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28th March 2008, 09:26 AM

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aap ka bahut bahut shukriya ki aapne hume padha...rahi baat hamare dil ke jazbon ki ....to mai sirf yehi kahungi ki har ek insaan ke dil me kuch aise jazbe bhi shamil hai jinko lafzon me bayan karna na-mumkin hai....kai baar aisa hota hai ki humko hamari feelings batane ke liye lafz kam pad jate hai....hai na????....
anyways thanx a lot......

dil wo hai ki fariyad se bharpur hai har waqt,
hum wo hai ki kuch dil se nikalne nahi dete.........

Dear Didi,

thanks for reoly lamha ji and sorry because hame itna wakt nahi mil pata ha ki ham har roj aapko jwab de paye . ak bat or waise to hame risto se ham apni jidghi me bhut nafrat karte ha lekin kishi ne sach kha ha na ki baye riste bhi bhulaye nahi jate . hamne aapko didi kha ha because ak meri sister ha jo mujhse ya fir u samjh lijiye ki ham usse bhut dur ha umar me mujhse bhut choti ha wo lekin bger uske u lagta ha ki hamara koi nahi ha , is duniya ki bhid me ak asi ladki bhi ha jisse ham pyar karte the , karte ha or jab tak ye sanse chalegi karte rahenge .
Didi ye mat samjhna ki wo bewfa ha nhi wo bewfa nahi bus gam ha to sirf is bat ka ki jise ham unki sanso se pahchankar ye bta dete ha ki wo kya kar rha ha wo shakhas ak din hamse kah deta ha ki aap jiyo ya maro hame koi matlab nahi . Didi jante ha ham ki wo hamse pyar karti ha lekin kya koi kishi se itna or asa pyar bhi kar sakta ha ki jite ji jindghi mot se badtar ho jaye .
Didi aaj ham aapko uske bare me btate ha hmari jindghi gujar rahi thi , ak dost ki mot ke bad ham apni jindghi ke rasto me bhatk gaye the fir un rasto se hame nikalkar lane wali hmari choti sister thi , fir ak din hmari jindghi me wo aaye jinhe ham apni jaan or CHAND kahte ha, hmari suruwat kuch ajib tarike se hui thi , hmari jinghi kishi ladki ke nam par koi rista tha to wo sirf didi ka tha ya u kah lijiye jo ham chahte the hame mila nahi tha , ak anjan number se miss call or miss call se msg friend , doti or fir pyar or wo bhi bger ak dusre ko dekhe ........... mahino gujar gaye the hame or wo kabhi hame dekhna bhi nahi chahti thi because wo hamse jyada apne parivar se pyar karti thi , fir ak hadse ne ham dono ko mila diya jis din ham mile hamne ak najar me unhe pahchan liya or wo hame hame nahi pahchan paye , dhire -2 pyar badta gya fir ak din hamne shadi ka kha to hunhone ha bhi kar di , achank meri jindghi ne palta khaya or mujhe bhut loss huaa , Didi bachpan se kam kar rha tha isliye hame is loss ka koi gam nahi tha , lekin is loss ke bad wo thodi-2 dhire-2 badlne laghi , har choti se choti bat par jhagda hone lga, pta nahi kyo lekin hame jitna loss ka gam nahi huaa usse kahi jyada is bat ka gam ho gya ki kya koi mere paise se bhi pyar kar sakta ha ,,,,,,,,

