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24th July 2014, 07:12 PM
Kab mere dil ne Tera Naam liya
Kab meri dhadkan ne Teri dhadkan ko suna..
Kab meri saans me Teri khushboo ghul gayi hamdam
Kab bhari mahfil me main hone lagi yoon gum
Kab main khud se hi sharmaane lagi
Kab bina baat ke muskarane lagi
Ye pahli baar hua kab
Mujhe yaad nahi
Kyon main apna hi Naam bhool
Jane lagi
Yaad hai itna ki tum mere ho
Mohabbat Teri meri rooh me samaane lagi....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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24th July 2014, 10:54 PM
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Kab mere dil ne Tera Naam liya
Kab meri dhadkan ne Teri dhadkan ko suna..
Kab meri saans me Teri khushboo ghul gayi hamdam
Kab bhari mahfil me main hone lagi yoon gum
Kab main khud se hi sharmaane lagi
Kab bina baat ke muskarane lagi
Ye pahli baar hua kab
Mujhe yaad nahi
Kyon main apna hi Naam bhool
Jane lagi
Yaad hai itna ki tum mere ho
Mohabbat Teri meri rooh me samaane lagi....
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khayalaat bahut achhe lage aapke.....
very nice
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25th July 2014, 12:03 AM
Mujhe yaad nahi
Kyon main apna hi Naam bhool
Jane lagi
Wahh... wahh.... Madhu Jiii,
Aap ne ishQ se bharpoor, aik dil-nasheen nazm pesh ki hai..
boht boht khoob... teh-e-dil se nikli dehrooN daad qabool kijiye,,
aise hi mehfil roshan karte rahiye,
DuaooN k saath,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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26th July 2014, 10:40 PM
kya baat hai madhu jee.....ek khoobsurat nazm.....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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27th July 2014, 11:15 AM
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khayalaat bahut achhe lage aapke.....
very nice
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Thank you madishanu ji..............
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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27th July 2014, 11:16 AM
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Mujhe yaad nahi
Kyon main apna hi Naam bhool
Jane lagi
Wahh... wahh.... Madhu Jiii,
Aap ne ishQ se bharpoor, aik dil-nasheen nazm pesh ki hai..
boht boht khoob... teh-e-dil se nikli dehrooN daad qabool kijiye,,
aise hi mehfil roshan karte rahiye,
DuaooN k saath,,
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Aapki tareef ka shukriya hasan ji........
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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kya baat hai madhu jee.....ek khoobsurat nazm.....
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Thanks aru ji ...................
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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28th July 2014, 09:51 AM
bahot acche madhu sahiba...... likhtii rahen.
Shaad....
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bahot acche madhu sahiba...... likhtii rahen.
Shaad....
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Thank u shaad ji.................
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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29th July 2014, 10:07 AM
Madhuji,
bahot hi khubsurat alfaazoN se pur hai yeh rachnaa....
dilse daad-o-mubaarak baad
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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Madhuji,
bahot hi khubsurat alfaazoN se pur hai yeh rachnaa....
dilse daad-o-mubaarak baad
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Pasand igi ke liye dil se shukriya adeil ji...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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2nd August 2014, 03:58 PM
Bahut achche Madhu ji ,
kuch baat hai aapmein . Aap ne bahut haule se sab kuch kah diya
jis ki goonj baar baar kano mein sunayi per rahi hai . Keep writing .
Sanjay Sehgal
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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Bahut achche Madhu ji ,
kuch baat hai aapmein . Aap ne bahut haule se sab kuch kah diya
jis ki goonj baar baar kano mein sunayi per rahi hai . Keep writing .
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Thank u very muvh sanjay ji.......................
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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5th August 2014, 10:33 PM
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Kab mere dil ne Tera Naam liya
Kab meri dhadkan ne Teri dhadkan ko suna..
Kab meri saans me Teri khushboo ghul gayi hamdam
Kab bhari mahfil me main hone lagi yoon gum
Kab main khud se hi sharmaane lagi
Kab bina baat ke muskarane lagi
Ye pahli baar hua kab
Mujhe yaad nahi
Kyon main apna hi Naam bhool
Jane lagi
Yaad hai itna ki tum mere ho
Mohabbat Teri meri rooh me samaane lagi....
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Good one Madhu
iss par woh gana yaad aaya
'naam saare mujhe bhool jaane lage
waqt bewaqt tum yaad aane lage'
likhti raho khush raho
aapki dost
Sarika
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28th August 2014, 06:06 PM
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Good one Madhu
iss par woh gana yaad aaya
'naam saare mujhe bhool jaane lage
waqt bewaqt tum yaad aane lage'
likhti raho khush raho
aapki dost
Sarika
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Thank u very much sarika ji........ye gana suna hai maine bahut khoobsurat hai...
