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Kyun main har baat se anjaan sa huN -
17th October 2009, 04:18 PM
Kyun main har baat se anjaan sa huN
Kya main masoom sa Nadaan sa huN Thi meri bhi chamak sitaroN si kabhi AaJ MaiN BhI Ek AaM InsaaN sa huN Jane Kiski Bad Dua Lag Gayi Mujh-ko KyuN AaJ Kal Main PareshaN sa huN Aaj Aaya HuN Kal Chala Bhi JauNga GhaR AaYE Hua Ek MehMaaN sa huN Naa Raha Josh na hosh Hi mujh meiN Main Aaj Bikhare Hua TufaaN sa huN Bus Karta Raha Ibadat Koi kami na ki Kyun Nazar me Apni BeImaan sa huN BadalTe WaqT Ko Dekha Jo KwaHisH Aks Apna Dekh MaiN HairaaN sa huN 
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18th October 2009, 09:12 AM
Good one Khwawish, this one was very good.
Naa Raha Josh na hosh Hi mujh meiN Main Aaj Bikhare Hua TufaaN sa huN yahan par kyun chipkaayee yeh ghazal? dikhaai bhi nahin deti  किसी में शाम न मिली तो किसी में सहर नहीं |
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18th October 2009, 01:01 PM
Sameer ji...Bahut acha likha hai aapne....har ashaar taarif ke kaabil hai....  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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18th October 2009, 01:34 PM
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this is realy a very nice creation.................... aur yeh chand sher kabile tareef hai................ sameer bhai bahut khoob likha hai aapne................. |
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18th October 2009, 02:36 PM
khwaiss sahab aadaab............................................ ..........................
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apki ghazal bahut acchi thi.......... jo mujhe laga vo maine socha ki ap tak pahuchana jaruri hai.......mujhe pata hai ap meri bato ka bura nahi manenge....... apko tabadla e khayal ka poora haq hai.......... bejhijak apni baat samne rakhiyega......... ek baar phir se daad....... regards |
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18th October 2009, 02:59 PM
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Bus younhi socha ke gazal kuch khaas nahi hai isliye yahan chipka dee  Phir bhi aap logoN ne dekha ise yahan mujhe behad khushi hui... Khush raho aage bhi saath banaye rakho.. May God Bless you. Khuda Hafez..
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18th October 2009, 03:34 PM
Oye..............
"anjaan.......... Nadaan .............Insaan...." " Pareshaan' na ho...........Khud ko "mahemaan " Na samajh.... teri kalam meiN ek "tufaan" hai...... tu kahan "beimaan" hai ?? bas dekh kar teri kalam zamana thoRa 'Hairaan" hai....... mere bhai.... tum to din ba din bahot khub likhne lage ho.... Mashallah.......... aise hee likhte raho duwao ke saath tumhari dii  ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
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18th October 2009, 04:55 PM
Sameer Bhai,,
Kia baat hai janab,,,,, BOht khooobsorat kalam hai aap ki... I like it very much,, read this again and again.....very beautiful,,,,,, Keep writing bhai,, Take care,,, GOD BLESS YOU,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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Khwahish ji, Bahut khoob likha hai aapne:-) Vibhuti..... |
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19th October 2009, 09:41 PM
Kyun main har baat se anjaan sa huN
Kya main masoom sa Nadaan sa huN  masoom nadaan aur aap..?Thi meri bhi chamak sitaroN si kabhi AaJ MaiN BhI Ek AaM InsaaN sa huN hmm sahi hai ya ghalat pata nahi magar achha hai sher Jane Kiski Bad Dua Lag Gayi Mujh-ko KyuN AaJ Kal Main PareshaN sa huN meri to nahi kasam se  Aaj Aaya HuN Kal Chala Bhi JauNga GhaR AaYE Hua Ek MehMaaN sa huN har koi 2 din ka mehmaan hai sameer jee aap itna sochiye mat Naa Raha Josh na hosh Hi mujh meiN Main Aaj Bikhare Hua TufaaN sa huN tufaan bhi bikharta hai...?  Bus Karta Raha Ibadat Koi kami na ki Kyun Nazar me Apni BeImaan sa huN sochna padega ................... BadalTe WaqT Ko Dekha Jo KwaHisH Aks Apna Dekh MaiN HairaaN sa huN main bhi itni achhi ghazal padh kar Hairan hu aap ki kalam mein din ba din chaand ki chamak nazar aarahi hai God aapko har taklif se dur rakhe Youn hi mahfil ko roshan karate rahiye khus rahiye aapki dost Diya  Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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tareef -
22nd October 2009, 10:38 AM
kwahish ji
aapki ghazale read ki magar ek baat kahan chahugi aapke ghaza me theme ek hi jaisa hai mujhe aisa lagata hai ki aap kuch subjective aur diff theme par aapne nahi likha hai , aapki ghazale bahut aachi hai . magar aap vahi tak simeet ho gaye hai. saarika |
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Aapki pasandgi aur hounsla afzai se dil mutmain hua.... aapko mere likhe ashar pasand aaye... aur aapne pasandgi jatayi..... tahe dil se shukriya... Aage bhi aapka saath bana rahe yehi ummid e dua... Khush rahiye, apna saath banaye rakhiye... Apna kahayal rakhiye Khuda hafez...
