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"Zalzalaa" --"Gujarat earthquake" - 26th January 2007, 12:10 AM

mere sabhi dostoN ko mera namskar , aaj ka ye likha hua meri yaadoN se juRa hua haiN saal 2001 meiN "gujarat" meiN "26 January" ke din subaha subaha 8:48a.m ko ek "zalzlaa" aaya tha jisne kai khofnaak rang dikhaye the aur ziNdagi ke to mayine hi badal diye the us hadse ko beete kai saal guzar chuke haiN par aaj bhi maiN kabhi un yaadoN meiN kho jata huN jo dil ko bahot dard deti hai aaj ka likha hua us din aur un logoN ke liye samarpit hai jo log mere jaisi hi un yadoN ke sath juRe hue haiN. ummid hai ki aapka sath mujhe jaroor milenga


haNste muskurate kai parivaar ko,
khuda ne khoon ke aansu rulaya tha

ziNdagii ka kuch bharosa nahi ab,
kahavat ko usne sach karke bataya tha

khamosH lafz aur bekarar the log,
har taraf yahaaN maut ka saaya tha

rishtoN ko jab usko todna hi tha,
kyuN hame fir ziNdagii se milvaya tha

kai maa ne gaveye apne baccho ko,
to kai ne apne suhag ko bhi gavaya tha

til til ujad rahi thi sari ziNdagiiyaN,
maut ne apna nanga nach dikhaya tha

had ho gayi thi bardast karne ki,
tasalliyoN se sab ne dil ko behlaya tha

aey khuda ! tu kitna zalim hai,
kyuN itni zindagiiyoN ko tune rulaya tha

bacche soye bina maa ki kahani ke,
pita ne lori gaake bachho ko sulaya tha

aankhe nahi dekh sakti tho wo pal,
jab kai beto ne pita ki chitta ko jalaya tha

khus the sare parivaar apno ke sath,
khusi ko usi hath se kabr me dafnaya tha

ro rahi thi sari nadiyaaN bhi us waqt,
kai ne asthiyoN ko pani meiN bahaya tha

sare kom ke log ek jut ho gaye the,
sab ne marte hue logoN ko bachaya tha

aaj bhi dil tadpta hai yaadoN meiN,
jab "gujarat" meiN "zalzalaa" aaya tha


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26th January 2007, 02:23 AM

dhaval ji,

how r u ji........

well dhaval ji aate hi ek baat kahungi.....jo jindagi hai vo guulaam hoti hai kudrat ki, niyati ko jo manjuur hota hai wahi hota hai. kisika bass nahi chalta. well apne bahot achhe eahsaas ke sath ye poem likhi hai. daad hazir hai janaab.

bacche soye bina maa ki kahani ke,
pita ne lori gaake bachho ko sulaya tha

aankhe nahi dekh sakti tho wo pal,
jab kai beto ne pita ki chitta ko jalaya tha

aaj bhi dil tadpta hai yaadoN meiN,
jab "gujarat" meiN "zalzalaa" aaya tha

ye teen sher bahot pasand aaye. ynhi likhte rahiye. aur apko gantantr divas mubaarak ho. be happy all'ways.......

grazie

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26th January 2007, 12:35 PM

aaj bhi dil tadpta hai yaadoN meiN,
jab "gujarat" meiN "zalzalaa" aaya tha


Namaskar Dhaval ji

26 Jan ka woh din aaj bhi ek dard bhari yaad hay......kayi logon ne iss din bahut kuch kho diya tha.....it's good that u wrote a poetry on this topic...keep up the good work

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26th January 2007, 01:40 PM

Assalam walekum dhaval ji.
kaise hain aap?
hame is nazm ka intezaar bohot dinon se tha..
sach kahun DHAVAL JI,aapne apni is nazm main woh sari baate likhi hai,jo kisi ko bhi rulane k kafi hain,
us zalzale ka dard aap hi ba_khubi bata sakte the,,,,kyunki aapne use mehsus kiya ,use dekha hai,,hum to sirf afsos hi kar sakte the,

Aapne,apne dard ko nazm ki surat mai,jis khubsurti se likha hai,wo kabile tarif hain.
bas un tamam logo k liye hum dua hi kar sakte hain,or dua zarur karenge.
Allah un sab zindigiyon ko sabr_khushi,garz sukun ata kare.Aamin
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bhut khub - 26th January 2007, 04:38 PM

dhaval mere chhotu....tune jis pukhtagii se dard ko byaan kiya hai.....aankhon mein barbass hii aansu uttar aiye......bhut khub itne gehre dard ko itnii bareeki se pesh karna ke liye main tumhare is kalaam ko sajda karta hoon yun hii likhte rehna........raj......


