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daaman pe cheetin saja hi jaate hain….. - 28th April 2005, 02:10 PM

Mere aziz doston.....

aaj mann kutch is bazm se ukhad sa gaya hai.....shayad apne aap se hi......

ek ilzaam phir is sar chad gaya....... kisi gair ka to koi gum nahi.....lekin jab apne hi na samjhein to kya karen.....

phir se kalam ke zariye apna dard nikalne ki koshsih ki....ki mann shaant ho jaaye.......lekin shayad ye aakhri koshish hogi.......bus aur kutch nahi kehna chahta......

jo kutch bhi likha.......apki nazar kar raha hoon.......


chahe koshish hazaar karo bachane ki…..
daaman pe cheetin saja hi jaate hain…..

sunte nahi, naa hi samjhte hain kya hua……
baat apni sab samjha hi jaate hain…..

kisi sanam ki arzoo nahi rahi lekin…..
phir bhi ye ilzaam laga hi jaate hain…..

raha main door sabse, apni hi dhun mein…..
duniya waale kafan chada hi jaate hain…..

kaise bachega tu bhi is.se ^AMAN^…..
kaandhe pe bhi kutch suna hi jaate hain…..

chahe koshish hazaar karo bachane ki…..
daaman pe cheetin saja hi jaate hain…..



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28th April 2005, 02:20 PM

Hi Aman praji,

Acha likha hai...

ek gaana yaad aa gaya hai.... Shimul pura likh paayegi...

Logon ka kaam hai kehna....unhe kehne do...


Vaise Apne kuch kehte hain....kyonki woh aapko apna samjhte hain....
Naseeb walein hain sirjee aap...jo koi kehne wala to hai...

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hi!! - 28th April 2005, 04:49 PM

22 gud aman ji!
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Re: daaman pe cheetin saja hi jaate hain….. - 28th April 2005, 05:52 PM

Achha laga...likhte rahiye

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28th April 2005, 06:29 PM

aman ji as writing i wud say i loved reading it. but if its becoz u r hurted n wrote to aman ji today i wud love to say plz aapne sab gam meri jholi mein daal dijiye aur khus rahiye. yu aapko toot te hue nahi dekha jata. rohin ne jis gaane ke bol suggest kiye they , i wud try to write those lines as its one of my fav nos.

kuch to log kahenge,logon ka kaam hai kehna
choro bekaar ki baaton mein kahin beet na jaye raina
kuch to log...................

1) kuch reet jagat ki aisi hai,har ek subhah ki shaam hui
tu kaun hai tera naam hai kya,seeta bhi yahan badnaam hui
phir kyo sansaar ki baaton se bheeg gaye tere naina
kuch to log.......................................

2)humko jo aane dete hai hum khoye hai in rangraliyon mein
hum ne unko bhi chup chup ke,aate dekha in galiyon mein
yeh sach hai jhooti baat nahi,tum bolo yeh sach hai na!
kuch to log kahenge........................................... .....

aman ji a humble request, itna bhi mat dard ki gehraayi mein kho jao ki nikalna chaho to bhi nikle na pao. gv all ur sorrows to me, i wud love to accept it , but plz u keep smiling. sach mein do teen dino se mehsoos kiya ki aap bahut udaas ho. we all are with u aman ji. take care n keep smiling n may god bless u with his finest glitters.



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ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

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Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

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Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

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Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
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29th April 2005, 11:54 AM

aman dost

mein is waqt aap ki ghazal per comment naheen karoon gaa.
mager aap ne jo is bazm se jaane ki baat ki hai, is per baat karoon gaa.
aap jaise achchay aur ba-ikhlaaq shakhs ka is forum se jaana munasib naheen hai.
yahan is forum per her tarah ke loag hain bohat se aaye aur rukhsat ho gaey.
mager dost yeh forum dar-asl jaga hai hassaas logoan ki, dard-mand dil rakhne wale logon ki.
aap ko mein ne bohat baa-ikhlaaq aur ba-murrawwat paya hai hamesha.

aap se darkhuaast karoon gaa, is forum se ne jaayein, yahan dil dukhane wale hain to dilon ko jorne wale bhi hain, aap apna tualluq dil joarne walon se rakhein, torne wale khud hi chup ho jaayein ge,

aap meri izzat karte hain us hawale se bhi aap se kahoon gaa, ke mushkilon aur haalaat ki be-mayigi se pareshan na hoan, balke datey rahein , khare rahein, Insha Allah aap kaamiyaab honge.
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29th April 2005, 12:00 PM

