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~*Aate hue dekhaa hai tumhe.... *~ - 15th December 2014, 01:18 PM


Aate hue dekhaa hai tumhe jab se khwaab meiN,
hone lagii hai sub'ha bahot aab-o-taab meiN.

Saaqii hame sharaab se hotaa nahii nashaa ,
ashqoN ki chaar booNd milaa de sharaab meiN.

naa pooch meri maikashii na zindagee kaa haal,
sun lenaa jab khudaa se kahuNgaa hisaab meiN.

Qaasid tujhe gale se lagaa looN ke choom looN,
do phool jo laayaa hai tuu Khat ke jawaab meiN.

tum choom lo laboN se jo kaagaz ka phool bhii,
khushboo hazaar bhar gayee naklii gulaab meiN.

haasil huaa hai Shaad hame ye hii tajrabaa,
kuch farq nahii zindagee meiN aur hubaab meiN..


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15th December 2014, 01:31 PM

Waaaaaaah...kya kahoon har sher lajwaab..

Qaasid tujhe gale se lagaa looN ke choom looN,
do phool jo laayaa hai tuu Khat ke jawaab meiN.

tum choom lo laboN se jo kaagaz ka phool bhii,
khushboo hazaar bhar gayee naklii gulaab meiN.
bahut khoob shaad ji....



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15th December 2014, 03:18 PM

Shaad bhai

Namaste

Bhai dilkash Ghazal pesh ki hai aapne...dil mein Ghar kar gaye har Sher...la jawaab amdaaz....mazaa aa gayaa..dil se daad

Khush rahiye....apnaa khayaal rakhen

Duaaon ke saath ijaazat

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16th December 2014, 12:18 AM

Shoaib bhai adaab ..

kya dil fareb ghazal hui aapki aur jate jate humein naseehat bhi de gaye..

haasil huaa hai Shaad hame ye hii tajrabaa,
kuch farq nahii zindagee meiN aur hubaab meiN..

Dheron daad dil se nikli , aap kabool karein .

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Waaaaaaah...kya kahoon har sher lajwaab..

Qaasid tujhe gale se lagaa looN ke choom looN,
do phool jo laayaa hai tuu Khat ke jawaab meiN.

tum choom lo laboN se jo kaagaz ka phool bhii,
khushboo hazaar bhar gayee naklii gulaab meiN.
bahut khoob shaad ji....
Madhu saahiba tak shaad ka aadaab pahoche.........

aapkee daad paakar yaqeen janiye behad khushi haasil ho rahii hai... jaankar behad sukoon pahochaa ke ye kalaam aap sabhi ko pasand aaya.... aapne jin aashar ko pasand kiyaa hai wo mere bhi pasandeeda hain.... ummeed karta hoon aage bhi aapka sath yuNhi milta rahegaa.....

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Waaaaaaaah Shaad Sahab Waaaaah...bahut bahut khoob!


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Aate hue dekhaa hai tumhe jab se khwaab meiN,
hone lagii hai sub'ha bahot aab-o-taab meiN.

Saaqii hame sharaab se hotaa nahii nashaa ,
ashqoN ki chaar booNd milaa de sharaab meiN.

naa pooch meri maikashii na zindagee kaa haal,
sun lenaa jab khudaa se kahuNgaa hisaab meiN.

Qaasid tujhe gale se lagaa looN ke choom looN,
do phool jo laayaa hai tuu Khat ke jawaab meiN.

tum choom lo laboN se jo kaagaz ka phool bhii,
khushboo hazaar bhar gayee naklii gulaab meiN.

haasil huaa hai Shaad hame ye hii tajrabaa,
kuch farq nahii zindagee meiN aur hubaab meiN..


ShaaD......





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Nice one Shaad.

