon...

Khareedne nikla tha bazzar mein kuch gum-e-"Ehsaas"
Aansoo nikal pade hain dukaandaar dekhkar....
Socha the milenge kuch anjaane-begaane hi bazaar mein
Khoon beh gaya hai aankhon se, doston ki kataar dekhkar...


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Kya Baat hai Lamha. Bewafaai ke aashaaron ke baad smiling smileys.. Khuda aapki muskaan yun hi banaye rakhe...

Ehsaas kehta hai Bhi kehta hoon...

Khareedne nikla tha bazzar mein kuch gum-e-"Ehsaas"
Aansoo nikal pade hain dukaandaar dekhkar....
Socha the milenge kuch anjaane-begaane hi bazaar mein
Khoon beh gaya hai aankhon se, doston ki kataar dekhkar...

kya baat hai AMIT,
bahut hi khubsoorat ehsaas hai.........acha lagta hai aap ke sher padhna...yuhi likhte rahiye..........waise aap se ek aur baat kehna chahungi......aap ka likha padhne ke liye hume bahut concentrate karna padta hai kyonki aap behad hi chote letters ka istemaal karte hai ......agar aise hi chalta raha to bahut jald hi hum apni aankho ki roshni se haath dho baithege................plz use biggersize words.....................sorry if u felt bad...............

aap ka jawaab............

waade bhi yaar ne kya khub nibhaye,
zakham muft me aur dard tohfe me bhijwaye,
is se badhkar wafa ki misaal kya hogi,
ki maut se pehle hi dost kafan le aaye....................



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kya baat hai AMIT,
bahut hi khubsoorat ehsaas hai.........acha lagta hai aap ke sher padhna...yuhi likhte rahiye..........waise aap se ek aur baat kehna chahungi......aap ka likha padhne ke liye hume bahut concentrate karna padta hai kyonki aap behad hi chote letters ka istemaal karte hai ......agar aise hi chalta raha to bahut jald hi hum apni aankho ki roshni se haath dho baithege................plz use biggersize words.....................sorry if u felt bad...............

aap ka jawaab............

waade bhi yaar ne kya khub nibhaye,
zakham muft me aur dard tohfe me bhijwaye,
is se badhkar wafa ki misaal kya hogi,
ki maut se pehle hi dost kafan le aaye....................

awesome lamhaa bahut khoob sher hai tumhara aur kuchh had tal sahi bhi hai jo baat tumne kahi hai,mai tumaare sher ke jawaab men apni hee ek ghazal yaha paish kar raha hoon jo aap shayr-e-dard section men bi padh sakte hai, yeh ghazal maine isi liye likhi hai ki ham yeh apni zindagi men bhi mehsoos karte hai. Jo insaan apni vafaa ki badi badi baate kartaa hai,vaade karta hai vahi use aasani se todtaa bhi hai, isi jazbe ke aaspas yeh ghazal maine likhi hai

Jo vafaa ka yaqeeN dilaate haiN
Vaade aksar vo bhool jaate haiN

Ashq palkoN tale chhupaa kar ham
Tere kehne pe muskuraate haiN

Teri yaadoN ke saaye bhi ab to
Dil ke aaNgan se laut jaate haiN

Le ujaale tu bhar le jee bhar kar
Ghar jalaa kar, yeh dil jalaate haiN

Kyaa kareN kuchh nahi dawaa is kii
Ashq pee kar hee gham bhulaate haiN

Ab nah kaaNToN kee keejiYe parwaa
zaKhm to phool bhee lagaate haiN

ham wafaa par yaqeen rakhte haiN
be-wafaa se jo dil lagaate haiN

Baat tum se ho gar bichharne ki
Maut ko ham kareeb paate haiN

makr* hai aadamee kee fit^rat meN
apne jazboN se chauT khaate haiN!

Kyaa zamaana hameN daraayega
Ham hawaadis* pe ghar banaate haiN

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Dard ki daastan mitane baithe to kya baithe,
Faaslon ko ghatane baithe to kya baithe,
Dard yun baatne se hota gar kum to kya tha,
Dard mein jo maikhane mein baithe to kyun baithe???





