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Post उत्खन्न - 24th April 2009, 08:31 PM

उत्खन्न

खामोशी से दूर कही
अलविदा कह्ती इक परछाई कही
नयी किरन दिख रही हो जब
परिवर्तन कहलाता है यही

होती है क्रिया प्रातिक्रिया जब
मन्थन है जिसका ध्येय सही
परिणाम पूर्व नियोजित है
चिन्तन है व्यर्थ सभी

कुन्ठित होता ह्रदय फिर क्यो
नाट्य पात्र है सभी
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25th April 2009, 09:38 AM

very nice......
hindi likhni aa gayi aapko.
mubarak ho..
likhte raho likhte raho....
aapki kavita bilkul alag hai ... bahoot khooob
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ati-sundar ji ............. .........................................
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