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aman dost

mein is waqt aap ki ghazal per comment naheen karoon gaa.
mager aap ne jo is bazm se jaane ki baat ki hai, is per baat karoon gaa.
aap jaise achchay aur ba-ikhlaaq shakhs ka is forum se jaana munasib naheen hai.
yahan is forum per her tarah ke loag hain bohat se aaye aur rukhsat ho gaey.
mager dost yeh forum dar-asl jaga hai hassaas logoan ki, dard-mand dil rakhne wale logon ki.
aap ko mein ne bohat baa-ikhlaaq aur ba-murrawwat paya hai hamesha.

aap se darkhuaast karoon gaa, is forum se ne jaayein, yahan dil dukhane wale hain to dilon ko jorne wale bhi hain, aap apna tualluq dil joarne walon se rakhein, torne wale khud hi chup ho jaayein ge,

aap meri izzat karte hain us hawale se bhi aap se kahoon gaa, ke mushkilon aur haalaat ki be-mayigi se pareshan na hoan, balke datey rahein , khare rahein, Insha Allah aap kaamiyaab honge.
Voh ustaad ne kyaa khoob kaha hai
"TUNDI E BAAD E MUKHALIF SE NA GHABRA EY UQAAB"
"YEH TO CHALTI HAI TUJHE OONCHA URAANE KE LIYE"

Ejazat chahoon ga is apne pan ke saath ke aap is forum se kaheen naheen jaa rahe hain , yaheen rahein ge, aur apni shayri, apne khayalaat, apni khushiyaan apne ghem ham se share karte rahein ge.

God bless you.

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yeh ilzaam ek galatfahmi ki vajah se ho gaya tha......aur us waqt dil ko bahut dukh hua......

kal raat sabse baat ki......aur aaj subah bhi.....

aapka reply pada.......aapki aur is bazm ki bahut izzat karta hoon.....

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apnon ka itna pyar hai....ki chah kar bhi juda nahi ho sakta.......

dilon ka ye rishta yunhi bana rahega.....aur aainda ye galti nahi dohraoonga......

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Re: daaman pe cheetin saja hi jaate hain….. - 29th April 2005, 08:44 PM

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Mere aziz doston.....

aaj mann kutch is bazm se ukhad sa gaya hai.....shayad apne aap se hi......

ek ilzaam phir is sar chad gaya....... kisi gair ka to koi gum nahi.....lekin jab apne hi na samjhein to kya karen.....

phir se kalam ke zariye apna dard nikalne ki koshsih ki....ki mann shaant ho jaaye.......lekin shayad ye aakhri koshish hogi.......bus aur kutch nahi kehna chahta......

jo kutch bhi likha.......apki nazar kar raha hoon.......


chahe koshish hazaar karo bachane ki…..
daaman pe cheetin saja hi jaate hain…..

sunte nahi, naa hi samjhte hain kya hua……
baat apni sab samjha hi jaate hain…..

kisi sanam ki arzoo nahi rahi lekin…..
phir bhi ye ilzaam laga hi jaate hain…..

raha main door sabse, apni hi dhun mein…..
duniya waale kafan chada hi jaate hain…..

kaise bachega tu bhi is.se ^AMAN^…..
kaandhe pe bhi kutch suna hi jaate hain…..

chahe koshish hazaar karo bachane ki…..
daaman pe cheetin saja hi jaate hain…..
hi aman,

kaise hai...
kaisa raha.......

well.. mujhe samajh mein nahi aata mein aap logo se kya kahu....

aap log shayad ab great great shayaro ke list mein aa gaye hia...

this is a superb composition.....

too good

i liked these line tooooooooooooo much...

kaise bachega tu bhi is.se ^AMAN^…..
kaandhe pe bhi kutch suna hi jaate hain…..

chahe koshish hazaar karo bachane ki…..
daaman pe cheetin saja hi jaate hain…..


well ab sirf yeh hi kehna chahungi...

khali shishe bhi nishaan rakhte hai...
tute hue dil bhi armaan rakhte hai....
jo khamoshi se guzar jaye.....
woh dariya bhi dil mein toofan rakhte hai......

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kya hua? bhai aapka man is bazam se kyun ukhda hua hain..kisisne kuch kaha kya???agar kaha to bata dijeye....uski khair nahin.........kunal ke badle usko daat dete hain..heeee ...haso bhai...
mujhe laga pichle hafte accha accha likh rahe the firse kya ho gaya???abhi to bombay mein halla gulla karke aaye itni jaldi aise kalam firse shuru kar diye...........

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Hi Aman praji,

Acha likha hai...

ek gaana yaad aa gaya hai.... Shimul pura likh paayegi...

Logon ka kaam hai kehna....unhe kehne do...


