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Lightbulb UDAASI hai...!! - 10th September 2019, 09:12 PM

सुबह तक शाम की उदासी है,
मुझ में आवाम की उदासी है।

रो पड़े देख कर लिफ़ाफ़ा वो,
मेरे पैग़ाम की उदासी है।।

दिन के हिस्से तमाम काम आये,
और फिर शाम की उदासी है।।

एक जो शाम थी बिछड़ने की,
अब भी उस शाम की उदासी है।

जाम पर जाम पी रहा हूं मैं,
और हर जाम की उदासी है।

देख हंसने लगा हूं मैं फिर से,
ये तो बस नाम की उदासी है।

इक तो मंज़िल ही थी उदास अपनी,
दूसरी गाम की उदासी है।

लोग कहने लगें मुझे पागल,
वरना किस काम की उदासी है।






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Ghayal bhai

Namaste

Kaise ho bhai? Poorane doston ki tehreer dekh Kar hamesha khushi hotee hai.. Andaaz e bayaan aaj bhee wahi hain aapka.. Bahot khoob

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amaa kya Ghazal raqm ki hai Taish bhai

choTi beher meiN yeh kamaal kar paana apne aap meiN hairat aNgez baat hai

ek jo shaam thi bichaRne ki
ab bhi us shaam ki udaasi hai

kaleja cheerne waali baat keh gaye haiN miyaaN

kya khayaal, maNzar, tasveer chhupi hai in do misroN meiN!

maiN nihayat sharmiNdaa huuN ke is se pehle aapka is Ghazal ke liye shukurguzaar na ho sakaa.

mubarkbaad aur shukirya donoN ba-sad-mazrat baraa-e-meherbaani qabool kijiye

rab raakha
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Ghayal bhai

Namaste

Kaise ho bhai? Poorane doston ki tehreer dekh Kar hamesha khushi hotee hai.. Andaaz e bayaan aaj bhee wahi hain aapka.. Bahot khoob

Khush rahen... Apna khayal rakhen

Duaon ke saath ijaazat

Aapka
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Bahut shukriya bhai ki aaj ke zamane me aap bhi yahaan aa ke humaar kalaam pe thahar gaye, varna ab kahaan waqt kisi ke paas, bas yunhi himmat bachate rakhiye....



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amaa kya Ghazal raqm ki hai Taish bhai

choTi beher meiN yeh kamaal kar paana apne aap meiN hairat aNgez baat hai

ek jo shaam thi bichaRne ki
ab bhi us shaam ki udaasi hai

kaleja cheerne waali baat keh gaye haiN miyaaN

kya khayaal, maNzar, tasveer chhupi hai in do misroN meiN!

maiN nihayat sharmiNdaa huuN ke is se pehle aapka is Ghazal ke liye shukurguzaar na ho sakaa.

mubarkbaad aur shukirya donoN ba-sad-mazrat baraa-e-meherbaani qabool kijiye

rab raakha
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Kamaal ghazal hai ye.. Mubaarak ho


QUOTE=Taish;496943]सुबह तक शाम की उदासी है,
मुझ में आवाम की उदासी है।

रो पड़े देख कर लिफ़ाफ़ा वो,
मेरे पैग़ाम की उदासी है।।

दिन के हिस्से तमाम काम आये,
और फिर शाम की उदासी है।।

एक जो शाम थी बिछड़ने की,
अब भी उस शाम की उदासी है।

जाम पर जाम पी रहा हूं मैं,
और हर जाम की उदासी है।

देख हंसने लगा हूं मैं फिर से,
ये तो बस नाम की उदासी है।

इक तो मंज़िल ही थी उदास अपनी,
दूसरी गाम की उदासी है।

लोग कहने लगें मुझे पागल,
वरना किस काम की उदासी है।



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