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26th January 2007, 11:16 PM

Hi dhavalji,

Yeh, nahin kahungi ki aapke aur is hadse sae taluuk rakhne walon ke dard ko samajh sakti hun, kyunki yehi samjhi hun jindagi ke bare main, ki har dard apne aap main unique hota hai aur har ek ke liye dusre ke dard ko samajh pana jara mushkil hota hai.
per yeh jarur kahoingi ki is hadse ka pata chala tha , aur jaise jameen apne paron tale nikal gayi ho aisa laga tha.

aapne apni kuch panktiya jo is hadse ko arpan ki hain unme likha hai...

rishtoN ko jab usko todna hi tha,
kyuN hame fir ziNdagii se milvaya tha



dekhiye, jindagi rishte judne aur tootne ka hi naam hai. Aur jab yeh rishte judne hote hain aur tootne hote hain, USKI marzi ke anusaar yeh sab hota hai.
Kehna aasan hai, par yehi kahungi ki har rishta apna ek maina rakhta hai, aur yeh afsos ki rishta nahi raha, hota hi hai, par jab is afsos se bahar nikal payen to yeh bhi sochna chahiye, ki yeh rishta KYUN tha. Har rishta humare jindagi me kisi khas vajah se hota hai, chahe voh ek pal ka milna hi kyun na ho. Us vajah ko pehchaniye, us rishte ne aapki jindai ko kya samjhaya aur phir vahi seekh ko gale se laga ke aage badhiye, ho sakta hai vahi seekh kissi aur ki jindagi main kaam aye.Afsos hota hi hai par samajh bhi jaroori hai.
Agar ek bhi acchi baat aap apne khoye hue rishton se samajh kar aage jindgi ko gale lagaye to, kiton ki jindagiyan saver jayengi.

Yeh mat sochiye ki rishta kyun nahi raha.
Shukr farmaiye ki kam se kam kuch samay ka hi sahi,rishta to tha.
Kiton ko to yeh bhi naseeb nahi hota. Hain na.



May God help heal the hearts of all affected

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27th January 2007, 05:23 PM

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mere sabhi dostoN ko mera namskar , aaj ka ye likha hua meri yaadoN se juRa hua haiN saal 2001 meiN "gujarat" meiN "26 January" ke din subaha subaha 8:48a.m ko ek "zalzlaa" aaya tha jisne kai khofnaak rang dikhaye the aur ziNdagi ke to mayine hi badal diye the us hadse ko beete kai saal guzar chuke haiN par aaj bhi maiN kabhi un yaadoN meiN kho jata huN jo dil ko bahot dard deti hai aaj ka likha hua us din aur un logoN ke liye samarpit hai jo log mere jaisi hi un yadoN ke sath juRe hue haiN. ummid hai ki aapka sath mujhe jaroor milenga


