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Aata hai mehboob ka paigham kabhi kabhi -
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Aata hai mehboob ka paigham kabhi kabhi
Karte hai nazroN se woh salaam kabhi kabhi Hota hai mohobbat ka yeh anjaam kabhi kabhi Rahta dard aksar to aaraam kabhi kabhi Deedaar e hilaal jo unke ruksaar se hua Aati hai yaad aaj bhi woh shaam kabhi kabhi Soyi thi koi tamanna Kwahish ke shaano per Hone lage the charche sare aam kabhi kabhi De jaati muskuraahat hichkiyaan Sameer ko Leti hai woh aaj bhi mera naam kabhi kabhi 
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radhe radhe bahut khoob............dil se daad nikli hai...........kubul karen saare hi ashar ek se badh kar ek hain aise hi likhte rahen duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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28th May 2010, 05:17 PM
Sameer ji namskaar.........
bahut hi achhi lagi aapki ye koshish. ye line to kuch jyada pasNd aayi. daad qabool kareN. Quote:
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28th May 2010, 06:08 PM
sameer bhaa'ii:
Aadaab! koShiSh ke ehsaas Khoob rahe.n! aapki koShiSh ko paRh ke lataa jee kaa gaayaa huaa ik geet yaad aa gayaa .. miltii haii zindagee meiN muHabbat kabhi kabhi... yuuNhi liKhate rahe.n... dil se daad! KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n duaao.n ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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28th May 2010, 07:59 PM
Sameer Ji.....Aadaab ! Bahut khoobsurat lage Sabhi ashaar ke ehsaas...matla aur maqta meri pehli pasand rahe....yunhi behtar Ghazal ke saath aate rahen...aur humesha likhte rahen... khush rahen....
Ghazal ko tahe dil se daad hazir hai ....qubuul ki jiye... apna khayal rakhen... duaaon ke saath....  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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Aapki daad dil se kabool hai.. Aage bhi saath banaye rakhiye... Khush rahiye....  Khuda Hafez...
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30th May 2010, 02:11 AM
Sameer ji, aadaab!
Bahot achhi lagi aapki ye ghazal. Daad qubool kijiye. Take care! Mann |
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30th May 2010, 08:15 AM
Miltay hein padne ko achay klaam kabhi kabhi
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Jee ashaar ko pasand karne ke liye aur apna saath jatane ke liye main aapka behad shukra guzar hun ....... Aur aapne jo ashaar pasand kiya hai maNi us ashaar ko aur ek type se likha tha aap ke samne psh kar deta huN..... Sunkar huyi hairani apne hi raqeeb se Leti hia woh aaj bhi mera naam kabhi kabhi aate rhaiye....... apne khayal se ruberu karate rahiye Khush rhaiye.. Khuda Hafez......
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namaskaar, aapki koshish pasaNd aayi. Par Deedaar e hilaal jo unke ruksaar se hua iska matlab kya hota hai? yeh sh'er pasandida raha.... De jaati muskuraahat hichkiyaan Sameer ko Leti hai woh aaj bhi mera naam kabhi kabhi Aur ise dusre tareeke se aapne jo likha tha Sunkar huyi hairani apne hi raqeeb se Leti hai woh aaj bhi mera naam kabhi kabhi yeh mujhe pehle wale se jyada asardaar laga. God Bless You Apki Dost, Ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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tere rooksar ko dil chahta hae -
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sameer bhai ko amit ka namskar;;;; bahut khoob likha hae apne ,dil bag bag ho gaya hae . aisa lag raha hae ki meri mohabbat phir se taza ho gayi hae meri nazaro k samne ; very good effort 2 line boluga............. aj phir se tere rooksar ko dil chahta hae aj tujhe karna phir se pyar ye dil chahta hae yad ati hae to ankhe bhi bhar ati hae aj 'amit' ko isqh-e- deedar karne kio dil chahta hae ye mae complete karke jald hi post karooga asha hae ki ise apki nazaro ka deedar jarroor hoga |
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Meri koshish ko padhne aur sarahne ka bahut bahut shukriyaa...... Jee maine usi geet ke tarz per yeh gazal kahne ki koshish ki thi.... ab pata nahi kahan tak kamyaab hua.... aapko woh geet yaad aa gaya to shayad main kuch kamyaab hua huN...... Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye.... Khush rahiye....... APna khayaal rakhiye..... Khuda Hafez.......
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1st June 2010, 02:34 PM
Wah mere bhai wah shuru se aakhir tak ek ajeeb masti barkaraar rahi kalam me........aur Makhte ne to aur Mast kar diya. Dil se daad kabool kare apni is peshkash ke liye.
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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Naresh jee AadaaB! Aap ko meri lkhi gazal pasand aayi mujhe khushi huyi aur aapne apni pasand bhi jatayi behad achcha laga...... Aate rhaiye, aur apni rai se nawazte rhaiye...... Khush rahiye Khuda Hafez.....
