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30th March 2006, 02:02 PM
few thoughts...........
aapNi ziNdagi se hi mazaak kiya hai kabhi-kabhi..
aapNi maut se hi khilwaad kiya hai kabhi-kabhi..
uNse hue jo hum juda,uNki Nahi koi khata..
khud ko hi yeh ilzaam diya hai kabhi-kabhi..
diN to beet jata hai aur hi kammoN mein..
raatoN ko uNke Naam kiya hai kabhi-kabhi..
aaj to ye log yahaN,daulat se Nata rakhte hai..
yaad rakhNa yahi,paigaam diya hai kabhi-kabhi..
matlabi hai log sab,khushiyoN meiN sath deta hai..
humNein gamoN ko,aapNe Naam kiya hai kabhi-kabhi..
khushiyaaN dekar gamN liye,shikwa Nahi kiya phir bhi..
aaisa bhi dekho,humNein iNsaaf kiya hai kabhi-kabhi..
taNhaiyoN meiN hi dekha hoga,aksar rote hue sabko..
"JAS" Ne to bheed meiN yeh kaam kiya hai kabhi-kabhi..
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wah -
30th March 2006, 02:06 PM
bahut khoob kaha hai bahut achha apaan gussa aur pyar apnee shayree ko diya karo apne khaton ko nahee asia hee sundar sa likh diya karo jab gussa aye bahut achha hai ye
wah
diN to beet jata hai aur hi kammoN mein..
raatoN ko uNke Naam kiya hai kabhi-kabhi..
ye sab se achha laga
Anil
mere ashar ko mahoob samjh ke chhoomte the jo
kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai
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30th March 2006, 03:13 PM
dear jass nice one
bus aise hi likhte raho aur zaldi zaldi aate raho
love ur shayri ur thoughts
shrdh
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30th March 2006, 03:33 PM
Jasleen Ji
aapke thoughts mei fir gehra dard paya meine.
bas khush rahiyga aap
aapki
Kaanch
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Re: Kabhi-kabhi* -
30th March 2006, 03:39 PM
Dear Jas ji
bohat dino baad padha aapko...lekin padhkar lag raha hai ki aaj mood theek nahi aapka shayad ...Likhti aap hamesha hi acha hai par kuch sher jo jayada ache lage wo likh raha hu
"taNhaiyoN meiN hi dekha hoga,aksar rote hue sabko..
"JAS" Ne to bheed meiN yeh kaam kiya hai "
ish sher mein chhupe bhav bhale hi purane ho par aapne alag tarah se bayaa kiya hai..bohat khoob
"khushiyaaN dekar gamN liye,shikwa Nahi kiya phir bhi..
aaisa bhi dekho,humNein iNsaaf kiya hai kabhi-kabhi.."
sabse khoobsurat raha ye sher....
yuhi mehfil ko aabaad rakhiye likhti rahiye aur aati rahiye
Apka
Diggaj
Quote:
Originally posted by roshani
few thoughts...........
aapNi ziNdagi se hi mazaak kiya hai kabhi-kabhi..
aapNi maut se hi khilwaad kiya hai kabhi-kabhi..
uNse hue jo hum juda,uNki Nahi koi khata..
khud ko hi yeh ilzaam diya hai kabhi-kabhi..
diN to beet jata hai aur hi kammoN mein..
raatoN ko uNke Naam kiya hai kabhi-kabhi..
aaj to ye log yahaN,daulat se Nata rakhte hai..
yaad rakhNa yahi,paigaam diya hai kabhi-kabhi..
matlabi hai log sab,khushiyoN meiN sath deta hai..
humNein gamoN ko,aapNe Naam kiya hai kabhi-kabhi..
khushiyaaN dekar gamN liye,shikwa Nahi kiya phir bhi..
aaisa bhi dekho,humNein iNsaaf kiya hai kabhi-kabhi..
taNhaiyoN meiN hi dekha hoga,aksar rote hue sabko..
"JAS" Ne to bheed meiN yeh kaam kiya hai kabhi-kabhi..
