Intzaar karo thoda.... -
31st August 2004, 01:32 PM
Intzaar karo thoda…
Jaagta houn mai,aankhon ke diye bujh jaane tak
Jist me laakhon gum silsilevaar hain
Intzaar karo thoda dhadkan ke ruk jaane tak
Usske baad her mausam khushgawaar hai,
Dil-e-nadaan me dafan hain,hasraten,yaaden or kya kya
Ye dil kisska kayaam hai or kissi mazaar hai
Intzaar karo thoda dhadkan ke ruk jaane tak
Usske baad her mausam khushgawaar hai,
Humari saanso ke khzaane bhee loote unhone
Jo kaha kiye humper unki jaan nisaar hai
Intzaar karo thoda dhadkan ke ruk jaane tak
Usske baad her mausam khushgawaar hai
Usske taano ke nashtar din raat hume chubha kiye
Jakhm dikhlayi na den,ye kaisee maar hai
Intzaar karo thoda dhadkan ke ruk jaane tak
Usske baad her mausam khushgawaar hai
Ishq aa jaye gar saamne to koi pehchaan nahi pata
Kehne ko to her kooche me ishq ke bimaar hain
Intzaar karo thoda dhadkan ke ruk jaane tak
Usske baad her mausam khushgawaar hai
Karan.q
Fainsle Qayamat taq multavee ho gaye
Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye
Jaagta houn mai,aankhon ke diye bujh jaane tak
Jist me laakhon gum silsilevaar hain
Intzaar karo thoda dhadkan ke ruk jaane tak
Usske baad her mausam khushgawaar hai,
Karan saahab..
Kaise haiN aap? Aap tou bilkul hi gaayab ho gaye haiN..
Bahoot achchha yah qalam pesh kiya hai aap ne.. Par aap ne shayar saahab ka naam nahi bataaya.. Anyway, Thanx alot for sharing.
wo shayar ko shayar na samjhe ye bhee ajab baat hai -
19th October 2004, 05:57 PM
Hiii mayank
mujhse he mera naam pooch dala tumne
khair ....shayri.com me post kiya gaya har kalaam mera he hai...haan ek ya do ghazals shayad kissi or ki likh daali hain to ussme naam jaroor bataaya hai ......khair mere paas apne he qalaam bahoot hain likhne ko..... issliye fursat nahi milti or kissi or ka qalaam likhne ki
aap padhte rahiye hum likhte rahenge
izzajat
karan.q
Fainsle Qayamat taq multavee ho gaye
Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye
Please bura mat maaniye. Mera aisa koyi iraada nahi tha ki aap ke dil ko dukhaaoN. Maine pahle hi dekh liya tha ki iss maiN shayar ka naam nahi hai. Hame laga bhi ki shayad aap ne hi likha ho par shayri-e-mashoor section mai likha hai tou iss liye puchh liya.
Jo bura maan jaayen,unhe dost kaun kahega -
7th November 2004, 11:31 AM
Hii my dear friend
Itni si baat thee... or aap to youn he sochne lage..
HUmne to sirf iss liye ye baat aapko batayi kyunki apni poetry's of safe kerne ka shayri.com se behtar raasta hume to kaheen nahi mila... waise hum likha karte hain or apni poetry's apne computer me bhee save kiya kerte hain.. magar ek muddat pehle jab humari hard disk crash ho gayi thee i lost more then 120 poetry's of mine... it was sad... but still writing is in my nature... not just a hobby so i had to write allot .. then i found shayri.com jahaan aapke jaise acche acche dost bhee mil jaya karte hain ..
izzajat
karan.q
Fainsle Qayamat taq multavee ho gaye
Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye