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Iss qadar mai anjuman se terey ruswa ho ke nikla - 17th September 2016, 12:58 PM

Iss qadar mai anjuman se terey ruswaa ho ke nikla
Pur-musarrat aaya tha mai par fasurdah ho ke nikla

Aaye thai shirkat karne terey bazm mai hum ba-jam’aat
Iss qadar ruswaa hua aakhir mai tanha ho ke nikla

Ek tamanna thi panaah-e-ishq mai aaney ki teri
Iss qadar ghaarat hua ke be-tamanna ho ke nikla

Baarha kartey rahey tum waar yu teer-e-nazar se
Kya kahu yaaro mai toh zakhmi saraapa ho ke nikla

Beh raha tha dard ka darya nigaaho se musalsal
Kya kahu aye humnafas tab bhi mai pyasa ho ke nikla

Haisiyat gard-e-zameeN ke bhi baraabar na thi pehle
Ab gaya jiss bazm mai mauzu-e-charcha ho ke nikla

Kya kahu teer-e-nazar kha kar bhi ye fitrat na badli
Ishq ka maara mujahid tera shaida ho ke nikla


FEW MEANINGS

Anjuman= association/gathering/bazm
·Pur-musarrat= happily
·Fasurdah= dejected
·Ba-jam’aat= with a group
·Ghaarat= plundered
·Baarha= many times/again & again
·Saraapa= from head to foot
·Musalsal= continous
·Humnafas= lover/friend/companion
·Gard-e-zameeN= dust of the surface
·Mauzu-e-charcha= debatable topic
·Shaida= maverick

   
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17th September 2016, 04:34 PM

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Iss qadar mai anjuman se terey ruswaa ho ke nikla
Pur-musarrat aaya tha mai par fasurdah ho ke nikla

Aaye thai shirkat karne terey bazm mai hum ba-jam’aat
Iss qadar ruswaa hua aakhir mai tanha ho ke nikla

Ek tamanna thi panaah-e-ishq mai aaney ki teri
Iss qadar ghaarat hua ke be-tamanna ho ke nikla

Baarha kartey rahey tum waar yu teer-e-nazar se
Kya kahu yaaro mai toh zakhmi saraapa ho ke nikla

Beh raha tha dard ka darya nigaaho se musalsal
Kya kahu aye humnafas tab bhi mai pyasa ho ke nikla

Haisiyat gard-e-zameeN ke bhi baraabar na thi pehle
Ab gaya jiss bazm mai mauzu-e-charcha ho ke nikla

Kya kahu teer-e-nazar kha kar bhi ye fitrat na badli
Ishq ka maara mujahid tera shaida ho ke nikla


FEW MEANINGS

Anjuman= association/gathering/bazm
·Pur-musarrat= happily
·Fasurdah= dejected
·Ba-jam’aat= with a group
·Ghaarat= plundered
·Baarha= many times/again & again
·Saraapa= from head to foot
·Musalsal= continous
·Humnafas= lover/friend/companion
·Gard-e-zameeN= dust of the surface
·Mauzu-e-charcha= debatable topic
·Shaida= maverick

Kya baat hai mujahid sahab ishq aur dard dono hee rang hain aapki is ghazal me bahot khoob.....

Likhte rahein...



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17th September 2016, 04:56 PM

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Iss qadar mai anjuman se terey ruswaa ho ke nikla
Pur-musarrat aaya tha mai par fasurdah ho ke nikla

Aaye thai shirkat karne terey bazm mai hum ba-jam’aat
Iss qadar ruswaa hua aakhir mai tanha ho ke nikla

Ek tamanna thi panaah-e-ishq mai aaney ki teri
Iss qadar ghaarat hua ke be-tamanna ho ke nikla

Baarha kartey rahey tum waar yu teer-e-nazar se
Kya kahu yaaro mai toh zakhmi saraapa ho ke nikla

Beh raha tha dard ka darya nigaaho se musalsal
Kya kahu aye humnafas tab bhi mai pyasa ho ke nikla

Haisiyat gard-e-zameeN ke bhi baraabar na thi pehle
Ab gaya jiss bazm mai mauzu-e-charcha ho ke nikla

Kya kahu teer-e-nazar kha kar bhi ye fitrat na badli
Ishq ka maara mujahid tera shaida ho ke nikla


FEW MEANINGS

Anjuman= association/gathering/bazm
·Pur-musarrat= happily
·Fasurdah= dejected
·Ba-jam’aat= with a group
·Ghaarat= plundered
·Baarha= many times/again & again
·Saraapa= from head to foot
·Musalsal= continous
·Humnafas= lover/friend/companion
·Gard-e-zameeN= dust of the surface
·Mauzu-e-charcha= debatable topic
·Shaida= maverick


wahhhhh Ali ji, bahut khoobsurat kalaam, urdu lafzoN ki bharmaar rhi aapki gazal meiN, shukriya ki aapne urdu lafzoN ke matlab bhi bata diye, warna meri to samaj se bahar rehti gazal

khoobsurat kalaam par daad hazir hai.


