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phir aaj ye dhaaga kuch saada hi hai!!
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phir aaj ye dhaaga kuch saada hi hai!! - 5th September 2006, 10:20 AM

phir aaj humse koi yun rooth gaya,
phir aaj koi naata yun toot gaya!!!!!
phir hui hai kuch yaadein taazi taazi,
wo bachpan ki sham, wo patangbaji!!
us roj bhi dhaaga kuch saada hi tha,
phir aaj ye dhaaga kuch saada hi hai!!

Is dor mein kyon na milavat hi kar du,
Rishte-naato ki jabani sajavat hi kar du!!
dikhave ki dunaiya, ye dikhave ke log,
dhundhla hi dekhenge, najhron ka rog!!!!!
na badla jo khud ko to tanha rahunga,
jo badla! khudi se hi badla mein lunga!!!!!
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5th September 2006, 10:27 AM

hi dheer
wah kya bat hai yaar bahot hi badhiy a likha hai aapne aaj
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achha laga padke aapki ye peshkas

aise hi likhte rehna mere dost

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5th September 2006, 08:18 PM

Is dor mein kyon na milavat hi kar du,
Rishte-naato ki jabani sajavat hi kar du!!
dikhave ki dunaiya, ye dikhave ke log,
dhundhla hi dekhenge, najhron ka rog!!!!!
na badla jo khud ko to tanha rahunga,
jo badla! khudi se hi badla mein lunga!!!!!

dheer ji,
acha likha aapne,bahut sahi.upar ke diye ashaar pasand aaye.likhte rahiye.


yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi??

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aap dono ka tahe dil se shukriya
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