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.... hum bahut roye - 23rd June 2006, 09:44 PM

salaam doston,
bahut dino baad phir haazir hun apne kalaam ke saath,umeed hai aap sab ko pasand aayega.
paish-e-khidmat hai,

ek naadaani karke hum bahut roye,
haan,teri arzoo karke hum bahut roye,

kya kya sapne sajaye they pyar ke,
unhe choor hota dekh hum bahut roye,

jo maanga humne woh na mila kabhi,
apne muqaddar pe yaaron hum bahut roye,

yaad aate ho shab-o-roz hamain,
tumhe yaad karke hum bahut roye,

ujadgaya aashiyana yeh pyar ka,
apni bebasi par hardum hum bahut roye.


aap sab ke jawaab ki muntazir,
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nazuk - 23rd June 2006, 10:34 PM

bahut nazuk sa khoobsoorta sa khayal hai wah
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24th June 2006, 05:08 PM

wah wah bhut acha kalaam hai........khuda karay app yu hee likhti raho......


moti say bhee keemti hotay tere aansu,
jo mere daman main girtay tere aansu.....

sard mausam ki barish ki tapti boondon say,
'veer' ko jalnay say hai bachtay tere aansu......


un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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24th June 2006, 07:20 PM

shukriya anil ji,
hamesha ki tarah aap meri post par aaye aur meri shayri pasand ki.
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24th June 2006, 07:23 PM

veerji,
aap meri post par aaye aur meri shayri ko sarahaa ,bahut khushi hui mujhe.yunhi aate rahiye .
aapne bhi bahut acha likha khaas karke pehla sher


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Re: .... hum bahut roye - 26th June 2006, 02:19 PM

ujadgaya aashiyana yeh pyar ka,
apni bebasi par hardum hum bahut roye.


akelijaan ji
sabse pehle to yeh kahunga aapka naam bahoot pyara aur masoom hai....padh kar aisa lagta hai jaise is jaalim dunia ke beech ek masoom sehmi si bachi..!!!
aur dusri baat yeh kahunga ki isi masoomiyat se aapne apni gazal bhi kahi hai....MERI DAAD kubool kijiye
-MANOJ


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26th June 2006, 06:30 PM

manoj ji,
aapko meri post per dekh kar to mai khushi se phoole nai samari,i m very happy ke aap jaise umda shayar ne meri shayri pasand ki shukriya aapka.umeed hai aage bhi aap yunhin meri post per aayenge.
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26th June 2006, 09:15 PM

Hello Sweetie...

Rona nahin....roney se kuch nahin milta.....bahut khoobsurat rachna hay....cheer up...pehle baar tumhe parha....acha likha hay tumney...keep writing...agli baar kushi se bhari rachna likhna main zaruur aaongi tumhey parhne...

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26th June 2006, 09:54 PM

shukriya sukanya ji meri post par aane ka aur meri hauslaafzaai karne ka.mai zaroor koshish karungi ek khushi bhari rachna likhne ki.
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