Didi ak din jhgda bad gya or usne hame kha jiyo ya maro hame matlab nahi , nahi malum aaj bhi hame kya huaa tha or hamne kya kiya bus ak hi rasta tha hmare pass ham jindghi se bhut thak chuke the bhut choti si umar me isse ladna suru kar diya tha , ham unki banho me apni aakhri sans lena chahte the so ham uske pass chale gye ham to mot ko gale lgana chahte the unki god me sir rakhkar lekin ye hmari kismat ki hame ak iljajm mila ki ham unhe badnam karna chahte ha pta nhi kyo unse kuch bhi nahi kha gya hamse or ak khmoshi ki chadar jo unke milne par chod di thi , waps apne upar dal li , fir ak din unhone kha ki hamse shadi karna chahte ho na to ham aapko 2 sal ka wakt dete ha , 20,000/ month lakr dikhao , didi mere liye ye badi bat nahi thi because jin rasto ko me chodkar aaya tha wanha paisa bhut ha pyar or riste nahi , lekin uski kasam kha chuke the ham ki ham un rasto par nahi jayenge......
Or shayd is bat ko wo jante ha ki raj mar jayega kasam nahi tutegi , fir hamne ak rasta bnaya unhone kha hame ye sab chahiye to lga tu pagl ha raj fir bhi pta nahi kyo didi socha ki kyo na unki ye aakhri khushi bhi puri kar di jaye , Didi aaj ham 20000/ earning bhi karte ha or unse bhut dur aa gaye ha itna dur ki aaj hamko unko dekhe hua 4 month se upar ho gya ph karte ha to thik se bat nahi karti , pta nahi kyo lekin uski khatir ham apna sab kuch chodkar apne ghar parivar or yanha tak ki apni didi se bhut dur aa chuke ha , itna dur ki shayd waps jane tak bhut kuch badal jayega , kitni ajib bat ha didi ki jis shkhs ki khatir hamne apna sabkuch bhula diya aaj wo hi hame nahi samjh pa rha ha ya fir samjhne ki kosis nahi kar rha ha ..... kher baki bate fir kabhi ............... RAJ.......



BADI DER SE U PEMANA LIYE BETHA HU,
KOI DEKHE TO YE SAMJHE KI PIYE BETHA HU ....
JINDGHI BHAR KE LIYE RUTHKAR JANE WALE
ME ABHI TALAK TERI TASVIR LIYE BETHA HU..................... RAJ
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28th March 2008, 09:55 AM

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Dear Didi,

thanks for reoly lamha ji and sorry because hame itna wakt nahi mil pata ha ki ham har roj aapko jwab de paye . ak bat or waise to hame risto se ham apni jidghi me bhut nafrat karte ha lekin kishi ne sach kha ha na ki baye riste bhi bhulaye nahi jate . hamne aapko didi kha ha because ak meri sister ha jo mujhse ya fir u samjh lijiye ki ham usse bhut dur ha umar me mujhse bhut choti ha wo lekin bger uske u lagta ha ki hamara koi nahi ha , is duniya ki bhid me ak asi ladki bhi ha jisse ham pyar karte the , karte ha or jab tak ye sanse chalegi karte rahenge .
Didi ye mat samjhna ki wo bewfa ha nhi wo bewfa nahi bus gam ha to sirf is bat ka ki jise ham unki sanso se pahchankar ye bta dete ha ki wo kya kar rha ha wo shakhas ak din hamse kah deta ha ki aap jiyo ya maro hame koi matlab nahi . Didi jante ha ham ki wo hamse pyar karti ha lekin kya koi kishi se itna or asa pyar bhi kar sakta ha ki jite ji jindghi mot se badtar ho jaye .
Didi aaj ham aapko uske bare me btate ha hmari jindghi gujar rahi thi , ak dost ki mot ke bad ham apni jindghi ke rasto me bhatk gaye the fir un rasto se hame nikalkar lane wali hmari choti sister thi , fir ak din hmari jindghi me wo aaye jinhe ham apni jaan or CHAND kahte ha, hmari suruwat kuch ajib tarike se hui thi , hmari jinghi kishi ladki ke nam par koi rista tha to wo sirf didi ka tha ya u kah lijiye jo ham chahte the hame mila nahi tha , ak anjan number se miss call or miss call se msg friend , doti or fir pyar or wo bhi bger ak dusre ko dekhe ........... mahino gujar gaye the hame or wo kabhi hame dekhna bhi nahi chahti thi because wo hamse jyada apne parivar se pyar karti thi , fir ak hadse ne ham dono ko mila diya jis din ham mile hamne ak najar me unhe pahchan liya or wo hame hame nahi pahchan paye , dhire -2 pyar badta gya fir ak din hamne shadi ka kha to hunhone ha bhi kar di , achank meri jindghi ne palta khaya or mujhe bhut loss huaa , Didi bachpan se kam kar rha tha isliye hame is loss ka koi gam nahi tha , lekin is loss ke bad wo thodi-2 dhire-2 badlne laghi , har choti se choti bat par jhagda hone lga, pta nahi kyo lekin hame jitna loss ka gam nahi huaa usse kahi jyada is bat ka gam ho gya ki kya koi mere paise se bhi pyar kar sakta ha ,,,,,,,,

