Aseer Ghaalib

AnjAAn!!! · **Aseer Ghaalib -** 10th May 2012, 09:16 AM

Dosto! Aaj aap sab ke sath Mirza Ghalib ki ek behad lajawaab ghazal baa'ntna chahta hu'n. Leejiye pesh-e-khidmat hai ghazal:

Naqsh fariyaadi hai, kiski shokhi-e-tehreer ka
Kaaghzi hai pairhan, har paikar-e-tasveer ka

Kaav-e-kaav-e-sakht jaaneeha-e-tanhaayee, na poochh
Subah karna shaam ka, laanaa hai joo-e-sheer ka

Jazba-e-be ikhtiyaar-e-shauk dekha chahiye
Seena-e-shamsheer se bahar hai, dum shamsheer ka

Aaghi, daam-e-shanidan, jis tarah chahe bichaaye
Mudd'aa a'nkaa hai, apne 'aalam-e-taqreer' ka

Baski, hoo'n ghaalib, aseeree mein bhi aatash zer-e-paa
Moo-e-aatash deed hai, halka meri zanjeer ka

AHMAD SHAKIL · 10th May 2012, 01:19 PM

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Originally Posted by AnjAAn!!!

Dosto! Aaj aap sab ke sath Mirza Ghalib ki ek behad lajawaab ghazal baa'ntna chahta hu'n. Leejiye pesh-e-khidmat hai ghazal:

Naqsh fariyaadi hai, kiski shokhi-e-tehreer ka
Kaaghzi hai pairhan, har paikar-e-tasveer ka

Kaav-e-kaav-e-sakht jaaneeha-e-tanhaayee, na poochh
Subah karna shaam ka, laanaa hai joo-e-sheer ka

Jazba-e-be ikhtiyaar-e-shauk dekha chahiye
Seena-e-shamsheer se bahar hai, dum shamsheer ka

Aaghi, daam-e-shanidan, jis tarah chahe bichaaye
Mudd'aa a'nkaa hai, apne 'aalam-e-taqreer' ka

Baski, hoo'n ghaalib, aseeree mein bhi aatash zer-e-paa
Moo-e-aatash deed hai, halka meri zanjeer ka

Wah Wah Wah.......... Anjaan Sahab IS Khubsurat Kalaam Ko Share Karnay Par Mashkoor Hun... Behad Umdah Or Shahkaar Kalaam Hai MIRZA Sahab Ka....

AnjAAn!!! · 13th May 2012, 07:10 PM

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Originally Posted by AHMAD SHAKIL

Wah Wah Wah.......... Anjaan Sahab IS Khubsurat Kalaam Ko Share Karnay Par Mashkoor Hun... Behad Umdah Or Shahkaar Kalaam Hai MIRZA Sahab Ka....

Waah waah kehna to laazmi hai Shakil bhai. Ghaalib ka doosra naam waah waah hi hai. Ghazal sunkar log ghaalib nahi waah waah hi keh paate hain.

Ek-ek ash'aar itna beshqeemat hota hai jiska koi saani nahi. Ek sher hai ghaalib sahab ka, zaraa gaur farmaaiye:

Letaa hu'n maqtabe-e-gham-e-dil mein sabak hanoj
Lekin yahi ki, waqt gayaa, aur bood tha

Kya kahaa jaaye aisi shaayri ko??
Mere liye to sachmuch, Ghaalib matlab waah waah.