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" YE " dhaval" KAHI TOOT NA JAYE....." a shayri for her... ek dard bhari dastaa - 12th September 2006, 11:01 AM

izhar kiya tha kal jisne mujhse
uska jawab kahi inkaar me na badal jaye...........

jindagi kal khusi k sang ji rahi thi
wo aaj dard bhari dastaan na ban jaye...............

deti thi kal jo sath mera har pal
wo kahi sath chhodne ki duhai na de jaye..........

sawari thi isne kal meri jindagi
kahi aaj uski waje se zindagi bikhar na jaye...........

likha karta tha aj tak shayri-e-ishq me,
kal se har peshkas shayri-e-dard me na aa jaye..........

kisi k aane se muskura raha tha ye "dhaval"
ab uske jane se kahi "dhaval" toot na jaye...............



ye "dhaval" kahi toot na jaye..................



A SHAYRI FOR HER............................................... ........


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Re: " YE " dhaval" KAHI TOOT NA JAYE....." a shayri for her... ek dard bhari da - 12th September 2006, 11:14 AM

[QUOTE]Originally posted by dhavalrami4you
[B]izhar kiya tha kal jisne mujhse
uska jawab kahi inkaar me na badal jaye...........

jindagi kal khusi k sang ji rahi thi
wo aaj dard bhari dastaan na ban jaye...............

deti thi kal jo sath mera har pal
wo kahi sath chhodne ki duhai na de jaye..........

sawari thi isne kal meri jindagi
kahi aaj uski waje se zindagi bikhar na jaye...........

likha karta tha aj tak shayri-e-ishq me,
kal se har peshkas shayri-e-dard me na aa jaye..........

kisi k aane se muskura raha tha ye "dhaval"
ab uske jane se kahi "dhaval" toot na jaye...............



hi dear
are yaar mujhe aaj batao ye ho kya raha hai is shayri e ishq main ye dard bhari dastane kahan se aa gayi...... udhar pooja dard bhari dastan kah rahi hai..... or uske kalam ke baad tumne bhi dard bhara kalam likh dala..... kya hai ye esi kya baat ho gayi ki tum dono dard main doob rahe hooo...

yaar tum basinde ho mohhabd ki duniya ke...... jinke ghar hamesha pyar ki khuboo se mahkate hai.n ye dard bagerah tum hamare jaise be murad logo le liye rahne do yaar.......................
khuda kare tumhari jindgi main kabhi koi dard na aaye or hamesha payr bahre kalam likhte raho........... samjhe

chalo ab muskurao



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12th September 2006, 12:49 PM

DILIP

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kaanto k sath gul bekhumar khilenge
ishq hota hai jahan waha gum jarur milenge

i think aisa hi likha hai

KISI KO KISI KA JAWAB HAI YE PESHKAS
KHUSI ME BHI DARD KA EHSAS HAI YE PESHKAS

AGAR WO NAHI TO TO KUCH BHI NAHI..........


BAS DIL NE SOCHA AUR LIKH DIYA MAIN AISA HI KARTA HU JO DIL SOCHTA HAI BAS USE HI LIKHTA HU

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Re: " YE " dhaval" KAHI TOOT NA JAYE....." a shayri for her... ek dard bhari da - 12th September 2006, 01:13 PM

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Originally posted by dhavalrami4you
izhar kiya tha kal jisne mujhse
uska jawab kahi inkaar me na badal jaye...........

jindagi kal khusi k sang ji rahi thi
wo aaj dard bhari dastaan na ban jaye...............

deti thi kal jo sath mera har pal
wo kahi sath chhodne ki duhai na de jaye..........

sawari thi isne kal meri jindagi
kahi aaj uski waje se zindagi bikhar na jaye...........

likha karta tha aj tak shayri-e-ishq me,
kal se har peshkas shayri-e-dard me na aa jaye..........

kisi k aane se muskura raha tha ye "dhaval"
ab uske jane se kahi "dhaval" toot na jaye...............



ye "dhaval" kahi toot na jaye..................