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Navard-e-ishq mein kya hua kya bataye hum
kabhi humne yu khud ko harata naa dekha
Kaise Samjhau Dil-e-hasarat-nasiib Ko Apne
K Sab Kuch Milta Nahi Chah Lene Se Ish Zamane Mein..... "Diggaj"
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30th March 2006, 03:57 PM
Teri talaash main nikle the hum haath malte hue Rula diya aaj hume suraj ne dhalte hue Utar Zehan Ke Gaaron Main Roshni-e-Mabood Zamana Guzar gaya Seenon main dard Paalte Hue Kisi ghata se kaho, Hum ko ab utha le jaaye Ke Umar Beet gayi hum ko jalte hue Yahan to kuch bhi nahi hai siway kaanton ke Kahan tak aagaye hum is raste par chalte hue Sikha rahi hai zamane ko zindagi ka chalan Guzarti hai rail bhi Dewaane, Patrian badalte hue.------------kabhi kabhi mere dil me khayaal aata hai ke zindagi teri zulfo ke narm chao me guzarne pati to shadaab ho bhi sakti thi......ye ranj-o-gham ki syaahi jo dil pe chaai hai tere nazar ki shuwao.n me kho bhi sakti thi.....magar ye ho na sakamagar ye ho na saka aur ab ye aalam hai ki tu nahi tera gham teri justajoo bhi nahiguzar rahi hai kuch is tarah zindagi jaise ise kisi ke sahare ki aarzoo bhi nahina koi raah na manzil na roshni ka suraagbhatak rahi hai andhero me zindagi meri inhi andheron me reh jaunga kabhi kho kar main jaanta hu meri ham nafazmagar yuhi kabhi kabhi mere dil me khayaal aata hai
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Re: Kabhi-kabhi* -
30th March 2006, 08:29 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by roshani
few thoughts...........
aapNi ziNdagi se hi mazaak kiya hai kabhi-kabhi..
aapNi maut se hi khilwaad kiya hai kabhi-kabhi..
uNse hue jo hum juda,uNki Nahi koi khata..
khud ko hi yeh ilzaam diya hai kabhi-kabhi..
diN to beet jata hai aur hi kammoN mein..
raatoN ko uNke Naam kiya hai kabhi-kabhi..
aaj to ye log yahaN,daulat se Nata rakhte hai..
yaad rakhNa yahi,paigaam diya hai kabhi-kabhi..
matlabi hai log sab,khushiyoN meiN sath deta hai..
humNein gamoN ko,aapNe Naam kiya hai kabhi-kabhi..
khushiyaaN dekar gamN liye,shikwa Nahi kiya phir bhi..
aaisa bhi dekho,humNein iNsaaf kiya hai kabhi-kabhi..
taNhaiyoN meiN hi dekha hoga,aksar rote hue sabko..
"JAS" Ne to bheed meiN yeh kaam kiya hai kabhi-kabhi..
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bahut khoob roshni ji......
kyaa kehne aap ke.......
bahut achha lagaa aap ko aaj fir se kareeb paakar....
yu hi likhte raho........
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humein unse mohabbat huyee,,,,,,,,,,
to unhe hamaari mohabbat pe shak tha.......
jab unhe hamaari mohabbat ka ehsaas huya,,
to hum per kisi orr ka "HAQ" tha.......
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LOUT JATI HAI DUNIYA GAM HAMARA DEKHKAR,,,,,,,,,
JAISE LOUT JATI HAIN LAHREN KINARA DEKHKAR....
TUM KANDHA NA DENA MERE JANAZE KO..........................
KAHIN FIR ZINDA NA HO JAU TERA SAHARA DEKHKAR.....
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Re: wah -
31st March 2006, 08:26 PM
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bahut khoob kaha hai bahut achha apaan gussa aur pyar apnee shayree ko diya karo apne khaton ko nahee asia hee sundar sa likh diya karo jab gussa aye bahut achha hai ye
wah
diN to beet jata hai aur hi kammoN mein..
raatoN ko uNke Naam kiya hai kabhi-kabhi..
ye sab se achha laga
Anil
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anil ji,
u make my pathway more radiant by showing me my faults.thx for supporting me n helping me out in my pains. its a pleasure to knw tht u liked reading this creation of mine.thx so much. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
with love
jas
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31st March 2006, 08:29 PM
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dear jass nice one
bus aise hi likhte raho aur zaldi zaldi aate raho
love ur shayri ur thoughts
shrdh
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dear sweets,
u love reading my thoughts, my day is made.wud surely try to write oftenly here.take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
with love
urs jas
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Re: Kabhi-kabhi* -
1st April 2006, 01:33 AM
Quote:
Originally posted by roshani
few thoughts...........
aapNi ziNdagi se hi mazaak kiya hai kabhi-kabhi..
aapNi maut se hi khilwaad kiya hai kabhi-kabhi..
uNse hue jo hum juda,uNki Nahi koi khata..
khud ko hi yeh ilzaam diya hai kabhi-kabhi..
diN to beet jata hai aur hi kammoN mein..
raatoN ko uNke Naam kiya hai kabhi-kabhi..
aaj to ye log yahaN,daulat se Nata rakhte hai..
yaad rakhNa yahi,paigaam diya hai kabhi-kabhi..
matlabi hai log sab,khushiyoN meiN sath deta hai..
humNein gamoN ko,aapNe Naam kiya hai kabhi-kabhi..
khushiyaaN dekar gamN liye,shikwa Nahi kiya phir bhi..
aaisa bhi dekho,humNein iNsaaf kiya hai kabhi-kabhi..
taNhaiyoN meiN hi dekha hoga,aksar rote hue sabko..