haNste muskurate kai parivaar ko,
khuda ne khoon ke aansu rulaya tha

ziNdagii ka kuch bharosa nahi ab,
kahavat ko usne sach karke bataya tha

khamosH lafz aur bekarar the log,
har taraf yahaaN maut ka saaya tha

rishtoN ko jab usko todna hi tha,
kyuN hame fir ziNdagii se milvaya tha

kai maa ne gaveye apne baccho ko,
to kai ne apne suhag ko bhi gavaya tha

til til ujad rahi thi sari ziNdagiiyaN,
maut ne apna nanga nach dikhaya tha

had ho gayi thi bardast karne ki,
tasalliyoN se sab ne dil ko behlaya tha

aey khuda ! tu kitna zalim hai,
kyuN itni zindagiiyoN ko tune rulaya tha

bacche soye bina maa ki kahani ke,
pita ne lori gaake bachho ko sulaya tha

aankhe nahi dekh sakti tho wo pal,
jab kai beto ne pita ki chitta ko jalaya tha

khus the sare parivaar apno ke sath,
khusi ko usi hath se kabr me dafnaya tha

ro rahi thi sari nadiyaaN bhi us waqt,
kai ne asthiyoN ko pani meiN bahaya tha

sare kom ke log ek jut ho gaye the,
sab ne marte hue logoN ko bachaya tha

aaj bhi dil tadpta hai yaadoN meiN,
jab "gujarat" meiN "zalzalaa" aaya tha

GOODWORK bossssssssssssss its a tufff work but u do it successfullyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy yy keep writing and all the best

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28th January 2007, 09:43 PM

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dhaval ji,

how r u ji........

well dhaval ji aate hi ek baat kahungi.....jo jindagi hai vo guulaam hoti hai kudrat ki, niyati ko jo manjuur hota hai wahi hota hai. kisika bass nahi chalta. well apne bahot achhe eahsaas ke sath ye poem likhi hai. daad hazir hai janaab.

bacche soye bina maa ki kahani ke,
pita ne lori gaake bachho ko sulaya tha

aankhe nahi dekh sakti tho wo pal,
jab kai beto ne pita ki chitta ko jalaya tha

aaj bhi dil tadpta hai yaadoN meiN,
jab "gujarat" meiN "zalzalaa" aaya tha

ye teen sher bahot pasand aaye. ynhi likhte rahiye. aur apko gantantr divas mubaarak ho. be happy all'ways.......

grazie

aapki dost
pooja

dear pooja,

haN bahot sahi baat kahi hai tumne ki kismat meiN jo likha hai wo to hoNga hi , us din ki yaadeN aaj bhi mere sath kahiN na kahiN juRi hai kyuNki kuch dekhne ko hi mila tha aisa ki wo yaadeN itni jaldi dil aur dimag meiN se jaayeNgi nahiN ,kosisH karta huN bas
apne un ehsaasoN ko maine aap sab ke bich bayaaN kiya ,

ummid karta huN tumhara sath yuhiN milta raheNga

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29th January 2007, 01:38 PM

hi dhaval ji

sukhriya janaab ki aap hamare liye khuda jo yaad karte hai..

ji dhaval hi is gujraat mein jab earthquake aaya tab bada nuksan hua tha ..

sach mein hazaro jaane gayi thi meri khuda se ek guzarish hai ki kyu esa kiya? in chhote se jahan mein wo masumo ka kya kasur tha ki wo bemaut mare gaye..


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mere sabhi dostoN ko mera namskar , aaj ka ye likha hua meri yaadoN se juRa hua haiN saal 2001 meiN "gujarat" meiN "26 January" ke din subaha subaha 8:48a.m ko ek "zalzlaa" aaya tha jisne kai khofnaak rang dikhaye the aur ziNdagi ke to mayine hi badal diye the us hadse ko beete kai saal guzar chuke haiN par aaj bhi maiN kabhi un yaadoN meiN kho jata huN jo dil ko bahot dard deti hai aaj ka likha hua us din aur un logoN ke liye samarpit hai jo log mere jaisi hi un yadoN ke sath juRe hue haiN. ummid hai ki aapka sath mujhe jaroor milenga


haNste muskurate kai parivaar ko,
khuda ne khoon ke aansu rulaya tha

ziNdagii ka kuch bharosa nahi ab,
kahavat ko usne sach karke bataya tha

khamosH lafz aur bekarar the log,
har taraf yahaaN maut ka saaya tha

rishtoN ko jab usko todna hi tha,
kyuN hame fir ziNdagii se milvaya tha

kai maa ne gaveye apne baccho ko,
to kai ne apne suhag ko bhi gavaya tha

til til ujad rahi thi sari ziNdagiiyaN,
maut ne apna nanga nach dikhaya tha

had ho gayi thi bardast karne ki,
tasalliyoN se sab ne dil ko behlaya tha

aey khuda ! tu kitna zalim hai,
kyuN itni zindagiiyoN ko tune rulaya tha

bacche soye bina maa ki kahani ke,
pita ne lori gaake bachho ko sulaya tha

aankhe nahi dekh sakti tho wo pal,
jab kai beto ne pita ki chitta ko jalaya tha

khus the sare parivaar apno ke sath,
khusi ko usi hath se kabr me dafnaya tha

ro rahi thi sari nadiyaaN bhi us waqt,
kai ne asthiyoN ko pani meiN bahaya tha

sare kom ke log ek jut ho gaye the,
sab ne marte hue logoN ko bachaya tha

aaj bhi dil tadpta hai yaadoN meiN,
jab "gujarat" meiN "zalzalaa" aaya tha


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Tab dil se me naraz tha,
Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du,
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Chotte Bhai..