A SHAYRI FOR HER............................................... ........
hi dhaval ji,

apke bahot hi achha likha hai sirf read karne ki baat kaha rahi hu.

lekin aapko apni mahobbat par ikhtiyar hona chaahiye.
mahobbat to ret ka bana ghar hota hai jiski deevare yakeen pe teeki hoti hai gar yakeen hi na hoto ghar to gir hi jayega na.

bass teri hi kami thi tohammat lagane me meri chaahat par,
varna teri yaadon ke aanso to hume rusva kar hi denge...

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12th September 2006, 01:18 PM

shukriya pooja ji

aapnebhi meri tarha ,meri post pe aane ka kimti waqt mese waqtnikala

bahot bahot shukriya ada karna chahta hu pehle to aapka

aur aap ne sach hi kaha hai

yakeen hi hai jisse pyaar tikta hai



bahot achha kaha aapne pasand aaya hame

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Re: " YE " dhaval" KAHI TOOT NA JAYE....." a shayri for her... ek dard bhari da - 12th September 2006, 01:53 PM

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Originally posted by dhavalrami4you
izhar kiya tha kal jisne mujhse
uska jawab kahi inkaar me na badal jaye...........

jindagi kal khusi k sang ji rahi thi
wo aaj dard bhari dastaan na ban jaye...............

deti thi kal jo sath mera har pal
wo kahi sath chhodne ki duhai na de jaye..........

sawari thi isne kal meri jindagi
kahi aaj uski waje se zindagi bikhar na jaye...........

likha karta tha aj tak shayri-e-ishq me,
kal se har peshkas shayri-e-dard me na aa jaye..........

kisi k aane se muskura raha tha ye "dhaval"
ab uske jane se kahi "dhaval" toot na jaye...............



ye "dhaval" kahi toot na jaye..................



A SHAYRI FOR HER............................................... ........
great feeling dhaval ji... aapki soch bahut pyari lagi.. aur ek mahboob ke der sajeev chitran prastut kerne ke liye aapko badhayi..you hi aqpane jajbaato ko shabdo ki bhasha dete rahiye...( technical slight variation hai)..

shubhkamnao sahit,

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izhar kiya tha kal jisne mujhse
uska jawab kahi inkaar me na badal jaye...........

jindagi kal khusi k sang ji rahi thi
wo aaj dard bhari dastaan na ban jaye...............

deti thi kal jo sath mera har pal
wo kahi sath chhodne ki duhai na de jaye..........

sawari thi isne kal meri jindagi
kahi aaj uski waje se zindagi bikhar na jaye...........

likha karta tha aj tak shayri-e-ishq me,
kal se har peshkas shayri-e-dard me na aa jaye..........

kisi k aane se muskura raha tha ye "dhaval"
ab uske jane se kahi "dhaval" toot na jaye...............


ye "dhaval" kahi toot na jaye..................



A SHAYRI FOR HER............................................... ........
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great feeling dhaval ji... aapki soch bahut pyari lagi.. aur ek mahboob ke der sajeev chitran prastut kerne ke liye aapko badhayi..you hi aqpane jajbaato ko shabdo ki bhasha dete rahiye...( technical slight variation hai)..

shubhkamnao sahit,

Akant...


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KAISE HO AKANT JI

aap meri is post pe aaye aapka bhot bhot shukriya jannab

aapne meri is peshkas ko dil se padha aur pasand bhi kiya bahot hi achha laga mujhe
main age aur bhi achha likhne ki koshis karunga
bas aap jaise dosto ka sath chahiye

uhi aate rahiyega

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13th September 2006, 12:11 PM

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Dhaval ji apki dhayri bahut achi hain. Its rockin
aap yahan har baar aati hai lekin abhi tak mujhe ye nahi pata ki aap hai kon???

kon ho ji aap??????