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Dard ki daastan mitane baithe to kya baithe,
Faaslon ko ghatane baithe to kya baithe,
Dard yun baatne se hota gar kum to kya tha,
Dard mein jo maikhane mein baithe to kyun baithe???

hey ABRAR,
how r u ?........aap to bilkul gayab hi ho gaye the........kya apne doston se naaraz the?..........i m glad ur back.........aap ka dobara swagat hai humari is mehfil me.........bahut khub sher likha hai aap ne.........

aap ke liye ek sher pesh karna chahti ho........ye sher humari dosti ke naam..............


zindagi ki rehguzar me hazaar yaar milenge,
hum to hai hi kya? hum se ache hazaar milenge,
ache achon ki is bheed me kahi humko na bhula dena,
hum bhi kaha aap ko baar baar milenge.............




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awesome lamhaa bahut khoob sher hai tumhara aur kuchh had tal sahi bhi hai jo baat tumne kahi hai,mai tumaare sher ke jawaab men apni hee ek ghazal yaha paish kar raha hoon jo aap shayr-e-dard section men bi padh sakte hai, yeh ghazal maine isi liye likhi hai ki ham yeh apni zindagi men bhi mehsoos karte hai. Jo insaan apni vafaa ki badi badi baate kartaa hai,vaade karta hai vahi use aasani se todtaa bhi hai, isi jazbe ke aaspas yeh ghazal maine likhi hai

Jo vafaa ka yaqeeN dilaate haiN
Vaade aksar vo bhool jaate haiN

Ashq palkoN tale chhupaa kar ham
Tere kehne pe muskuraate haiN

Teri yaadoN ke saaye bhi ab to
Dil ke aaNgan se laut jaate haiN

Le ujaale tu bhar le jee bhar kar
Ghar jalaa kar, yeh dil jalaate haiN

Kyaa kareN kuchh nahi dawaa is kii
Ashq pee kar hee gham bhulaate haiN

Ab nah kaaNToN kee keejiYe parwaa
zaKhm to phool bhee lagaate haiN

ham wafaa par yaqeen rakhte haiN
be-wafaa se jo dil lagaate haiN

Baat tum se ho gar bichharne ki
Maut ko ham kareeb paate haiN

makr* hai aadamee kee fit^rat meN
apne jazboN se chauT khaate haiN!

Kyaa zamaana hameN daraayega
Ham hawaadis* pe ghar banaate haiN

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hey MANU,
its always wonderful to read ur ghazals and shayri....as usual bahut hi umda ghazal hai.......gr8 work..........thanx 4 sharing..........

is ke jawaab me mai bhi kuch likhna chahungi..........

Ae KHUDA is tadapte dil ko sambhal le,
is naadan ko mushkil waqt se nikaal le,
waada hai tujse mera, fir pyaar na karongi,
kisi bewafa pe kabhi aitbaar na karongi,
na thi khabar mujko,ye ishq jaanleva hota hai,
raat din insaan isme tadapta hai,aur rota hai,
ishq ko fareb samajte hai,jo the humko chahnewale,
is se behtar hota ki wo pila dete zaher ke pyale,
haal-e-dil humara ab hum kisko sunaye,
jise chaha tahedil se wo aaj iska mazaak udaye,
tumhare pyaar ko ab dil ki gehrai me dafan kar denge,
aur waqt ke sath hum khud ko bhi khatam kar denge,
agar ho sake to mayyat pe humari zaroor aana,
aur ho sake to do aansoo bahana,
un aansoo ko hum apne sath kabr me le jayenge,
aur khuda ko humare pyaar ka saboot dikhayenge........





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hey MANU,
its always wonderful to read ur ghazals and shayri....as usual bahut hi umda ghazal hai.......gr8 work..........thanx 4 sharing..........

is ke jawaab me mai bhi kuch likhna chahungi..........

