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22nd April 2008, 09:21 PM
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rahate hai.n jamaa kuuchaa-e-jaanaa.N me.n Khaas-o-aam
aabaad ek ghar hai jahaan-e-Kharaab me.n
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rahe hai.n yuu.N gah-o-begah kii kuu-e-dost ko ab
agar na kahiye ki dushman kaa ghar hai kyaa kahiye
[Mirza Ghalib]
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
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22nd April 2008, 10:31 PM
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rahe hai.n yuu.N gah-o-begah kii kuu-e-dost ko ab
agar na kahiye ki dushman kaa ghar hai kyaa kahiye
[Mirza Ghalib]
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ye ishq bhii hai ajab imtihaan-e-ahad-e-vafaa
vo aazamaaye mujhe aur mai.n aazamaa_uu.N use
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22nd April 2008, 10:37 PM
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ye ishq bhii hai ajab imtihaan-e-ahad-e-vafaa
vo aazamaaye mujhe aur mai.n aazamaa_uu.N use
himayal ali
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un ke dekhe se jo aa jaatii hai muu.Nh pe raunaq
vo samajhate hai.n ki biimaar kaa haal achchhaa hai
[Mirza Ghalib]
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22nd April 2008, 10:49 PM
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un ke dekhe se jo aa jaatii hai muu.Nh pe raunaq
vo samajhate hai.n ki biimaar kaa haal achchhaa hai
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tere badan me.n dha.Dakane lagaa huu.N dil kii tarah
ye aur baat ke ab bhii tujhe sunaa_ii na duu.N
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22nd April 2008, 10:51 PM
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tere badan me.n dha.Dakane lagaa huu.N dil kii tarah
ye aur baat ke ab bhii tujhe sunaa_ii na duu.N
ahmad faraaz
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jii Dhuu.NDataa hai phir vahii fursat ke raat din
baiThe rahe.n tasavvur-e-jaanaa.N kiye hue
[Mirza Ghalib]
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mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
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22nd April 2008, 10:57 PM
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jii Dhuu.NDataa hai phir vahii fursat ke raat din
baiThe rahe.n tasavvur-e-jaanaa.N kiye hue
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ishq jab ek taraf ho to sazaa deta hai
magar dono tarf ho to mazaa deta hai
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22nd April 2008, 11:02 PM
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ishq jab ek taraf ho to sazaa deta hai
magar dono tarf ho to mazaa deta hai
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ulaTii ho ga_ii.n sab tadabiire.n kuchh na davaa ne kaam kiyaa
dekho is biimari-e-dil ne aaKhir kaam tamaam kiyaa
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mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
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22nd April 2008, 11:12 PM
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ulaTii ho ga_ii.n sab tadabiire.n kuchh na davaa ne kaam kiyaa
dekho is biimari-e-dil ne aaKhir kaam tamaam kiyaa
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[B] safar kii had hai vahaa.N tak ke kuchh nishaan rahe
chale chalo ke jahaa.N tak ye aasmaan rahe
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22nd April 2008, 11:15 PM
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[b]safar kii had hai vahaa.N tak ke kuchh nishaan rahe
chale chalo ke jahaa.N tak ye aasmaan rahe
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jaane vaale se mulaaqaat naa hone paa_ii
dil kii dil me.n hii rahii baat naa hone paa_ii
[Shakeel Badayuni]
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
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22nd April 2008, 11:18 PM
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jaane vaale se mulaaqaat naa hone paa_ii
dil kii dil me.n hii rahii baat naa hone paa_ii
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baat phuulo.n kii sunaa karate the
ham kabhii sher kahaa karate the
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22nd April 2008, 11:25 PM
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baat phuulo.n kii sunaa karate the
ham kabhii sher kahaa karate the
sagar siddiqui
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chehare pe mere zulf ko bikhraao kisii din
kyaa roz garajate ho baras jaao kisii din
[Amjad Islam Amjad]
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mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
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22nd April 2008, 11:44 PM
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chehare pe mere zulf ko bikhraao kisii din
kyaa roz garajate ho baras jaao kisii din
[Amjad Islam Amjad]
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aa bhii jaao kii zindagii kam hai
tum nahii.n ho to har Khushii kam hai
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23rd April 2008, 01:03 AM
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aa bhii jaao kii zindagii kam hai
tum nahii.n ho to har Khushii kam hai
yamini das
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Tumhare aane se hi zindagi khushnumah hai..
Tumhare jaaTe hi yeh bhi murjha jaayegi..
Na jaaya karo humein chodd ke Tum yun..
Ki Tanha zindagi na kaT paayegi..
