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27th September 2007, 06:01 PM
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sukuun hii sukuun hai Khushii hii Khushii hai
teraa Gam salaamat mujhe kyaa kamii hai
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Gham ka Khazana tera bhii hai mera bhii
ye nazraana tera bhi hai mera bhii
tu mujhko aur main tujhko samjahauN kya
dil diivana tera bhii hai mera bhii
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sukuun hii sukuun hai Khushii hii Khushii hai
teraa Gam salaamat mujhe kyaa kamii hai
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Door se jab kabhi bhi teri sadaa aayi
main ye samjha viraane men fiza aayi
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27th September 2007, 06:07 PM
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Gham ka Khazana tera bhii hai mera bhii
ye nazraana tera bhi hai mera bhii
tu mujhko aur main tujhko samjahauN kya
dil diivana tera bhii hai mera bhii
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ham samajhe the bhuul gaye hai.n vo chaahat kaa afasaanaa
aaj magar phir dard saa dil me.n halkaa halkaa lagataa hai
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27th September 2007, 06:10 PM
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Jab Se Tere Naam Kar Di, Zindagi Acchi Lagi
Tera Gham Accha Laga, Teri Khushi Acchi Lagi
Tera Paykar, Teri Khushboo, Tera Lehja, Theri Baatein
Dil Ko Teri Guftagu Ki Saadgi Acchi Lagi
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waaaaaaaaah kiti piyaree se baat ke aap ne
lijiye apke ashaar ke naam ye ashaar....
phir chiDii raat baat phulon ki
raat hai ya baraat phulon ki
aap ka saath saath phulon ka
aap kii baat baat phulon ki
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27th September 2007, 06:10 PM
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Door se jab kabhi bhi teri sadaa aayi
main ye samjha viraane men fiza aayi
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dil ke sun_saan jaziiro.n kii Khabar laayegaa
dard pahaluu se judaa ho ke kahaa.N jaayegaa
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27th September 2007, 06:13 PM
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ham samajhe the bhuul gaye hai.n vo chaahat kaa afasaanaa
aaj magar phir dard saa dil me.n halkaa halkaa lagataa hai
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vahi phir mujhe yaad aane lage hain
jinhen bhulaane men zamaane lage hain
vo hain paas aur yaad aane lage hain
muhabbat ke hosh ab Thikaane lage hain
suna hai hamen vo bhulaane lage hain
to kya ham unhen yaad aane lage hain
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27th September 2007, 06:17 PM
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dil ke sun_saan jaziiro.n kii Khabar laayegaa
dard pahaluu se judaa ho ke kahaa.N jaayegaa
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dil men ik lahar si uThii hai abhii
koi taaza hava chali hai abhii
yaad ke be-nishaaN jaziiron se
terii avaaz aa rahii hai abhii
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27th September 2007, 06:18 PM
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vahi phir mujhe yaad aane lage hain
jinhen bhulaane men zamaane lage hain
vo hain paas aur yaad aane lage hain
muhabbat ke hosh ab Thikaane lage hain
suna hai hamen vo bhulaane lage hain
to kya ham unhen yaad aane lage hain
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teraa Khayaal dil se miTaayaa nahii.n abhii
bedard mai.n ne tujh ko bhulaayaa nahii.n abhii
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27th September 2007, 06:25 PM
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teraa Khayaal dil se miTaayaa nahii.n abhii
bedard mai.n ne tujh ko bhulaayaa nahii.n abhii
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dil men ab yuN tere bhule huye Gham aate hai.n
jaise bichaDe huye kaabe me.n sanam aate hain
aur kuch der na guzare shab-e-furqat se kaho
dil bhii kam dukhta hai vo yaad bhii kam aate hain
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27th September 2007, 06:31 PM
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dil men ab yuN tere bhule huye Gham aate hai.n
jaise bichaDe huye kaabe me.n sanam aate hain
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wow! very nice!
GHalat hai jazba-e-dil ka shikwa, dekho juRm kiska hai
na khiNcho gar tum apne ko kashaakash darmiyaaN kyoN ho ?