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22nd October 2009, 02:33 PM
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Aur dear kaise ho...? Yaar aapki kavitaye sunaye hum to bahut bore ho gaye yeh ghise pite ahsaas likha likha ker aur padh padhker..... Aapko pasand aaye mere ahsaas achcha laga but now thats bad feeling gone cool day's came... Aate rhaiye, Khush rahiye.. Apna kahayal rakhiye Khuda hafez...
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22nd October 2009, 04:27 PM
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Khwahish sahib AAdab Aapne bahot khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai dil se daad qubool karen… sare sher aur ehsaas ache lage…………………… Lekin aapne ise ‘Aapki shayri’ main post kiya hai isliye maine ismein kuchh islaah karne ki koshish ki hai(halanki main khud bhi shayri ki field mein abhi talib-e-ilm hi hun) please bura na maniye ga…………………… Jaise har baat se anjaan sa huN haan main masoom sa Nadaan sa huN Thi sitaroN si chamak meri bhi AaJ lekin AaM InsaaN sa huN Bad Dua Kiski Lagi hai Mujh-ko Kisliye AaJ PareshaN sa huN Aaj Aaya HuN to Kal jana hai Apne hi GhaR me main MehMaaN sa huN aaj kuchh hosh nahin hai mujh ko ek Bikhare Huwe TufaaN sa huN lakh karta hun Ibadat phir bhi khud ki Nazron me BeImaan sa huN badla badla sa hai chehra ‘KhwaHisH’ Aaina Dekh ke HairaaN sa huN Duaon ke sath apka dost Fezan . . Koi Aisa Kamaal Ho Jaye Zindigi Be-Misaal Ho Jaye
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22nd October 2009, 08:27 PM
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Bhai, Bahut khoob likha hai.... likhte rahiye... Vikram jethi. Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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Aapko apni kalam per dekhker achcha laga, aapne jo tarif aur hounsla afzai ki hai uska main tahe dil se mamnoon huN...... YouN to main Ishq aur dard per hi likhata huN but mujhe aapki likhi aur sachai per likhe samajik aur logoN ko prerit karne wali tehreere bahut pasand hai maine bhi kuch aisa likha tha aapki nazar karta hun waqt mile to padh lijiyenga.... Yeh links hai.... http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthr...725#post367725 http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthr...034#post368034 aage bhi aapka saath bana rahe, yehi dua... Khush rahiye, bazam mein aate rahiye... Apna khayal rakhiye.. Khuda Hafez.......
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Aapko apni kalam per dekhker achcha laga, aapne jo tarif aur hounsla afzai ki hai uska main tahe dil se mamnoon huN...... YouN to main Ishq aur dard per hi likhata huN but mujhe aapki likhi aur sachai per likhe samajik aur logoN ko prerit karne wali tehreere bahut pasand hai maine bhi kuch aisa likha tha aapki nazar karta hun waqt mile to padh lijiyenga.... Yeh links hai.... http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthr...725#post367725 http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthr...034#post368034 aage bhi aapka saath bana rahe, yehi dua... Khush rahiye, bazam mein aate rahiye... Apna khayal rakhiye.. Khuda Hafez.......
