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Bebas Aur Ghareeb Ki Saheb Zaat Kya Hai..... -
14th December 2012, 04:49 AM
mehfil-e-dard adaab..... kafi arsey baad mehfil ka rukh kiya...
pesh -e- khidmat hai Diya jii (Diya_jale) aur meri soch :-
bebas aur ghareeb ki saheb zaat kya hai
saamne aap ke humaari aukaat kya hai
aap nay hi kaha tha Pathhar ko kohinoor
warna hum meiN bhala aisi baat kya hai
ba-umeed kar ke,bujhaye umeed ka chirag
hum pe khula ye raaz k kaiinaat kya hai
sar-e-bazaar bik rahe haiN aadam-zaad
duniyaa mein qeemat-e-hayaat kya hai??
humaari mayat per aa gaye ho saheb
is se badi bhalaa aur soughaat kya hai
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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14th December 2012, 06:24 AM
bahut khoob jasbaat pesh kiye aapne hasan sahab....aise hee mehfil ko roshan karte rahiye......
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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14th December 2012, 08:10 AM
bebas aur ghareeb ki saheb zaat kya hai
saamne aap ke humaari aukaat kya hai
aap nay hi kaha tha Pathhar ko kohinoor
warna hum meiN bhala aisi baat kya hai
WaaH ! Nihayat Khoob !!
AsarAndaaz Ashaar ... PurWaqaar Ghazal
Bahut Umdaa
Dilee Mubaaraqbaad ... Hassan Ji Aur Diya Ji !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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14th December 2012, 02:32 PM
ba-umeed kar ke,bujhaye umeed ka chirag
hum pe khula ye raaz k kaiinaat kya hai
sar-e-bazaar bik rahe haiN aadam-zaad
duniyaa mein qeemat-e-hayaat kya hai??
Masha Allah bohat khoob Hassan sahab...behad pasand aayi aapki ghazal...bohat accha laga aapko mehfil me dubaara dekhker...yuhi mehfil ki raunak badhatay rahiye...
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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14th December 2012, 06:41 PM
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bahut khoob jasbaat pesh kiye aapne hasan sahab....aise hee mehfil ko roshan karte rahiye......
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boht shukriya arvind jii...
aise hi miltay rahiye....
khush rahiye
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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14th December 2012, 08:45 PM
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Originally Posted by Hassan
mehfil-e-dard adaab..... kafi arsey baad mehfil ka rukh kiya...
pesh -e- khidmat hai Diya jii (Diya_jale) aur meri soch :-
bebas aur ghareeb ki saheb zaat kya hai
saamne aap ke humaari aukaat kya hai
aap nay hi kaha tha Pathhar ko kohinoor
warna hum meiN bhala aisi baat kya hai
ba-umeed kar ke,bujhaye umeed ka chirag
hum pe khula ye raaz k kaiinaat kya hai
sar-e-bazaar bik rahe haiN aadam-zaad
duniyaa mein qeemat-e-hayaat kya hai??
humaari mayat per aa gaye ho saheb
is se badi bhalaa aur soughaat kya hai
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waaahh kya baat hai.... muddat ke baad aapko padhnaa acchaa lagaa.. aur khushi hui ye dekhkar ke ab aap yahan regular ho gaye hain... aur is kalaam ke liye dheron mubaarakbaad... likhte rahiye...
Shaad...
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14th December 2012, 09:21 PM
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Originally Posted by Hassan
mehfil-e-dard adaab..... kafi arsey baad mehfil ka rukh kiya...
pesh -e- khidmat hai Diya jii (Diya_jale) aur meri soch :-
bebas aur ghareeb ki saheb zaat kya hai
saamne aap ke humaari aukaat kya hai
aap nay hi kaha tha Pathhar ko kohinoor
warna hum meiN bhala aisi baat kya hai
ba-umeed kar ke,bujhaye umeed ka chirag
hum pe khula ye raaz k kaiinaat kya hai
sar-e-bazaar bik rahe haiN aadam-zaad
duniyaa mein qeemat-e-hayaat kya hai??
humaari mayat per aa gaye ho saheb
is se badi bhalaa aur soughaat kya hai
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wah bahut khoob dil ko choo lene wali rachna hasan ji bahut achcha laga sdc ki rounak badti ja rahi hai............