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aaj bhi dil tadpta hai yaadoN meiN,
jab "gujarat" meiN "zalzalaa" aaya tha


Namaskar Dhaval ji

26 Jan ka woh din aaj bhi ek dard bhari yaad hay......kayi logon ne iss din bahut kuch kho diya tha.....it's good that u wrote a poetry on this topic...keep up the good work

Regards

namskaar sukanya ji

aapko meri is kosisH pe dekh ke mujhe achha laga , ummid kartta huN aap yuhiN paRhti raheNgi ,maiN kosisH karuNga isse bhi behtar jazbaatoN ko bayaaN karne ki

apna khayal rakheN aur khus raheN

duaoN ke sath ijaazat

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30th January 2007, 07:37 PM

Dhaval jee:

aap kee ess kalaam se, gujraat ka zalzala aaNkhoN meiN phir se ek baar chhaa gaya.. ek aisi traasadi jise bhulaana na-mumkim hai.

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Assalam walekum dhaval ji.
kaise hain aap?
hame is nazm ka intezaar bohot dinon se tha..
sach kahun DHAVAL JI,aapne apni is nazm main woh sari baate likhi hai,jo kisi ko bhi rulane k kafi hain,
us zalzale ka dard aap hi ba_khubi bata sakte the,,,,kyunki aapne use mehsus kiya ,use dekha hai,,hum to sirf afsos hi kar sakte the,

Aapne,apne dard ko nazm ki surat mai,jis khubsurti se likha hai,wo kabile tarif hain.
bas un tamam logo k liye hum dua hi kar sakte hain,or dua zarur karenge.
Allah un sab zindigiyon ko sabr_khushi,garz sukun ata kare.Aamin
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dhaval mere chhotu....tune jis pukhtagii se dard ko byaan kiya hai.....aankhon mein barbass hii aansu uttar aiye......bhut khub itne gehre dard ko itnii bareeki se pesh karna ke liye main tumhare is kalaam ko sajda karta hoon yun hii likhte rehna........raj......

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Hi dhavalji,

Yeh, nahin kahungi ki aapke aur is hadse sae taluuk rakhne walon ke dard ko samajh sakti hun, kyunki yehi samjhi hun jindagi ke bare main, ki har dard apne aap main unique hota hai aur har ek ke liye dusre ke dard ko samajh pana jara mushkil hota hai.
per yeh jarur kahoingi ki is hadse ka pata chala tha , aur jaise jameen apne paron tale nikal gayi ho aisa laga tha.

aapne apni kuch panktiya jo is hadse ko arpan ki hain unme likha hai...

rishtoN ko jab usko todna hi tha,
kyuN hame fir ziNdagii se milvaya tha



dekhiye, jindagi rishte judne aur tootne ka hi naam hai. Aur jab yeh rishte judne hote hain aur tootne hote hain, USKI marzi ke anusaar yeh sab hota hai.
Kehna aasan hai, par yehi kahungi ki har rishta apna ek maina rakhta hai, aur yeh afsos ki rishta nahi raha, hota hi hai, par jab is afsos se bahar nikal payen to yeh bhi sochna chahiye, ki yeh rishta KYUN tha. Har rishta humare jindagi me kisi khas vajah se hota hai, chahe voh ek pal ka milna hi kyun na ho. Us vajah ko pehchaniye, us rishte ne aapki jindai ko kya samjhaya aur phir vahi seekh ko gale se laga ke aage badhiye, ho sakta hai vahi seekh kissi aur ki jindagi main kaam aye.Afsos hota hi hai par samajh bhi jaroori hai.
Agar ek bhi acchi baat aap apne khoye hue rishton se samajh kar aage jindgi ko gale lagaye to, kiton ki jindagiyan saver jayengi.