[ jazba = desire/feeling, shikwa = complaint,
kashaakash = struggle/dilemma, darmiyaaN = betwwen
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27th September 2007, 06:39 PM
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wow! very nice!
GHalat hai jazba-e-dil ka shikwa, dekho juRm kiska hai
na khiNcho gar tum apne ko kashaakash darmiyaaN kyoN ho ?
[ jazba = desire/feeling, shikwa = complaint,
kashaakash = struggle/dilemma, darmiyaaN = betwwen
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wah sahab ashaar ki is rimjhim barsat mein apke sang bheenge mein khub lutf aarah hei
Lijiye
JAZBA E DIL , ISHQ O HUSN KI BAATON KO JURM AUR SHIKWA MEIN DHAALNE WALON KE NAAM EIK SHER
Ye ashaar Maham ke liye deen e ishq ka kalma hon jaise
haazir hein :
Jurm e ulfat pe log hame saza dete hein
kitne naadaan hein sholon ko hava dete hein
Takht kiya hei laal o javaahar kiya hei
Ishq waale to khudayee bhi luta dete hien
Hum ne dil de bhi dya ehd e wafa le bhi liya
ab aap shouq se chahain de len jo saza dete hein
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28th September 2007, 12:12 PM
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khub sahab!
javab haazir hei
nazar men Dhal ke ubharate hain dil ke afsane
ye aur baat hai duniyaa nazar na pahchane
ye bazm dekhi hai meri nigaah ne ki jahaN
baGair shama bhi jalte rahe hain parvane
ye kis ki chashm-e-fusuN_saaz ka karishma hai
ki Tut kar bhi salamat hain dil ke butKhane
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bahoot khoob haazir hai aap ka javaab.
NazaroN men chamak,dil men khush mehsoos kartaa hoon
Kii tere bas men apni zindagii mehsoos karta hoon
thakaa deti hai jab kounain* ki pahnaaiiyaan* mujhe
tere dar par pahunch kar taajhagi mehsos karta hoon
Yeh majboori mukaddar ke ufaq* se jhankhanewaale
teri aankho men ek sharmindagi mehsoos karta hoon
kounain* =dono duniyao ki
pahnaaiiyaan*=gehraiiyan
ufaq* se = naseeb se,bhagya se
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28th September 2007, 01:34 PM
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NazaroN men chamak,dil men khush mehsoos kartaa hoon
Kii tere bas men apni zindagii mehsoos karta hoon
thakaa deti hai jab kounain* ki pahnaaiiyaan* mujhe
tere dar par pahunch kar taajhagi mehsos karta hoon
Yeh majboori mukaddar ke ufaq* se jhankhanewaale
teri aankho men ek sharmindagi mehsoos karta hoon
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Chahat ka ek mitha dard jagane shaam dhale
teri yaadein aa haati hai mujhko rulane shaam dhale
Teri zulfen in kandhon par tera chehra hathon meiN
mainne bhi dekhe hain kitne khwab shaam dhale.
