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TalkhiaN-2 -
23rd January 2006, 07:48 AM
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Meray wajood pay phailee haiN taqdeer ki nadeedaa lakeeraiN Nijaat jin say shayud main na pa sakuNga kabhi Muqaddar bun kay milay hain gumnaamioN kay aNdhairay mujhay Tasleem-e-fun ki apnay shayud un maiN lau na jalaa sakuNga kabi Lahu-lahu jiya hai maiNnay har takhleek ko apni Likha hai inhaiN shub ki taarikiaN laykar Aur alfaaz kay paikar main utaaraa hai inhaiN TanhaaioN main afkaar ki baarikaiN laykar Umr bhar ka dard jinkay liayay paalaa Aur duniya bhar kay rutbay choray Akaylaa hi takraataa raha waqt ki aaNdhi say Aur kitnay shokh paighaam moray Magar aayaa na koi deedaawar apnaa Aur tasvvur mera khlaaon main bhatkataa hai ab talak ----------------------------- __________________ |
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hi -
29th January 2006, 01:37 AM
I shall be grateful if u also give some feed back to my poems.
Brijinder"Sagar" |
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29th January 2006, 02:37 AM
id tell u how ur poem was ....if i understood it....srry...but its juss tht i dont have a big hindi/urdu vocabulary...
»~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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29th January 2006, 04:15 AM
Kisay mizaj hay Brijinder Sahab,
Quote: "Meray wajood pay phailee haiN taqdeer ki nadeedaa lakeeraiN Nijaat jin say shayud main na pa sakuNga kabhi" Tari yad may anso bahay miny, bila-naga (Bila-Naga = Har Roz, Every day) Kismat par roya ho may, banana nahi sekha --Mr. Nice Guy Quote: "Muqaddar bun kay milay hain gumnaamioN kay aNdhairay mujhay Tasleem-e-fun ki apnay shayud un maiN lau na jalaa sakuNga kabi" Lakab day K U khud ko acho may na shamil kar lay tagaful na kar zamany ko, isay bhi tw shamil kar lay --Mr. Nice Guy Quote: "Lahu-lahu jiya hai maiNnay har takhleek ko apni Likha hai inhaiN shub ki taarikiaN laykar Aur alfaaz kay paikar main utaaraa hai inhaiN TanhaaioN main afkaar ki baarikaiN laykar" Wo husan kia jo khud par he mara jata hay parkh jab jhori ki hoo, tw is may maza Aa ta hay --Mr. Nice Guy Quote: "Umr bhar ka dard jinkay liayay paalaa Aur duniya bhar kay rutbay choray Akaylaa hi takraataa raha waqt ki aaNdhi say Aur kitnay shokh paighaam moray" Is zindagi nay gum k swa, kia dia mujhye shayed muskurana, miny he na tha sekha --Mr. Nice Guy Quote: Magar aayaa na koi deedaawar apnaa Aur tasvvur mera khlaaon main bhatkataa hai ab talak Har chaman phool ke ewiz day ta hay ab kanty (Ewiz = In place of) Aab-e-mohabt say is ko, miny he na tha Secha (Aab-e-Mohabat = Mohabat ka pani) --Mr. Nice Guy kahi shikan na pardhay, nazria-e-dost jan kar is khoof say, mazrat bhi kiye ja raha hoo may -- Mr. Nice Guy Mr. Nice Guy Na tha kuchch to KHuda tha, kuchch na hota to KHuda hota duboya mujhko hone ne, na hota maiN to kya hota ? (Mirza Ghalib) Q Zia-Kar Bano, Sooday Faramosh Raho ? Fiqray farda na karo, Mahy-e-ghamy-e-dosh raho Naly Bul Bul K suno aur hamatan Gosh Raho Hum-nawa may bhi koi gul ho k khamosh raho ? (Sir Allama Iqbal) |
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hi -
2nd February 2006, 12:37 AM
Thanx a lot
brijinder"Sagar" |
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