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Saaqii hame sharaab se hotaa nahii nashaa ,
ashqoN ki chaar booNd milaa de sharaab meiN.

haasil huaa hai Shaad hame ye hii tajrabaa,
kuch farq nahii zindagee meiN aur hubaab meiN


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Shaad bhai

Namaste

Bhai dilkash Ghazal pesh ki hai aapne...dil mein Ghar kar gaye har Sher...la jawaab amdaaz....mazaa aa gayaa..dil se daad

Khush rahiye....apnaa khayaal rakhen

Duaaon ke saath ijaazat

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Dhaval bhai aadaab.............

aapki aamad aur pazeeraai dekh kar dil bahot mutmaeen huaa hai.....

bahot khushi huii ye jaankar ke aap ko ye alaam pasand aaya... accha laga apko dekhkar... aage bhi ate rahen isi intzaar me......


khush rahen salaamat rahen.....

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Aate hue dekhaa hai tumhe jab se khwaab meiN,
hone lagii hai sub'ha bahot aab-o-taab meiN.

Saaqii hame sharaab se hotaa nahii nashaa ,
ashqoN ki chaar booNd milaa de sharaab meiN.

naa pooch meri maikashii na zindagee kaa haal,
sun lenaa jab khudaa se kahuNgaa hisaab meiN.

Qaasid tujhe gale se lagaa looN ke choom looN,
do phool jo laayaa hai tuu Khat ke jawaab meiN.

tum choom lo laboN se jo kaagaz ka phool bhii,
khushboo hazaar bhar gayee naklii gulaab meiN.

haasil huaa hai Shaad hame ye hii tajrabaa,
kuch farq nahii zindagee meiN aur hubaab meiN..


ShaaD......





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Shaad bhai.........wahhh wahhhhhhh....bahut hi bemisaal likha hai...majja aa gya padkar...sabhi sher hame behad khaas lge.

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Aate hue dekhaa hai tumhe jab se khwaab meiN,
hone lagii hai sub'ha bahot aab-o-taab meiN.

Saaqii hame sharaab se hotaa nahii nashaa ,
ashqoN ki chaar booNd milaa de sharaab meiN.

naa pooch meri maikashii na zindagee kaa haal,
sun lenaa jab khudaa se kahuNgaa hisaab meiN.

Qaasid tujhe gale se lagaa looN ke choom looN,
do phool jo laayaa hai tuu Khat ke jawaab meiN.

tum choom lo laboN se jo kaagaz ka phool bhii,
khushboo hazaar bhar gayee naklii gulaab meiN.

haasil huaa hai Shaad hame ye hii tajrabaa,
kuch farq nahii zindagee meiN aur hubaab meiN..


ShaaD......





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21st December 2014, 12:25 PM

Bohot bohot bohot khoob...
Waaaaaaaaaaaaah....
Kya likha hai..

Quasid tuzhe gale ae laga loon ya choom loon...bohot badhiya ahsaas...

Behad umda peshkash ke liye beshumar daad

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tum choom lo laboN se jo kaagaz ka phool bhii,
khushboo hazaar bhar gayee naklii gulaab meiN



haasil huaa hai Shaad hame ye hii tajurbaa,
kuch farq nahii zindagee meiN aur hubaab meiN.


Kya khoob kaha hai Shaad saahab.. Bohot umdaa... Nacheez ki dil se daad qubool farmaayein. Duaa hai ki aap aur achha likh kar mehfil ko rounaq bakhshte rahein.

Aapka khair khwah

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haasil huaa hai Shaad hame ye hii
tajrabaa,
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hubaab meiN..

wah shaad saheb.. is raat ke andere or sannate m aapki shayri padh k dil ek alag hi jageh ko pahuch gaya.. ehsaaso m itni garmi ki is sard raat m bhi dil ko ek ajab hi sukun mila..


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aye haye haye, haye!