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
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23rd April 2008, 03:58 PM
vo firaaq aur wo visaal kahaa.N
vo shab-o-roz-o-maah-o-saal kahaN
fursat-e-kaarobaar-e-shauq kise
zauq-e-nazzaaraa-e-jamaal kahaaN
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23rd April 2008, 04:38 PM
har mulaaqaat kaa anjaam judaaii kiuN hai?
bas, yehii baat subH-o-shaam sataatii hai hameN!!!
tu aur aaraa'ish-e-Kham-e-kaakul
maiN aur andesha_haa-e-dur o daraaz
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23rd April 2008, 05:32 PM
umar ki kya baat kar rahe hain acharya saheb
hamare har sher mein sadiyan hotin hain
zara ghaur se padhiye janab
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23rd April 2008, 05:43 PM
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umar ki kya baat kar rahe hain acharya saheb
hamare har sher mein sadiyan hotin hain
zara ghaur se padhiye janab
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mazarat ke saath arz karunga k aap shayad sher raqam karna bhul gaye. chaliye men ek sher pesh kiye deta hun. mulahizah farmaiye
umeed-e-Hur ne sab kuchh sikhaa rakkha hai vaa'iz ko
yeh Hazrat dekhne meN seedhe saade, bhole bhaale haiN
tu aur aaraa'ish-e-Kham-e-kaakul
maiN aur andesha_haa-e-dur o daraaz
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23rd April 2008, 05:44 PM
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har mulaaqaat kaa anjaam judaaii kiuN hai?
bas, yehii baat subH-o-shaam sataatii hai hameN!!!
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tere Khayaal se lau de uThii hai tanhaa_ii
shab-e-firaaq hai yaa terii jalvaa-aaraa_ii
[Nasir Kazmi]
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mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
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23rd April 2008, 05:46 PM
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mazarat ke saath arz karunga k aap shayad sher raqam karna bhul gaye. chaliye men ek sher pesh kiye deta hun. mulahizah farmaiye
umeed-e-Hur ne sab kuchh sikhaa rakkha hai vaa'iz ko
yeh Hazrat dekhne meN seedhe saade, bhole bhaale haiN
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sab hasii.n hai.n zaahido.n ko naapasand
ab ko_ii huur aayegii in ke liye
[Ameer Minai]
[huur = fairy/celestial nymph]
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
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23rd April 2008, 05:55 PM
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sab hasii.n hai.n zaahido.n ko naapasand
ab ko_ii huur aayegii in ke liye
[Ameer Minai]
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jis kaa 'amal hai be-Gharaz, uskii jazaa kuchh aur hai
Huur-o-Khaiyam se guzar, baadaa-o-jaam se guzar
allamah Iqbal
tu aur aaraa'ish-e-Kham-e-kaakul
maiN aur andesha_haa-e-dur o daraaz
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jis kaa 'amal hai be-Gharaz, uskii jazaa kuchh aur hai
Huur-o-Khaiyam se guzar, baadaa-o-jaam se guzar
allamah Iqbal
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Hazur
kafee arse se notice kar rahe hei maham ke apka zouq apka intikhaab bakamal hoa karta hai
bauhat umda ashaar ata karte hien aap
Bauahat kam hota hai ke maham kisi ke sher ke aagayae lajavab ho magar yahan sach ye ke hum lajvab hien
koi sher soojha he nahi
kabhi kabhi yun haar janae mein baara lutf ata hai
ab aap hee koi sher ata kjiye jo apke is shahkaar ka javab ho
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jis kaa 'amal hai be-Gharaz, uskii jazaa kuchh aur hai
Huur-o-Khaiyam se guzar, baadaa-o-jaam se guzar
allamah Iqbal
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tere nisaar saaqiiyaa jitanii piyuu.N pilaaye jaa
mast nazar kaa vastaa mast mujhe banaaye jaa
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mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
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mohhabat kar ke to dek zalim hum b to tamana rakhe hai tum .husn rakhi ho to hum javani rakhen....................
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23rd April 2008, 08:55 PM
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send me some shayri
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what do u mean ????????????
kabhii nekii bhii us ke jii me.n aa jaaye hai mujh se
jafaaye.n kar ke apanii yaad sharmaa jaaye hai mujh se
[Mirza Ghalib]
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
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23rd April 2008, 09:04 PM
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tere nisaar saaqiiyaa jitanii piyuu.N pilaaye jaa
mast nazar kaa vastaa mast mujhe banaaye jaa
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I luv ur selections Lamha!
javab haazir hei
Lab band hein saaqi mujhe ankhon se pila de
vo jaam jo minat kash e sehba nahi hota
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I luv ur selections Lamha!
javab haazir hei
Lab band hein saaqi mujhe ankhon se pila de
vo jaam jo minat kash e sehba nahi hota
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thank u diiiii................
Gair le.n mahafil me.n bose jaam ke
ham rahe.n yuu.N tashnaalab paiGaam ke
[Mirza Ghalib]
[tashnaalab = thirsty]
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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23rd April 2008, 09:42 PM
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thank u diiiii................
