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Qayamat agar aa jaayega to mil nehi sako ge mujhse,

Qayamat dil ka ho agar, to hum tumhare mehman zaroor banenge.


Afsana mohabbat ka hai yeh, Na bebuniyaad kahon Isse koi,

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Qayamat agar aa jaayega to mil nehi sako ge mujhse,

Qayamat dil ka ho agar, to hum tumhare mehman zaroor banenge.

jaate huve kahte ho, qayaamat ko milenge
kya khoob ! qayaamat ka hai goya koee din aur ?
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jaate huve kahte ho, qayaamat ko milenge
kya khoob ! qayaamat ka hai goya koee din aur ?
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sa.Nbhalane de mujhe ae naaumiidii, kyaa qayaamat hai
ki daamaane Khayaale yaar chhuutaa jaaye hai mujhase


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sa.Nbhalane de mujhe ae naaumiidii, kyaa qayaamat hai
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fursat hai yaa.n kam rahane kii, baat nahii.n kuchh kahane kii
aa.Nkhe.n khol ke kaan jo khole bazm-e-jahaa.n afsaanaa hai
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abhii bazm-e-tarab se kyaa uThuu.N mai.n
abhii to aa.Nkh bhii pur_nam nahii.n hai


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zindagi me muskurate he hum har pal
is muskurahat ke piche rushwai hai
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mehfil saza kar baithte he dil - e - dosto ki sada
kyoki humne dil - e- kabar me dafnai tanhai hai
hu_ii ham se Khataa terii mahafil me.n aa baiThe
zamii.n kii Khaak ban aasmaa.N se dil lagaa baiThe


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hu_ii ham se Khataa terii mahafil me.n aa baiThe
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khaa kar zaKhm duaa di ham ne
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khaa kar zaKhm duaa di ham ne
bas yuu.N umr bitaa dii ham ne


ZINDAGI JITE RAHENGE TAB TAK
JAB TAK MOUT NAHI AAJATI
HUM TUMHE PYAR KARTE RAHENGE TAB TAK
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JAB TAK SAANS NAHI TUTH JATI
zindagii maut ban ga_ii hotii jaan se ham guzar gaye hote
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zindagi ko mout me badal ne nahi dunga
chand sitaro ko khone nahi dunga
aap sada muskurate rahiye ga
kyo ki aapko main rone nahi dunga


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ishrat_zadaa is ka matlab kyaa hai koi bataaye zaraa
achi see Archana ji ,

sorr y hum bina ijazat intrude kar rahe hein magar apke sawal ka jvab hazir hei


yahan GHAM ko bauhat ehamaiyat de ja rahee hei aur kaha ja raha hai ke agar hum asaiash ,luxurious life ke adi na hote , yani gham ko luxury kaha ja raha hei to "gham se guzar gaye hote"
yani gham na hota to mar jate , ajee baat kahee shayer ne aur khub kahee buahat umda sher .......

ishrat zada yani luxury ke addicted

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Azmi Ji wo Manu hai, Archana nahin....

Madmast Bakhtobar si teri adayein hain
Mehakti inhe dekh dekh gulmarg fizaayein hain
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zindagi ko mout me badal ne nahi dunga
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kyo ki aapko main rone nahi dunga

agar hum kahein aur vo muskura den
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i m so very sorry

i got a bit confused wid the names i guess

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agar hum kahein aur vo muskura den
Hum unke liye zindagani luta den


har ik moD par ham Ghamon ko sazaa den
chalo zindagi ko muhabbat bana den



lut chuki he zindagi humari
aab lutane ke liya kuch na raha
zakham kae jarahe itna zindagi me
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lut chuki he zindagi humari
aab lutane ke liya kuch na raha
zakham kae jarahe itna zindagi me
ki aab batane ko kuch na raha
"hum zindgi yoon hi beetaye ja rahe haiN,
gumoN ko seene meiN chupaye ja rahe haiN,
maangne par bhi ek kushi na mili humey,
aur hum usko khuda kahe ja rahe haiN"

-sunita virender singh


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agar hum kahein aur vo muskura den
Hum unke liye zindagani luta den


har ik moD par ham Ghamon ko sazaa den
chalo zindagi ko muhabbat bana
den
Badii mudat se mere dil men yeh khayaal aaya thaa
Kabhi tum ko mere dil ne apna khudaa banaya thaa

Haath jab kabhi maine apne duaa ke liye uthaaya thaa
Nastar kaleje par mere sanam tumne hii chalaaya thaa


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27th September 2007, 05:12 PM

Nihar Ji, Manu Ji, Di aur Maham Ji... Yaar main mood ko lite kar raha hoon aur aap roye ja rahe ho..

iska reply do

Wo din kitne pyare the
Jab tum mere aur hum tumhare the
Tum shaadi shuda aur hum kunware the
Humare Bachhe bhi kitne saare the. :-)

Kyon Di. Smilng chehra achha lagta hai na mera

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"usko dekha aur uski khudaii ko bhi humne dekha,
tera pyar dekha aur teri be-waffie ko b dekha,
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27th September 2007, 05:16 PM

Ab aage

Wo din kitne pyare the
Jab tum mere aur hum tumhare the
Tum shaadi shuda aur hum kunware the
Humare Bachhe bhi kitne saare the. :-)


Phir aisa kya hua jo tumne mujhe chod diya
Saath kiye gaye sabhi vaadon ko tod diya
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hi - 27th September 2007, 05:21 PM

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"usko dekha aur uski khudaii ko bhi humne dekha,
tera pyar dekha aur teri be-waffie ko b dekha,
har sitam hans - hans kar sah gaye dil par,
par tumne ek nigaah es nacheeZ ko na dekha"

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Kaise ham dekhate nigaaho pe nasha tera chhaya thaa
badii mudat se chilman ne taswurr tera sajaaya thaa
Har surat men tu hee tu nazar aaye mujhe jidhar dekhu
Is kadar hadd-e-nazar hamne to tujh ko bithaaya thaa


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27th September 2007, 05:23 PM

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Ab aage

Wo din kitne pyare the
Jab tum mere aur hum tumhare the
Tum shaadi shuda aur hum kunware the
Humare Bachhe bhi kitne saare the. :-)


Phir aisa kya hua jo tumne mujhe chod diya
Saath kiye gaye sabhi vaadon ko tod diya
Apne pati ki baaton mein aakar
tumne mujhse muh mod liya..

