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waah waah kya bat hai maashaallah..........

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waah waah kya bat hai maashaallah..........

yaad karanaa har gha.Dii us yaar kaa
hai vazifaa mujh dil-e-bimaar kaa
kuch to maiN bhii bahut dil kaa kamzor huuN
kuch muhabbat bhii hai fitratan bad-gumaaN


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kuch to maiN bhii bahut dil kaa kamzor huuN
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mohabbat tark kii mai.n ne garebaa.N sii liyaa mai.n ne
zamaane ab to Khush ho zahar ye bhii pii liyaa mai.n ne


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mohabbat tark kii mai.n ne garebaa.N sii liyaa mai.n ne
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nazar se sayyaad duur ho jaa yahaa.N teraa mujh pe bas nahii.n hai
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na kar kisii pe bharosaa ke kashtiyaa.N Duubii.n
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diivaanaa banaanaa hai to diivaanaa banaa de
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isii chaman me.n hii hamaaraa bhii ik zamaanaa thaa
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chaman roye ha.Nse shabanam biyaabaa.N par nikhaar aaye
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diivaanaa banaanaa hai to diivaanaa banaa de
varnaa kahii.n taqdiir tamaashaa naa banaa de
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laakho.n kii sunaa tum ne taqdiir sa.Nvaarii hai
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laakho.n kii sunaa tum ne taqdiir sa.Nvaarii hai
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[Syed Shafaq Shah Chisti]




taqdiir ke chehare kii shikan dekh rahaa huu.N
aa_iinaa-e-haalaat hai duniyaa terii kyaa hai
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tamannayien aur kuchh khwab hain bas dhuan kya hai
na pooch kya jala hai aur bacha kya hai

isi aas se dekhta hoon tamaashbeenon ka chehra
koi to pooche mujhse muddaa kya hai

hairan hoon ke tere sath q chali gayin yeh bhi
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Aziz" muu.Nh se vo apane naqaab to ulaTe.n
kare.nge jab agar dil pe iKhtiyaar rahaa
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tire paas waqt kii hai kamii, agar dekhnaa hai to dekh le
abhii Khud hii aa ke uThaayegaa vo naqaab ruKh se, nahiiN nahiiN!!!




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tire paas waqt kii hai kamii, agar dekhnaa hai to dekh le
abhii Khud hii aa ke uThaayegaa vo naqaab ruKh se, nahiiN nahiiN!!!
ulaT de ai sabaa tuu hii naqaab-e-ruKh ko chehare se
kabhii to dekh le.n ham bhii zaraa sarakaar kii suurat
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saraktii jaaye hai ruKh se naqaab aahista, aahista
nikaltaa aa rahaa hai aaftaab aahista, aahista

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saraktii jaaye hai ruKh se naqaab aahista, aahista
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Amir Minai
ye chaa.Nd taaro.n kaa aa.Nchal usii kaa hissaa hai
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ye chaa.Nd taaro.n kaa aa.Nchal usii kaa hissaa hai
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chaandni raat men chand ke saamne
ruKh se pardaa haTana Ghazab ho gaya
chaandani chup gayi chaand sharma gaya
aap ka muskuranaa Ghazab ho gayaa

dil ki dhadhakan meri tez hone lagi
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chaandni raat men chand ke saamne
ruKh se pardaa haTana Ghazab ho gaya
chaandani chup gayi chaand sharma gaya
aap ka muskuranaa Ghazab ho gayaa

dil ki dhadhakan meri tez hone lagi
raat aankhon men kaante chubhone lagi
vasl ki raat men baat hi baat men
yun teraa ruTh jana Ghazab ho gaya
chaa.Nd nikale kisii jaanib terii zebaa_ii kaa
rang badale kisii suurat shab-e-tanhaa_ii kaa

[jaanib = direction/side; zebaa_ii = beauty; shab = night]


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[B][COLOR="Indigo"]chaa.Nd nikale kisii jaanib terii zebaa_ii kaa
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chaand tanhaa hai, aasmaan tanhaa
dil milaa hai kahaaN kahaaN tanhaa


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chaand tanhaa hai, aasmaan tanhaa
dil milaa hai kahaaN kahaaN tanhaa


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zaraa unkii shoKhii to dekhiye, liye zulf-e-kham-shuda haath meN
mire peechhe aaye dabe dabe, mujhe, "saaNp!" kah ke Daraa diyaa!