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Aapko apni kalam per dekhker achcha laga, aapne jo tarif aur hounsla afzai ki hai uska main tahe dil se mamnoon huN...... YouN to main Ishq aur dard per hi likhata huN but mujhe aapki likhi aur sachai per likhe samajik aur logoN ko prerit karne wali tehreere bahut pasand hai maine bhi kuch aisa likha tha aapki nazar karta hun waqt mile to padh lijiyenga.... Yeh links hai.... http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthr...725#post367725 http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthr...034#post368034 aage bhi aapka saath bana rahe, yehi dua... Khush rahiye, bazam mein aate rahiye... Apna khayal rakhiye.. Khuda Hafez.......
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23rd October 2009, 03:46 PM
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dhanyawad sameer bhai....... bahut bahut shukriya aapka jo aapne muzhe is kabil samjha ............ aapki dono post parh li hai ...... dono hi jaberdast hai.......... aap ki kalam me hi jaadu hai............ aage bhi aise hi saath banaye rakhye ga........ allah hafez ............ |
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23rd October 2009, 04:44 PM
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.....Bus lo maine nayi post ki hai aise hi ahsaas ko shabdoN mein dhala hai aur isme khaasker tumhe bhi samjhna hai mera sandesh.... Hope tum meri baat samjho..... Khush raho, take care.. Bye..
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Jii main aapki baatoN se puri tarha sehmat huN..... aur aapne mujhe bataya mujhe behad khushi hui.... Jaanker, Kyunki galtiyaN chupane walon se jyada main galatiyaN baane walo ko chahata huN.... Wohi log bade dil wale hote hai jo sahiN raah dikhaye.... aur aap baqubi bade dil wale hai.... Aage bhi be jhijak apni rai se nawaziyenga, tab hi mujhe lagenga ke aap bhi mujhe utna hi chahte hai jitna main aap sabko .... Aap ka saath bana rahe yehi dua , Khush rhaiye aapna kahayal rakhiye Khuda Hafez....
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28th October 2009, 03:16 PM
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Yeh to kalam ki baat huyi......... Aapne dekha Diyaa jii ne kaise tafsira kiya hai meri gazal ka..... ........... But kalam wohi likhati hai jo dil mehsus kerta hai, jo dil chahta hai...Aapko yeh kalaam achchi lagi, aur aapne meri himmat afzai aur housla afzai ki main aapka tahe dil se mamnoon huN.... aage bhi koshish jari rahengi, aap apna saath banaye rakhiye... Khush rahiye, Apna khayal rakhiye.. Khuda Hafez... Aapka Bhai...
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28th October 2009, 03:26 PM
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Aapko yeh andaz e achcha laga, mujhe khushi huyi..... Tarif wa hounsla afzai ka bahut bahut shukriya.... Thanks for encourage me Bhai... AAge bhi saath banaye rakhiye, Khush rahiye, Apna khayal rakhiey Khuda Hafez...
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28th October 2009, 03:27 PM
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aage bhi aapka saath bana rahe yehi dua.... Khush rhaiye, apna khayal rakhiey Khuda hafez..
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28th October 2009, 04:07 PM
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Khair aapne jo tarif aur hounsla afzai ki uska tahe dil se mamnoon huN... aage bhi aapka saath bana rahe yehi dua.... Khush rahiye apna khayal rakhiye.. Khuda hafez...
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Aapne meri gazaleN padhiN jaanker khushi hui but mujhe nahi lagata ke aapne mere likhane per observation kiya hai......... Coz maine haal hi mein kai other subjective gazaleN kahi hai........ Gar aapko fursat mile to check ker lijiyenga... Here is links of some other and special subjects of mine....... These are on social and national subjective base... http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=67686 http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=67364 http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=67326 This is a prayer....... WritteN by me,,.. http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=65839 Its base is truely depend on life... Zindagii.. http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=66024 These are songs.... WrriteN By Me... http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=65814 http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=65219 http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=65620 Aab dekhe aapko kya achcha lagata hai..... And aapne apni rai kahi mujhe achcha laga but sabki soch gar milti to itne alag alag khayal wali posts aapko padhne nahi milti.. Aate rhaiye.. Khush rahiye... khuda Hafez...