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3rd June 2010, 07:40 PM
sameer saheb aadaab...!
bahut khoob likha hai aapne, tareef ke liye alfaaz kam pad rahe haiN... behad khoobsurat aur asardaar peshkash... De jaati muskuraahat hichkiyaan Sameer ko Leti hai woh aaj bhi mera naam kabhi kabhi khaas taur par aapke qalaam ka maqta behad pasaNd aaya mujhe... daad haazir hai qubuul farmaiyega.... likhte rahiye..... apna khayal rakhiyega.... khuda hafiz.... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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aapko bahut dino bad bazm mein dekhker behad khushi ho rahi hai.... aapki daad dil se kabool kii bhai per ek baat per ke aap aate rahenge ... apni pyari pyari kavitaoN ke saath..... Aur aap bhi mehfil ko roshan karte rahiye...... Khush rahiye..... Apna khayaal rakhiye.... Khuda Hafez........
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4th June 2010, 12:08 PM
aisi baat hai sameer jee to main bilkul aata rahoonga.............
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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Aapki daad dil se kabool hai sahab..... Gazal ki pasandidgi ke liye tahe dil se shukraguzar huN....... Aate rahiye... Khush rahiye.. Apna khayaal rakhiye.... Khuda hafez......
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Thanks for nice compliment...... Keep reading...... Keep posting.... Keep smiling.... Take care..... Khuda Hafez...
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Jee dedaar e Hilaal means Eid ka chand.. jo bahut chota hota hai jise log shiddat se dhundte hia aasmaaN mein..... Par sirf chand raat ko hi... jo Eid ki hoti hai... Maine yahan isliye use kiya kyuNke woh din chand raat nahi thi per Mehboob ko dekhne ke liye nazar kya uthi, ordinary month ka "Hilaal"(chand) bhi saath mein nazar aa gaya....... Isliye woh shaam yaad rah gayi... Jee Aapne replys bhi padhe yeh saaf zahir hai.... yeh to padhne wale pasand ke uper depend karta hia ke use kya pasand aaya.... Aapko dusra sher achcha laga, jaankar khushi huyi........ Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye.... Khush rahiye..... Khuda hafez....
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14th June 2010, 09:12 AM
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Itni acchi tarah se samjhane ke liye. God Bless You Apki Dost Ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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Aapki hounsla afzai aur daad ka tahe dil se mamnoon huN..... Aage bhi apna saat banaye rakhiye...... khush rahiye...... Khuda hafez.....
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Sahab itni bhi tareef ki haqdaar nahi hai yeh gazal, per aapne dil se tareef kii hai bahut khushi mehsus ho rahi hai...... Aapki daad kabool hia janab...... Khush rahiye..... Apna khayaal rakhiye...... Khuda Hafez......
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18th June 2010, 05:24 PM
De jaati muskuraahat hichkiyaan Sameer ko
Leti hai woh aaj bhi mera naam kabhi kabhi Sameer jii, hume aapke sabhi ahsaas bahut acche lage, par last wala sher bahut khaas laga, uske jagah agar aap yeh sher bhi post karte to bhi khoob rahta Sunkar huyi hairani apne hi raqeeb se Leti hai woh aaj bhi mera naam kabhi kabhi duaoN ke saath diii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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Aur kaise hai aap? Bade dino se aapki koi kalaam nahi aayi.......  jaldi se kuch post kijiye..... Khush rahiye apna khayaal rakhiye.... Khuda Hafez............
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ishwar kare sameer ko hichkiyaan dene wali jald se jald hasil ho jaye. likhte rahiye aur hamme padhne ka mauka dete rahiye.... aapka. mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM) |
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Take care.... Khuda Hafez..... Quote:
Aapko meri likhi yeh gazal pasand aayi mujhe achcha laga... aur bahut khushi bhi ho rahi hai ke aapne jo sher pasand kiye aur apna waqt diyaa..... Ummid hai aage bhi aap apko pasand aye aisa likhuNga ..... Aap bhi khush rahiye... Apna khayaal rakhiye... Khuda Hafez.....
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9th July 2010, 11:18 AM
bhot khubsurat
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Janaab aapki Hounsla afzai aur duaoN ka bahut bahut shukriyaa......... Yeh BakHan kya hota hai.........  waise maiN samajh gaya huN just joking so don't mind Plz....... Hmmm hichkiyaan dene wale mile to bahut Bhai per hasil karne ki mujhe bhi jaldi nahi hai per aapki dua Khudaa Kare ke jaldi kabool kare.... Jee janab koshish jari hai bus aap saath banaye rakhiye..... Khush rahiye....... Khuda Hafez.......
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17th July 2010, 11:30 PM
Good one khwahish,
yeh khoob raha De jaati muskuraahat hichkiyaan Sameer ko Leti hai woh aaj bhi mera naam kabhi kabhi Quote:
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HanSoni jee AadaaB! tareef wa hounsla afzai ka tahe dil se shukra guzar huN....... Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye................................. Khush rahiye.... Allah aapko salamat rakhe.... Khuda Hafez......
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