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rahate hai.n jamaa kuuchaa-e-jaanaa.N me.n Khaas-o-aam
aabaad ek ghar hai jahaan-e-Kharaab me.n

-Momin Khan Momin



rahe hai.n yuu.N gah-o-begah kii kuu-e-dost ko ab
agar na kahiye ki dushman kaa ghar hai kyaa kahiye
[Mirza Ghalib]


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rahe hai.n yuu.N gah-o-begah kii kuu-e-dost ko ab
agar na kahiye ki dushman kaa ghar hai kyaa kahiye
[Mirza Ghalib]
ye ishq bhii hai ajab imtihaan-e-ahad-e-vafaa
vo aazamaaye mujhe aur mai.n aazamaa_uu.N use


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un ke dekhe se jo aa jaatii hai muu.Nh pe raunaq
vo samajhate hai.n ki biimaar kaa haal achchhaa hai
[Mirza Ghalib]


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un ke dekhe se jo aa jaatii hai muu.Nh pe raunaq
vo samajhate hai.n ki biimaar kaa haal achchhaa hai
[Mirza Ghalib]
tere badan me.n dha.Dakane lagaa huu.N dil kii tarah
ye aur baat ke ab bhii tujhe sunaa_ii na duu.N


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tere badan me.n dha.Dakane lagaa huu.N dil kii tarah
ye aur baat ke ab bhii tujhe sunaa_ii na duu.N


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jii Dhuu.NDataa hai phir vahii fursat ke raat din
baiThe rahe.n tasavvur-e-jaanaa.N kiye hue
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jii Dhuu.NDataa hai phir vahii fursat ke raat din
baiThe rahe.n tasavvur-e-jaanaa.N kiye hue
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ishq jab ek taraf ho to sazaa deta hai
magar dono tarf ho to mazaa deta hai


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ishq jab ek taraf ho to sazaa deta hai
magar dono tarf ho to mazaa deta hai

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ulaTii ho ga_ii.n sab tadabiire.n kuchh na davaa ne kaam kiyaa
dekho is biimari-e-dil ne aaKhir kaam tamaam kiyaa
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ulaTii ho ga_ii.n sab tadabiire.n kuchh na davaa ne kaam kiyaa
dekho is biimari-e-dil ne aaKhir kaam tamaam kiyaa
[Meer Taqi Meer]


[B]safar kii had hai vahaa.N tak ke kuchh nishaan rahe
chale chalo ke jahaa.N tak ye aasmaan rahe
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chale chalo ke jahaa.N tak ye aasmaan rahe
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jaane vaale se mulaaqaat naa hone paa_ii
dil kii dil me.n hii rahii baat naa hone paa_ii
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jaane vaale se mulaaqaat naa hone paa_ii
dil kii dil me.n hii rahii baat naa hone paa_ii
[Shakeel Badayuni]
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chehare pe mere zulf ko bikhraao kisii din
kyaa roz garajate ho baras jaao kisii din
[Amjad Islam Amjad]


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chehare pe mere zulf ko bikhraao kisii din
kyaa roz garajate ho baras jaao kisii din
[Amjad Islam Amjad]
aa bhii jaao kii zindagii kam hai
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aa bhii jaao kii zindagii kam hai
tum nahii.n ho to har Khushii kam hai


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Tumhare aane se hi zindagi khushnumah hai..
Tumhare jaaTe hi yeh bhi murjha jaayegi..
Na jaaya karo humein chodd ke Tum yun..
Ki Tanha zindagi na kaT paayegi..

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23rd April 2008, 03:58 PM

vo firaaq aur wo visaal kahaa.N
vo shab-o-roz-o-maah-o-saal kahaN
fursat-e-kaarobaar-e-shauq kise
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har mulaaqaat kaa anjaam judaaii kiuN hai?
bas, yehii baat subH-o-shaam sataatii hai hameN!!!




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umar ki kya baat kar rahe hain acharya saheb
hamare har sher mein sadiyan hotin hain

zara ghaur se padhiye janab
   
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umar ki kya baat kar rahe hain acharya saheb
hamare har sher mein sadiyan hotin hain

zara ghaur se padhiye janab
mazarat ke saath arz karunga k aap shayad sher raqam karna bhul gaye. chaliye men ek sher pesh kiye deta hun. mulahizah farmaiye

umeed-e-Hur ne sab kuchh sikhaa rakkha hai vaa'iz ko
yeh Hazrat dekhne meN seedhe saade, bhole bhaale haiN




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har mulaaqaat kaa anjaam judaaii kiuN hai?
bas, yehii baat subH-o-shaam sataatii hai hameN!!!




