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Love teri berukhi lajwaab bhi.. - 6th December 2014, 12:59 PM
Hai nek dil aur nayaab bhi,
Tu falak tu maahtaab bhi.

Tu sukoon bhi e dilruba,
Tu hi dard e dil ka hisaab bhi.

Na khuda se kuch aur mangu main,
Har sawaal ka hai tu jawaab bhi.

Meri dhadkano se samajh le ye,
Meri neend tu mere khwaab bhi.

mera din muqammal ho gaya,
Jo mila tera bas adaab bhi.

Ye dilkash farebi ankhein uff
Teri berukhi lajwaab bhi.

Ki mujhe hi mera pata nhi,
Yoon to khuli huyi main kitaab bhi.

yoon to ashk aankh me saje rahe,
Kabhi umad pade ye sailaab bhi.


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6th December 2014, 05:08 PM
Masha Allaah bahot khoob likha hai aapne madhu sahiba.....

Tu sukoon bhi e dilruba,
Tu hi dard e dil ka hisaab bhi.

waahhhh


Meri dhadkano se samajh le ye,
Meri neend tu mere khwaab bh

bahot aalaa

Ye dilkash farebi ankhein uff
Teri berukhi lajwaab bhi.

qatal kar gayaa ye sher ......

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6th December 2014, 09:59 PM
Madhu jee

Namaste

Ehsaas dil kl chhu gaye...dil se daad

Khush rahiye...apnaa khayaal rakhen

Duaaon ke saath ijaazat

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Hai o rabba .. apne mehboob ki itni tareef , Madhu ji aap ne dil moh liya aaj .

Kya likhti hain aap , such mein aisa lagta hai ki sagar ki ek Lehar ke baad doosri Lehar aa rahi hai aur main bus un lehron ko gin raha hunN ....

WaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaH bahut ache ehsaas.

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Madhu ji........behad khoobsurat peshkash.
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12th December 2014, 11:32 AM
Na khuda se kuch aur mangu main,
Har sawaal ka hai tu jawaab bhi.

Ye dilkash farebi ankhein uff
Teri berukhi lajwaab bhi.

waaaaaaaaaahh! waaaaaaaaah! Madhu jee..

Masha Allah.. kia kehny .. bohat dilkash aur umdaH ghazal
inayat kii hai aap ne meHfil ko......

tamaam ashaar aik se bhaD kar aik aur dil ko chuutay huay....
quoted aashar kuch khaas pasand aaye......

teh e dil se nikli beshumaar daad qabool kejiye!

likhte rahiye,

DuaooN ke saath,

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Bahut khoob Hassan Bhai!

Ye dilkash farebi ankhein uff
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Kya baat hai ..waah!

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Meri dhadkano se samajh le ye,
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Hai nek dil aur nayaab bhi,
Tu falak tu maahtaab bhi.

Tu sukoon bhi e dilruba,
Tu hi dard e dil ka hisaab bhi.

Na khuda se kuch aur mangu main,
Har sawaal ka hai tu jawaab bhi.

Meri dhadkano se samajh le ye,
Meri neend tu mere khwaab bhi.

mera din muqammal ho gaya,
Jo mila tera bas adaab bhi.

Ye dilkash farebi ankhein uff
Teri berukhi lajwaab bhi.

Ki mujhe hi mera pata nhi,
Yoon to khuli huyi main kitaab bhi.

yoon to ashk aankh me saje rahe,
Kabhi umad pade ye sailaab bhi.
Good one Madhu... Well written,

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Masha Allaah bahot khoob likha hai aapne madhu sahiba.....

Tu sukoon bhi e dilruba,
Tu hi dard e dil ka hisaab bhi.

waahhhh


Meri dhadkano se samajh le ye,
Meri neend tu mere khwaab bh

bahot aalaa

Ye dilkash farebi ankhein uff
Teri berukhi lajwaab bhi.

qatal kar gayaa ye sher ......

behad laajawab peshkash.. bas likhti rahiye aur bhi zyaada.....

Shaad.....
Bahut shukriya shaad ji....aapke tareef karne k andaaz bahut anokhe hote hain...
Yoon hi sath dete rahein..
Khush rahiye..


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Madhu jee

Namaste

Ehsaas dil kl chhu gaye...dil se daad

Khush rahiye...apnaa khayaal rakhen

Duaaon ke saath ijaazat

Aapka

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Hai o rabba .. apne mehboob ki itni tareef , Madhu ji aap ne dil moh liya aaj .

Kya likhti hain aap , such mein aisa lagta hai ki sagar ki ek Lehar ke baad doosri Lehar aa rahi hai aur main bus un lehron ko gin raha hunN ....

WaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaH bahut ache ehsaas.

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Madhu ji........behad khoobsurat peshkash.
Wwaaaaaaaaaaaaah.......maja
Aaa gaya...
Daaad kubul kare...

Aapka apna
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Hai nek dil aur nayaab bhi,
Tu falak tu maahtaab bhi.

Tu sukoon bhi e dilruba,
Tu hi dard e dil ka hisaab bhi.

Na khuda se kuch aur mangu main,
Har sawaal ka hai tu jawaab bhi.

Meri dhadkano se samajh le ye,
Meri neend tu mere khwaab bhi.

mera din muqammal ho gaya,
Jo mila tera bas adaab bhi.

Ye dilkash farebi ankhein uff
Teri berukhi lajwaab bhi.