Didi ak din jhgda bad gya or usne hame kha jiyo ya maro hame matlab nahi , nahi malum aaj bhi hame kya huaa tha or hamne kya kiya bus ak hi rasta tha hmare pass ham jindghi se bhut thak chuke the bhut choti si umar me isse ladna suru kar diya tha , ham unki banho me apni aakhri sans lena chahte the so ham uske pass chale gye ham to mot ko gale lgana chahte the unki god me sir rakhkar lekin ye hmari kismat ki hame ak iljajm mila ki ham unhe badnam karna chahte ha pta nhi kyo unse kuch bhi nahi kha gya hamse or ak khmoshi ki chadar jo unke milne par chod di thi , waps apne upar dal li , fir ak din unhone kha ki hamse shadi karna chahte ho na to ham aapko 2 sal ka wakt dete ha , 20,000/ month lakr dikhao , didi mere liye ye badi bat nahi thi because jin rasto ko me chodkar aaya tha wanha paisa bhut ha pyar or riste nahi , lekin uski kasam kha chuke the ham ki ham un rasto par nahi jayenge......
Or shayd is bat ko wo jante ha ki raj mar jayega kasam nahi tutegi , fir hamne ak rasta bnaya unhone kha hame ye sab chahiye to lga tu pagl ha raj fir bhi pta nahi kyo didi socha ki kyo na unki ye aakhri khushi bhi puri kar di jaye , Didi aaj ham 20000/ earning bhi karte ha or unse bhut dur aa gaye ha itna dur ki aaj hamko unko dekhe hua 4 month se upar ho gya ph karte ha to thik se bat nahi karti , pta nahi kyo lekin uski khatir ham apna sab kuch chodkar apne ghar parivar or yanha tak ki apni didi se bhut dur aa chuke ha , itna dur ki shayd waps jane tak bhut kuch badal jayega , kitni ajib bat ha didi ki jis shkhs ki khatir hamne apna sabkuch bhula diya aaj wo hi hame nahi samjh pa rha ha ya fir samjhne ki kosis nahi kar rha ha ..... kher baki bate fir kabhi ............... RAJ.......



BADI DER SE U PEMANA LIYE BETHA HU,
KOI DEKHE TO YE SAMJHE KI PIYE BETHA HU ....
JINDGHI BHAR KE LIYE RUTHKAR JANE WALE
ME ABHI TALAK TERI TASVIR LIYE BETHA HU..................... RAJ

bhai wake hi tumari kahani thodi si mujse milte hai tumare sath jo ho raha hai wo ek baar mere sath bhi huva tha balke abhi ho raha hai fir mene bhi kasam li thi ki ab usko aajke baad kabhi nahi bulavuga jo log humse matalab se riste rakhte hai hume har pal azmate hai aur jab uski baari aati hai tab keh dete hai ki jiyo ya maro hume koi ferk nahi padta hai aur ye sunkar humare dil me pata nahi kitne dard aa jaate hai. dost har koi ek jesha nahi hota hai harek ki alag alag pahechan hoti hai per kuch log aise hote hai jiske upar hum duniya ki sari khushi dede na tab bhi usko bahut kam hi lagta hai. aur yaar ek shaks ke liye tumne tumare parivar ko chhoda vo bahut buri baat hai agar tumare pass itna wakt ho yaar to me to yahi kahuga ki tum load jaavo fir se apne parivaar ke pass kyu ki humari dard samaj ne wale sirf apne hi hote hai hum bahar ke logo ko apna dard dikhayega na to vo hume aur bhi dard denge.aaj tume itna to pata chal gaya na dost ki duniya aise bhi insan hote hai jo sirf apne kaam se rista rakhte hai per hume kabhi nahi samaj paate hai. mera bhi aisa hi tha mere sath bhi sirf kaam ka hi rista rakha tha aur meri abhi ki baat hai dost last 25 feb ki uske baad mene bhi socha tha ki me bhi insaan hu mera bhi hak banta hai me kyu sirf akela hi sab kuch sehta rahu is se to acha hai ki me usko hi bhool jaavu


