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Wasda Rahe Mera Punjab Dostoo - 23rd May 2008, 12:16 PM

Eh kavita main tilak ji de suggestion te likh reha haan.
Tilak ji main thoda jeha busy ho gaya si es kar k bahut der bad aayan haan.

Meray wallon sarian nu pyar bhari SSA.

Tusin gal ketti si k main aapni kavita wich eh gallan da zikar nhi keta "Os pehley te kuwaarey piaar di gall jo shaayaad zubaan kadey vi nahi kar saki, oh pehli waar desi peen di gall, oh binaa gall toN pangaa lain di gall", thx tusin mainu yaad karwaya.
main koshish ketti hai es te likhan di so reply zarur karna.


Wasda rahe mera punjab dostoo,
Lage enhnu na kadi koi tatti hawa dostoo,
Khush rahen sada o heeran,
Jihnaa babul di khatir pyar v ketta kurban dostoo,
Chup reh k sada dukh seh lenay,
Kadi keta na koi inkar dostoo,
wasda rahe mera punjab dosto,

Gal punjabian di hove,
Te rudi markaa nu kiven bul jayiye dosto,
Bina gal ton pange lenay,
sadi aadat hai eh purani dostoo,
wasda rahe mera punjab dostoo,

Shami khaitan nu janna,
Ganne chupne motran te baith dostoo,
Khaid de si khidoo-chapti,
Jihnu kehde canada ch base-ball dostoo,
Wasda rahe mera punjab dostoo,
Wasda rahe mera punjab dostoo.





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24th May 2008, 10:49 AM

Shaminder ji bahut shaandaar gall keeti hai. Pehley atey last band wich tuhaadi kalam di excellence saaf dikhaaee dindee hai. Saadey punjab diaan heeraaN nu bahut sohnaa depict keetaa hai tusi. Khidoo-chaapi da base ball naal comparison vi bahut ubhar ke ayeyaa hai. HaaaN rudi markaa waali gaal thodi jehi ordinary laggi. Shayad kisey hor refrence di zarrorat si os wich. But anyway dill khush ho gaya eh geet padh ke.

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24th May 2008, 11:50 AM

Asin peeti nhi na kadi es kar k sanu us di gal v thodi hi aayi. challo koi gal nhi galtian te reh hi jandian ne, je banda hi perfect ho jave taan phir gal v nhi na bandi, and thax tusin meri kavita nu padiya te aapne vichar sanjhe ketay.
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