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~~Tumse dil ki har baat shuru~~ - 3rd August 2015, 11:04 PM

Tumse hi mere din aur raat shuru
Tumse hi dil ke mere har baat shuru

Kiya hai mohabbat ne tumhari aisa asar
Tumse hi dil ke mere saare ehsaas shuru

Khudko khoke paaya hai tumko maine
Tumse hi dil ke mere saare zasbaat shuru

Milta hai chain dil ko mere ab tumse hi
Tumse kahatm mohabat, tumse mera pyar shuru

Chalti hain sansen meri ab dhadkano se tumhari
Tumse hi dil ke mere sare khwab sare arman shuru...


Zindagi wahi jise khul ke Jiya jaaye, apne armaanon ko pankh lagaa udhne do...

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3rd August 2015, 11:16 PM

Waah Jiya ji,

Ek arse baad aapko padha aur yakeen maaniye aapke ehsaas dil ko chhoo gaye. Saadgi se bhari, pyaar me doobi kavita par meri dil se daad. Aise saada alfaaz mujhe bahut bhaate hain.

Yunhi mehfil sajaati rahiye. Khush rahiye.


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4th August 2015, 07:16 AM

Khoobsoorat ehsaas.......nice expression. ..

Likhti rahiye..........



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4th August 2015, 09:53 AM

bahut khoob ehsas pesh kiye hain aapne sweet rain............. likhte rahen

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4th August 2015, 11:25 AM

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Tumse hi mere din aur raat shuru
Tumse hi dil ke mere har baat shuru

Kiya hai mohabbat ne tumhari aisa asar
Tumse hi dil ke mere saare ehsaas shuru

Khudko khoke paaya hai tumko maine
Tumse hi dil ke mere saare zasbaat shuru

Milta hai chain dil ko mere ab tumse hi
Tumse kahatm mohabat, tumse mera pyar shuru

Chalti hain sansen meri ab dhadkano se tumhari
Tumse hi dil ke mere sare khwab sare arman shuru...
Ehsaasat-e-bayaan bahut khoob huye hai, yunhi dil ki baat ko alfaaz dete rahiYeGaa



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4th August 2015, 01:02 PM

Jiyaa jee

Namaste

Pyaar bhare ehsaasoN ko saadagee ke saath lafzoN me bayaan kiyaa hay... dil se daad...likhtee rahiye aage bhee

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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4th August 2015, 01:02 PM

Jiyaa jee

Namaste

Pyaar bhare ehsaasoN ko saadagee ke saath lafzoN me bayaan kiyaa hay... dil se daad...likhtee rahiye aage bhee

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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5th August 2015, 09:05 PM

Shukriya Pulkit Ji...aapko ehsaas pasand aaye jaankar khushi hui.

Shukriya!


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5th August 2015, 09:06 PM

Madhu ji...haunsla afzaai ke liye dil se shukriya...yuhin saath detin rahiye :-)


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5th August 2015, 09:09 PM

Shaad ji...hamesha ki tarah aapko yahan dekh kar khushi hui...shukriya haunsla afzaai ka.

Shukriya!


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Bhaiya...aapko pasand aaya jaankar bahaut achha laga aur bahaut khushi hui...thank you for the appreciation..aap please koi galti ho toh who bhi bataiyega jaroor.

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Dhaval ji,

aapko humare lafzon mai sadgee lagi yeh jaankar khushi hui...shukriya isse padhne ke liye aur sarhane ke liye.

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6th August 2015, 05:02 PM

Jiya....ehassa acche lge, yu hi likhti rheN aur khush rheN


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