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21st August 2015, 08:11 AM
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jab hai vo vaqt sa tum usko dhoondhna chhodo..
har gali har dagar se usko poochhna chhodo..
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Teri gali, tera pata, tera shaher maloom hai,
Jane kyoon fir bhi tuzhe my dhoondhta hoon dar badar.
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27th August 2015, 10:40 PM
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Teri gali, tera pata, tera shaher maloom hai,
Jane kyoon fir bhi tuzhe my dhoondhta hoon dar badar.
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Nice Sher Madhu ji and Bhushan ji.
Rait par kadmon ke nishaan kab tiktey hain
Bhuule jo ek baar kab kahaan miltey hain
Kya gali kya pata iss shehar ka?
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28th August 2015, 12:01 AM
Wah Sukanya ji bohut khoob.
Jo bhoole tum rasta to raah dikhaaoonga
Tumhe khud se phir se ik baar milaaonga
Mujhe kya hai karna gali se teri
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28th August 2015, 12:19 AM
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Wah Sukanya ji bohut khoob.
Jo bhoole tum rasta to raah dikhaaoonga
Tumhe khud se phir se ik baar milaaonga
Mujhe kya hai karna gali se teri
saya hun tera jab chahoon lipat jaaunga.
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Bahut khoob sarika....
Kaha tumne jo bhi chalo hamne mana..
Kaho hath me hath lekar ye jana
Kabhi door tumse na ab jaunga...
Pukarogi dil se bas chala aaunga...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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28th August 2015, 06:58 AM
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Bahut khoob sarika....
Kaha tumne jo bhi chalo hamne mana..
Kaho hath me hath lekar ye jana
Kabhi door tumse na ab jaunga...
Pukarogi dil se bas chala aaunga...
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Wah....madhu
Chalo jaana tumse hai wada humara
Kabhi dil na todu iraada humara
Tera bina na sanwar paunga
Hua ja juda to main mar jaunga
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28th August 2015, 11:56 AM
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Wah....madhu
Chalo jaana tumse hai wada humara
Kabhi dil na todu iraada humara
Tera bina na sanwar paunga
Hua ja juda to main mar jaunga
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Bahut khoob ji...
Vajah koi bhi ho magar ye na kahna..
Nahi mujhko manzoor ab door rahna..
vadein ye kasme rahein yaad hamko
Sukh dukh sabhi sath milkar hai sahna.
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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28th August 2015, 01:35 PM
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waaaah bohot khoob janab......
Zaroorat nahi gazlon me tera naam likhne ki
koi ye dhadkane sun le, to tu badnaam ho jaye
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बहुत ही बेहतरीन शेर हुआ है आपका दिल खुश हो गया...
बड़ी मुश्किल से पाला है वो दुश्मन राज़ की खातिर,
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3rd September 2015, 10:33 AM
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बहुत ही बेहतरीन शेर हुआ है आपका दिल खुश हो गया...
बड़ी मुश्किल से पाला है वो दुश्मन राज़ की खातिर,
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"khud aag dekar apne nasheman ko aap hi,
bijli se inteqaam liya hai kabhi kabhi"
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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18th September 2015, 06:42 PM
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बहुत ही बेहतरीन शेर हुआ है आपका दिल खुश हो गया...
बड़ी मुश्किल से पाला है वो दुश्मन राज़ की खातिर,
तेरा भी नाम हो जाए........मेरा इंतिकाम हो जाए |
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Housala afzahi ka tahe dil se shukriya Harsh ji....
Aapka apna
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13th October 2015, 04:11 PM
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"khud aag dekar apne nasheman ko aap hi,
bijli se inteqaam liya hai kabhi kabhi"
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Nasheman pe nasheman is kadar tamiir karta ja
Ki bijli girte girte aap khud bezaar ho jaye...
Nm..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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6th November 2015, 02:13 PM
dil ki baizaari kaa to gilaa nahin hota
pyar mein judaayi ka hoslaa nahi hota
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6th November 2015, 03:27 PM
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dil ki baizaari kaa to gilaa nahin hota
pyar mein judaayi ka hoslaa nahi hota
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Bahut khoob.....
Hausla gar judai ka hota sun lo
Ishq me koi gamzada nahi hota.....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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8th November 2015, 05:20 PM
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Bahut khoob.....
Hausla gar judai ka hota sun lo
Ishq me koi gamzada nahi hota.....
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8th November 2015, 05:22 PM
uski chahat ka aasraa gar na hota to ghumzada hotey
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8th November 2015, 05:36 PM
gumshuda to ham aj apni tanhaiyon me hai
wo mja muhabbat m kahan jo ruswaiyon me hai
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10th November 2015, 07:22 PM
tanhayian ruswaayian khamoshiyan
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tanhayian ruswaayian khamoshiyan
piyar karne kaa yah hii sila hain
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Ek tera naam sath ho mere
chahe ruswaiyon me shamil ho..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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Ek tera naam sath ho mere
chahe ruswaiyon me shamil ho..