Ae KHUDA is tadapte dil ko sambhal le,
is naadan ko mushkil waqt se nikaal le,
waada hai tujse mera, fir pyaar na karongi,
kisi bewafa pe kabhi aitbaar na karongi,
na thi khabar mujko,ye ishq jaanleva hota hai,
raat din insaan isme tadapta hai,aur rota hai,
ishq ko fareb samajte hai,jo the humko chahnewale,
is se behtar hota ki wo pila dete zaher ke pyale,
haal-e-dil humara ab hum kisko sunaye,
jise chaha tahedil se wo aaj iska mazaak udaye,
tumhare pyaar ko ab dil ki gehrai me dafan kar denge,
aur waqt ke sath hum khud ko bhi khatam kar denge,
agar ho sake to mayyat pe humari zaroor aana,
aur ho sake to do aansoo bahana,
un aansoo ko hum apne sath kabr me le jayenge,
aur khuda ko humare pyaar ka saboot dikhayenge........



waaaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaaah lamha kya baat hai yar, khuda kare tumhaara yeh hunar yunhee badhata rahe,ghazab ka likha hai.

mera jawab yeh hai
Marne ke baad bhi intzaar hota hai
Band aankho se bhi pyaar hota hai
jaroori nahi pyaar men vafa hee mile
Bewafa se bhi sanam pyaar hota hai


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hey MANU,
its always wonderful to read ur ghazals and shayri....as usual bahut hi umda ghazal hai.......gr8 work..........thanx 4 sharing..........

is ke jawaab me mai bhi kuch likhna chahungi..........

Ae KHUDA is tadapte dil ko sambhal le,
is naadan ko mushkil waqt se nikaal le,
waada hai tujse mera, fir pyaar na karongi,
kisi bewafa pe kabhi aitbaar na karongi,
na thi khabar mujko,ye ishq jaanleva hota hai,
raat din insaan isme tadapta hai,aur rota hai,
ishq ko fareb samajte hai,jo the humko chahnewale,
is se behtar hota ki wo pila dete zaher ke pyale,
haal-e-dil humara ab hum kisko sunaye,
jise chaha tahedil se wo aaj iska mazaak udaye,
tumhare pyaar ko ab dil ki gehrai me dafan kar denge,
aur waqt ke sath hum khud ko bhi khatam kar denge,
agar ho sake to mayyat pe humari zaroor aana,
aur ho sake to do aansoo bahana,
un aansoo ko hum apne sath kabr me le jayenge,
aur khuda ko humare pyaar ka saboot dikhayenge........










wah wah wah lamhaji kya baat he kya umda likha he aapne

is ke badle me meri taraf se ek chotisi bhet swikar kijiyega




wah kya umda likha he aapne
shayaad me na aaisa likh paunga
aap sab dosto ke jaisa shayar
sayaad me na baan paunga

kaha chalti he humari aaisi kalam, lagta he
shayaad syahi khatam ho gai he
jab se mili he hume aap sab ki mahobat lagta he
shayaad tanhai khatam ho gai he

aare yaaro kya batau aap ko ki
mera bhi ek dil he
shayaad woh bhi aab mera sathi nahi he
kambakhat woh bhi ja baitha he kisi ke pass
nahi lagta woh aab mere haath

samjane par bhi woh aab nahi samaj raha he
taras aata he yaaro, woh dekho kitna tadap raha he

muskurahat to dekho unki kya gajab dha rahi he
nazare unki samjo sine pe teer chala rahi he

wafa bhi dekho unki yaaro, kya kamal kiye ja rahe he
nihar ka dil churakar khud ka dil humare paas chode jarahi he

likhte likhte hath darad kar rahe he yaaro
likhna to aabhi baki he
kaha khatam hui nihar ki dil -E- dasta
aabhi tak to sanam humari zindagi ki sathi he................................................ ....


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bahut khub NIHAR,
aap ki is baat ka jawaab haazir hai...........gaur farmaye..........


teri nafrat me wo dum nahi,
jo meri chahat ko mita de,
ye mohabbat hai koi khel nahi,
jo koi haskar bhula de....................