Gair le.n mahafil me.n bose jaam ke
ham rahe.n yuu.N tashnaalab paiGaam ke
[Mirza Ghalib]
[tashnaalab = thirsty]
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sahee spelling hei
GHAM
GHAIR
TISHNALAB
PEGHAAM
jab ap copy paste kiya karen to spell out sahee kar lya kijiye buahat ghalat roman urdu likhee hotee hei urdupoetry.com etc pe .kabhi kabhi ghalat spelling se urdu ka talafuz biklul bigar jata hai aur hamae is ka khaas khayal rakhna chahayae hei
I hope u dont mind me saying so !
Javab haazir hei :
shayad aa jaye gaa saaqi ko taras ab ke baras
mil na paya hai un aNkhon ka ras ab ke baras
uff vo un madhbharii aaNkhon ke chalakte huye jaam
badh gayi aur bhi peene ki havas ab ke baras
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23rd April 2008, 11:21 PM
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sahee spelling hei
GHAM
GHAIR
TISHNALAB
PEGHAAM
jab ap copy paste kiya karen to spell out sahee kar lya kijiye buahat ghalat roman urdu likhee hotee hei urdupoetry.com etc pe .kabhi kabhi ghalat spelling se urdu ka talafuz biklul bigar jata hai aur hamae is ka khaas khayal rakhna chahayae hei
I hope u dont mind me saying so !
Javab haazir hei :
shayad aa jaye gaa saaqi ko taras ab ke baras
mil na paya hai un aNkhon ka ras ab ke baras
uff vo un madhbharii aaNkhon ke chalakte huye jaam
badh gayi aur bhi peene ki havas ab ke baras
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not at all DIIIIIIIIII................
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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24th April 2008, 01:37 PM
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shayad aa jaye gaa saaqi ko taras ab ke baras
mil na paya hai un aNkhon ka ras ab ke baras
uff vo un madhbharii aaNkhon ke chalakte huye jaam
badh gayi aur bhi peene ki havas ab ke baras
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maiN nazar se pii raha huuN ye samaaN badal na jaaye
na jhukaao tum nigaaheN kahiiN raat Dhal na jaaye
(samaaN : ambience)
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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24th April 2008, 01:51 PM
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maiN nazar se pii raha huuN ye samaaN badal na jaaye
na jhukaao tum nigaaheN kahiiN raat Dhal na jaaye
(samaaN : ambience)
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tishniaa nazarei.n milin shoKh nazaron se jab
maiy barasne lagi jaam bharne lagaa
saqiya aaj teri zarurat nahin
bin piye bin pilaaye Khumaar aa gaya
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24th April 2008, 05:41 PM
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tishniaa nazarei.n milin shoKh nazaron se jab
maiy barasne lagi jaam bharne lagaa
saqiya aaj teri zarurat nahin
bin piye bin pilaaye Khumaar aa gaya
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haadise aur bhi guzare teri ulfat ke sivaa
haa.N mujhe dekh mujhe ab meri tasvir na dekh
[Majrooh Sultanpuri]
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
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haadise aur bhi guzare teri ulfat ke sivaa
haa.N mujhe dekh mujhe ab meri tasvir na dekh
[Majrooh Sultanpuri]
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is khubsoorat sher ka javab is nazm ke siwa aur kiya den ke :
tasvir teri dil mera behla na sakegi
ye teri tarah mujh se to sharma na sakegi
main baat karuNga to ye Khaamosh rahegi
seene se laga luNga to ye kuch na kahegi
aaraam vo kya degii jo taDpaa na sakegi
ye aaNkhen hain Tehhrii hui chanchal vo nigaahen
ye haath haib sehme huye aur mast vo baahen
parachhaayi to insaan ke kaam aa na sakegii
in honThon ko "Faiyyaz" main kuch de na sakuNga
is zulf ko main haath men bhi le na sakuNga
uljhi hui raaton ko ye suljha na sakegi
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is khubsoorat sher ka javab is nazm ke siwa aur kiya den ke :
tasvir teri dil mera behla na sakegi
ye teri tarah mujh se to sharma na sakegi
main baat karuNga to ye Khaamosh rahegi
seene se laga luNga to ye kuch na kahegi
aaraam vo kya degii jo taDpaa na sakegi
ye aaNkhen hain Tehhrii hui chanchal vo nigaahen
ye haath haib sehme huye aur mast vo baahen
parachhaayi to insaan ke kaam aa na sakegii
in honThon ko "Faiyyaz" main kuch de na sakuNga
is zulf ko main haath men bhi le na sakuNga
uljhi hui raaton ko ye suljha na sakegi
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mohtaramah Maham sahiba
yaqeenan! shahenshaah-e-ghazal Talat Mehmood kii aawaz meN gaai hui yeh ghazal meri bhi pasandeedah hai. kabhi yeh ghazal mujhe azbar thi aur men maHfiloN meN sam'a Kharashhi bhi kiya karta tha.