"JAS" Ne to bheed meiN yeh kaam kiya hai kabhi-kabhi..
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Namaskaar Roshni Ji
[ taNhaiyoN meiN hi dekha hoga,aksar rote hue sabko..
"JAS" Ne to bheed meiN yeh kaam kiya hai kabhi-kabhi ]
bahaut accha laga aapka aatmvishvaas dekhkar, isi aatmvishvaas ke saath aage barhtey rahiyega aur khush rahiyega.
Vipin
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1st April 2006, 03:12 AM
Aadaab Roshni ji,
kai dinon baad aapne kuch likha aur kya khoob likha hai.kabhi na kabhi har lekhak kuch likhne ko betaab hotaa hai par kuch achaa nahi ban paata aur jab ban jaata hai to bahut achaa banta hai.
bahut achaa lagaa aapki is rachna ko padhkar, aap yunhi likhte rahiye aur is mehfil ki shamma ko yunhi kaayam rakhiye.
GKS
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1st April 2006, 07:24 PM
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Jasleen Ji
aapke thoughts mei fir gehra dard paya meine.
bas khush rahiyga aap
aapki
Kaanch
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dear kaanch ji,
u know ur presence means a lot to me. aapke jawab mein ek alag si kashish hai. thx for appreciating my thoughts. dard hi shayad zindagi ki sachai hai but hw to face it ,thts wat needed to be learnt. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
with love
urs jasleen
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hi -
1st April 2006, 08:17 PM
waah jas gazab ka likha hai tumne sach mai, mai tumara shukra gujaar hu jo tumaaree behtareen post aajkal padhne ko mil rahi hai
Nice work
keep it up
wid regards
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23rd December 2006, 04:30 AM
Hi,
Kia khubsurti say ap nay jazbaato ko
alfazo k sanchay may dhala hay..
jo kuch kasar rhay gai tw alfazo ki..
wagarna har shear sedha dil may autara hay..
iNsaaf na ho kar agar Soda(deal) ho tw kia khyna..
Mashwara hay yahi mira, agay faisala thumara hay.
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"khushiyaaN dekar gamN liye,shikwa Nahi kiya phir bhi..
aaisa bhi dekho,humNein iNsaaf kiya hai kabhi-kabhi.."
Mr Nice Guy
Na tha kuchch to KHuda tha, kuchch na hota to KHuda hota
duboya mujhko hone ne, na hota maiN to kya hota ?
(Mirza Ghalib)
Q Zia-Kar Bano, Sooday Faramosh Raho ?
Fiqray farda na karo, Mahy-e-ghamy-e-dosh raho
Naly Bul Bul K suno aur hamatan Gosh Raho
Hum-nawa may bhi koi gul ho k khamosh raho ?
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23rd December 2006, 10:00 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by roshani
few thoughts...........
aapNi ziNdagi se hi mazaak kiya hai kabhi-kabhi..
aapNi maut se hi khilwaad kiya hai kabhi-kabhi..
uNse hue jo hum juda,uNki Nahi koi khata..
khud ko hi yeh ilzaam diya hai kabhi-kabhi..
diN to beet jata hai aur hi kammoN mein..
raatoN ko uNke Naam kiya hai kabhi-kabhi..
aaj to ye log yahaN,daulat se Nata rakhte hai..
yaad rakhNa yahi,paigaam diya hai kabhi-kabhi..
matlabi hai log sab,khushiyoN meiN sath deta hai..
humNein gamoN ko,aapNe Naam kiya hai kabhi-kabhi..
khushiyaaN dekar gamN liye,shikwa Nahi kiya phir bhi..
aaisa bhi dekho,humNein iNsaaf kiya hai kabhi-kabhi..
taNhaiyoN meiN hi dekha hoga,aksar rote hue sabko..
"JAS" Ne to bheed meiN yeh kaam kiya hai kabhi-kabhi..
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