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Mujhe Hosh Nahin - 19th August 2003, 12:19 PM

Ye alag baat hai saaqi ke mujhe hosh nahin
Hosh itna hai ki main tujh se faraamosh nahin

Main teri mast nigaahon ka bharam rakh loonga
Hosh aaya bhi to kah doongaa mujhe hosh nahin

Yaad itana hai ki pahuncha maikhaane tak
Kya kahoon aage ki age ka mujhe hosh nahin

Kabhi un mad_bhari aankhon se piya tha ik jaam
Aaj tak hosh nahin hosh nahin hosh nahin



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Re: Mujhe Hosh Nahin - 9th September 2003, 05:10 PM

Haffez bhai

ye bhi kalaam aapka nahiN hai.
KyuuN aisa kar rahe haiN aap.
Is waq mujhe iske shayar ka naam yaad nahiiN aa raha lekin iske ashhar aaj se 15-18 saal pehle se hum janab Ghulam Ali shab se sunte rahe haiN.

Better stop this practice please.

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Ye alag baat hai saaqi ke mujhe hosh nahin
Hosh itna hai ki main tujh se faraamosh nahin

Main teri mast nigaahon ka bharam rakh loonga
Hosh aaya bhi to kah doongaa mujhe hosh nahin

Yaad itana hai ki pahuncha maikhaane tak
Kya kahoon aage ki age ka mujhe hosh nahin

Kabhi un mad_bhari aankhon se piya tha ik jaam
Aaj tak hosh nahin hosh nahin hosh nahin



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10th September 2003, 08:22 AM

parveen dost,
pata nahi dost........ yah kya ho raha hai.... aaj kal.....
log naam ke liyae ....waah ke liyae...... kyun itna galat kaam kiyae ja rahe hai?
   
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10th September 2003, 12:09 PM

Meena ji,

Agar aap ye samajhte hain ke meine ye sab naam aur waah ke liye kiya hai to mein itna batadooon aap ko ke aap galat sonchrahen hain. waise bhi agar aap mere posts mein dekhe to hardly kisi ne feed back diya hai.

i don't know what to say but the way u pple are pointing me out is not good i don't think i should send any of my posts after this. this is what u pple want right.



this is u'r site u enjoy.........

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10th September 2003, 12:19 PM

hafeezji,
muje tumse koi shikwa nahi, par galtiao se taklif hai.. parveen dost ne har wakt aapko samjaya hai... aur kya kar sakte hai?....... ek baar apne khud ke ahesaas post kar ke dekho..... aur fir tum khud jaan jaaogae ke oose sarahne ke liyae kitne saare dost hai yaha par...
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10th September 2003, 12:24 PM

Meenaji,

Shukriya aap ka.
lekin ab mujhe nahin lagta ke mein aisa ker paaaonga.
bas agaya tha aur jitna zaleel hona tha usse zyaada hogiya.
waise mein phir kahoonga ke meine ye kabhi nahin kaha ke ye mere kalaam hain. meri collection mein jo the wo meine pesh kiya.
khair jo bhi ho.

ab waqt agaya hai ke mein is site se hi chala jaaaoon.
shukriya aap ka aur sab ka.


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10th September 2003, 12:32 PM

Meenaji, Praveen sahab aur sab log jo mere khilaaf hain.


Doston mera ek post jo 24th july ko bheja tha use padhiye wahan meine kaha tha saaf saaf ke ye sab mera kalaam nahin hain.

post ka naam tha is ghazal se bachiye.


ab ijazat chahoonga. aap log khush rahen.


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10th September 2003, 12:43 PM

Hafeez ji..

Adaab!

Maaf kariyega gar aapko lage ki hum aapke maamle me dakhalandaazi kar rahein hain... lekin ye site aur iske log humare pariwaar jaise hain.. isi liye iske baare me jo kuchh aapko ghalatfehmiyan hain, use duur karna hum apna farz samajhte hain. Bura mat maniyega...

Agar aapne is site ko sahi se paRa hai, to aapne dekha hoga ki aaj kal kaii aise log hain jo doosron ki shayri apne naam se post karte hain.. ye hum shayron ke liye bohat baRi baat hai.. isi liye yahan ke moderators ne is chori ke silsile ko khatm karne ki puuri koshish ki hai.. to bohat hadh tak kaamyaab bhi rahe hain.