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zaraa unkii shoKhii to dekhiye, liye zulf-e-kham-shuda haath meN
mire peechhe aaye dabe dabe, mujhe, "saaNp!" kah ke Daraa diyaa!

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Darate hai.n chashm-o-zulf, nigaah-o-adaa se ham
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wah bahut khub......


tere qadmo.N mein panaah paane ki arzoo hai
tujhe chune ki, tujhe paane ki, tujhe dekhne ki arzoo hai...


Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little...



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tere qadmo.N mein panaah paane ki arzoo hai
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are kyaa baat hai aap to mehfil ko naya he rang de rahe ho..........


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ibtidaa-e-ishq hai rotaa hai kyaa
aage aage dekhiye hotaa hai kyaa..............

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Hai bari skhat rahein MOHABBAT ki magar,,
aage aage dekhiye HUZUR hotaa hai kyaa..........MS

Shagird ki kalam se ......... PEHLI KALAM
PHIR MUJHE GAM KE HAWALE KAR GAYE
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Manu Ji....rang to hum de rahein hai....unhe bekha to aap reho ho....


aarzoo to tere mehfil mein izehaar karne ki hai
agar tuhi nazerein nah milya to kyaa karree koi....


Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little...



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Mera Sab Se Pehla Sher....................

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Sagird ji..maaf kijiye...hum aapke jwab ka jwab nah de sakhe. hum same waqt par manu ji k sher ka jwab de rahein. pardon my insolence.

take care

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mere badan mein teri dharkanain dharaktee hien
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mere badan mein teri dharkanain dharaktee hien
zara sa aur mere pas aa mere mehboob

ye waqt piyar ka izhaar maangta hei , DEY!
jo dil mein hei use honton pe la mere mehboob
yeh rafaaqat bahut muKhtasar hai mirii hamsafar laa mire haath meiN haath de
tuu havaa-e-sar-e-rahguzar kii tarah, maiN kisii nakhat-e-raayegaaN kii tarah

rafaaqat : friendship;
havaa-e-sar-e-rahguzar : wind over the pathways;
nakhat-e-raayegaaN : smell that is not of any use


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yeh rafaaqat bahut muKhtasar hai mirii hamsafar laa mire haath meiN haath de
tuu havaa-e-sar-e-rahguzar kii tarah, maiN kisii nakhat-e-raayegaaN kii tarah

rafaaqat : friendship;
havaa-e-sar-e-rahguzar : wind over the pathways;
nakhat-e-raayegaaN : smell that is not of any use

tera haath hath mein ho to safar hee acal e hayaat hei
mere hur qadam pe hein manzilain tera sath gar mere sath hei
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aaye hai.n bekasii-e-ishq pe ronaa "Ghalib"
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ghar jab banaa liyaa hai tere dar par kahe baGair
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ghaalib



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ko_ii ham-sayaa na ho aur paasabaa.N ko_ii na ho
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chacha Ghalib ke sher ke kia kahne par ek typo kii tasheeh kar len.

be-dar-o-diivaar SAA ik ghar banaayaa chaahiye

naavak-andaaz jidhar deeda e jaanaaN hoNge
nem-bismil kaii hoNge, kaii be-jaaN hoNge

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be-dar-o-diivaar SAA ik ghar banaayaa chaahiye

naavak-andaaz jidhar deeda e jaanaaN hoNge
nem-bismil kaii hoNge, kaii be-jaaN hoNge

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