jahaN tak meri yaad-dast ko daKhl hai, ek line ke chand ek alfaaz men radd-o-badal ho gayi hai. main uskii tasheeh kar rahaa huN, aap bhi farma leN. shukrya
yeh haath haiN sehme huye, yeh marmari baaheN
ab meri jaanib se ek she'r apkii nazar he:
dil Ke aaine meN hai tasveer-e-yaar
jab zara gardan jhukaayee, dekh Lii!!!!!
tu aur aaraa'ish-e-Kham-e-kaakul
maiN aur andesha_haa-e-dur o daraaz
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24th April 2008, 08:06 PM
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mohtaramah Maham sahiba
yaqeenan! shahenshaah-e-ghazal Talat Mehmood kii aawaz meN gaai hui yeh ghazal meri bhi pasandeedah hai. kabhi yeh ghazal mujhe azbar thi aur men maHfiloN meN sam'a Kharashhi bhi kiya karta tha.
jahaN tak meri yaad-dast ko daKhl hai, ek line ke chand ek alfaaz men radd-o-badal ho gayi hai. main uskii tasheeh kar rahaa huN, aap bhi farma leN. shukrya
yeh haath haiN sehme huye, yeh marmari baaheN
ab meri jaanib se ek she'r apkii nazar he:
dil Ke aaine meN hai tasveer-e-yaar
jab zara gardan jhukaayee, dekh Lii!!!!!
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aray wah , talat sahab to hamare bhi fav hein
ap ka zouq bakamal hei
apko uper bhi eik post mein daad dee thee zaror dekh lijiye ga ke dilse di thee
khushi hoee bazm ki raahon mein aap jaise sanjeeda fard se mil kar ke jisko il m o adab ke baare mein bauhat pata hai
hmm to hazur ap singer bhi hein eik khubsoorat shayer hone ke sath sath wah janab !!
lijiye apke sher ka javab bhi dete chalaen lage hathon
tasvir banata huN tasvir nahin banti
ek khvaab sa dekha hai taabir nahin banti
umeed hei mulaaqat hotee rahe gee ,
Maham Azmi
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24th April 2008, 09:28 PM
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aray wah , talat sahab to hamare bhi fav hein
ap ka zouq bakamal hei
apko uper bhi eik post mein daad dee thee zaror dekh lijiye ga ke dilse di thee
khushi hoee bazm ki raahon mein aap jaise sanjeeda fard se mil kar ke jisko il m o adab ke baare mein bauhat pata hai
hmm to hazur ap singer bhi hein eik khubsoorat shayer hone ke sath sath wah janab !!
lijiye apke sher ka javab bhi dete chalaen lage hathon
tasvir banata huN tasvir nahin banti
ek khvaab sa dekha hai taabir nahin banti
umeed hei mulaaqat hotee rahe gee ,
Maham Azmi
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जो ग़म-ए-हबीब से दूर थे वो ख़ुद अपनी आग में जल गए
जो ग़म-ए-हबीब को पा गए वो ग़मों से हँस के निकल गए।
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24th April 2008, 10:01 PM
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जो ग़म-ए-हबीब से दूर थे वो ख़ुद अपनी आग में जल गए
जो ग़म-ए-हबीब को पा गए वो ग़मों से हँस के निकल गए।
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rahate the kabhi jin ke dil me.n hum jaan se bhi pyaaro.n ki tarah
baiThe hai.n unhi ke kuche me.n hum aaj gunahgaro.n ki tarah
[Majrooh Sultanapuri]
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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24th April 2008, 11:29 PM
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rahate the kabhi jin ke dil me.n hum jaan se bhi pyaaro.n ki tarah
baiThe hai.n unhi ke kuche me.n hum aaj gunahgaro.n ki tarah
[Majrooh Sultanapuri]
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खुली जो आँख तो वो था न वो ज़माना था
दहकती आग थी तनहाई थी फ़साना था।
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25th April 2008, 05:46 PM
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खुली जो आँख तो वो था न वो ज़माना था
दहकती आग थी तनहाई थी फ़साना था।
farhat shahzaad
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dur hai manzil raahe.n mushkil aalam hai tanha_i ka
aaj mujhe ehsaas hua hai apani shikastapa_i ka
[Shakeel Badayuni]]
[shikastapa_i = infirmity of the feet]
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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25th April 2008, 06:48 PM
koshishon ke bawajood......ho jaati hai kabhi haar...
hoke niraash mat baithna...mann ko apne maar...
badte rahna aage sada.......ho jaisa bhi mousam...
paa leti manzil chinti bhi.....gir gir ke har baar...
( by .... padha tha kahin par)
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