Rashmi Sharma
path par kaante bahut hain tere
par manjil par jaana too.ne
dar na jatilata se jeewan ki
isko saral banana too.ne
pasat na hone paye honsle
khud ka sahas khud hi juta le
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14th December 2012, 09:22 PM
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Originally Posted by Hassan
mehfil-e-dard adaab..... kafi arsey baad mehfil ka rukh kiya...
pesh -e- khidmat hai Diya jii (Diya_jale) aur meri soch :-
bebas aur ghareeb ki saheb zaat kya hai
saamne aap ke humaari aukaat kya hai
aap nay hi kaha tha Pathhar ko kohinoor
warna hum meiN bhala aisi baat kya hai
ba-umeed kar ke,bujhaye umeed ka chirag
hum pe khula ye raaz k kaiinaat kya hai
sar-e-bazaar bik rahe haiN aadam-zaad
duniyaa mein qeemat-e-hayaat kya hai??
humaari mayat per aa gaye ho saheb
is se badi bhalaa aur soughaat kya hai
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Aadaab Hassan Bhaee,
Buhat achcha laga Aapko aur Diya jee ko parhna. Aysa buhat kam daykhnay ko milta haye ki do shayaron ka takhayyul ayk kalaam mayn. Buhat aaltareen ghazal inayat farmayee haye aap dono nay milkar. Daad qabool farmayayn dhayron.
Duagoh
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15th December 2012, 04:43 PM
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bebas aur ghareeb ki saheb zaat kya hai
saamne aap ke humaari aukaat kya hai
aap nay hi kaha tha Pathhar ko kohinoor
warna hum meiN bhala aisi baat kya hai
WaaH ! Nihayat Khoob !!
AsarAndaaz Ashaar ... PurWaqaar Ghazal
Bahut Umdaa
Dilee Mubaaraqbaad ... Hassan Ji Aur Diya Ji !!!
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Naresh Sir,
Aap ka saath hamesha hi boht haseen raha hai..
aise hi saath banaye rakhiye ga.........
apna khiyaal rakhiye ga,
duaooN k saath,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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15th December 2012, 04:52 PM
ek behtareen gazal ke liye apko aur diya ji ko dili mubarakbaad hassan ji
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16th December 2012, 09:29 AM
bahut umda janaab, Ek mukkamal ghazal ke liye dheroN daad, waise tanz bhi ahcha tha isme, aur ye sher haasil-e-ghazal laga mujhe....
sar-e-bazaar bik rahe haiN aadam-zaad
duniyaa mein qeemat-e-hayaat kya hai??
Yunhi aage v aap likhte rahiye aur khush rahiye....
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16th December 2012, 08:31 PM
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ba-umeed kar ke,bujhaye umeed ka chirag
hum pe khula ye raaz k kaiinaat kya hai
sar-e-bazaar bik rahe haiN aadam-zaad
duniyaa mein qeemat-e-hayaat kya hai??
Masha Allah bohat khoob Hassan sahab...behad pasand aayi aapki ghazal...bohat accha laga aapko mehfil me dubaara dekhker...yuhi mehfil ki raunak badhatay rahiye...
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aap aaye hamari mehfil mein Khuda ki Qudrat....
boht boht shukriya pasandeedgi k liye...
Khush rahiye.. apna khiyaal rakhiye...
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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17th December 2012, 11:47 PM
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waaahh kya baat hai.... muddat ke baad aapko padhnaa acchaa lagaa.. aur khushi hui ye dekhkar ke ab aap yahan regular ho gaye hain... aur is kalaam ke liye dheron mubaarakbaad... likhte rahiye...