Shaad miyaaN.....laanat hai mujh badsalook ki ziNdagi par jo "aisi" tez'dhaar Ghazal par itni de'r se haaziri de raha hooN....la'haul'wilaa'quwat! khuda ki qasam!!!

mazrat ka takaaza karna bhi be'adabii hogi isliye aap hi par choRey deta hooN, reham.


chacha Ghalib ki zameen meiN kya Ghazal kahi hai bhai, qurbaan jauuN aapke, yooN mehsuus hove hai goya meri zabaaN ko aapki qalam ne aawaaz di hai, bohat khoob


dheroN daad aur mubarakbaad "Tikaa" lijiye miyaaN, ba-sad-mazrat


jeete rahiye

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Shoaib bhai adaab ..

kya dil fareb ghazal hui aapki aur jate jate humein naseehat bhi de gaye..

haasil huaa hai Shaad hame ye hii tajrabaa,
kuch farq nahii zindagee meiN aur hubaab meiN..

Dheron daad dil se nikli , aap kabool karein .

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haasil huaa hai Shaad hame ye hii tajrabaa,
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pyar aur duaoN ke saath
aapki duaaon ka hamesha se hi muntazir rahta hoon bahnaa............

aapka yoon bazm me aana aur apne pyaare alfaazon se hame nihaal kar jaanaa merii khushkismatii hai........ bahot bahot sara shukriyaa aapko....

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Behad Umdaa bhai..har sher khud par sawa ser hai

yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa

Mast bhai aadaab....................

aapne yyoon dil ki baat kah di ke baat seedhe dil tak pahochii hai......

aapki ek ek baat se sacchaai tapak rahii hai, beshaq waqt to amgeen hai lekin sukhan hi wo zariyaa hai jissse shaayar aur sunne waale apne ghamon par bandish daalte hain..... meri koshish isme kaamyab huii agar aa[pko aisaa lagaa to beshaq ye mere liye bahot badee misaal hai.......

aapki daad aur pazeeraai sar aankhon par mere bhai......... aate rahiyegaa.. khush rahiye...

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Kya likha hai..

Quasid tuzhe gale ae laga loon ya choom loon...bohot badhiya ahsaas...

Behad umda peshkash ke liye beshumar daad

Aapka apna
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aapki daad aur duaaen sar maate pe Bhushan saahab.........

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haasil huaa hai Shaad hame ye hii tajurbaa,
kuch farq nahii zindagee meiN aur hubaab meiN.


Kya khoob kaha hai Shaad saahab.. Bohot umdaa... Nacheez ki dil se daad qubool farmaayein. Duaa hai ki aap aur achha likh kar mehfil ko rounaq bakhshte rahein.

Aapka khair khwah

SAGAR AASHNA


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haasil huaa hai Shaad hame ye hii
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hubaab meiN..

wah shaad saheb.. is raat ke andere or sannate m aapki shayri padh k dil ek alag hi jageh ko pahuch gaya.. ehsaaso m itni garmi ki is sard raat m bhi dil ko ek ajab hi sukun mila..
Masha Allah janaab.... aapki daad ka andaaz bhi khoob rahta hai......
dil mutmaeenii kii hadd se bhi aage pahoch gay ahai meraa.... aapka pyaar aur khuloos hi merii ghazlon ka haasil hai.... aap tashreef laaye meri khushnaseebii hai.... aage bhi aate rahiyegaa

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Saaqii hame sharaab se hotaa nahii
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waah shoiab Bai....kya khoob likha hai.....har sher jaise kamaal hai....maza aa gaya pad ke.....



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aye haye haye, haye!

Shaad miyaaN.....laanat hai mujh badsalook ki ziNdagi par jo "aisi" tez'dhaar Ghazal par itni de'r se haaziri de raha hooN....la'haul'wilaa'quwat! khuda ki qasam!!!

mazrat ka takaaza karna bhi be'adabii hogi isliye aap hi par choRey deta hooN, reham.