NA TERI CHAHAT MITE GI DIL SE
NA MOHABAT KAM HO PAEGI
JIS DIN BHULA NIHAR TUJE
SAMAJANA MERI JAAN CHALI JAEGI

NIHAR KI ZINDAGI KI DOOOR
AAB SANAM TERE HAATH ME HE
GALTI SE BHI DHIL NA DENA USE
WARNA KATI PATANG BAN JAEGI

ZINDA HOON ME SIRF
TERE MOHABAT KE LIYA SANAM
NAZANE FIR HUMARI ZINDAGI BHI
KAHA LE JAEGI

NA HUM BHULE HE TUJE
AUR TA TU HUME BHOOL PAEGI
EK BAAR HUMARE BAARE ME SOCH KAR TO DEKH
HAR JAGAH TU SIRF HUME AUR HUME HI PAEGI.


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hey MANU,
its always wonderful to read ur ghazals and shayri....as usual bahut hi umda ghazal hai.......gr8 work..........thanx 4 sharing..........

is ke jawaab me mai bhi kuch likhna chahungi..........

Ae KHUDA is tadapte dil ko sambhal le,
is naadan ko mushkil waqt se nikaal le,
waada hai tujse mera, fir pyaar na karongi,
kisi bewafa pe kabhi aitbaar na karongi,
na thi khabar mujko,ye ishq jaanleva hota hai,
raat din insaan isme tadapta hai,aur rota hai,
ishq ko fareb samajte hai,jo the humko chahnewale,
is se behtar hota ki wo pila dete zaher ke pyale,
haal-e-dil humara ab hum kisko sunaye,
jise chaha tahedil se wo aaj iska mazaak udaye,
tumhare pyaar ko ab dil ki gehrai me dafan kar denge,
aur waqt ke sath hum khud ko bhi khatam kar denge,
agar ho sake to mayyat pe humari zaroor aana,
aur ho sake to do aansoo bahana,
un aansoo ko hum apne sath kabr me le jayenge,
aur khuda ko humare pyaar ka saboot dikhayenge........


lamha ji maine is ka jaawab pehle de to diyaa hai magar aap ke ye kalaam ke saamane vo kuchh bhi nahee, mai ghanto tak aap ke kalaam ko padhata raha.
1 baar...........2 baar............ 3 baar............ baar baar maine ise padhaa tab jaa kar mai is kaa kuchh jawaab likh paaya hoon gaur farmaayiyegaa haalaki yeh ashaar aap ke kalam ke aage shaayad kuchh bhi na ho magar phir bhi koshish ki hai............................... aap ke nigaah se is ghazal ko aap ke dil men utaarane ki.

Tumne khud ko chalo sajaya to,
Aaiyena aaj muskuraaya to.

Ishq kar lunga dushmano se mai,
wo agar ho gaya paraya to.

Soch kar dil ko todna mere,
Ye diya bujh ke jal na paya to.

Dhoop kamro'n se rooth jayegi,
Peid aangan me gar lagaya to.

Meri aankhen thi khushk muddat se,
Aashiqui ne chalo rulaya to.

lamha lamha yun bit jaayega
teri yaado se gar dil lagaaya to

tere rukhsaar se phir subah hongii
khudaa tujhko agar banaayaa to



regards
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JITNI NAHI LI SAANS AABTAK ZINDAGI ME
UTNA AAPKO YAAD KAR CHUKA HOON
NAHI TADAPTI HONGI MACHLIYA PANISE BAHAR NIKALNEKE BAAD
SANAM TERI YAAD ME UNSE BHI JYADA TADAP CHUKA HOON


YE YAADO KE SAMUNDAR KO
NAJANE KAB KINARA NASIB HOGA
KASTIYAAN TO LAKHO TAIR RAHI HEN
NAJANE KONSI KASTI ME GHAR HAMARA HOGA

KAB UUDENGE AASMAN ME
HATHO ME EK DUJE KA HATH LIYE
NAJANE KAB YE JAMANA
HUM AASHIQ KA GULAM HOGA

JINKI YAAD ME JI RAHA HOON
NAJANE KAB UNKA SATH HOGA
TASVEER DEKH KAR KABTAK CHALAO E KHUDA
NAJANE KAB UNKA HUMSE SAMNA HOGA

SANAM TUM JAHA BHI HO
ITNA SAMAJ LENA
CHAHE TUM KISIKE BHI BANJAO
NIHAR ZINDAGI BHAR TUMHARA HOGA......................