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bhai wake hi tumari kahani thodi si mujse milte hai tumare sath jo ho raha hai wo ek baar mere sath bhi huva tha balke abhi ho raha hai fir mene bhi kasam li thi ki ab usko aajke baad kabhi nahi bulavuga jo log humse matalab se riste rakhte hai hume har pal azmate hai aur jab uski baari aati hai tab keh dete hai ki jiyo ya maro hume koi ferk nahi padta hai aur ye sunkar humare dil me pata nahi kitne dard aa jaate hai. dost har koi ek jesha nahi hota hai harek ki alag alag pahechan hoti hai per kuch log aise hote hai jiske upar hum duniya ki sari khushi dede na tab bhi usko bahut kam hi lagta hai. aur yaar ek shaks ke liye tumne tumare parivar ko chhoda vo bahut buri baat hai agar tumare pass itna wakt ho yaar to me to yahi kahuga ki tum load jaavo fir se apne parivaar ke pass kyu ki humari dard samaj ne wale sirf apne hi hote hai hum bahar ke logo ko apna dard dikhayega na to vo hume aur bhi dard denge.aaj tume itna to pata chal gaya na dost ki duniya aise bhi insan hote hai jo sirf apne kaam se rista rakhte hai per hume kabhi nahi samaj paate hai. mera bhi aisa hi tha mere sath bhi sirf kaam ka hi rista rakha tha aur meri abhi ki baat hai dost last 25 feb ki uske baad mene bhi socha tha ki me bhi insaan hu mera bhi hak banta hai me kyu sirf akela hi sab kuch sehta rahu is se to acha hai ki me usko hi bhool jaavu
thanks yar,
lekin aap shayd meri bato ko nahi samjh paye hamne kha na bhut choti si uamr me hamne bhut kuch dekha ha , or ham nadan bhi nahi ha sab kuch amjhte ha sab kuch jante ha lekin fir bhi , j bat aapne kahi ha barso pahle hame hmari didi kah chuki ha ki ak riste ke khatm ho jane se jindghi khatm nahi hoti , or Dost ( ham aapka nam nahi jante so ) hamne kha na wo bewfa nahi ha aaj bhi hmara intjar kar rahi ha , lekin ham unse itna dur nikal aaye ha ki waps jana bhut muskil ha fir unki kasam jo li ha ki 2 sal se pahle aapko to kishi ko bhi ham shakl tak nahi dikhayenge . ..... rahi bat parivar ki to shayd aap bhul gaye ki ham risto se nafrat ha lekin fhir bhi hamne aaj tak apne har farj ko pura kiya , aaj ki duniya sirf paisa chahiye bhai , dost ,beta ,pati ,ya others nahi or ham aaj bhi apna sara paisa unko or apne pyar ko bej dete ha because jiski jindghi khatm ho gai ho or jo jinda hokar bhi lash ho use paisa kis kam ka bus utna rakh lete ha jitna is lash ko jaruri hota ha . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Dost kahna nahi chahiye kahte ha ki bura koi nahi hota wakt bna deta ha , or shayd is bat ko ham se behtar koi nahi janta because hame setan se insan bhi hmari didi or hmare pyar ne bnaya ha , or jab unhone hame ye sja di ha to unki khushi ke liye to sari jindghi kurban ha ye or bat ha ki dard ko ham ne bantna band kar diya bus unke aage muskurate ha or hanste- 2 kah jate ha .............. a khuda unko itni kushiya dena jinko ham pyar karte ha , ye or bat ha ki dard nahi bantte ham . jo ho gam koi unko to de dena hame , ye or bat ha unke sath nahi rahte ham.................

So dost mera jo dost duniya se gya usne hamse kha tha ki pyar ka dusra nam tyag or balidan ha agar jindghi me sabkuch khona bhi pade to samjh lena ki tera pass kuch tha nahi,,,,,,,,,,,,,,. and thanks for you share your fillings with me.
AND AAP KI INFORMATION KE LIYE KI WO BHI AK GUJRATI HA.
RAJ


