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Phir din guzar gayaa , phir say raat hoo gayee
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Phir din guzar gayaa , phir say raat hoo gayee - 21st May 2003, 08:28 PM

Phir din guzar gayaa , phir say raat hoo gayee
kyakiya kuch yad nahi,umar palon me kho gayee

thak gayee is jism ka boojh sehtay -sehtay mai
mera soona baaki hai, khismat to jake so gayee

zeba likhti rahegi..............
   
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aur hum sunte rahenge
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aur hum sunte rahenge - 21st May 2003, 09:03 PM

zeba likhti rahegi.......


Aur hum sunte rahenge .


I hope u won't mind, kyon eik asche dost kee tarah humen to sunnna hee parega naa


vaise aapne ascha likha. aur likhega aur post keejiyage hum zaroor parenge chahe woh kitna bhi bore kyon naa ho ....lol

just kidding don't mind okay


With Best wishes

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22nd May 2003, 12:03 AM

zeba
mujhe khushi hai keh aap ke kalam mein khayal ki bareeki aati jaa rahi hai.
yehi baat samajhne ki hai, keh aam si baat to aam se andaz mein keh di jaati hai, magar pur asar baat aap shaiyr mein is andaaz mein kahen keh kam se kam lafz hon aur uska asar ziayda se ziada ho.
aap ki yeh poetry aisi hi hai.
isi tarah likhti rahen, ham zaroor parehn ge.
God bless you.
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22nd May 2003, 03:32 PM

namaste..zeba..

bahut accha likha hai apne..bahut kam lafzon mein ..bahut kuch keah dia apne..

aise hi likhte rahiye ..

bye and take care..


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