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HEY,MANISH,
aap janna chahte hai na ki kya baat hai,to lijiye suniye.....................


saamne na ho tum, to tarasti hai ankhen,
yaad mai teri barsti hai ankhen,
mere liye na sahi,inke liye aa jao,MANISH,
aap ka bepanah intezar karti hai ankhen............



MANISH,
ye sirf sher hai ok..............dont mind...........
aap ke sher ka jawab hai,is liye aap ka naam use kiya maine................i know u understand....................

janab, aapki 150th post likh raha hun, i m honoured. congrats.....

chalo aab humari baari hai likne ki...zaara gaur farmayein:

aayein hain unki mehfil mein
kuch lafz aab keh kar jayenge
aaye the unhe kuch dene k liye
abb unka dil, saath le-kar jayenge

shor mein samjo tum khamosi humari
labon par ruki samjo baat humari
keh nahi sakte haal-e-dil mehfil mein
LAMHA samjo tum majboori humari...


Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little...



Darkness falls on me like rain...
just
one drop at a time....


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lamha ji maine is ka jaawab pehle de to diyaa hai magar aap ke ye kalaam ke saamane vo kuchh bhi nahee, mai ghanto tak aap ke kalaam ko padhata raha.
1 baar...........2 baar............ 3 baar............ baar baar maine ise padhaa tab jaa kar mai is kaa kuchh jawaab likh paaya hoon gaur farmaayiyegaa haalaki yeh ashaar aap ke kalam ke aage shaayad kuchh bhi na ho magar phir bhi koshish ki hai............................... aap ke nigaah se is ghazal ko aap ke dil men utaarane ki.

Tumne khud ko chalo sajaya to,
Aaiyena aaj muskuraaya to.

Ishq kar lunga dushmano se mai,
wo agar ho gaya paraya to.

Soch kar dil ko todna mere,
Ye diya bujh ke jal na paya to.

Dhoop kamro'n se rooth jayegi,
Peid aangan me gar lagaya to.

Meri aankhen thi khushk muddat se,
Aashiqui ne chalo rulaya to.

lamha lamha yun bit jaayega
teri yaado se gar dil lagaaya to

tere rukhsaar se phir subah hongii
khudaa tujhko agar banaayaa to



regards
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hey MANU,
ye to tumhara ka badappan hai jo tum meri shayri ko apni shayri se behtar batate ho.....sachhai to sub ke samne hai ki tum behtar shayar ho.........thanx 4 sharing this wonderful feelings with us.........


mujse door ho kar tune meri mout ko bhijwaya,
zindagi ka vaasta diya maine fir bhi ,
dil tumhara humse milne se katraya,
khush rehna agar reh sakte ho hume bhula kar,
hum bhi jee lenge ab apne aap ko mitakar............



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JITNI NAHI LI SAANS AABTAK ZINDAGI ME
UTNA AAPKO YAAD KAR CHUKA HOON
NAHI TADAPTI HONGI MACHLIYA PANISE BAHAR NIKALNEKE BAAD
SANAM TERI YAAD ME UNSE BHI JYADA TADAP CHUKA HOON


YE YAADO KE SAMUNDAR KO
NAJANE KAB KINARA NASIB HOGA
KASTIYAAN TO LAKHO TAIR RAHI HEN
NAJANE KONSI KASTI ME GHAR HAMARA HOGA

KAB UUDENGE AASMAN ME
HATHO ME EK DUJE KA HATH LIYE
NAJANE KAB YE JAMANA
HUM AASHIQ KA GULAM HOGA

JINKI YAAD ME JI RAHA HOON
NAJANE KAB UNKA SATH HOGA
TASVEER DEKH KAR KABTAK CHALAO E KHUDA
NAJANE KAB UNKA HUMSE SAMNA HOGA

SANAM TUM JAHA BHI HO
ITNA SAMAJ LENA
CHAHE TUM KISIKE BHI BANJAO
NIHAR ZINDAGI BHAR TUMHARA HOGA......................


hey NIHAR,
kya khub likha hai aapne..........bahut saadgi se dil ki gehrai ko shabdo me bayan kar diya aap ne.........thanx 4 sharing..............

aap ka jawaab haazir hai................


mana ke bhool jana aap ki fitrat hi sahi,
par hume bhool pana aap ki kismat me nahi,
yakin na aaye to aazmaa ke dekh lo,
khud ko bhool jaoge lekin hum ko nahi..............