bewfa kahke bulaya to bura man gaye ,
aaina samne aaya to bura man gaye .............
unki har rat gujrti thi DIWALI ki trnah ,
is DILJALE ne ak deep jlaya to bura man gaye,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, RAJ
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bhai wake hi tumari kahani thodi si mujse milte hai tumare sath jo ho raha hai wo ek baar mere sath bhi huva tha balke abhi ho raha hai fir mene bhi kasam li thi ki ab usko aajke baad kabhi nahi bulavuga jo log humse matalab se riste rakhte hai hume har pal azmate hai aur jab uski baari aati hai tab keh dete hai ki jiyo ya maro hume koi ferk nahi padta hai aur ye sunkar humare dil me pata nahi kitne dard aa jaate hai. dost har koi ek jesha nahi hota hai harek ki alag alag pahechan hoti hai per kuch log aise hote hai jiske upar hum duniya ki sari khushi dede na tab bhi usko bahut kam hi lagta hai. aur yaar ek shaks ke liye tumne tumare parivar ko chhoda vo bahut buri baat hai agar tumare pass itna wakt ho yaar to me to yahi kahuga ki tum load jaavo fir se apne parivaar ke pass kyu ki humari dard samaj ne wale sirf apne hi hote hai hum bahar ke logo ko apna dard dikhayega na to vo hume aur bhi dard denge.aaj tume itna to pata chal gaya na dost ki duniya aise bhi insan hote hai jo sirf apne kaam se rista rakhte hai per hume kabhi nahi samaj paate hai. mera bhi aisa hi tha mere sath bhi sirf kaam ka hi rista rakha tha aur meri abhi ki baat hai dost last 25 feb ki uske baad mene bhi socha tha ki me bhi insaan hu mera bhi hak banta hai me kyu sirf akela hi sab kuch sehta rahu is se to acha hai ki me usko hi bhool jaavu
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lekin aap shayd meri bato ko nahi samjh paye hamne kha na bhut choti si uamr me hamne bhut kuch dekha ha , or ham nadan bhi nahi ha sab kuch amjhte ha sab kuch jante ha lekin fir bhi , j bat aapne kahi ha barso pahle hame hmari didi kah chuki ha ki ak riste ke khatm ho jane se jindghi khatm nahi hoti , or Dost ( ham aapka nam nahi jante so ) hamne kha na wo bewfa nahi ha aaj bhi hmara intjar kar rahi ha , lekin ham unse itna dur nikal aaye ha ki waps jana bhut muskil ha fir unki kasam jo li ha ki 2 sal se pahle aapko to kishi ko bhi ham shakl tak nahi dikhayenge . ..... rahi bat parivar ki to shayd aap bhul gaye ki ham risto se nafrat ha lekin fhir bhi hamne aaj tak apne har farj ko pura kiya , aaj ki duniya sirf paisa chahiye bhai , dost ,beta ,pati ,ya others nahi or ham aaj bhi apna sara paisa unko or apne pyar ko bej dete ha because jiski jindghi khatm ho gai ho or jo jinda hokar bhi lash ho use paisa kis kam ka bus utna rakh lete ha jitna is lash ko jaruri hota ha . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Dost kahna nahi chahiye kahte ha ki bura koi nahi hota wakt bna deta ha , or shayd is bat ko ham se behtar koi nahi janta because hame setan se insan bhi hmari didi or hmare pyar ne bnaya ha , or jab unhone hame ye sja di ha to unki khushi ke liye to sari jindghi kurban ha ye or bat ha ki dard ko ham ne bantna band kar diya bus unke aage muskurate ha or hanste- 2 kah jate ha .............. a khuda unko itni kushiya dena jinko ham pyar karte ha , ye or bat ha ki dard nahi bantte ham . jo ho gam koi unko to de dena hame , ye or bat ha unke sath nahi rahte ham.................

So dost mera jo dost duniya se gya usne hamse kha tha ki pyar ka dusra nam tyag or balidan ha agar jindghi me sabkuch khona bhi pade to samjh lena ki tera pass kuch tha nahi,,,,,,,,,,,,,,. and thanks for you share your fillings with me.