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17th September 2016, 05:43 PM

Tah-e-dil se mashkoor hu aapka madhu sahiba aur sunita aapa

Aapne nigaah-e-karam farmaya meri adna si koshish par

Ummeed karta hu agli baar iss se bhi behtar kalaam pesh karne ki koshish karunga

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18th September 2016, 11:00 AM

Mujahid bhai

Salaam

Subha subhaa nafees Ghazal paDh ke dil Shaad Shaad ho gayaa.... Yuunhi bazm ko shaan ko baDhaate tahiye... Dil se daad

Duaaon ke saath ijaazat

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Vah buhet achee ghazal dard m doobi huee
Mujahid sahib dhairon daad


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Iss qadar mai anjuman se terey ruswaa ho ke nikla
Pur-musarrat aaya tha mai par fasurdah ho ke nikla

Aaye thai shirkat karne terey bazm mai hum ba-jam’aat
Iss qadar ruswaa hua aakhir mai tanha ho ke nikla

Ek tamanna thi panaah-e-ishq mai aaney ki teri
Iss qadar ghaarat hua ke be-tamanna ho ke nikla

Baarha kartey rahey tum waar yu teer-e-nazar se
Kya kahu yaaro mai toh zakhmi saraapa ho ke nikla

Beh raha tha dard ka darya nigaaho se musalsal
Kya kahu aye humnafas tab bhi mai pyasa ho ke nikla

Haisiyat gard-e-zameeN ke bhi baraabar na thi pehle
Ab gaya jiss bazm mai mauzu-e-charcha ho ke nikla

Kya kahu teer-e-nazar kha kar bhi ye fitrat na badli
Ishq ka maara mujahid tera shaida ho ke nikla


FEW MEANINGS

Anjuman= association/gathering/bazm
·Pur-musarrat= happily
·Fasurdah= dejected
·Ba-jam’aat= with a group
·Ghaarat= plundered
·Baarha= many times/again & again
·Saraapa= from head to foot
·Musalsal= continous
·Humnafas= lover/friend/companion
·Gard-e-zameeN= dust of the surface
·Mauzu-e-charcha= debatable topic
·Shaida= maverick



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Shukriya dhaval sahab aur saba sahiba

Aapke daad-o-tehseen ka mashkoor hu
   
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Iss qadar mai anjuman se terey ruswaa ho ke nikla
Pur-musarrat aaya tha mai par fasurdah ho ke nikla

Aaye thai shirkat karne terey bazm mai hum ba-jam’aat
Iss qadar ruswaa hua aakhir mai tanha ho ke nikla

Ek tamanna thi panaah-e-ishq mai aaney ki teri
Iss qadar ghaarat hua ke be-tamanna ho ke nikla

Baarha kartey rahey tum waar yu teer-e-nazar se
Kya kahu yaaro mai toh zakhmi saraapa ho ke nikla

Beh raha tha dard ka darya nigaaho se musalsal
Kya kahu aye humnafas tab bhi mai pyasa ho ke nikla

Haisiyat gard-e-zameeN ke bhi baraabar na thi pehle
Ab gaya jiss bazm mai mauzu-e-charcha ho ke nikla

Kya kahu teer-e-nazar kha kar bhi ye fitrat na badli
Ishq ka maara mujahid tera shaida ho ke nikla


FEW MEANINGS

Anjuman= association/gathering/bazm
·Pur-musarrat= happily
·Fasurdah= dejected
·Ba-jam’aat= with a group
·Ghaarat= plundered
·Baarha= many times/again & again
·Saraapa= from head to foot
·Musalsal= continous
·Humnafas= lover/friend/companion
·Gard-e-zameeN= dust of the surface
·Mauzu-e-charcha= debatable topic
·Shaida= maverick

Bahut hi umdaa ghazal janaab

Aaye thai shirkat karne terey bazm mai hum ba-jam’aat
Iss qadar ruswaa hua aakhir mai tanha ho ke nikla

kya adaaygi hai janaab, daad qubool farmiyegaa



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