Yeh mat sochiye ki rishta kyun nahi raha.
Shukr farmaiye ki kam se kam kuch samay ka hi sahi,rishta to tha.
Kiton ko to yeh bhi naseeb nahi hota. Hain na.



May God help heal the hearts of all affected

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aapko aaj kai dino ke bad meri post pe dekh ke achha laga mujhe aur aapne mujhe itni gehrayi se paRha dil ko sukun sa mila ki mere jazbaatoN ko aapne smajha aur apaki kahi hui sabhi baateN bilkul sahi haiN maiN bhi manta huuN

Yeh mat sochiye ki rishta kyun nahi raha.
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Kiton ko to yeh bhi naseeb nahi hota. Hain na
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GOODWORK bossssssssssssss its a tufff work but u do it successfullyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy yy keep writing and all the best

budhau

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sukhriya janaab ki aap hamare liye khuda jo yaad karte hai..

ji dhaval hi is gujraat mein jab earthquake aaya tab bada nuksan hua tha ..

sach mein hazaro jaane gayi thi meri khuda se ek guzarish hai ki kyu esa kiya? in chhote se jahan mein wo masumo ka kya kasur tha ki wo bemaut mare gaye..


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aise hi is dost ka sath dete raheN

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Chotte Bhai..

Aankhein hi jawab de rahi hain khud nam ho ke.. shabdon me jawab de paana mumkin na hoga......
namksaar priya Di

aapne mehsoos kiya mere liye itna hi kafi hai aapne to bina kahe hi sab keh diya

aapka sath paake mujhe hamesa khusi hoti hai yuhiN apne bhaiya ka sath dete rahiyenGa

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aap kee ess kalaam se, gujraat ka zalzala aaNkhoN meiN phir se ek baar chhaa gaya.. ek aisi traasadi jise bhulaana na-mumkim hai.

Mayank
mayank bhaiya namskaar

jee aapne bilkul sahi kaha ki ek aisi traasadi jise koi bhul nahiN sakta aapko yahaaN dekh ke achha laha aapne ise paRha aur samjha dil ko sukuN mila

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apne un ehsasoin ko phir se jaga diya jo gujar to gaye par nishan hamesha ke liye chhod gaye.
achi tarah dard byaan kiya bas yahi kahungi.
sakhi

sakhi ji namskaar

haN un guzre hue lamho ne nishaan chhoR ke rakhe haiN kuch aise zakHm jinhe shayad bhulne me zamane lag jaayeN

aapne sath diya achha laga

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mere sabhi dostoN ko mera namskar , aaj ka ye likha hua meri yaadoN se juRa hua haiN saal 2001 meiN "gujarat" meiN "26 January" ke din subaha subaha 8:48a.m ko ek "zalzlaa" aaya tha jisne kai khofnaak rang dikhaye the aur ziNdagi ke to mayine hi badal diye the us hadse ko beete kai saal guzar chuke haiN par aaj bhi maiN kabhi un yaadoN meiN kho jata huN jo dil ko bahot dard deti hai aaj ka likha hua us din aur un logoN ke liye samarpit hai jo log mere jaisi hi un yadoN ke sath juRe hue haiN. ummid hai ki aapka sath mujhe jaroor milenga