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janab, aapki 150th post likh raha hun, i m honoured. congrats.....

chalo aab humari baari hai likne ki...zaara gaur farmayein:

aayein hain unki mehfil mein
kuch lafz aab keh kar jayenge
aaye the unhe kuch dene k liye
abb unka dil, saath le-kar jayenge

shor mein samjo tum khamosi humari
labon par ruki samjo baat humari
keh nahi sakte haal-e-dil mehfil mein
LAMHA samjo tum majboori humari...


hey MANISH,
thanx .........humari post par aane keliye aur ye pyare ehsaas share karne keliye..........aap mere shayri.com ke sabse pehle ( 1st ) dost hai........mera ye jawaab humari dosti ke naam............

koi itna chahe tumhe to batana,
koi tumhare itne naaz uthaye to batana,
DOSTI to kar lega har koi tumse,
koi humari tarah nibhaye to batana................



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hey MANU,
ye to tumhara ka badappan hai jo tum meri shayri ko apni shayri se behtar batate ho.....sachhai to sub ke samne hai ki tum behtar shayar ho.........thanx 4 sharing this wonderful feelings with us.........


mujse door ho kar tune meri mout ko bhijwaya,
zindagi ka vaasta diya maine fir bhi ,
dil tumhara humse milne se katraya,
khush rehna agar reh sakte ho hume bhula kar,
hum bhi jee lenge ab apne aap ko mitakar............


dear lamha ji aap ne kuchh bhulaane ki baat ki hai,khud ko mitaane ki baat ki hai to mera jawaab hai meri yeh ghazal, aap ko fursat mile to jaraa padh lena.hope u like it.

Tumhe Ze'hn* se mitaana chaaha par mitaa na saka,
Itni shidat* se to yaad khud ko bhi mai aa na saka.

Aankho mai chhupaya tumko har gam se bacha k
Ashq apne ranjish-e-gam mai bhi mai baha na saka

Nazar na lag jaaye jamaane ki, chhupaya palko mai,
Ab chahkar bhi tere didaar ka luft mai uthaa na saka

Mehfil mai teri maujud the kitne haseen chahere
Ek tu hi dil mai mere, kahi aur dil mai laga na saka

Raat ko rahnuma kar, chalta raha teri talaash mai
Nind khwaabo ke liye bhi tere mai bacha na saka

Gher liya hai mujhko mere gam ke andhero ne aise,
Panne the teri yaado ke magar mai jalaa na saka

Besabab nahi thi dil ki bekarari, meri mahobbat,
Dil-e-Betaab ka ye haal tumko bhi mai bataa na saka

Ab jalta hu aatish-e-ishq* mai tu na jale khuda kare
Aag barso ki lagi sine mai jise mai bujhaa na saka


Ze'hn*= Dil-o-dimaag se, khayaalo se
shidat*=intensity
aatish-e-ishq*= mahobbat ki aag

regards
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kya khub likha hai aapne..........bahut saadgi se dil ki gehrai ko shabdo me bayan kar diya aap ne.........thanx 4 sharing..............

aap ka jawaab haazir hai................


mana ke bhool jana aap ki fitrat hi sahi,
par hume bhool pana aap ki kismat me nahi,
yakin na aaye to aazmaa ke dekh lo,
khud ko bhool jaoge lekin hum ko nahi..............





lamha ji aap ka jawab to de nahi sakta isliye kuch likh raha hoon ise aapne jawab samjo to thik he warna na samjo to aur bhi thik he




BHOOL SE BHOOL NAHI HONE DENGE
GALTI SE GALTI NAHI HONE DENGE
AAP HI TO NIHAR KI YAADDASH HO
AAP KO BHOOL SE BHI KHONE NAHI DENGE


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LAMHAJI INME ZARA GOUR FARMAIYE GA


CHALO AAJ DARD BANTE
THODA WAQT DOSTO KE NAAM KANTE
BITCHUKI HE JO JINDAGI HUMARI
CHALO UNMESE KUCH AACHE LAMHO KO CHATE
CHALO AAJ DARD BANTE…..
THODA WAQT DOSTO KE NAAM KANTE.

