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Post phir shaam dhali phir raat hui - 10th October 2004, 12:07 PM

matlaa :-

phir shaam dhali phir raat hui
phir yaad mujhe voh aayeNge
yeh khwaab adhuure se mujhko
phir saari raat jagaayeNge

matlaa-e-saani :-

yeh baadal kaale-kaale se
zulfoN ki yaad dilaayeNge
yeh aaNsuu teri judaa'i ke
phir palkeiN meri jalaayeNge

jo zakhm diye tumne humko
seene meiN sajaa kar rakhe haiN
ye phuul haiN meri chaahat ke
dil ka aaNgan mehkaayeNge

sau baar kaha dil ko humne
kuch hadd hai paagalpan ki bhi
ab jaane waalon ka aakhir
hum kab taq sog manaayeNge

chup-chup se baithe haiN tanha
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lagta hai aaj miyaaN-"maikash"
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maikash


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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

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10th October 2004, 12:19 PM

MaikasH saahab,

Aadaab!

phir shaam dhali phir raat hui
phir yaad mujhe voh aayeNge
yeh khwaab adhuure se mujhko
phir saari raat jagaayeNge


Koyi lafz hi nahi hai taareef ke liye...

chup-chup se baithe haiN tanha
chehre pe udaasi chhayi hai
lagta hai aaj miyaaN-"maikash"
phir kaaGhaz-qalam uthaayeNge


Jitni behtariin matla hai.. utni hi behtar matkaa..

Bahoot hi pyaaraa aur dilkash qalam aap ne pesh kiya hai.. Padh kar bahoot khushi huyi.. Yun hi is mehfil ko huemsha apne sheroN ki roshni se roshan rakhiye...

Hame behad behad pasand aaya aap ka yah qalam.. Taareef qabul kijiye...



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Re: phir shaam dhali phir raat hui - 10th October 2004, 01:27 PM

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matlaa :-

phir shaam dhali phir raat hui
phir yaad mujhe voh aayeNge
yeh khwaab adhuure se mujhko
phir saari raat jagaayeNge

matlaa-e-saani :-

yeh baadal kaale-kaale se
zulfoN ki yaad dilaayeNge
yeh aaNsuu teri judaa'i ke
phir palkeiN meri jalaayeNge

jo zakhm diye tumne humko
seene meiN sajaa kar rakhe haiN
ye phuul haiN meri chaahat ke
dil ka aaNgan mehkaayeNge

sau baar kaha dil ko humne
kuch hadd hai paagalpan ki bhi
ab jaane waalon ka aakhir
hum kab taq sog manaayeNge

chup-chup se baithe haiN tanha
chehre pe udaasi chhayi hai
lagta hai aaj miyaaN-"maikash"
phir kaaGhaz-qalam uthaayeNge


maikash
Maikash ji...

dil ko choo gaya aapka ye kalaam...alfaaz nahin hai mere paas aapki tareef mein..behad umda...

bahut hi ache se byan kiya hai aapne..sach..meri daad kabool kijiyega..

sau baar kaha dil ko humne
kuch hadd hai paagalpan ki bhi
ab jaane waalon ka aakhir
hum kab taq sog manaayeNge

...bahut khoob! bahut khoob!


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12th October 2004, 09:53 PM

mayank saahab

aapko do-ek baNd pasaNd aaye.....daad da behadd shukriya miyaaN

chahta to yahi huN ke gaahe-ba-gaahe aate rahuN lekin haalaat hi kuch aise haiN ke waqt nahiiN milta....aa'iiNda har mumkin koshish karuNga ke doston se dua-salaam hoti rahe

maikash


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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

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12th October 2004, 10:08 PM

Maikash Sir..

aap ne iss baar kafi dino ke baad haazri di hain is mehfil mein.. janaab dil ko choo lete ho har baarr yeh baat to tayy hai.. aap ki tasveer mubaarak dekhi aur kuch qurbat mehsoos huee..

chup-chup se baithe haiN tanha
chehre pe udaasi chhayi hai
lagta hai aaj miyaaN-"maikash"
phir kaaGhaz-qalam uthaayeNge


bohot ki khoobsurat...likhte rahiye.. Dua go..


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12th October 2004, 11:11 PM

Ustad Ji...

Bahut dino baad aapne is mehfil ko yaad kiya....aur har baar ki tarah phir dil ko chuu liya

Yeh alfaaz yakeen maaniye dil mein ghar kar gaye...

sau baar kaha dil ko humne
kuch hadd hai paagalpan ki bhi
ab jaane waalon ka aakhir
hum kab taq sog manaayeNge


Bahut Khoobsurat..asardaar

Yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa

-aapka apnaa



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12th October 2004, 11:13 PM

chup-chup se baithe haiN tanha
chehre pe udaasi chhayi hai
lagta hai aaj miyaaN-"maikash"
phir kaaGhaz-qalam uthaayeNge


Kya khoob likha hai aisa laga ki hum akele nahi is safar me.