Vaise Apne kuch kehte hain....kyonki woh aapko apna samjhte hain....
Naseeb walein hain sirjee aap...jo koi kehne wala to hai...

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tum bhi to apne hi ho......aur us roz tumse baat karke aacha laga.....

Hausla afzai ke liye shukriya mere bhai.....Lekin Shimul kahan gayi.....



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Re: Re: daaman pe cheetin saja hi jaate hain….. - 2nd May 2005, 03:13 PM

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Achha laga...likhte rahiye

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ye bhi aacha jawab tha....shukriya......

aapka dost.......



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aman ji as writing i wud say i loved reading it. but if its becoz u r hurted n wrote to aman ji today i wud love to say plz aapne sab gam meri jholi mein daal dijiye aur khus rahiye. yu aapko toot te hue nahi dekha jata. rohin ne jis gaane ke bol suggest kiye they , i wud try to write those lines as its one of my fav nos.

kuch to log kahenge,logon ka kaam hai kehna
choro bekaar ki baaton mein kahin beet na jaye raina
kuch to log...................

1) kuch reet jagat ki aisi hai,har ek subhah ki shaam hui
tu kaun hai tera naam hai kya,seeta bhi yahan badnaam hui
phir kyo sansaar ki baaton se bheeg gaye tere naina
kuch to log.......................................

2)humko jo aane dete hai hum khoye hai in rangraliyon mein
hum ne unko bhi chup chup ke,aate dekha in galiyon mein
yeh sach hai jhooti baat nahi,tum bolo yeh sach hai na!
kuch to log kahenge........................................... .....

aman ji a humble request, itna bhi mat dard ki gehraayi mein kho jao ki nikalna chaho to bhi nikle na pao. gv all ur sorrows to me, i wud love to accept it , but plz u keep smiling. sach mein do teen dino se mehsoos kiya ki aap bahut udaas ho. we all are with u aman ji. take care n keep smiling n may god bless u with his finest glitters.
Jas....

tumne sahi mehsoos kiya....kutch dinon se achanak ye dard phir bad gaya.....kutch poorani yaaden......haseen pal.....vo maut ka lamha......

aur apno ko gum nahi diya karte...balki unke gum baant.Te hain.....

Saath se to lamba safar bhi haseen lagta hai....


is geet ne phir se umang jagai hai.....

shukriya Jas.....



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ab kya kahoo? itna udaas .. apna nahi to kam se kam apani behan ka hi khayaal rakha karo..

aapki behan
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kutch dion baad ye gum bhi halka ho jaata hai.....

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Re: hi! - 2nd May 2005, 03:23 PM

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aapka shukrgujaar hoon...isi liya aapko message bhi kiya tha....

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4th May 2005, 05:12 AM

Arre mere Aman praji...

kya choti baton mein aa gaye...aap tau paras ke bhai hain na...humdard, humnafas...aur itne achhe shayar...bindaas banke jiyo praaji...no need to take into account something that is negative for you...bus apni dhun mein badhte chalo...dard aur khushiyaan dono share karo...ab tak tau dekho itne chahne waalon ke beech sab gham ghul gaya hoga...hai na?

you are not going anywhere...at least yahan aansoo paunchne wale bhi tau baithe hain...take care

your hi bye behna


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4th May 2005, 08:15 AM

Hi Aman,

Well, likha to bahut acha par acha nahi hai yar woh gana suna hai na logon ko kehne do logon ka kam hai kehna...pls Aman yar thoda sudhar jao. ab...log thode na ate hain hamara gu batne jo hum unki kahi baton ko dil se lagalein...

Log kehte hain to unhe kehne do,
kyon unki baaton ko bura mante ho,
kab ate hain woh hamare gum batne
kab hoti hai unhe fikar hamari

so bas ab aisa nahi sochoge...just think if God have made those people who irritaes you he has also given you people who cares for you so much...think positively and see everything will seem to be alright... just see the positive aspect of this that the people who back bitch you , u get aware from them and then you get away from those people and ofcourse people related to them,.... u get to know their tru self so dont worry be happy........................
Take Care

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Hi dear..... - 4th May 2005, 09:35 AM

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hi aman,

kaise hai...
kaisa raha.......

well.. mujhe samajh mein nahi aata mein aap logo se kya kahu....

aap log shayad ab great great shayaro ke list mein aa gaye hia...

this is a superb composition.....

too good

i liked these line tooooooooooooo much...

kaise bachega tu bhi is.se ^AMAN^…..
kaandhe pe bhi kutch suna hi jaate hain…..

chahe koshish hazaar karo bachane ki…..
daaman pe cheetin saja hi jaate hain…..


well ab sirf yeh hi kehna chahungi...

khali shishe bhi nishaan rakhte hai...
tute hue dil bhi armaan rakhte hai....
jo khamoshi se guzar jaye.....
woh dariya bhi dil mein toofan rakhte hai......

bye bye.....
Priyanka....