THODISI KHUSHI KE LIYE GUM BHOOL AANA
TUTE RISTO KO PICHE CHOD AANA
MILKAR KARLE CHALO JI BHAR KAR SHOOR
AAO YAARO IN LAMHOKO SUNEHRE PALO SE KANTE
CHALO AAJ DARD BANTE…..
THODA WAQT DOSTO KE NAAM KANTE.

AANKHIYO KO AAJ BARAS JANE DO
ASHQ – E – SAMUNDAR KO KHALI HO JANE DO
YAAD RAKHNA MERE DOST EK BAAT
NAHI LOT TE WHO PAL JO BEET JATE
CHALO AAJ DARD BANTE…..
THODA WAQT DOSTO KE NAAM KANTE.

KUCH GUM TUMHARA HUM SUNE
KUCH HUMARI DASTA TUM SUNO
DEDO KHUSHI UNHE JO TUMHARE NAZDIK HE AAJ
KYOKI JANE WALE KABHI LOUTKAR NAHI AATE
CHALO AAJ DARD BANTE…..
THODA WAQT DOSTO KE NAAM KANTE.

DOST BANTE HE DUSHMAN KAHI
KAHI DUSHMAN DOST BAN JATE
NIHAR TO UNMESE HE YAARO JO
AJNABIOKE BHI AAPNE KEHLATE
CHALO AAJ DARD BANTE…..
THODA WAQT DOSTO KE NAAM KANTE.

CHALO AAJ DARD BANTE
THODA WAQT DOSTO KE NAAM KANTE
BITCHUKI HE JO JINDAGI HUMARI
CHALO UNMESE KUCH AACHE LAMHO KO CHATE
CHALO AAJ DARD BANTE…..
THODA WAQT DOSTO KE NAAM KANTE.


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dear lamha ji aap ne kuchh bhulaane ki baat ki hai,khud ko mitaane ki baat ki hai to mera jawaab hai meri yeh ghazal, aap ko fursat mile to jaraa padh lena.hope u like it.

Tumhe Ze'hn* se mitaana chaaha par mitaa na saka,
Itni shidat* se to yaad khud ko bhi mai aa na saka.

Aankho mai chhupaya tumko har gam se bacha k
Ashq apne ranjish-e-gam mai bhi mai baha na saka

Nazar na lag jaaye jamaane ki, chhupaya palko mai,
Ab chahkar bhi tere didaar ka luft mai uthaa na saka

Mehfil mai teri maujud the kitne haseen chahere
Ek tu hi dil mai mere, kahi aur dil mai laga na saka

Raat ko rahnuma kar, chalta raha teri talaash mai
Nind khwaabo ke liye bhi tere mai bacha na saka

Gher liya hai mujhko mere gam ke andhero ne aise,
Panne the teri yaado ke magar mai jalaa na saka

Besabab nahi thi dil ki bekarari, meri mahobbat,
Dil-e-Betaab ka ye haal tumko bhi mai bataa na saka

Ab jalta hu aatish-e-ishq* mai tu na jale khuda kare
Aag barso ki lagi sine mai jise mai bujhaa na saka


Ze'hn*= Dil-o-dimaag se, khayaalo se
shidat*=intensity
aatish-e-ishq*= mahobbat ki aag

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manu

wahhhhhhhhhh MANU,
bahut khub.ek ek lafz is ghazal ka dil ko chu gaya.umdaa.bahut hi umdaa.is ghazal ka jawaab dena mere bas ki baat nahi hai,kyon ki ye to lajawaab hai.


kuch nahi chahiye bas aap ki muskaan hi kafi hai,
dil me bas ek armaan hi kafi hai,
armaan ye ki aap sada khush rahe,
hume yaad rakhte ho har lamha,
aap ka ye ehsaan hi kafi hai...............