Likhne ke liye shukria.
Aise hi likhte rahiye.


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13th October 2004, 01:35 AM

hello maikash ji,
aapko padhne ka mauka mughe pehli baar mila , aur sach kahu to aapki nazm dil ko chu gayi . ishq ki tanhai ko kitni bakhubi aapne kagaj per utara hai .

puri nazm hi ek kahani ki tarah chalti rahi aankho mai per yeh sher mughr bahut achhe lage .


sau baar kaha dil ko humne
kuch hadd hai paagalpan ki bhi
ab jaane waalon ka aakhir
hum kab taq sog manaayeNge

chup-chup se baithe haiN tanha
chehre pe udaasi chhayi hai
lagta hai aaj miyaaN-"maikash"
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keep writing


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13th October 2004, 11:50 AM

Maikash janaab ko udas ka pehla pehla adaab !!

aapka kalaam pehli baar para...aur sach me aapne pyar aur tanhai ko jo sacche lafzo ka jaama pehnaaya...kabile tareef hai...ham aapki is shayri ki duniya ke dhundle se nacheez sitare hai...aur tahe dil se daad dete hua guzarish karenge ki aap u hi aa aa ker is mehfil ko roshan karte rahiye jo ham jaise unper log gazel k kayde kanoon samajh sake...

bas aur kya kahe aapke kalaam ki roshni k aage hmare saare alfaaz dhundle hai...
chale ab izazet de...

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Re: phir shaam dhali phir raat hui - 13th October 2004, 11:54 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by maikasH
matlaa :-

phir shaam dhali phir raat hui
phir yaad mujhe voh aayeNge
yeh khwaab adhuure se mujhko
phir saari raat jagaayeNge

matlaa-e-saani :-

yeh baadal kaale-kaale se
zulfoN ki yaad dilaayeNge
yeh aaNsuu teri judaa'i ke
phir palkeiN meri jalaayeNge

jo zakhm diye tumne humko
seene meiN sajaa kar rakhe haiN
ye phuul haiN meri chaahat ke
dil ka aaNgan mehkaayeNge

sau baar kaha dil ko humne
kuch hadd hai paagalpan ki bhi
ab jaane waalon ka aakhir
hum kab taq sog manaayeNge

chup-chup se baithe haiN tanha
chehre pe udaasi chhayi hai
lagta hai aaj miyaaN-"maikash"
phir kaaGhaz-qalam uthaayeNge


maikash
maikash ji..

aapne ye kalam "aapki shayri main bhi post kiya ... maine wahan reply kiya... aapne ise yahan post kiya to yahan bhi reply kar raha hun...same waisa hi jaisa waha kiya

bhai maikash....

bohat hi umda kalam pesh kiya hai aapne ... dard ko ek anuthe dhang se dard ko bayan kiya hai... poori nazm hi umda hai kiski tareef karoo.. par ye aashar dil chu gaye ...

yeh baadal kaale-kaale se
zulfoN ki yaad dilaayeNge
yeh aaNsuu teri judaa'i ke
phir palkeiN meri jalaayeNge

aapki baton pe bas ek hi bat yaad aati hai...

jadoo nahi koi ye haqeeqat hai...
mare hue hum jinda nazar aate hai
tere se door bhi hai hum pas ho kar..
roye bagair angar bahate hai...

tareef kabool kare

khaksar

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adaab! - 24th January 2005, 03:11 PM

Maikash ji..apka kalam pehli baar padha...aur padh ke laga..arre ye meine pehel kyu nahi pada... sach..bahott achha laga padke!..apke naye creation ka itezaar rahega.

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bohat khoobsurat ghazal hai yeh maikash saheb ki.

meri aap se istidaa hai ke is forum per aate raha karein maikash saheb

khush rahein jahan bhi aap hain.

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matlaa :-

phir shaam dhali phir raat hui
phir yaad mujhe voh aayeNge
yeh khwaab adhuure se mujhko
phir saari raat jagaayeNge

matlaa-e-saani :-

yeh baadal kaale-kaale se
zulfoN ki yaad dilaayeNge
yeh aaNsuu teri judaa'i ke
phir palkeiN meri jalaayeNge

jo zakhm diye tumne humko
seene meiN sajaa kar rakhe haiN
ye phuul haiN meri chaahat ke
dil ka aaNgan mehkaayeNge

sau baar kaha dil ko humne
kuch hadd hai paagalpan ki bhi
ab jaane waalon ka aakhir
hum kab taq sog manaayeNge

chup-chup se baithe haiN tanha
chehre pe udaasi chhayi hai
lagta hai aaj miyaaN-"maikash"
phir kaaGhaz-qalam uthaayeNge


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