RAJ


bewfa kahke bulaya to bura man gaye ,
aaina samne aaya to bura man gaye .............
unki har rat gujrti thi DIWALI ki trnah ,
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NA JANE KYO WO HAME PASS NA PAKR ROYE ,DIYA DARD HAME OR KHUD GHBRAKAR ROYE ,MUBARK HO HAR KHUSHI KE SHEE UNKO ,HAM TO UNKI YADO KO SINE SE LGAKAR ROYE .......WO KAHTE BADL JAOGE AAP RAJ HAM NA BADLE PAR UNKI JUDAI ME ROYE ,ROSTE NATO SE NAFRAT SI HO GAI HAMENA JANE KYO UNKO DIL ME CUPHAKAR ROYE ....UNKI MAHFIL SE BHUT DUR AA GAYE HA HAM KI TANHAI ME UNKO PASS NA PAKR ROYE ................AANSUO ME DAL KAR RAH GAI JINDGHI KIUNKI TASVIR KO SINE SE LGAKAR ROYE................... RAJ
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NA JANE KYO WO HAME PASS NA PAKR ROYE ,DIYA DARD HAME OR KHUD GHBRAKAR ROYE ,MUBARK HO HAR KHUSHI KE SHEE UNKO ,HAM TO UNKI YADO KO SINE SE LGAKAR ROYE .......WO KAHTE BADL JAOGE AAP RAJ HAM NA BADLE PAR UNKI JUDAI ME ROYE ,ROSTE NATO SE NAFRAT SI HO GAI HAMENA JANE KYO UNKO DIL ME CUPHAKAR ROYE ....UNKI MAHFIL SE BHUT DUR AA GAYE HA HAM KI TANHAI ME UNKO PASS NA PAKR ROYE ................AANSUO ME DAL KAR RAH GAI JINDGHI KIUNKI TASVIR KO SINE SE LGAKAR ROYE................... RAJ

hey RAJ,
aap ka bahut bahut shukriya ki aap ne muje apni behen banakar muje itni izzat bakshi...rahi baat zindagi ke in ghamo ki to ek baat zaroor kehna chahungi ki ye gham hi hai jo kabhi hamara saath nahi chodte...is liye in ghamo se dosti kar leni chahiye...mai jaanti hoo ki maine jo kuch bhi kaha wo kehna bahut aasan hai par karna bahut mushkil....par is kadar dukhi hokar zindagi katna bhi to achi baat nahi hai....mai ek behen hone ke nate aap se ye kahungi ki apne aap ko sambhalne ki koshish kare aur aap jaha bhi ho waha ache dost dhunde...doston ke saath se zindagi thodi aasan ho jati hai...jo guzar chuka hai uske bareme na soche...apne aap ko aur chezo me busy rakhne ki koshish kare....
muje puri umeed hai ki aap apni is behen ki baat pe gaur zaroor karenge....
mai khuda se dua karungi ki aap ko dher sari khushiya aur sukoon ata farmaye...AAMEEN....


khuda se thoda rehem kharid lete,
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unke juthe pyaar me ek andha sa ban gaya tha
unki har ek baat ko kitni aasani se maan raha tha
mujhe kya malum tha ki wo dil se is kadar khel sakte hai
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mujhe kya malum tha ki wo dil se is kadar khel sakte hai
aur main nadan unko jeetane ke liye harta ja raha tha
pyar jutha hi sahi magar pyar pyar hota hai
dil me chot lage to kyu gabhrana
pyar to sirf pyar se hi hota hai
usme dard mile to dard se kese gabhrana


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HEY HI.....LAMHA...
NICE NAME...
GOOD ONE ...
KEEP IT UP SWEETY...


SALAM NAMASTHE.....


LAUT JAATHI HAI DUNIYA
GHAM HAMARA DEKH KAR,
JAISE LAUT JAATHIN HAIN LEHREN KINARA DEKH KAR,
THU KANDHA NA DENA MERE JANAAZE KO,
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NICE NAME...
GOOD ONE ...
KEEP IT UP SWEETY...


SALAM NAMASTHE.....


LAUT JAATHI HAI DUNIYA
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JAISE LAUT JAATHIN HAIN LEHREN KINARA DEKH KAR,
THU KANDHA NA DENA MERE JANAAZE KO,
KAHIN PHIR ZINDA NA HO JAOON ,
TERA SAHARA DEKH KAR.......



LOVE.....
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laot kar chale jana bahut mushkil hota hai
marne ke baad zinda rehna bahut kathin hota hai
kon is duniya me thik se ji raha hai
jaha bhi dekho sab ke pass dard ka hi dariya hota hai