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mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
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LAMHAJI INME ZARA GOUR FARMAIYE GA


CHALO AAJ DARD BANTE
THODA WAQT DOSTO KE NAAM KANTE
BITCHUKI HE JO JINDAGI HUMARI
CHALO UNMESE KUCH AACHE LAMHO KO CHATE
CHALO AAJ DARD BANTE..
THODA WAQT DOSTO KE NAAM KANTE.

THODISI KHUSHI KE LIYE GUM BHOOL AANA
TUTE RISTO KO PICHE CHOD AANA
MILKAR KARLE CHALO JI BHAR KAR SHOOR
AAO YAARO IN LAMHOKO SUNEHRE PALO SE KANTE
CHALO AAJ DARD BANTE..
THODA WAQT DOSTO KE NAAM KANTE.

AANKHIYO KO AAJ BARAS JANE DO
ASHQ E SAMUNDAR KO KHALI HO JANE DO
YAAD RAKHNA MERE DOST EK BAAT
NAHI LOT TE WHO PAL JO BEET JATE
CHALO AAJ DARD BANTE..
THODA WAQT DOSTO KE NAAM KANTE.

KUCH GUM TUMHARA HUM SUNE
KUCH HUMARI DASTA TUM SUNO
DEDO KHUSHI UNHE JO TUMHARE NAZDIK HE AAJ
KYOKI JANE WALE KABHI LOUTKAR NAHI AATE
CHALO AAJ DARD BANTE..
THODA WAQT DOSTO KE NAAM KANTE.

DOST BANTE HE DUSHMAN KAHI
KAHI DUSHMAN DOST BAN JATE
NIHAR TO UNMESE HE YAARO JO
AJNABIOKE BHI AAPNE KEHLATE
CHALO AAJ DARD BANTE..
THODA WAQT DOSTO KE NAAM KANTE.

CHALO AAJ DARD BANTE
THODA WAQT DOSTO KE NAAM KANTE
BITCHUKI HE JO JINDAGI HUMARI
CHALO UNMESE KUCH AACHE LAMHO KO CHATE
CHALO AAJ DARD BANTE..
THODA WAQT DOSTO KE NAAM KANTE.



wahhhhhhhhhh kya khoob likha hai aap ne NIHAR,
bahut hi ache lage aap ke ehsaas.........uhi likhte rahiyega....


mere aane ki aahat pe shama jalai to hogi,
kabhi judai ke gham se aankh bhar aayi to hogi,
gham na kar,maayus na ho ae mere yaar,
us rub ne milan ki koi shaam banai to hogi..........




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wahhhhhhhhhh MANU,
bahut khub.ek ek lafz is ghazal ka dil ko chu gaya.umdaa.bahut hi umdaa.is ghazal ka jawaab dena mere bas ki baat nahi hai,kyon ki ye to lajawaab hai.


kuch nahi chahiye bas aap ki muskaan hi kafi hai,
dil me bas ek armaan hi kafi hai,
armaan ye ki aap sada khush rahe,
hume yaad rakhte ho har lamha,
aap ka ye ehsaan hi kafi hai...............

waah wah lamhaa ji kya bat kahi hai ahsaanwaali phir paraaya kar diyaa koi baat nahe yahi he sahi.lamha ye kyaa baat kahii ahsaanwali achha sher hai.mera reply bhi haazir hai tumaare is khoobsurat sher par.

Dostee aur mahobbat men ahsaan kabhi jataya nahee karte
Jise maan le dilojaan se apna use ham paraya nahee karte
Hai yeh vo paak jazbaa bharosa-o-imaan-o-vafaa par kaayam
lamhabhar bhi kabhi aap se daaman ham chhudaaya nahee karte.

Hame aarzoo hai tumhaare magar hai tumhaare khushiya bhi pyaaree
So apni khudagrzi ke liye ham usoolo se apne takraaya nahee karte

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