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Faizan sahab AadaaB.......... Badi masarrat hui aapko apni kalam per dekhker.... Aapko gazal pasand aayi main tahe dil se mamnoon huN aapki is beshkimti rai ka... Jii aap bhale hi aapki nazar mein talib e ilm hai per humari nazar main nahi ... yeh to aapka bada pan hai ke aap khud ko talib e ilm keh rahe hai... Aapne meri gazal ko jo bher mein lane ki koshish ki hai main uska wakai dil se shukra guzar huN, Mujhe bher ka koi ilm nahi bus aap logoN se jo bhi samjhta huN use apni kalam mein istemal karne ki koshish karta huN...... Aage bhi aapka saath bana rahe to nacheez bhi kuch achcha likhne lagenga... Khush rahiye.. Khuda Hafez...
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11th November 2009, 06:24 PM
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Keep visiting....... And keep reply on posts..... which u like,,...... And also keep posting and keep in touch... Take care... Bye..
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Aur bazam mein aat Dhanyawad to sanu aapka karna haiN aapne aapka kimti waqt jo sadi khaak kalam per diya hai.... Aapne meri post ko reply ke kabil samjha yehi mere liye bahut khushi ki baat hai.... Main aapka tahe dil se shukra guzar huN.... aage v aapka saath bana rahe yehi dua hai meri.... Khush rhaiye.. Apna khayal rakhiye..e rahiye.. Khuda Hafez... Quote:
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16th November 2009, 04:45 PM
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Bhut khoob likha hai.... bas karta raha ibadat koi kami na ki, kyun nazar me apni belmaan sa hun keep writing Gam kabi fareb na denge khushi ki tarah. ........Shaan...... |
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26th November 2009, 10:00 PM
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Bade dino bad aapko yahan bazm mein dekh ker bahut khushi huyi..... Aur apni post per aapki daad wakai dil mutmain hua........ Housla afzai aur tarif ke liye main tahe dil se shukra guzar huN....... Bazm mein aate rhaiye..... Khush rhaiye... Khuda Hafez...
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27th November 2009, 05:21 AM
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this is ur best one really ........... Jane Kiski Bad Dua Lag Gayi Mujh-ko KyuN AaJ Kal Main PareshaN sa huN ultimate ..........!! Aaj Aaya HuN Kal Chala Bhi JauNga GhaR AaYE Hua Ek MehMaaN sa huN another one Thi meri bhi chamak sitaroN si kabhi AaJ MaiN BhI Ek AaM InsaaN sa huN yaar .... kya kahu ... amazing ...........!! faizaan bhayee ne jo bahar mai lane ki koshish ki hia kamaal hai tumhare khyaal aur bhi katl kar rahe hai ......... repssss ++++ |
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27th November 2009, 05:31 AM
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Bad Dua Kiski Lagi hai Mujh-ko Kisliye AaJ PareshaN sa huN aapne jo alfaaz ko chamak di hia kamaal hai loved it |
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3rd January 2010, 05:01 PM
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aapne jistarha sher pasand kiye bahut achcha laga........ aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye........ Khush rhaiye, khuda Hafez........
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5th January 2010, 01:11 PM
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MASHALLAH bohat khoob !! i love it ....
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5th January 2010, 01:13 PM
Thi sitaroN si chamak meri bhi
AaJ lekin AaM InsaaN sa huN Bad Dua Kiski Lagi hai Mujh-ko Kisliye AaJ PareshaN sa huN heart touching .... !! have no words to appreciate it !! MASHALLAH
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2nd February 2010, 08:19 PM
bahur hi khoobsurat gajal hai ji daad hajir hai
khuda baagi kahi hai,kahi baagi khuda hai. |
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