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bichade kinare - 3rd November 2004, 08:34 PM

unko yado main lana chod diya hai
is pal main jina sikh liya hai
shikayat ka daman chod diya hai
har pal ghut ghut ke marna chod diya hai
chahat ke piche daudna chod diya hai
man ki udan ko piche chod diya hai
ab aane wala kal hi batlayega raah mujhe
ab sach ke daman se nata jod liya hai
ek bhuli raah ke hamsafar hai hum
taqdeer ke mare do bichade kinare hai hum


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4th November 2004, 09:55 AM

mita dost

tum ne ek talkh haqiqat ko apne fasih andaaz mein bayaan kiya to hai, mager meri khuahish aur dua hai ke aisa na ho. aur mujhe lagta bhi aisa nahi hai.

"NA JANE KYUN MUJHE YEH LAG RAHA HAI JAISE JHOOT HAI"

Meri dua hai ke aap hamesha khush aur muskuraati rahein.
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4th November 2004, 10:46 AM

Hi Meeta Ji,

Uff itni mayoosi!!! Pure kalaam se dard laraz raha hai. Behud pasand aaya aapka likhne ka andaaz chu ke bohot hat ke likha hai aapne or ek mayoos insaan ke jazbaat bakhubi apne kalaam mein zahir kiye hai.

Ab daad de to bhi kaise kyu ke kisi ke gham pe wah karna to bilkul gunaah hai???


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thanks - 4th November 2004, 12:18 PM

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thanks - 4th November 2004, 12:21 PM

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mita dost

tum ne ek talkh haqiqat ko apne fasih andaaz mein bayaan kiya to hai, mager meri khuahish aur dua hai ke aisa na ho. aur mujhe lagta bhi aisa nahi hai.

"NA JANE KYUN MUJHE YEH LAG RAHA HAI JAISE JHOOT HAI"

Meri dua hai ke aap hamesha khush aur muskuraati rahein.
Zindigi ki tamaam khushiyaan aap ko haasil hoan aur voh sab bhi jis ki aap ko chah hai.

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APKI DUA HAMESHA SE MERE SAATH HAI PAR YE SACH HAI JO MAINE LIKHA HAI..


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THANKS - 4th November 2004, 12:23 PM

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Hi Meeta Ji,

Uff itni mayoosi!!! Pure kalaam se dard laraz raha hai. Behud pasand aaya aapka likhne ka andaaz chu ke bohot hat ke likha hai aapne or ek mayoos insaan ke jazbaat bakhubi apne kalaam mein zahir kiye hai.

Ab daad de to bhi kaise kyu ke kisi ke gham pe wah karna to bilkul gunaah hai???
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Re: thanks - 4th November 2004, 12:39 PM

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muje yah samaj nahi aayi baat...... ab ke cafe maie milte hai tab jara yah samjana ke yah sach se tum kaise waakif hui.......

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Re: bichade kinare - 4th November 2004, 12:39 PM

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unko yado main lana chod diya hai
is pal main jina sikh liya hai
shikayat ka daman chod diya hai
har pal ghut ghut ke marna chod diya hai
chahat ke piche daudna chod diya hai
man ki udan ko piche chod diya hai
ab aane wala kal hi batlayega raah mujhe
ab sach ke daman se nata jod liya hai
ek bhuli raah ke hamsafar hai hum
taqdeer ke mare do bichade kinare hai hum
meeta ji ....

kya kahun aapke is kalam pe mujhe apna hi likha ek kalam yaad aa gaya ... time mile to jaoroor padiyega ... link de raha hun ... aapne bohat hi umda likha isme koi shak nahi ... umeed hai yun hi aati rahengi....

MUSHKIL tha.....

aapka apna

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meta - 4th November 2004, 07:58 PM

hi meeta

wat a thaught yaar , nice written.....

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Re: meta - 4th November 2004, 08:27 PM

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hi meeta

wat a thaught yaar , nice written.....

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Thanks a lot tarun, bas aise hi jawab dete rehna,


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