haNste muskurate kai parivaar ko,
khuda ne khoon ke aansu rulaya tha

ziNdagii ka kuch bharosa nahi ab,
kahavat ko usne sach karke bataya tha

khamosH lafz aur bekarar the log,
har taraf yahaaN maut ka saaya tha

rishtoN ko jab usko todna hi tha,
kyuN hame fir ziNdagii se milvaya tha

kai maa ne gaveye apne baccho ko,
to kai ne apne suhag ko bhi gavaya tha

til til ujad rahi thi sari ziNdagiiyaN,
maut ne apna nanga nach dikhaya tha

had ho gayi thi bardast karne ki,
tasalliyoN se sab ne dil ko behlaya tha

aey khuda ! tu kitna zalim hai,
kyuN itni zindagiiyoN ko tune rulaya tha

bacche soye bina maa ki kahani ke,
pita ne lori gaake bachho ko sulaya tha

aankhe nahi dekh sakti tho wo pal,
jab kai beto ne pita ki chitta ko jalaya tha

khus the sare parivaar apno ke sath,
khusi ko usi hath se kabr me dafnaya tha

ro rahi thi sari nadiyaaN bhi us waqt,
kai ne asthiyoN ko pani meiN bahaya tha

sare kom ke log ek jut ho gaye the,
sab ne marte hue logoN ko bachaya tha

aaj bhi dil tadpta hai yaadoN meiN,
jab "gujarat" meiN "zalzalaa" aaya tha

there are no words that can describe my feelings at this present moment. for various reason this poem has touchd my heart. one of thm is the actual scale of disaster, which u have beautifil portrayed in ur poem and other one is that my own family was there at that present moment. so there is somehting i can relate to. is this poem Good...yes, its marvellous, bt the pain u have shown in this is jus unbearable. u paintd the true picture,

every line in this beautiful poem is nothing, but, bitter truth. i cn imagine the greif jus by reading the lines. all i can say that, all the people who were affectd are nw very happy and left this tragic memory behind thm. and also may i take this oppurtunity to thank you DHAVAL BHAI on behalf of every one, for writing something this wonderful and informing us about the chaos. i cn keep on writin and writing, but will never b able to explain the feelings i have in me rite nw.

all i cn say is that, lets forget this day and look at the bright future.

apna khyaal rakein aur khush rahein

aapka bhai

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mere sabhi dostoN ko mera namskar , aaj ka ye likha hua meri yaadoN se juRa hua haiN saal 2001 meiN "gujarat" meiN "26 January" ke din subaha subaha 8:48a.m ko ek "zalzlaa" aaya tha jisne kai khofnaak rang dikhaye the aur ziNdagi ke to mayine hi badal diye the us hadse ko beete kai saal guzar chuke haiN par aaj bhi maiN kabhi un yaadoN meiN kho jata huN jo dil ko bahot dard deti hai aaj ka likha hua us din aur un logoN ke liye samarpit hai jo log mere jaisi hi un yadoN ke sath juRe hue haiN. ummid hai ki aapka sath mujhe jaroor milenga


haNste muskurate kai parivaar ko,
khuda ne khoon ke aansu rulaya tha

ziNdagii ka kuch bharosa nahi ab,
kahavat ko usne sach karke bataya tha

khamosH lafz aur bekarar the log,
har taraf yahaaN maut ka saaya tha

rishtoN ko jab usko todna hi tha,
kyuN hame fir ziNdagii se milvaya tha

kai maa ne gaveye apne baccho ko,
to kai ne apne suhag ko bhi gavaya tha

til til ujad rahi thi sari ziNdagiiyaN,
maut ne apna nanga nach dikhaya tha

had ho gayi thi bardast karne ki,
tasalliyoN se sab ne dil ko behlaya tha

aey khuda ! tu kitna zalim hai,
kyuN itni zindagiiyoN ko tune rulaya tha

bacche soye bina maa ki kahani ke,
pita ne lori gaake bachho ko sulaya tha

aankhe nahi dekh sakti tho wo pal,
jab kai beto ne pita ki chitta ko jalaya tha

khus the sare parivaar apno ke sath,
khusi ko usi hath se kabr me dafnaya tha

ro rahi thi sari nadiyaaN bhi us waqt,
kai ne asthiyoN ko pani meiN bahaya tha

sare kom ke log ek jut ho gaye the,
sab ne marte hue logoN ko bachaya tha

aaj bhi dil tadpta hai yaadoN meiN,
jab "gujarat" meiN "zalzalaa" aaya tha

bohat khoob dhaval wesay to main bohat hi late reply de rahi hoon per meri nazar se abhi guzri ..............aur bas itna kahoon gi ke apnay dard ko to shayad her koi asani se bayan ker leta hai per tumne logon ki takleef aur dukh ko jis tarah mehsooos ker ke likha hai bohat hi achi koshish hai dhaval yunhi likhte raho meri dua hai humesha khush raho apna bohat khayal rakhna..............