Kaisi ho......

kpi bada nahi....sab ek dost...parivaar ki tarah hain.....isi saath ka to ye asar hai ki is bazm se itna lagaav hai......

khali shishe bhi nishaan rakhte hai...
tute hue dil bhi armaan rakhte hai....
jo khamoshi se guzar jaye.....
woh dariya bhi dil mein toofan rakhte hai......



bahut khoob......ek sabak de raha hai ye sher.....

shukriya......



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kya hua? bhai aapka man is bazam se kyun ukhda hua hain..kisisne kuch kaha kya???agar kaha to bata dijeye....uski khair nahin.........kunal ke badle usko daat dete hain..heeee ...haso bhai...
mujhe laga pichle hafte accha accha likh rahe the firse kya ho gaya???abhi to bombay mein halla gulla karke aaye itni jaldi aise kalam firse shuru kar diye...........

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nahi tum kunal ko hi daanto...mujhe aacha lagta hai......kutch aisa ho gaya tha...ki achanak bahut bura laga.....lekin mere bhai mujhe bahut pyar karte hain.......

mujhe hi thande dimaag se sochna tha.....aur iska hal dhoondna tha....jo ki baad mein kiya......

kisi ne kutch nahi kaha hai.....sabko pata hai ki meri behan mausam hai......to mujhse koi kyun uljhega......

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4th May 2005, 09:45 AM

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ye mera pyara mast maula haathi itne gusse mein kyun hai bhai.....

tumare sale sahab.....



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Parul......

i can understand what you want to say......

Thanks dear.....



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Re: Hi dear..... - 5th May 2005, 08:47 PM

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Priyanka....

Kaisi ho......

kpi bada nahi....sab ek dost...parivaar ki tarah hain.....isi saath ka to ye asar hai ki is bazm se itna lagaav hai......

khali shishe bhi nishaan rakhte hai...
tute hue dil bhi armaan rakhte hai....
jo khamoshi se guzar jaye.....
woh dariya bhi dil mein toofan rakhte hai......



bahut khoob......ek sabak de raha hai ye sher.....

shukriya......
aman....

mein achi hun tum kaise ho......
sahi mein ab hum sab ek pariwaar ke tarah hi lagte hai....

well tumhe yeh sher pasand aaya is liye shukriya.....


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Arre mere Aman praji...

kya choti baton mein aa gaye...aap tau paras ke bhai hain na...humdard, humnafas...aur itne achhe shayar...bindaas banke jiyo praaji...no need to take into account something that is negative for you...bus apni dhun mein badhte chalo...dard aur khushiyaan dono share karo...ab tak tau dekho itne chahne waalon ke beech sab gham ghul gaya hoga...hai na?

you are not going anywhere...at least yahan aansoo paunchne wale bhi tau baithe hain...take care

your hi bye behna
Meri Behna.....Paras.....SSA.....

banda yeh bindaas hai.......tumhare saath baat karke bahut aacha lagta hai.....

ek pyari si awaaz.....khilkhilaati hui hansi......
lekin vo photo to bheji hi nahi abhi tak......avtaar vaali.....

thuvada veer....



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Hi Aman,

Well, likha to bahut acha par acha nahi hai yar woh gana suna hai na logon ko kehne do logon ka kam hai kehna...pls Aman yar thoda sudhar jao. ab...log thode na ate hain hamara gu batne jo hum unki kahi baton ko dil se lagalein...

Log kehte hain to unhe kehne do,
kyon unki baaton ko bura mante ho,
kab ate hain woh hamare gum batne
kab hoti hai unhe fikar hamari

so bas ab aisa nahi sochoge...just think if God have made those people who irritaes you he has also given you people who cares for you so much...think positively and see everything will seem to be alright... just see the positive aspect of this that the people who back bitch you , u get aware from them and then you get away from those people and ofcourse people related to them,.... u get to know their tru self so dont worry be happy........................
Take Care

Regards Nidhi
Dear Tannu.....

Thanks.....ye kabhi isi tarah tha.....lekin waqt ke saath fitrat bhi badalti chali gayi.......

lekin kab tak......

once again thanks dear.....

take care......



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Re: Re: Hi dear..... - 6th May 2005, 10:10 AM

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aman....

mein achi hun tum kaise ho......
sahi mein ab hum sab ek pariwaar ke tarah hi lagte hai....

well tumhe yeh sher pasand aaya is liye shukriya.....


take care...

luv,
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Priyanka.....

.............

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