tere Khayaal se lau de uThii hai tanhaa_ii
shab-e-firaaq hai yaa terii jalvaa-aaraa_ii
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mazarat ke saath arz karunga k aap shayad sher raqam karna bhul gaye. chaliye men ek sher pesh kiye deta hun. mulahizah farmaiye

umeed-e-Hur ne sab kuchh sikhaa rakkha hai vaa'iz ko
yeh Hazrat dekhne meN seedhe saade, bhole bhaale haiN


sab hasii.n hai.n zaahido.n ko naapasand
ab ko_ii huur aayegii in ke liye
[Ameer Minai]

[huur = fairy/celestial nymph]


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sab hasii.n hai.n zaahido.n ko naapasand
ab ko_ii huur aayegii in ke liye
[Ameer Minai]

[huur = fairy/celestial nymph]
jis kaa 'amal hai be-Gharaz, uskii jazaa kuchh aur hai
Huur-o-Khaiyam se guzar, baadaa-o-jaam se guzar


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jis kaa 'amal hai be-Gharaz, uskii jazaa kuchh aur hai
Huur-o-Khaiyam se guzar, baadaa-o-jaam se guzar

allamah Iqbal

Hazur

kafee arse se notice kar rahe hei maham ke apka zouq apka intikhaab bakamal hoa karta hai

bauhat umda ashaar ata karte hien aap

Bauahat kam hota hai ke maham kisi ke sher ke aagayae lajavab ho magar yahan sach ye ke hum lajvab hien

koi sher soojha he nahi

kabhi kabhi yun haar janae mein baara lutf ata hai

ab aap hee koi sher ata kjiye jo apke is shahkaar ka javab ho

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jis kaa 'amal hai be-Gharaz, uskii jazaa kuchh aur hai
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mast nazar kaa vastaa mast mujhe banaaye jaa
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what do u mean ????????????

kabhii nekii bhii us ke jii me.n aa jaaye hai mujh se
jafaaye.n kar ke apanii yaad sharmaa jaaye hai mujh se
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tere nisaar saaqiiyaa jitanii piyuu.N pilaaye jaa
mast nazar kaa vastaa mast mujhe banaaye jaa
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I luv ur selections Lamha!

javab haazir hei



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I luv ur selections Lamha!

javab haazir hei



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thank u diiiii................

Gair le.n mahafil me.n bose jaam ke
ham rahe.n yuu.N tashnaalab paiGaam ke
[Mirza Ghalib]

[tashnaalab = thirsty]


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thank u diiiii................

Gair le.n mahafil me.n bose jaam ke
ham rahe.n yuu.N tashnaalab paiGaam ke
[Mirza Ghalib]

[tashnaalab = thirsty]
sahee spelling hei

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PEGHAAM

jab ap copy paste kiya karen to spell out sahee kar lya kijiye buahat ghalat roman urdu likhee hotee hei urdupoetry.com etc pe .kabhi kabhi ghalat spelling se urdu ka talafuz biklul bigar jata hai aur hamae is ka khaas khayal rakhna chahayae hei

I hope u dont mind me saying so !


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shayad aa jaye gaa saaqi ko taras ab ke baras
mil na paya hai un aNkhon ka ras ab ke baras

uff vo un madhbharii aaNkhon ke chalakte huye jaam
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sahee spelling hei

GHAM
GHAIR
TISHNALAB
PEGHAAM

jab ap copy paste kiya karen to spell out sahee kar lya kijiye buahat ghalat roman urdu likhee hotee hei urdupoetry.com etc pe .kabhi kabhi ghalat spelling se urdu ka talafuz biklul bigar jata hai aur hamae is ka khaas khayal rakhna chahayae hei

I hope u dont mind me saying so !


Javab haazir hei :


shayad aa jaye gaa saaqi ko taras ab ke baras
mil na paya hai un aNkhon ka ras ab ke baras

uff vo un madhbharii aaNkhon ke chalakte huye jaam
badh gayi aur bhi peene ki havas ab ke baras

not at all DIIIIIIIIII................



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shayad aa jaye gaa saaqi ko taras ab ke baras
mil na paya hai un aNkhon ka ras ab ke baras

uff vo un madhbharii aaNkhon ke chalakte huye jaam
badh gayi aur bhi peene ki havas ab ke baras
maiN nazar se pii raha huuN ye samaaN badal na jaaye
na jhukaao tum nigaaheN kahiiN raat Dhal na jaaye

(samaaN : ambience)