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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28th September 2007, 01:50 PM
Shaam se aankh mein namee see hei
aaj phir aapki kami see hei
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28th September 2007, 02:12 PM
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Shaam se aankh mein namee see hei
aaj phir aapki kami see hei
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Duniyaa men bada rog jo hai ulfat hai
Dik aa gaye hai jee se bhi yeh Zehmat hai
Kehte the kii "Meer" bewafaa hamko na jaan
kii khoob vafaa tumne tumhe rehamat hai
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28th September 2007, 02:35 PM
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Duniyaa men bada rog jo hai ulfat hai
Dik aa gaye hai jee se bhi yeh Zehmat hai
Kehte the kii "Meer" bewafaa hamko na jaan
kii khoob vafaa tumne tumhe rehamat hai
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ishq men jaaN se guzarte hain guzarne vaale
maut kii raah nahiin dekhate marne vaale
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28th September 2007, 02:39 PM
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ishq men jaaN se guzarte hain guzarne vaale
maut kii raah nahiin dekhate marne vaale
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karte nahee kuchh to kaam karna kya aaye
Jeete je jaan se gujarana kya aaye
Ro-Ro ke maut mangane waalo ko
jeena nahee aa saka to marna kyaa aaye
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28th September 2007, 02:46 PM
zindagii tujh ko jiyaa hai koii afsos nahiin
zahar Khud maine piyaa hai koii afsos nahiin
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28th September 2007, 03:58 PM
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zindagii tujh ko jiyaa hai koii afsos nahiin
zahar Khud maine piyaa hai koii afsos nahiin
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mohabbat rahi char din zindagi meiN
rahaa char din ka asar zindagi bhar
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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28th September 2007, 05:58 PM
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mohabbat rahi char din zindagi meiN
rahaa char din ka asar zindagi bhar
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Mahobbat ne teri kiyaa jo bekhabar mujhe
Siwaa tere aata nahi kuuchh nazar mujhe
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29th September 2007, 01:26 PM
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Mahobbat ne teri kiyaa jo bekhabar mujhe
Siwaa tere aata nahi kuuchh nazar mujhe
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Daalii hai nazar jab se ek nashaa saa taarii hai
kyaa ko_ii parii saaqii shiishe me.n utaarii hai
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29th September 2007, 02:33 PM
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Daalii hai nazar jab se ek nashaa saa taarii hai
kyaa ko_ii parii saaqii shiishe me.n utaarii hai
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Utare hai dil men sidhi tirchhi nazar tumhaaree
Dil aarzoo karega ab to umrabhar tumhaaree
Kahte hai pyaar kis ko? ham kyaa kahenge is ko?
Tum ko pataa hai mera mujh ko khabar tumhaaree
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29th September 2007, 04:13 PM
Woh aaine mein dekh rahe the bahare husn...
Aaya mera khyal to sharma ke reh gaye..
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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29th September 2007, 06:08 PM
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Woh aaine mein dekh rahe the bahare husn...
Aaya mera khyal to sharma ke reh gaye..
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Aaeena hai nargis-e-mashiyat*aankhe sanam tumhaaree
Duniyaa ke saath mujh ko bhi apne karam dekh le ne deN.
nargis-e-mashiyat*= Eyes with gods blessings
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29th September 2007, 07:46 PM
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Aaeena hai nargis-e-mashiyat*aankhe sanam tumhaaree
Duniyaa ke saath mujh ko bhi apne karam dekh le ne deN.
nargis-e-mashiyat*= Eyes with gods blessings
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wah kiya sher ata kiya hai nargis e mashiyat pe wah wah .......ankhon ki baat ho to ye sher ata hei zehan mein
saaqi ki har nigaah pe bal kha ke pi gaya
leharon se khelta hua lahra ke pii gaya
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30th September 2007, 11:30 AM
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wah kiya sher ata kiya hai nargis e mashiyat pe wah wah .......ankhon ki baat ho to ye sher ata hei zehan mein
saaqi ki har nigaah pe bal kha ke pi gaya
leharon se khelta hua lahra ke pii gaya
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peene waale zara sa.nbhal kar piyo,
be-khudi me.n pata nahii.n miltaa
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30th September 2007, 11:33 AM
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peene waale zara sa.nbhal kar piyo,
be-khudi me.n pata nahii.n miltaa
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Jo zara si pee ke behak gaya use maikudey se nikaal do
yahaan kum nazar ka guzar nahee yahaan AHEL e ZARF ka kaam hei
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30th September 2007, 12:00 PM
Ji hazur aap YUVRAAJ sahee hum bhi MISBAAH se kam nahi (LONG LIVE THE GAME OF CRICKET )
Aise sixers ke liye to hur koi tayaar rahe jab maham ashaar ke section mei ho tou
Lijye hazir hei javab apke sher ka
apni rusvai tere naam ka charcha dekhuN
ek zara sher kahuN aur main kya kya dekhuN
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30th September 2007, 12:27 PM
oh! yeh baat hai jee woh to hame bhii nazar aa rahaa hai aap ke sixer se... jawaab arz hai!
kyaa kyaa na jafaaye.N dil pe sahii.n, par tum se koii shikavaa na kiyaa
is jurm ko bhii shaamil kar lo, mere maasuum gunaaho.n me.n
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30th September 2007, 03:02 PM
jurm e ulfat pe log hame saza dete hein
kaise naadaan hien sholon ko hava dete hein
takht kiya cheez hei laal o javaahar kiya hei
ishq wale to khudayee bhi luta dete hien
Hum ne dil de bhi diya ehd e wafa le bhi lya
ab ap shouq se de len jo saza dete hein
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30th September 2007, 03:24 PM
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jurm e ulfat pe log hame saza dete hein
kaise naadaan hien sholon ko hava dete hein
takht kiya cheez hei laal o javaahar kiya hei
ishq wale to khudayee bhi luta dete hien
Hum ne dil de bhi diya ehd e wafa le bhi lya
ab ap shouq se de len jo saza dete hein
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jurm aadam ne kiyaa aur nasl-e-aadam ko sazaa
kaaTataa huu.N zindagii bhar mai.n ne jo boyaa nahii.n
kyu.n kyaa khayaal hai waise maham jee: aap ek sher se jawaab dene kii koshish keejiye, aur yeh aasaan kaam hai, aap ko pata hai hii..
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30th September 2007, 03:30 PM
jo hukum sarkaar ka janab vo sarae ashaar click kar gaye apke sher se to bas khata ho gayee
Lijiye apke sher ka javab haazir hei ,
Apni awaara mizaji ko naya naam na do
Mujhko janat se nikalwane ka ilzaam na do
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jo hukum sarkaar ka janab vo sarae ashaar click kar gaye apke sher se to bas khata ho gayee
Lijiye apke sher ka javab haazir hei ,
Apni awaara mizaji ko naya naam na do
Mujhko janat se nikalwane ka ilzaam na do
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lolz, kya jawaab hai, waah! waah!
ye husn teraa ye ishq meraa
rangiin to hai bad_naam sahii
mujh par to ka_ii ilzaam lage
tujh par bhii ko_ii ilzaam sahii
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lolz, kya jawaab hai, waah! waah!
ye husn teraa ye ishq meraa
rangiin to hai bad_naam sahii
mujh par to ka_ii ilzaam lage
tujh par bhii ko_ii ilzaam sahii
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sher pasand karne ke liye navazish hazur !
Lijiye javab hazir hei is ka bhi .........
Na haara hai ishq na dunia thaki hei
diya jal raha hai hava chal rahee hei
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30th September 2007, 06:16 PM
Lau fadfadati hai bujh jati hai thandi hawaon mein
Muhse shole lekin aur dehek uthte hain
Ehsaan hai tumhara in gajron par inko tumne saja diya
Tumhari aahat se to kai gulistan mehek uthte hain
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1st October 2007, 10:58 AM
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sher pasand karne ke liye navazish hazur !
Lijiye javab hazir hei is ka bhi .........
Na haara hai ishq na dunia thaki hei
diya jal raha hai hava chal rahee hei
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Hawa kay waastay ek kaam cHoR aaya hooN
Mai Diya jala k sar-e-shaam cHoR aaya hooN
AmaanteY shahar-o-shaam cHor aaya hooN
Mai Kahi charaag kahi jam cHor aaya hooN
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Ek naam maine kya likha sahil ki ret par
fir umar bhar hawa se meri dushmani rahi
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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Ek naam maine kya likha sahil ki ret par
fir umar bhar hawa se meri dushmani rahi
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Mile dost chaahe ya dushman mile
Gale se lagaa kar duaa kar chale
Thi shiddat vafaa men meri is kadar
Sanam bewafa ko khuda kar chale
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2nd October 2007, 07:57 PM
E WAFA KO BEWAFA SAMAJ NE WALE
MAJBURI UNKI BHI KABHI SAMJA KARO
FARIYAAD ME BHI WOH TUMHE YAAD KARTE RAHE
UNKI YEH FARIYAAD BHI KABHI SAMJA KARO
Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai
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