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kon is duniya me thik se ji raha hai
jaha bhi dekho sab ke pass dard ka hi dariya hota hai


zakhm kitne paaye hai teri chahat main....
Mily dard behisab shakl-e-rahat main ....
meri bechaini ka alam hai ab iskader
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Mily dard behisab shakl-e-rahat main ....
meri bechaini ka alam hai ab iskader
teri awaz dhoonti hon her aik ahat main ................
Har baat ka koi jawab nahi hota
Har pyar ka naam kharab nahi hota
U to jum lete hai nashe me pine wale
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Har pyar ka naam kharab nahi hota
U to jum lete hai nashe me pine wale
Magar har nashe ka naam sharab nahi hota


wah dinesh ji kya baat hai


kabhi yaade dard ban jati hai
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kabhi yaade dard ban jati hai
kabhi yaade dawa ban jati hai
agar ye yaade hi na ho
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are apko to shayri aati nahi thi ke aa gayi itni jaldi

kabhi kabhi dekhte kuch aur hai
aur hota bhi kuch aur hai
muje pata hai app nahi samaj paavoge
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are apko to shayri aati nahi thi ke aa gayi itni jaldi

kabhi kabhi dekhte kuch aur hai
aur hota bhi kuch aur hai
muje pata hai app nahi samaj paavoge
kyu ki apki jagah bhi kahi aur hai



oh ha krenil sikha di


har nazar ko ek nigaah ka haq hai
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hum bhi dil lekar aaye hai is duniya me
hame bhi ek baar dil lagane ka haq hai

hey RIYA..............WELCOME to sdc.......

hazaro khawahishen aisi ,
ke har khawahish pe dam nikle,
bahut nikale mere armaan,
lekin fir bhi kam nikale.........(NM)


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har nazar ko ek nigaah ka haq hai
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hum bhi dil lekar aaye hai is duniya me
hame bhi ek baar dil lagane ka haq hai
dosti aise ho ki usko kuch na yaad rahe
nibhavo usko aise ki vo sab kuch bhul jaaye
app kya samaj te ho humari dosti kam hai
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hey RIYA..............WELCOME to sdc.......

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[quote=yoyosimran;278821]HEY HI.....LAMHA...
NICE NAME...
GOOD ONE ...
KEEP IT UP SWEETY...


SALAM NAMASTHE.....


LAUT JAATHI HAI DUNIYA
GHAM HAMARA DEKH KAR,
JAISE LAUT JAATHIN HAIN LEHREN KINARA DEKH KAR,
THU KANDHA NA DENA MERE JANAAZE KO,
KAHIN PHIR ZINDA NA HO JAOON ,
TERA SAHARA DEKH KAR.......



LOVE.....
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aap ko mera naam pasand aaya is ke liye shukriya.....aap ka swagat hai sdc pe......

hazaro fulon ka milan hi chaman(garden)kehlata hai,
hum hi hum hai to kya hum hai,
tum hi tum ho to kya tum ho...............


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ishq ki aag me jala hai koi
raato me kisi ki yaado me roya hai koi
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Love kya kasoor tha mera - 2nd April 2008, 02:40 PM

Wo jo aaj mera Dil tood ke Hans Raha
Aisa ik shaqs to mera mehboob na tha
jis se Kabhi saath manga tha umer bhar ka
use to do Kadam bhi sang chalna manzoor na tha

Us ka irada kab aur kahan badel gaya
ye to mere is thanha dil kabhi maloom hi na tha
Per jab se chooda hai mera saath usne
us din se hi kahin mere dil ko sakoon na tha

main soochta raha hade-wafa ki bariqi tak
per meri is wafaa ko apnana unko qabool na tha
karta to karta main aaj fariyaad kis se
Us rooz to sajde mein Khuda bhi maujood na tha

Ab karoon to Karoon sajda main kahan
Masjid aur Mandir mein Ashiq ka ana bhi manzoor na tha
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TOO GOOD LAMHA...
KEEP IT UP.....

U WRITE TOO WELL...

BAHUTH ACHHE....

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KEEP IT UP.....

U WRITE TOO WELL...

BAHUTH ACHHE....

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Aur hum dhoonte hai use chand me
Fir bhi kahi pyar nahi milta hai
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Wadon pe hamare woh aitbaar nahi karte,
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darta hai ye dil unki ruswai se,
aur wo samajte hai ki hum unse pyaar nahi karte.....



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too good....

keep it up

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keep it up

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thanx dear.................

tum chale jaoge to koi khushi na rahegi,
tumhare bina chirago me roshni na rahegi,
kya kahe kya guzregi is dil par,
zinda to rahenge magar zindagi na rahegi............


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thanx dear.................

tum chale jaoge to koi khushi na rahegi,
tumhare bina chirago me roshni na rahegi,
kya kahe kya guzregi is dil par,
zinda to rahenge magar zindagi na rahegi............