Aise hi sath dete rahiye....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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9th September 2014, 10:38 PM
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Kab mere dil ne Tera Naam liya
Kab meri dhadkan ne Teri dhadkan ko suna..
Kab meri saans me Teri khushboo ghul gayi hamdam
Kab bhari mahfil me main hone lagi yoon gum
Kab main khud se hi sharmaane lagi
Kab bina baat ke muskarane lagi
Ye pahli baar hua kab
Mujhe yaad nahi
Kyon main apna hi Naam bhool
Jane lagi
Yaad hai itna ki tum mere ho
Mohabbat Teri meri rooh me samaane lagi....
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Aadaab Madhu Jee!!
Buhat ravaaN_davaan aur dilkash rahee haye aapki nazm. Pur-lutf wa shaffaaf!! Buhat khoobsoorat wa romaani! Dhayroan daad aapki is inayat par! Qabool farmayayn!! Reps++
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10th September 2014, 04:47 PM
Bohat khoob madhu ji ...as always!...
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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10th September 2014, 04:54 PM
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Kab main khud se hi sharmaane lagi
Kab bina baat ke muskarane lagi
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Bahut dil se likhi ye nazm pasand aayi madhu ji dheron mubaarakbaad aapko....
Khush rahiye.....apni Haaziri lagate rahiye...
Bahut gumraah karna chahta hai aaina mujhko !
Magar wo apni hi fitrat se hardam haar jaata hai !! (Pankaj Mishra 'Nawaab')
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Bohat khoob madhu ji ...as always!...
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Thank u very much zainy ji....aate rahiye..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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17th September 2014, 03:31 PM
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Kab mere dil ne Tera Naam liya
Kab meri dhadkan ne Teri dhadkan ko suna..
Kab meri saans me Teri khushboo ghul gayi hamdam
Kab bhari mahfil me main hone lagi yoon gum
Kab main khud se hi sharmaane lagi
Kab bina baat ke muskarane lagi
Ye pahli baar hua kab
Mujhe yaad nahi
Kyon main apna hi Naam bhool
Jane lagi
Yaad hai itna ki tum mere ho
Mohabbat Teri meri rooh me samaane lagi....
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Madhu ji....dil ki baate dil hi jaane...
aapne apne dil ki baate bahut saadgi se seede-saaf lafzoN bayaan ki...bahut khoobsurat lge aapke ehsaas.
god bless u
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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Aadaab Madhu Jee!!
Buhat ravaaN_davaan aur dilkash rahee haye aapki nazm. Pur-lutf wa shaffaaf!! Buhat khoobsoorat wa romaani! Dhayroan daad aapki is inayat par! Qabool farmayayn!! Reps++
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Bahut bahut shukriya ahmad jee..aaj apni ye poem dekh rahi thi to dekha ki aapko shukriya kahna bhool gayi main...maaf kijiyega.....
aate rahiye..
duaon ke sath...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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Bahut dil se likhi ye nazm pasand aayi madhu ji dheron mubaarakbaad aapko....
Khush rahiye.....apni Haaziri lagate rahiye...
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Pankaj ji bahut shukriya...ham to haziri laga hee rahe hain par aap hee kam aate hain ab....
Aate rahiye....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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14th June 2015, 04:43 PM
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Kab mere dil ne Tera Naam liya
Kab meri dhadkan ne Teri dhadkan ko suna..
Kab meri saans me Teri khushboo ghul gayi hamdam
Kab bhari mahfil me main hone lagi yoon gum
Kab main khud se hi sharmaane lagi
Kab bina baat ke muskarane lagi
Ye pahli baar hua kab
Mujhe yaad nahi
Kyon main apna hi Naam bhool
Jane lagi
Yaad hai itna ki tum mere ho
Mohabbat Teri meri rooh me samaane lagi....
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Wah, kya baat hai. Mohabbat se saja yeh kalaam bohot achha laga.
Likhte raheiN.
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nice creation.....................keep writing
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Thank u dear...Aaj padhne baithi to dekha tumhara comment reply karne Se rah Gaya.....
Thank u so much...
Aaya karo..
Khushi hogi...
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Thank u di...................................
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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21st July 2017, 09:30 PM
Kya Bat hai Madhu Ji
bahut Khoob madhu ji bahut achi likhi apne
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Kya Bat hai Madhu Ji
bahut Khoob madhu ji bahut achi likhi apne
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Bahot shukriya...............
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