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hi - 13th September 2006, 12:15 PM

izhar kiya tha kal jisne mujhse
uska jawab kahi inkaar me na badal jaye...........

jindagi kal khusi k sang ji rahi thi
wo aaj dard bhari dastaan na ban jaye...............

deti thi kal jo sath mera har pal
wo kahi sath chhodne ki duhai na de jaye..........

sawari thi isne kal meri jindagi
kahi aaj uski waje se zindagi bikhar na jaye...........

likha karta tha aj tak shayri-e-ishq me,
kal se har peshkas shayri-e-dard me na aa jaye..........

kisi k aane se muskura raha tha ye "dhaval"
ab uske jane se kahi "dhaval" toot na jaye...............

dhaval bhut acha likgha hai ab lafzon par teri pakar or mazboot ho chali hai.....ab zara tum kafuye ka dhiyaan rakha karo......nice try.....keep writing kabhi likhna mat chhorna......hum appke saath hai.......take care.......raj......


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13th September 2006, 12:32 PM

Dhaval ji apki dhayri bahut achi hain. Its rockin


hi karina kaisi ho aap?

aapko meri har peshkas achhi lagti hai mere liye bahot khusui ki baat hai ummid karta hu k aap ko meri har peshkas yuhi pasand aaye


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dhaval bhut acha likgha hai ab lafzon par teri pakar or mazboot ho chali hai.....ab zara tum kafuye ka dhiyaan rakha karo......nice try.....keep writing kabhi likhna mat chhorna......hum appke saath hai.......take care.......raj......



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sab se pehle tou aapne mere ehsaasoN ko pasaNd kiyaa usske liye maiN aapka be-Had ShuKraGuzaar huuN... beeteN kal meiN maiN ab jaanaa nahiiN chaahtaa bhaa'ii.. Khair aapne baat poochh hi liN hai to jahaaN tak baat ki aapne muHabbat pe mere yakiiN kii uske baare meiN maiN kuch kahuuNgaa nahiiN .. par haaN itnaa zaruur kahuuNgaa ki apni kismat pe ab bharosaa nahiiN rahaa mujhe..

aur aapne jahaaN tak baat ki hai viShwaas kii ,, viShwaas se muHabbat mazbut bantii hai bilkul saHeeH haii.. maiN bhee maantaa huuN viShwaas bahot zaruuree hai muHabbat meiN .. aap yahaaN aayeN mujhe bahot hi KhuShii hu'ii! yuuNhi paRhte rahiyeNgaa aage bhee!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

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Dard se bhari tumhari ye rachna dil ko choo gayi,..

Nahi jaanti kyun dard hai, aur kis baat ka darr mere pyare bhai ko, phir bhi dua karungi, jo bhi dard hai woh jald hi khushi me badal jaaye...

Apna khayal rakho!

Aur sada muskuraate raho... aansoo ache nahi lagte tumhare paas!

Chalo jaldi se apne yellow teeth waali.. colgate smile de do mujhe

Take Care..

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Dard se bhari tumhari ye rachna dil ko choo gayi,..

Nahi jaanti kyun dard hai, aur kis baat ka darr mere pyare bhai ko, phir bhi dua karungi, jo bhi dard hai woh jald hi khushi me badal jaaye...

Apna khayal rakho!

Aur sada muskuraate raho... aansoo ache nahi lagte tumhare paas!

Chalo jaldi se apne yellow teeth waali.. colgate smile de do mujhe

Take Care..

~Priya
Priya didi:

namaste!

kaise hai.n aap? arre didi ziNdagee meN filhaal to ko'ii Ghum nahiiN ! sab Happy Happy haii.. aapne merii koShiSh ko pasaNd kiiyaa bahot KhuShi huii!

arre arre yellow teeth waali smile to aapki hai didi.. bhool gayeN fir se aap koii baat nahiiN hotaa he .. maiN apni safed daaNtoN waali Smile diKhaata huuN yeh rahii. ---->>

Hmm.. aap bhee KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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izhar kiya tha kal jisne mujhse
uska jawab kahi inkaar me na badal jaye...........

jindagi kal khusi k sang ji rahi thi
wo aaj dard bhari dastaan na ban jaye...............

deti thi kal jo sath mera har pal
wo kahi sath chhodne ki duhai na de jaye..........

sawari thi isne kal meri jindagi
kahi aaj uski waje se zindagi bikhar na jaye...........

likha karta tha aj tak shayri-e-ishq me,
kal se har peshkas shayri-e-dard me na aa jaye..........

kisi k aane se muskura raha tha ye "dhaval"
ab uske jane se kahi "dhaval" toot na jaye...............




ye "dhaval" kahi toot na jaye..................