Jab aapne apne collection me se ghazals post ki, to yahan ka rule hai ki jab kisi ki ghazal post karo, to shayar ka naam saath post karo.. Chaliye, ho sakta hai ki aapko ye baat pata na ho.. lekin jab logon ne in ashaar ko aapka maan kar aapki wah wah ki, tab aapka farz banta tha ki aap unki ye ghalatfehmi duur karein.. hai na?

Aapke aisa na karne par, zaahir hai, sab ke dil me shaq to paida hoga hi.. Isme unka kasoor to nahi.. Khair, jo bhi ho.. agar ye sab ek bohat baRi ghalatfehmi thi, to ab saaf ho gayi hai. Bas, ab aage se aap jab bhi kisi ki ghazal post karein, usme shayar ka naam bhi likh dein aur aise ashaar aap 'Shayri'e 'ustaad' ya 'shayri e mashhoor' me post karein, kyonki ye do forums khaas jaane maane ashaar post karne ke liye hi banaaye gaye hain. Aap humesha hi bohat achhe ashaar pesh karte hain, jinse is mehfil me raunak aa sakti hai. Umeed hai ki aap bura na maan kar ye silsila jaari rakhenge.

Ek baar phir, gar humari kisi baat ka bura laga ho to maaf kar dijiyega...

Umeed hai ki aapse mulaqaat hoti rahegi....


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Smile Don't get stuck Hafeez - 10th September 2003, 01:01 PM

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Aap shayad nahiN jaante ke mehfil bohat purKhuluus logoN ki hai. YahaN log jazbaat ko bohat ahmiyat ete haiN. Agar aap sochte haiN ke aapke muffi talab kar lene baad bhi yahaN log aapko mohabbat nahiN dnege tau aap ghalat samjh rahe haiN.

Chaliye aapne maan ke ye kalaam aapke nahiN haiN.Pehle to aapko ye bhi manzuur nahiiN tha. Mujhe aap sirf ye bata deN ke ADEEM HASHMI KI GHAZAL meN maqte meN aapne adeem ki jagah apna naam kyuuN daala hua hai? Agar aapko dusre shayroN ke kalam yahaN share karne ki itni Khahish hai tau uske liye aik alg forum hai jahaN aap unke kalaam baqaidah unke naam dekar post kar sakte haiN. Aur yaqeen maaniye ke wahaN bhi log aapko share karne ke liye shukriya zaruur kaheNge. Isliye dost ghaltee maan lene se ghaltee bhi khatm ho jaati hai.
Agar aap apne collection ki baar karte haiN tau phir kitni hi jagah aapka naam maqte maujuud nahiiN hona chahiye. And this is not right.

Aap agar Khuluus ke saath yahaN aayeN aapka Khairmaqdam hai, aap is tarah ghalatee kar ke hamko hi ghalat bata kar jaayeN tau ye bhi aapki marzii hai. ITNA JAAN LIJIYE YAHAN KOII KISI KE KHILAAF NAHIN HAI. LEKIN GHALAT BAAT KE KHILAAF HUM SABHI HAIN.

Mere Khayal se ye kaafi rahega.

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10th September 2003, 01:10 PM

hafeez ji,
ji sahi kaha parveen dost ne.......
maie oonke sathh barabar hu......
koi pariwaar nahi cahta k kisi ko door kare par buraaiyo ko to door karna sabka farz hai yaha...
   
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14th September 2003, 04:23 AM

hafeez bhai

Aap shayad samajhte honge kitna dard, badhawasi ki haalat me ek behtareen kalam likha jata hei

Barbaad dard ke janib to bas toote hue taare hein
kar dena na unhein ruswa, jaan hamare hein

Kehna na unhein apna ae hafeez bahut pyare hein
ye mere sher nahi, na hi gazal, zazbaat hamare hein


koi aapke khilaaf nahin hei hafeez bhai.

Banno jee meena jee praveen jee, is family me aap jese log hein. i m sure ye family bahut pyar se chalegi.

HAFEEZ BHAI ZARA GAUR KAREIN AAINDA


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...... - 14th September 2003, 04:45 AM

wahh sala hafeez tu to mujhse bhi aage nikal gaya... mei abhi kisi website se chori ke ilzaam me laat khake aa raha hun. tu to bahut great hei. apni galti bhi nai manta.

Kaash pehle mila hota mujhe mei bhi kuch seekh leta tujhse...
   
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