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Post tumhara naam.... - 21st December 2005, 07:09 PM

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baat rakhi dil mein, baat keh na sake
yaad kya aap ko to saans le na sake
pucha kisi ne dil se ki tue pyaar kis se kya,
jaante they phir bhi tumhara naam le na sake...

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21st December 2005, 07:28 PM

baat rakhi dil mein, baat keh na sake
yaad kya aap ko to saans le na sake
pucha kisi ne dil se ki tue pyaar kis se kya,
jaante they phir bhi tumhara naam le na sake...


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21st December 2005, 07:30 PM

nice one ..

it happens with everyone, but the way you have put is just too good. please care to share.


Dil ke armaan jaag uthe;
chehra jo tera dikh gaya; (please concentrate on chehra)

so again......

Dil ke armaan jaag uthe;
chehra jo tera dikh gaya;
Dil ke armaan khatm ho gaye;
chehra jo tera dikh gaya;


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