Ki mujhe hi mera pata nhi,
Yoon to khuli huyi main kitaab bhi.

yoon to ashk aankh me saje rahe,
Kabhi umad pade ye sailaab bhi.
Madhu ji,

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Na khuda se kuch aur mangu main,
Har sawaal ka hai tu jawaab bhi.

Ye dilkash farebi ankhein uff
Teri berukhi lajwaab bhi.

waaaaaaaaaahh! waaaaaaaaah! Madhu jee..

Masha Allah.. kia kehny .. bohat dilkash aur umdaH ghazal
inayat kii hai aap ne meHfil ko......

tamaam ashaar aik se bhaD kar aik aur dil ko chuutay huay....
quoted aashar kuch khaas pasand aaye......

teh e dil se nikli beshumaar daad qabool kejiye!

likhte rahiye,

DuaooN ke saath,
Bahut bahut shukriya hassan jee...
mere kalaam ko is kadar pasand kiya aapne inayat hai...
Aapki beshumaar daad ke liye dil ki gahraiyon se shukriya..
aate rahein..
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Hai nek dil aur nayaab bhi,
Tu falak tu maahtaab bhi.

Tu sukoon bhi e dilruba,
Tu hi dard e dil ka hisaab bhi.

Na khuda se kuch aur mangu main,
Har sawaal ka hai tu jawaab bhi.

Meri dhadkano se samajh le ye,
Meri neend tu mere khwaab bhi.

mera din muqammal ho gaya,
Jo mila tera bas adaab bhi.

Ye dilkash farebi ankhein uff
Teri berukhi lajwaab bhi.

Ki mujhe hi mera pata nhi,
Yoon to khuli huyi main kitaab bhi.

yoon to ashk aankh me saje rahe,
Kabhi umad pade ye sailaab bhi.
Nice one madhu ji...
Keep writing..

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Tu sukoon bhi e dilruba,
Tu hi dard e dil ka hisaab bhi.

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Har sawaal ka hai tu jawaab bhi.

Meri dhadkano se samajh le ye,
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mera din muqammal ho gaya,
Jo mila tera bas adaab bhi.

Ye dilkash farebi ankhein uff
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Ki mujhe hi mera pata nhi,
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Tu sukoon bhi e dilruba,
Tu hi dard e dil ka hisaab bhi.

Na khuda se kuch aur mangu main,
Har sawaal ka hai tu jawaab bhi.

Meri dhadkano se samajh le ye,
Meri neend tu mere khwaab bhi.

mera din muqammal ho gaya,
Jo mila tera bas adaab bhi.

Ye dilkash farebi ankhein uff
Teri berukhi lajwaab bhi.

Ki mujhe hi mera pata nhi,
Yoon to khuli huyi main kitaab bhi.

yoon to ashk aankh me saje rahe,
Kabhi umad pade ye sailaab bhi.

Madhu Bala..........bahut khoobsurat pyari si gazal hai yeh....yeh aik sher muje bahutttttttttttttt pyara lga.

mera din muqammal ho gaya,
Jo mila tera bas adaab bhi.

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Tu falak tu maahtaab bhi.

Tu sukoon bhi e dilruba,
Tu hi dard e dil ka hisaab bhi.

Na khuda se kuch aur mangu main,
Har sawaal ka hai tu jawaab bhi.

Meri dhadkano se samajh le ye,
Meri neend tu mere khwaab bhi.

mera din muqammal ho gaya,
Jo mila tera bas adaab bhi.

Ye dilkash farebi ankhein uff
Teri berukhi lajwaab bhi.

Ki mujhe hi mera pata nhi,
Yoon to khuli huyi main kitaab bhi.

yoon to ashk aankh me saje rahe,
Kabhi umad pade ye sailaab bhi.

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bahut Khoob......!

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Har ek sher mukammal aur be intehaa pyar liye.

Bohut khoob.
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mera din muqammal ho gaya,
Jo mila tera bas adaab bhi.

khush rho
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Aati rahiyega....

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Tu sukoon bhi e dilruba,
Tu hi dard e dil ka hisaab bhi.

Na khuda se kuch aur mangu main,
Har sawaal ka hai tu jawaab bhi.

Meri dhadkano se samajh le ye,
Meri neend tu mere khwaab bhi.

mera din muqammal ho gaya,
Jo mila tera bas adaab bhi.

Ye dilkash farebi ankhein uff
Teri berukhi lajwaab bhi.

Ki mujhe hi mera pata nhi,
Yoon to khuli huyi main kitaab bhi.

yoon to ashk aankh me saje rahe,
Kabhi umad pade ye sailaab bhi.
bahot khub ehsaas hai, Madhuji
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bahut Khoob......!
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Hai nek dil aur nayaab bhi,
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Tu sukoon bhi e dilruba,
Tu hi dard e dil ka hisaab bhi.

Na khuda se kuch aur mangu main,
Har sawaal ka hai tu jawaab bhi.

Meri dhadkano se samajh le ye,
Meri neend tu mere khwaab bhi.

mera din muqammal ho gaya,
Jo mila tera bas adaab bhi.

Ye dilkash farebi ankhein uff
Teri berukhi lajwaab bhi.

Ki mujhe hi mera pata nhi,
Yoon to khuli huyi main kitaab bhi.

yoon to ashk aankh me saje rahe,
Kabhi umad pade ye sailaab bhi.

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