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there are no words that can describe my feelings at this present moment. for various reason this poem has touchd my heart. one of thm is the actual scale of disaster, which u have beautifil portrayed in ur poem and other one is that my own family was there at that present moment. so there is somehting i can relate to. is this poem Good...yes, its marvellous, bt the pain u have shown in this is jus unbearable. u paintd the true picture,

every line in this beautiful poem is nothing, but, bitter truth. i cn imagine the greif jus by reading the lines. all i can say that, all the people who were affectd are nw very happy and left this tragic memory behind thm. and also may i take this oppurtunity to thank you DHAVAL BHAI on behalf of every one, for writing something this wonderful and informing us about the chaos. i cn keep on writin and writing, but will never b able to explain the feelings i have in me rite nw.

all i cn say is that, lets forget this day and look at the bright future.

apna khyaal rakein aur khush rahein

aapka bhai

manish
manish bhaa'ii:

namaskaaR...

haaN yeH aik dard bharaa sach haii jo aapne paRhaa.. aapne ess dard ko meHsoos kiYaa yahi mere liYe baRii baat hay.. maiN aapkii kahi hu'ii baatoN ko zehen meiN raKhuNgaa.. bas YuuNhii saath dete rahiYeNgaa.. ShuKriyaaH..!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

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bohat khoob dhaval wesay to main bohat hi late reply de rahi hoon per meri nazar se abhi guzri ..............aur bas itna kahoon gi ke apnay dard ko to shayad her koi asani se bayan ker leta hai per tumne logon ki takleef aur dukh ko jis tarah mehsooos ker ke likha hai bohat hi achi koshish hai dhaval yunhi likhte raho meri dua hai humesha khush raho apna bohat khayal rakhna..............
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sachmein yeh to jis pe bitti hain woh hi samajh sakta hain.........
Tumhari yeh koshish padhke firse wohi manzaar yaad aa gaya........ it was really terrible.............kuch had tak meri soch ko bhi badal diya earhtquake ne....... tumne likha bahut accha hain ansu aa gaye ankhon mein..aise hi likhte rehna................

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Sach mein jab aaj hamne aapki yeh likhi hui nazm padhi to ek dum se jaise aankhon ke saahmne wohi scene aa gaye hon......

dard se, khauf se bhare chehre, har taraf mayoosi hi mayoosi, aur kudrat ka kehar.....
sab yaad hai hamein.....
mana ke ham waha se bahut door the par jaante hai ke kaise logo ne apni hi zindagi ko apne hi sahmne ujadte dekha hai......

woh dard bhulaye nahi bhulne wale.....

mujhe aapka yeh andaaz-e-byaan behad pasand aaya........



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sachmein yeh to jis pe bitti hain woh hi samajh sakta hain.........
Tumhari yeh koshish padhke firse wohi manzaar yaad aa gaya........ it was really terrible.............kuch had tak meri soch ko bhi badal diya earhtquake ne....... tumne likha bahut accha hain ansu aa gaye ankhon mein..aise hi likhte rehna................

bye and take care........
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Dhaval G Namaskar

Sach mein jab aaj hamne aapki yeh likhi hui nazm padhi to ek dum se jaise aankhon ke saahmne wohi scene aa gaye hon......

dard se, khauf se bhare chehre, har taraf mayoosi hi mayoosi, aur kudrat ka kehar.....
sab yaad hai hamein.....
mana ke ham waha se bahut door the par jaante hai ke kaise logo ne apni hi zindagi ko apne hi sahmne ujadte dekha hai......

woh dard bhulaye nahi bhulne wale.....

mujhe aapka yeh andaaz-e-byaan behad pasand aaya........
jasdeep jee namaskaaR:

ess kosiSh ko paRhne ke liYe ShuKriyaaH ... bas aise hi saathd ete rahiYeNgaa.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN.. KhuSh raheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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mere sabhi dostoN ko mera namskar , aaj ka ye likha hua meri yaadoN se juRa hua haiN saal 2001 meiN "gujarat" meiN "26 January" ke din subaha subaha 8:48a.m ko ek "zalzlaa" aaya tha jisne kai khofnaak rang dikhaye the aur ziNdagi ke to mayine hi badal diye the us hadse ko beete kai saal guzar chuke haiN par aaj bhi maiN kabhi un yaadoN meiN kho jata huN jo dil ko bahot dard deti hai aaj ka likha hua us din aur un logoN ke liye samarpit hai jo log mere jaisi hi un yadoN ke sath juRe hue haiN. ummid hai ki aapka sath mujhe jaroor milenga