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Sun kar tera naam ranj lapata sa hai
Teri umeed dekh kar ruswaiyaan chalti bani.n
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10th February 2016, 11:19 AM
kya mila tumko mere ishq ka charcha karke,
tum bhi rusva hue akhir mujko rusva kare..
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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10th February 2016, 11:58 AM
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kya mila tumko mere ishq ka charcha karke,
tum bhi rusva hue akhir mujko rusva kare..
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chara e dil sivaye sabra nahi
so tumhare siva nahi hota..
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अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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11th February 2016, 08:27 PM
kisi ki ulfat mein jaagi thaki thaki aankhein
kisi ki aarzuu mein tishnagi bhari aankhein...
MaST
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क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ
रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है
'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें
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kisi ki ulfat mein jaagi thaki thaki aankhein
kisi ki aarzuu mein tishnagi bhari aankhein...
MaST
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Vo sari baatein bin kahe hee jaan jata hai
Bhala kya bolti hain ye jhuki jhuki ankhein..
Madhu..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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mazay ab woh kahaaN baaqii rahe, beevii-miyaaN ho kar!"
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22nd February 2016, 11:45 AM
unko dekhte hi aa jaati hai chehre pe ronak
aur wo sochte hai ki beemar ka haal accha hai
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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22nd February 2016, 12:17 PM
Dekhee jo meree nabz to ek lamhaa soch kar,
kaaGaz liyaa aur ishq kaa beemaar likh diyaa......
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Dekhee jo meree nabz to ek lamhaa soch kar,
kaaGaz liyaa aur ishq kaa beemaar likh diyaa......
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Sun Liya Kaise Khuda Jane Zamane Bhar Ne
Wo Fasana Jo Kabhi Hamne Sunaya Bhi Nahin
Qateel sifai..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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23rd February 2016, 02:12 PM
Beecharte waqt un ankhon mein, Thi hamari ghazal
Ghazal bhi wo jo, Kisi ko kabhi sunayi na thi
A part of Naseer Turabi's wonderful creation "woh Humsafar Tha"
उन बीते लम्हों के याद ना दिलाया करो
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Beecharte waqt un ankhon mein, Thi hamari ghazal
Ghazal bhi wo jo, Kisi ko kabhi sunayi na thi
A part of Naseer Turabi's wonderful creation "woh Humsafar Tha"
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phoolon si hoti hain muhabbat bhari aankhein.
khulti hain to gulshan me bikhar jati hai khushboo.
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अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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25th February 2016, 09:17 PM
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phoolon si hoti hain muhabbat bhari aankhein.
khulti hain to gulshan me bikhar jati hai khushboo.
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Zamee.N pe bhi falak dekha
Jab unko ek zhalak dekha
Dekha jab unki aankhoo.N me
Laga sadiyooN talak dekha
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26th February 2016, 07:53 AM
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Zamee.N pe bhi falak dekha
Jab unko ek zhalak dekha
Dekha jab unki aankhoo.N me
Laga sadiyooN talak dekha
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Achi surat bhi kya buri say hai.
Jisne dali buri najar dali.
उन बीते लम्हों के याद ना दिलाया करो
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Achi surat bhi kya buri say hai.
Jisne dali buri najar dali.
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Waaah!!
Ho buri ya bhali nazar koi
un pe thahri to beasar lauti.....
Madhu..
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Waaah!!
Ho buri ya bhali nazar koi
un pe thahri to beasar lauti.....
Madhu..
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Waaah kya baat hai Madhu ji...bohot khoob
Phoenix ji.....waah.....bohot khoob....SDC me aapka swagat hai
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Waaah!!
Ho buri ya bhali nazar koi
un pe thahri to beasar lauti.....
Madhu..
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Dekha karte hai dekhne wale har nazariye se
Tu dikhta ho aaine me "bhala" to bohot hai
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6th March 2016, 04:47 PM
hus,n ko sarahane wale
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hus,n ko sarahane wale
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abhi dekha hai kya tumne muhabbat kya hai kya jano
kabhi ho ru b ru hamse..to ashiq kya hain samjhoge.
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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7th March 2016, 10:42 PM
chahto ka khumaa,r dekh chuke h ham
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chahto ka khumaa,r dekh chuke h ham
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Hamne to is chahat ko bandgi mana
Dunya bahut khush rang hai bas yahi jana....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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bataane waale ab is nacheez ko aashiq bataate hai
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Bita dete hain sara din khayalon ki gali me ham
Vahi to ek jagah hai bas jahaan ham unko pate hain..
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