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Kalaam.... - 1st June 2001, 10:52 PM

Puri azaadi hai yaha, ek aisa zindaan hai yeh.
Khush phir bhi woh nehi, kaisa gulam hai yeh.

Kehta hai koi bad-akhtar, koi deta hai bad-duah,
be-zar bole koi, kuch aisa bad-naam hai yeh.

Waqt-e-ruskat na thi daulat, na shohrat, na izzat.
Bikhri yadein samet kar gaya woh, kaisa sar-o-samaan hai yeh.

Bharte the jis ki mahobbat ka dam,
poochte hai woh aaj zamaane se, kiska kalaam hai yeh.....

[zindaan = prison ]
[bad-akhtar= unfortunate]
[be-zar= poor]
[sar-o-samaan = necesseties]
[kalaam = composition]


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3rd November 2004, 04:53 PM

hi neelo....

bahut khoob likha hai....

"Bharte the jis ki mahobbat ka dam,
poochte hai woh aaj zamaane se, kiska kalaam hai yeh....."

apni taraf se kutch pesh kar raha hoon...

dua to maangi bahut marne ki usne.....
jinda hoon main aaj bhi, jaane kiski bud- dua hai yeh.....


pasand na bhi aaye to jawab dena......



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4th November 2004, 01:21 PM

Pasand kyo nehi ayega Aman ji

Ur lines are much better than mine... Keep writing

Bad-duah se apna hi ek sher yaad agaya. Wohi likh rahi ho.
Ummid hai tuannu pasand ayega :


Afsaana-e-dil sunake akhein nam nehi hoti
dhadkanein sametne se mahobbat kam nehi hoti

Lagi hogi kissi bezaar ki bad-duah...
fakat kismat hi apni dushman nehi hoti


Sochne wali baat hai na..... take care


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Re: Kalaam.... - 4th November 2004, 01:39 PM

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Puri azaadi hai yaha, ek aisa zindaan hai yeh.
Khush phir bhi woh nehi, kaisa gulam hai yeh.

Kehta hai koi bad-akhtar, koi deta hai bad-duah,
be-zar bole koi, kuch aisa bad-naam hai yeh.

Waqt-e-ruskat na thi daulat, na shohrat, na izzat.
Bikhri yadein samet kar gaya woh, kaisa sar-o-samaan hai yeh.

Bharte the jis ki mahobbat ka dam,
poochte hai woh aaj zamaane se, kiska kalaam hai yeh.....

[zindaan = prison ]
[bad-akhtar= unfortunate]
[be-zar= poor]
[sar-o-samaan = necesseties]
[kalaam = composition]
neelo ji ...

bohat khoob likha hai aapne ... main kya likhun ... aman bhai ne to poori kaynat likh di hai .., par aadat se majboor hai char lino ke sath vida

rukhsati main log ansoo bahate nahi
meri aankhon main bhi sailab aate nahi
koi armaan jalane main der na ki kisi ne
chita main wo aaj aag kyun lagate nahi


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4th November 2004, 05:03 PM

Hello Neelo Ji,


bahut hi changa sher likhya hai.....
Hoor kugtch kehan nu baaki na rehya saade kol....

Kunal bhai bhi apni aadat se majboor hain... lekin jo bhi likhte hain ... apne aap me lajawab hota hai....

Take care.....



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Thanx to all of u


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