haNste muskurate kai parivaar ko,
khuda ne khoon ke aansu rulaya tha

ziNdagii ka kuch bharosa nahi ab,
kahavat ko usne sach karke bataya tha

khamosH lafz aur bekarar the log,
har taraf yahaaN maut ka saaya tha

rishtoN ko jab usko todna hi tha,
kyuN hame fir ziNdagii se milvaya tha

kai maa ne gaveye apne baccho ko,
to kai ne apne suhag ko bhi gavaya tha

til til ujad rahi thi sari ziNdagiiyaN,
maut ne apna nanga nach dikhaya tha

had ho gayi thi bardast karne ki,
tasalliyoN se sab ne dil ko behlaya tha

aey khuda ! tu kitna zalim hai,
kyuN itni zindagiiyoN ko tune rulaya tha

bacche soye bina maa ki kahani ke,
pita ne lori gaake bachho ko sulaya tha

aankhe nahi dekh sakti tho wo pal,
jab kai beto ne pita ki chitta ko jalaya tha

khus the sare parivaar apno ke sath,
khusi ko usi hath se kabr me dafnaya tha

ro rahi thi sari nadiyaaN bhi us waqt,
kai ne asthiyoN ko pani meiN bahaya tha

sare kom ke log ek jut ho gaye the,
sab ne marte hue logoN ko bachaya tha

aaj bhi dil tadpta hai yaadoN meiN,
jab "gujarat" meiN "zalzalaa" aaya tha

Jay Shree Krishna, Jay Ambe

Hello Dhaval ji ... us 26th January ke din mai bhi India mai hi thi ..aur wo din aaj bhi mujhe yaad hai jab maine apani nazaron ke saamane kitani hi imaarato ko girate huye ...dekha tha ...aaj bhi jaise sab ki cheekhe kabhi kabhi kaanon mai gunjati hai

aapne bahot hi khoobi se uas waqt ko lafzon mai bayaan kiya hai ...itane dard, taqlifein aur gumo se bhare is kalaam par aap ko daad kya doon yahi soch rahi hoon ...

par bas itana hi kahungi ki sabaki taqlif aur dard ko aapne jis tarha se bayaan kiya hai wo achchhaa hai .... yunhi likhate rahiye

Bhagwaan ji aapko hammesha khush rakhe,

Aapki Dost: Gudia

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Hello Dhaval ji ... us 26th January ke din mai bhi India mai hi thi ..aur wo din aaj bhi mujhe yaad hai jab maine apani nazaron ke saamane kitani hi imaarato ko girate huye ...dekha tha ...aaj bhi jaise sab ki cheekhe kabhi kabhi kaanon mai gunjati hai

aapne bahot hi khoobi se uas waqt ko lafzon mai bayaan kiya hai ...itane dard, taqlifein aur gumo se bhare is kalaam par aap ko daad kya doon yahi soch rahi hoon ...

par bas itana hi kahungi ki sabaki taqlif aur dard ko aapne jis tarha se bayaan kiya hai wo achchhaa hai .... yunhi likhate rahiye

Bhagwaan ji aapko hammesha khush rakhe,

Aapki Dost: Gudia

Jay Shree Krishna, Jay Ambe.
Gudiya jee:

namaskaaR..

aapne ess kosiSh ko paRhaa aur samajHaa.. maiN aapka tah-e-dil sey ShuKriyaaH adaa kartaa huuN ess ke liYe.. bas Khudaaa sey maiN yahi kehataa huuN kii fir kabhee aisaa din na diKhaaye..

KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN

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Dhaval Ji ! Namaste !

Aaj bhi yeh lamha yaad aata hai....toh mann aur sharir siihar uthtaa hai....aapne bakhoobi uss manzar ko ......apni rachna me utaara hai.....jo aapke umdaa lekhan shamtaa ko bataata hai.....yunhi likhte rahiye....

khush rahen...
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