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تُم جانو تُم کو غیر سے جو رسم و راہ ہو
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Waah janaab bahut khoob....................
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4th November 2016, 08:28 PM
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bahut umdaa shakir sahab yunhi likhte rahiye
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Umda sharing.................... waah!!!
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na jane kon si ummeed kaisi aas dil tujhko
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Waahhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Bahut umdaa par kis na muraad ka zikr ho raha hai is sher mein...??
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Waaah khoob !!bahot khoob........................
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aaj ka sher................
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Shukriya Bhai Shaad
Mere Khuloos Se Aksar, Mujhe Mili Ruswaayi Hai
Mene Apno Ke Hatho.N, Badi Shikast Khaayi Hai
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dil Doobne ke saath saath shaam huaa kartii thi,
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aaj ka sher................
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Waah!!!!!!...umda sharing. ....
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Bahot khoob shaad sahab ..........
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Waah!!Bahot khoob janaab...!!!
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30th November 2016, 11:35 PM
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अच्छे काम होते नही मुझसे और बुरे काम कर नही पाता
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