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har sitare me aabad hai ek jaha
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har sitare me aabad hai ek jaha
par nazar nahi aate wo yaha waha
wo jise bhi mile usi ki kismat
par hamari kismat me nahi hai ye jaha


bahut khub............

gulshan parast hoo,muje gul hi nahi azeez,
kaanto se bhi nibaah kiye jaa raha hoo mai(NM)......


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bahut khub............

gulshan parast hoo,muje gul hi nahi azeez,
kaanto se bhi nibaah kiye jaa raha hoo mai(NM)......



mere haatho se meri taqdir banane wale
kyu khinchi thi ye lakire tune
har pal har waqt ek khushi hi mangi thi
tune gam bhi nahi diye uske
sitaro se aabad hai tera aasman
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mere haatho se meri taqdir banane wale
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har pal har waqt ek khushi hi mangi thi
tune gam bhi nahi diye uske
sitaro se aabad hai tera aasman
ek sitara meri joli me dal de
dil diya pyaar karne ke liye
to chhin liya tune usko mujse



shu vaat chhe chintu tu aatli mast shayri kare chhe mane to khabar ja nati chal hu pan ek tara mate lakhu



mana ye waqt hame yaad karne ka nahi
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mana aaspaas aapke sari duniya hai
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hamaari rooh pe jab bhi azaab utreN ge
tumhaari yaad ko iss dil ki Dhaal hona hai


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hamaari rooh pe jab bhi azaab utreN ge
tumhaari yaad ko iss dil ki Dhaal hona hai

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Beautiful thread...

Kal raat janay kya hua...

Kuch der pehlay neend say,

Kuch Ashq milnay aagaye...

Kuch khwaab bhi tootay huye,

Kuch log bhi roothay huye,

Kuch raasta bhatki hui,

Kuch gard mein lipti hui,

Kuch Be-tarha pheli hui,

Kuch khol mein simti hui,

Be-rabt si sochein kayee...

Bhooli hui batein kayee...

Aik shaks ki yaadein kayee...

Phir dair tak jaagi rahi,

Sochon mein Gum bethi rahi,

Ungli say thunday Farsh par...

aik naam hi likhti rahi,

Kal raat bhi woh raat thi...

Kuch Der pehlay neend say,

MEIN DER TAK ROTI RAHI....

Bahut hi khoooooooob hai naina ji, bahut hi pyari poem, pyari jihi halki jihi, sach bolu to bahut hi aachha likha hai aapne



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i send you my 1 gazal i hope you like
Intezaar to kareiN ke jab vo aaye bhi
Bhool jaayeiN hum chhodeiN jo mere saaye bhi

Kal subah yeh zindagi jo na rahi
Tamaasha dekheNge apne aur paraaye bhi

Vo gair hai to gair ban-na bhi seekh le
YaadoN meiN aake baar-baar aazmaaye bhi

Kehta hai duniya ko chhoD dega humeiN
MuD ke dekhe baar-baar, ghabraaye bhi

Yeh kaisa khuda hai mere dosto
Khud hi lagaaye aag, khud hi bhujaaye bhi

Shikwa bhi to kya kareiN hum kisi se
Khoya ik humsafar to lakhoN rehnuma paaye bhirahul pandi

bahut hi aachha likha hai, har line dil ko chhu gayi, Goood poem



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3rd April 2008, 10:03 PM

lo kuch hum bhi pesh kar de..................................

Kash main chand tu sitara hota,
falak pey ek ashiyana hamara hota,
sab tujhe door bohat door se dakhtey
per tujhe chhooney ka haq sirf hamara hota














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lo kuch hum bhi pesh kar de..................................

Kash main chand tu sitara hota,
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sab tujhe door bohat door se dakhtey
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bahut khub..................
ye kaun chala chaman se khamoshiyan lekar,
kali kali ro uthi hai siskiyan lekar,
hans rahe the jo mere dubne par,
wo hi nikle hai meri talash me kashtiyan lekar.....


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bahut khub..................
ye kaun chala chaman se khamoshiyan lekar,
kali kali ro uthi hai siskiyan lekar,
hans rahe the jo mere dubne par,
wo hi nikle hai meri talash me kashtiyan lekar.....
Huyiee muddat ke chaman chhoot gaya
Ab hamein kya jo bahaar aayiee hai


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leke hum dusro ki hasi kya kare
jo apni nahi wo khushi leke kya kare
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