Shaad...
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Boht boht khushi hui Shoaib bhai aap ko yahan dekh kar
aise hi miltay rahiye.. khush rahiye...
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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25th December 2012, 03:06 PM
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wah bahut khoob dil ko choo lene wali rachna hasan ji bahut achcha laga sdc ki rounak badti ja rahi hai............
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Rashmi jii,,
Teh-e-dil se mashkoor -o- manooN hooN....
Apna khiyal rakhiye,
DuaooN k Saath,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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25th December 2012, 05:21 PM
Hasan Sahaab Bahut achchi kalaam kahi hai daad....
JahaaN hai ruswaii farqat haar jeet meiN
ke usmeiN yaaroN shay kia aur maat kia hai
Faisle taqdeer ke lakeere badal nahi sakti
Eh insaan teri uske aage hargiz chal nahi sakti
Aaj tu zameen par hai kal zameen mein hoga
Maut tujhe aani hai har roz tal nahi sakti
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25th December 2012, 08:58 PM
bebas aur ghareeb ki saheb zaat kya hai
saamne aap ke humaari aukaat kya hai
aap nay hi kaha tha Pathhar ko kohinoor
warna hum meiN bhala aisi baat kya hai
Hasan Sahab,
Bhahut khub ..aap ki gazal ke pehle do ashar , dil ko chu gaya aap ka yeh pyara sa ehsaas......Daad Kabool Karen
Sanjay Sehgal
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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25th December 2012, 11:29 PM
hassan bhaaii:
namaste!
bas yahii kahuungaa waah waah aur waah !! .. dil-kaSh Ghazal par daad hi daad
Khush rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKhen
duaaon ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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DIYA, dii miss u alot -
26th December 2012, 11:08 AM
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Originally Posted by Hassan
mehfil-e-dard adaab..... kafi arsey baad mehfil ka rukh kiya...
pesh -e- khidmat hai Diya jii (Diya_jale) aur meri soch :-
bebas aur ghareeb ki saheb zaat kya hai
saamne aap ke humaari aukaat kya hai
aap nay hi kaha tha Pathhar ko kohinoor
warna hum meiN bhala aisi baat kya hai
ba-umeed kar ke,bujhaye umeed ka chirag
hum pe khula ye raaz k kaiinaat kya hai
sar-e-bazaar bik rahe haiN aadam-zaad
duniyaa mein qeemat-e-hayaat kya hai??
humaari mayat per aa gaye ho saheb
is se badi bhalaa aur soughaat kya hai
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HSN bhai aur meri Pyari DIYA (Roshni )
aap dono ki kosish padne se pehle hi jab DIYA ka naam pada to dil meiN ajeeb si khushi mahsoos hue...wo bayaan nahi kar paungi...!
aap dono ki gazal hame behad pasand aaye...ahsaas to dil ke kareeb rhe hi...aankhe num bhi hue DIYA ke naam se...DIYA tumari dii tumhe bahut miss karti hai...dii loves u
god bless u both
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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27th December 2012, 02:04 AM
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Aadaab Hassan Bhaee,
Buhat achcha laga Aapko aur Diya jee ko parhna. Aysa buhat kam daykhnay ko milta haye ki do shayaron ka takhayyul ayk kalaam mayn. Buhat aaltareen ghazal inayat farmayee haye aap dono nay milkar. Daad qabool farmayayn dhayron.
Duagoh
Ahmad
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Ahmad bhai..
Daad aur pazeraayi k liye be-had manooN hooN...
aise hi miltay rahiye,
apna khiyal rakhiye...
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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28th December 2012, 09:25 AM
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ek behtareen gazal ke liye apko aur diya ji ko dili mubarakbaad hassan ji
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Ahna....
Thanks a lot for appreciating.....
Take care,
Allah hafiz
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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