Aage thodi der mein likhta hoon...
dear amit..

sher ka jawaab sher se dena hai kahaani se nahii.n

max. 4 lines. us se zeyaadah nahii.n, aur aap jis sher se jawaab de rahe ho us ka relation honaa chaahiye pahele waale sher se....
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27th September 2007, 05:25 PM

Bade bhai 4 line pehle likhi thi. 4 lines baad mein. uske continuation mein.

Par shayad yahan koi hasna nahin chahta. Khair aaj mera mood achha hai aur main dard ke sher likhna nahin chahta. Isiliye filhaal chalta hoon. Kal jab fir taqdeer ki maar yaad aayegi to wapis aaunga.. :-)


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Har surat men tu hee tu nazar aaye mujhe jidhar dekhu
Is kadar hadd-e-nazar hamne to tujh ko bithaaya thaa

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Chehra mera tha nigaahain theen uski
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Mere chehre pe ghazal likhtee gayeen
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27th September 2007, 05:28 PM

Uske chehre ko gazal samajh raha tha main
Uske aashiyane ko tajmahal samajh raha tha main
Us bewafaa ne mere ghar ko jala diya
Aur uske diye kaanto ko bhi kamal samajh raha tha main

Koi hasne bhi nahin deta.. :-(


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hi - 27th September 2007, 05:29 PM

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Chehra mera tha nigaahain theen uski
khamoshi mein bhi vo baatain uski

Mere chehre pe ghazal likhtee gayeen
sher kehtee hoee ankhain uski


Aaeene bhi kyaa khoob dagaa dete hai
Bakhoobi chehre kitney sajaa lete hai


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Aaeene bhi kyaa khoob dagaa dete hai
Bakhoobi chehre kitney sajaa lete hai

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27th September 2007, 05:34 PM

Aaine mein jo dekha to usme teri dhundhli tasveer thi..
Raqeebon ki kismat se judi meri bhi taqdeer thi...
Jiski aankhon mein apni jannat dhoondh raha tha main
Usi mehboob ke haathon mein mere qatal ki lakeer thi


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"hum zindgi yoon hi beetaye ja rahe haiN,
gumoN ko seene meiN chupaye ja rahe haiN,
maangne par bhi ek kushi na mili humey,
aur hum usko khuda kahe ja rahe haiN"

-sunita virender singh


zindagi ko yoon hi maat bitao
zindagi itni sasti nahi
gumo ko sineme maat dafnao
sine me itni jagah nahi
maangne par kabhi khushi nahi milti
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sar-e-ainaa mera aks hai pas-e-aina koi aur hai
Nigaahe aaeenaa hai tumharee is zamaane ke liye
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bhari mehfil me tumko pukar na sake
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khub sahab!

javab haazir hei

nazar men Dhal ke ubharate hain dil ke afsane
ye aur baat hai duniyaa nazar na pahchane

ye bazm dekhi hai meri nigaah ne ki jahaN
baGair shama bhi jalte rahe hain parvane

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khub sahab!

javab haazir hei

nazar men Dhal ke ubharate hain dil ke afsane
ye aur baat hai duniyaa nazar na pahchane

ye bazm dekhi hai meri nigaah ne ki jahaN
baGair shama bhi jalte rahe hain parvane

ye kis ki chashm-e-fusuN_saaz ka karishma hai
ki Tut kar bhi salamat hain dil ke butKhane


sukuun hii sukuun hai Khushii hii Khushii hai
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khub sahab!

javab haazir hei

nazar men Dhal ke ubharate hain dil ke afsane
ye aur baat hai duniyaa nazar na pahchane

ye bazm dekhi hai meri nigaah ne ki jahaN
baGair shama bhi jalte rahe hain parvane

ye kis ki chashm-e-fusuN_saaz ka karishma hai
ki Tut kar bhi salamat hain dil ke butKhane


Jab Se Tere Naam Kar Di, Zindagi Acchi Lagi
Tera Gham Accha Laga, Teri Khushi Acchi Lagi
Tera Paykar, Teri Khushboo, Tera Lehja, Theri Baatein
Dil Ko Teri Guftagu Ki Saadgi Acchi Lagi


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Uske aashiyane ko tajmahal samajh raha tha main
Us bewafaa ne mere ghar ko jala diya
Aur uske diye kaanto ko bhi kamal samajh raha tha main

Koi hasne bhi nahin deta.. :-(




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UUSKE BAAP NE DIYA GUTTER PANI
SAMAJ KAR NIMBOO PANI ME PI GAYA

UUSKE BAAP NE MAARA DANDA YAARO
SAMAJ KAR AANDA ME KHA GAYA

ISKE AAGE KYA KAHU DOSTO
PYAR HI PYAR ME MAIN TOH TABAH HO GAYA


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