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19th November 2010, 04:08 AM
Hi all,
aaj boht dino ke baad kuch likha hai, in fact matla, bahar, kafiya wazan ye sab cheeze bhul gaya hu. Isliye boht hi ulta sidha likha hai. Dar asal kuch moments boht yaad aa rahe the, to bas unko hi likhne ki koshish ki hai. Pesh kar raha hu... Ek suhani subah me aankh khuli to yaad aaya tumse milne ka din hai kuch kasme kuch wade, kuch nagme kuch irade aur pyar ki bate karne ka din hai man hi man muskuraya, khushi khushi nahaya geet gaya, gungunaya, jhuma nacha shor machaya ab mai college ki aur ja raha hu abhi bhi geet ga raha hu sity baja raha hu college pahuncha to dekha tum terrace pe khadi ho saji sajai, qayamat si dha rahi ho ankho me intezar liye shayad mera pyar liye hazaro k beech me kamal si tum koi khubsurat ghazal si tum mera pyar meri mohabbat ho tum pari se bhi zyada khubsurat ho tum mujhe dekhkar tere labon pe muskurahat aane lagi hai jaan! Bas karo ab meri jan jane lagi hai aankho se ankhe takrayi, ab dhadkane badhne lagi hai ishq ki khumari mere sar k upar chadne lagi hai hi, kaisi ho, chuttiyan kaisi biti, padhai kaisi chal rahi hai, wats up etc. Uff ye mai kya keh raha hu socha tha kahunga k tere bina boht udas raha hu har din har pal teri yadon k pas raha hu tere liye jine laga hu marne laga hu han mai tujhse mohabbat karne laga hu tum hi tum bas mere dil me rahne lagi ho meri dhamniyo me meri shirao me bahne lagi ho phir sath baithe kuch baate ki kuch hansi mazak kuch kisse kahaniya thodi door tak hath thamkar sath chale wo kabhi na bhulne wala hansi safar hum aur tum jab the humsafar aur ye kya-- time up Ilahi! Ye waqt itna tez kyo chalne lagta hai mere masum se dil pe sitam kyo karne lagta hai kuch hi der me tum mujhse door ja rahi thi ek hook si dil me uthti ja rahi thi mayoos nazro se mai door tak tumhe dekha kiya kal sab kuch keh dunga man hi man socha kiya muskurate hue lota, sham tak khumari rahi phir ek aur rat hum pe bhari rahi subah phir ankh khuli to dekha ye subah kuch dhundhli hai suhani nahi hai ab zindagi me koi kissa nahi hai koi kahani nahi hai alarm cheek cheek ke keh raha hai boss jaldi utho office jana hai ab tumhari zindagi ka yahi fasana hai yahi tarana hai jo tum ne dekha wo khwab tha wo waqt purana hai ab namumkin un lamho ka lot k aana hai rashid  Tu AndheroN -ujaaloN me mila kar mujhko Zindagi ab to sawaloN me mila kar mujhko |
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19th November 2010, 01:16 PM
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Waaaaaaaaaaah kya keh diyaaapne ,,,,,,,,,its very true............i like it......... |
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20th November 2010, 12:56 AM
Hi sneha dost
thank you for reading and replying. Mujhe achcha laga that you liked it. Take care Rashid Tu AndheroN -ujaaloN me mila kar mujhko Zindagi ab to sawaloN me mila kar mujhko |
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20th November 2010, 12:59 AM
Hi Sneha dost
thank you for reading and replying. Mujhe achcha laga that you liked it. Take care Rashid Tu AndheroN -ujaaloN me mila kar mujhko Zindagi ab to sawaloN me mila kar mujhko |
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20th November 2010, 11:39 AM
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20th November 2010, 12:59 PM
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bahut khoob............................................. .......... Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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20th November 2010, 03:45 PM
Ilahi! Ye waqt itna tez kyo chalne lagta hai
mere masum se dil pe sitam kyo karne lagta hai kuch hi der me tum mujhse door ja rahi thi ek hook si dil me uthti ja rahi thi mayoos nazro se mai door tak tumhe dekha kiya kal sab kuch keh dunga man hi man socha kiya muskurate hue lota, sham tak khumari rahi phir ek aur rat hum pe bhari rahi subah phir ankh khuli to dekha ye subah kuch dhundhli hai suhani nahi hai ab zindagi me koi kissa nahi hai koi kahani nahi hai alarm cheek cheek ke keh raha hai boss jaldi utho office jana hai ab tumhari zindagi ka yahi fasana hai yahi tarana hai jo tum ne dekha wo khwab tha wo waqt purana hai ab namumkin un lamho ka lot k aana hai Very Impressive ... Rashid Bhai ... ! Very Nice Poetry ..... Very Nice Creation ... dil se daad ... ! khush rahen ... duaaon ke saath ...  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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23rd November 2010, 03:56 PM
My pleasure,
would be trying to write. Regards, Rashid Quote:
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23rd November 2010, 03:57 PM
Thanks a lot Dear,
I am really grateful to have this reply, Regards, Rashid Quote:
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23rd November 2010, 03:59 PM
Naresh Ji,
Mai haqiqat mein bahot mashkoor hu, aap post par aaye aur reply kiyaa. Thank you very much Regards, Rashid Quote:
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16th December 2010, 04:06 PM
subah phir ankh khuli to dekha ye subah kuch dhundhli hai suhani nahi hai
ab zindagi me koi kissa nahi hai koi kahani nahi hai alarm cheek cheek ke keh raha hai boss jaldi utho office jana hai ab tumhari zindagi ka yahi fasana hai yahi tarana hai jo tum ne dekha wo khwab tha wo waqt purana hai ab namumkin un lamho ka lot k aana hai Good one Rashid sahab, keep writing......... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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20th February 2011, 05:22 PM
Bahot Bahot Shukriya Zainy Ji,
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