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Hmmm...! Dard bhare in ehsaason ko parha humne aur daad diye bina reh na sake...!

Waise ek zamaana tha jab hum bhi sirf Shayri e ishq forum main hi likha karte the...! Waqt ke pahiye kab kiss ko kiss mor le jaaye, kisse pataa...!

Younhi likhte rahein, Dhaval Ji...! Aashirvaad ke saath

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Danny bhaiya:

pranaam!

aapko merii kavviSh par deKh kar haMeShaa mujhe KhuShi hotee haii.! yuuNhi aath dete raheN aage bhee!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat


jai shree kriShnaa..!

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izhar kiya tha kal jisne mujhse
uska jawab kahi inkaar me na badal jaye...........

jindagi kal khusi k sang ji rahi thi
wo aaj dard bhari dastaan na ban jaye...............

deti thi kal jo sath mera har pal
wo kahi sath chhodne ki duhai na de jaye..........

sawari thi isne kal meri jindagi
kahi aaj uski waje se zindagi bikhar na jaye...........

likha karta tha aj tak shayri-e-ishq me,
kal se har peshkas shayri-e-dard me na aa jaye..........

kisi k aane se muskura raha tha ye "dhaval"
ab uske jane se kahi "dhaval" toot na jaye...............



ye "dhaval" kahi toot na jaye..................



A SHAYRI FOR HER............................................... ........
Dhaval bhai,

Kaise haiN aap?
Bahut khoob ehsaas haiN aapke....

Neeche wala sheyr dilke kuch zyada kareeb laga...

likha karta tha aj tak shayri-e-ishq me,
kal se har peshkas shayri-e-dard me na aa jaye..........

Likhte rahiye.....

Vikram


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Dhaval jii,

Kaise hain aap?

aacha hua meine date dekh li jab aapne ghazal post ki ..kya likhtii pata nahii..

ghazal behaat pasand aayii... jab koi pyaar mein hota hai ..kabhie na kabhie yeh darr zarror aata hai ...

LikHTEY rahye .. hamesha khush rahye ... bhagwaan aapko dheer saari khushiyaan dean ...

aapna khayal rakhiye ,,,,

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izhar kiya tha kal jisne mujhse
uska jawab kahi inkaar me na badal jaye...........

jindagi kal khusi k sang ji rahi thi
wo aaj dard bhari dastaan na ban jaye...............

deti thi kal jo sath mera har pal
wo kahi sath chhodne ki duhai na de jaye..........

sawari thi isne kal meri jindagi
kahi aaj uski waje se zindagi bikhar na jaye...........

likha karta tha aj tak shayri-e-ishq me,
kal se har peshkas shayri-e-dard me na aa jaye..........

kisi k aane se muskura raha tha ye "dhaval"
ab uske jane se kahi "dhaval" toot na jaye...............



ye "dhaval" kahi toot na jaye..................



A SHAYRI FOR HER............................................... ........
Are bhayee ishq kiya hai to fir dar kyun rahe ho .....................

ishq ishq na karnni ki adiye. ishq di manzil door
had ishq di enni ki adiye .. jinni ki lammi khazoor

chad jaave choobe prem rass... digg pave chakna choor (NM)


ab bhayee ... okhli mai sar diya to moosal se ghabrana kya

ishq fana ka naam hai .. ishq mai zindgi na dekh

so dont worry ... jo hota hai achy ke liye hota hai

take care
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