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maiN nazar se pii raha huuN ye samaaN badal na jaaye
na jhukaao tum nigaaheN kahiiN raat Dhal na jaaye
(samaaN : ambience)

tishniaa nazarei.n milin shoKh nazaron se jab
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tishniaa nazarei.n milin shoKh nazaron se jab
maiy barasne lagi jaam bharne lagaa
saqiya aaj teri zarurat nahin
bin piye bin pilaaye Khumaar aa gaya


haadise aur bhi guzare teri ulfat ke sivaa
haa.N mujhe dekh mujhe ab meri tasvir na dekh
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haadise aur bhi guzare teri ulfat ke sivaa
haa.N mujhe dekh mujhe ab meri tasvir na dekh
[Majrooh Sultanpuri]

is khubsoorat sher ka javab is nazm ke siwa aur kiya den ke :


tasvir teri dil mera behla na sakegi
ye teri tarah mujh se to sharma na sakegi

main baat karuNga to ye Khaamosh rahegi
seene se laga luNga to ye kuch na kahegi
aaraam vo kya degii jo taDpaa na sakegi

ye aaNkhen hain Tehhrii hui chanchal vo nigaahen
ye haath haib sehme huye aur mast vo baahen
parachhaayi to insaan ke kaam aa na sakegii

in honThon ko "Faiyyaz" main kuch de na sakuNga
is zulf ko main haath men bhi le na sakuNga
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is khubsoorat sher ka javab is nazm ke siwa aur kiya den ke :


tasvir teri dil mera behla na sakegi
ye teri tarah mujh se to sharma na sakegi

main baat karuNga to ye Khaamosh rahegi
seene se laga luNga to ye kuch na kahegi
aaraam vo kya degii jo taDpaa na sakegi

ye aaNkhen hain Tehhrii hui chanchal vo nigaahen
ye haath haib sehme huye aur mast vo baahen
parachhaayi to insaan ke kaam aa na sakegii

in honThon ko "Faiyyaz" main kuch de na sakuNga
is zulf ko main haath men bhi le na sakuNga
uljhi hui raaton ko ye suljha na sakegi
mohtaramah Maham sahiba

yaqeenan! shahenshaah-e-ghazal Talat Mehmood kii aawaz meN gaai hui yeh ghazal meri bhi pasandeedah hai. kabhi yeh ghazal mujhe azbar thi aur men maHfiloN meN sam'a Kharashhi bhi kiya karta tha.

jahaN tak meri yaad-dast ko daKhl hai, ek line ke chand ek alfaaz men radd-o-badal ho gayi hai. main uskii tasheeh kar rahaa huN, aap bhi farma leN. shukrya

yeh haath haiN sehme huye, yeh marmari baaheN

ab meri jaanib se ek she'r apkii nazar he:

dil Ke aaine meN hai tasveer-e-yaar
jab zara gardan jhukaayee, dekh Lii!!!!!




tu aur aaraa'ish-e-Kham-e-kaakul
maiN aur andesha_haa-e-dur o daraaz


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mohtaramah Maham sahiba

yaqeenan! shahenshaah-e-ghazal Talat Mehmood kii aawaz meN gaai hui yeh ghazal meri bhi pasandeedah hai. kabhi yeh ghazal mujhe azbar thi aur men maHfiloN meN sam'a Kharashhi bhi kiya karta tha.

jahaN tak meri yaad-dast ko daKhl hai, ek line ke chand ek alfaaz men radd-o-badal ho gayi hai. main uskii tasheeh kar rahaa huN, aap bhi farma leN. shukrya

yeh haath haiN sehme huye, yeh marmari baaheN

ab meri jaanib se ek she'r apkii nazar he:

dil Ke aaine meN hai tasveer-e-yaar
jab zara gardan jhukaayee, dekh Lii!!!!!
aray wah , talat sahab to hamare bhi fav hein

ap ka zouq bakamal hei

apko uper bhi eik post mein daad dee thee zaror dekh lijiye ga ke dilse di thee


khushi hoee bazm ki raahon mein aap jaise sanjeeda fard se mil kar ke jisko il m o adab ke baare mein bauhat pata hai

hmm to hazur ap singer bhi hein eik khubsoorat shayer hone ke sath sath wah janab !!


lijiye apke sher ka javab bhi dete chalaen lage hathon


tasvir banata huN tasvir nahin banti
ek khvaab sa dekha hai taabir nahin banti



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aray wah , talat sahab to hamare bhi fav hein

ap ka zouq bakamal hei

apko uper bhi eik post mein daad dee thee zaror dekh lijiye ga ke dilse di thee


khushi hoee bazm ki raahon mein aap jaise sanjeeda fard se mil kar ke jisko il m o adab ke baare mein bauhat pata hai

hmm to hazur ap singer bhi hein eik khubsoorat shayer hone ke sath sath wah janab !!

lijiye apke sher ka javab bhi dete chalaen lage hathon

tasvir banata huN tasvir nahin banti
ek khvaab sa dekha hai taabir nahin banti


umeed hei mulaaqat hotee rahe gee ,

Maham Azmi

जो ग़म-ए-हबीब से दूर थे वो ख़ुद अपनी आग में जल गए
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rahate the kabhi jin ke dil me.n hum jaan se bhi pyaaro.n ki tarah
baiThe hai.n unhi ke kuche me.n hum aaj gunahgaro.n ki tarah
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खुली जो आँख तो वो था न वो ज़माना था
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