chacha Ghalib ki zameen meiN kya Ghazal kahi hai bhai, qurbaan jauuN aapke, yooN mehsuus hove hai goya meri zabaaN ko aapki qalam ne aawaaz di hai, bohat khoob


dheroN daad aur mubarakbaad "Tikaa" lijiye miyaaN, ba-sad-mazrat


jeete rahiye

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Maikash bhai tak Shaad ka aadaab pahoche.... behad sharmindgee ke saath aapke saamne haanth jode khadaa hoon bhai jo nacheeez ko aap muaaf farmaa deN..... na jaane kis pecho kham me maroof hokar merii nazron se chook ho gayee jo bade bhaai ki muhabbat ko na dekh sakaa.... aapke khat me khuloos ko jo khushbooo mujhe mahsoos ho rahii hai usko kaaghaz kalam se bayaan nahii kiyaa jaa saktaa hai mere bhaiii......

aapne in khaak lafzon ko jis andaaz se chuaa hai wo motee se nazar aa rahe hain ab mujhe..... behad shukrguzaar hoon jo aapne apna waqt mujh haqeer par zaayaa kiyaa..... aapki muhabbaton se mamnoon o mashkoor hoon mere bhaai..... aahge bhi aapki aamad ka intzaar rahegaa.....

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behad shukriyaa ..... bahot abhot khushi huii aapko bazm me dekh kar....
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waah shoiab Bai....kya khoob likha hai.....har sher jaise kamaal hai....maza aa gaya pad ke.....
Aru bhai........... kaise hain aap

bhai muaafiii chahunga jo itni deri se jawab de raha hoon... na jane kaisenazroon se chook ho gayee thii.... behad shukrguzaar hoon aapki pazeeraai pasandeeedgii par bhai.... duaaon me yaad rakhiyegaa... aate rahiyegaa

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Qaasid tujhe gale se lagaa looN ke choom looN,
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waaah .. waaah .. Shaad bhai..

kia kehny..... bohat umdah ghazal huii hy..

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Sarrika jii aadaab......... samajh nahi aa raha hai ke aapko kaise shukriyaa kahun... kaise aapka ehsaa utaaroon jo daad ki tokree aapne mere sar pe rakh dii hai.... aapki inaayat aur beintehaan khuloos ne mujhe mamnoon kar rakkhaa hai..... bas jo kuch kar paungaa to dher saariiii duaaen denaa chaahunga ke aap khush rahen salaamat rahen... aur hame bhi apni duaaon me shareeq rakhiiyegaa......

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Wah
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Waaaaaaaaah
WaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaAah....................

Maar hi daaloge!

Bhai ab tak apko jitna padaa hai un sab Mein se yeh mera personal favourite ban Gaya hai.

Aise likhoge to javed akhatar aur gulzar sahab kahanjayenge?

Sarrika jii aadaab......... samajh nahi aa raha hai ke aapko kaise shukriyaa kahun... kaise aapka ehsaa utaaroon jo daad ki tokree aapne mere sar pe rakh dii hai.... aapki inaayat aur beintehaan khuloos ne mujhe mamnoon kar rakkhaa hai..... bas jo kuch kar paungaa to dher saariiii duaaen denaa chaahunga ke aap khush rahen salaamat rahen... aur hame bhi apni duaaon me shareeq rakhiiyegaa......

aatii rahiyegaa......

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Qaasid tujhe gale se lagaa looN ke choom looN,
do phool jo laayaa hai tuu Khat ke jawaab meiN.


waaah .. waaah .. Shaad bhai..

kia kehny..... bohat umdah ghazal huii hy..

teh-e-dil se beshumaar daad haazir hy!

behad masararat ka sabab hai hassan bhai arse baad aapko apni bazm me maujood dekh kar..... ummeed karta hoon ab aapko saath khadaa hi paaunga hameshaa......

ab aate hain ghazal par .. to bhai ye peshkahs yoon haseen nahi thii jaisa ake aapni haseen nazron ne ise khoobsurtee ataa kii hai..... merii duaaen hain aape saath ke aap sada khush rahen.. aate rahiyegaa

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kya baat hai shaad ji
bemisaal peshkash
bahut sunder

baho bahot shukriyaa aapka Nakul G (jee)

aate rahiyegaa... aur apna khayaal rakhiye... shukriyaa

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