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Khuda ke liye Shayri.com ko shayri ke liye hi rehne deN... -
29th January 2004, 12:06 PM
Aziiz Dosto
Adaab
Mujhe bohat takleef ho rahi hai yahaN jo bhi kuch chal raha hai ye dekh kar. Bohat logoN se shikayateN aayeen haiN ke yahaN ka mahole badmaza hota ja raha hai.
Afsos ki baat ye hai ke ye site jo sher kehne aur sunane ke liye hai usey yahaN ke membaran ne dating-joint meN tabdeel kar diya hai. Shayrana zaban ki jagah galiyoN aur bhadde afaaz ne le li hai. Log jis tarah ke alfaaz istemaal kar rahe hain wo badi sharm ki baat hai. Jab paRh kar sharm aati hai to un hazraat ko wo alfaaz yahan likh kar chaspaaN karte huve kyuN nahin aayee.
Sabhi dostoN maiN is baat se aagah karva duuN ke behtar hoga ke is tarah ki batoN ke liye koi aur jagah chun leN. Ab yahan se aise logoN ka daan-paani uth gaya samjheN. MaiN baRi hi saKhti se aisee har post ko delete karne jaa raha huuN. Aur gandi zaban wale har member BAN karne ja raha huuN.
Ye baat tai hai ke is site par is qism ki harketeN yahaN bardasht nahiN ki jaayeNgi. Chahe jo bhi ho.
Aur jo log is jagah se pyaar karte haiN unse meri guzarish hai ke Khuda ke liye apne waqt men se kuch lamhe iske liye nikalen aur yahaN hone waali kisi bhi badmaza baat par nazar rakhen aur uskii ittela mujhe deN. Foran action liya jaayega.
Ummeed hai aap sab is baat par ghaur kareN ge aur yahaN ke haalt theek karne meN meri madad kareNge.
“YahaN Khaskar Ekta ji ki post ka zikr karna chahuN ga. Ekta ji aapko ye post nahiN karni chahiye thi. YahaN aapki tasveer ki zaruurat nahiiN hai. Agar aap shayri karti haiN to most welcome. Aapki post delete ki jaa rahi hai.”
Iss forum ke liye ye zaruur kahuuN ga ke yahaN log bohat hi bhaddi cheezeN post karte haiN. khuda ke liye aisa na kareN. Aur agar aisa hota hua dekheN to mujhe report kareN.
Khaksaar
Praveen Saxena
raah meiN hi manziloN ka zikr mat chedo Praveen
manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi
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29th January 2004, 05:05 PM
hey, good work yaar.i m impressed that u considered my request, now just tell me one thing i had doubt , can we use humorous shayri section for funny things( offcource i m talking abt non-pornographic things).like can we post english jokes, funny pictures which doesn't generates any objection from public.
I don't care what i expect from life, i ask what life expects from me!!!!!!!!!
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29th January 2004, 05:13 PM
mere BIG BUSY DOST,
yaha jo bhi kharaab ho raha hai oose mitaane, maie hamesha tumhare sathh hu.
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*Ishq~Ibadat.......**
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29th January 2004, 05:40 PM
Waise hu toh mein kuch bhi nehi, lekin kowshish yehi rahegi ke aapke sath dedu jitna bhi hosake meri bash meh. Shukriya. Take care. God bless you. 
*Aapni Parwaaz-e-Takhayyull Hain Zamane Se Juda
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain
Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche**
*~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~**
*Pure Love**
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bohot badhiya -
9th February 2004, 02:58 AM
is mamle mein koi madat ki zaarorat ho to bande ko bhi zaroor yaad karna brother..
I AM NOT AFRAID OF DARKNESS.NO NEVER. BUT I AM AFRAID OF WHAT IT HIDES.
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16th February 2004, 04:53 PM
prasaxena sahab..aap ne sahi kaha...yaha aab kuch kuch badlav aa rahe hain,aaj se do-teen saal pehle jab main yaha aya tha too ye site bahut alag thee...mene yaha aap se,maikash sahab se, shumaila jee..aur bhi bhi shayar thee jinse bahut kuch sikha..tha...par aaj ye ek dating point banchuke hain...aur pehle yaha ek durse se badee tehjeeb se baat karte thee...aur aab...lagta hain.....ke ham koi'b" grade kee hindi film dekh rahe ho......meri bhi aab yahi darkhuast hain..ke jo bhi yaha..bhaddi bhasha ka upyog kare ussse nikal dena chaiye...mere khayal se shayri.com ko aise members ke zarurat nahin.......aur main...sare un purane members se iltiza karna chahunga...ke wo ho sake too phir se apna kemetee samay yaha de taki mujh jaise nausikheye bhi kuch sekh sake.....
.................................................. ..........dhanyawad
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28th February 2004, 01:11 AM
salam and hey to all of u
iam agree with u saxsena bhai.....aisa nahin hona chahiye ...agar jo log gande lafz ka istemaal karte hain unke post ko delete karna hi chahiye ...or atleast logon ko bhi khayal karna chahiye ke hum aise bataien ya aise lafzon ka istemaal naa karen .....or aap sabhi logon se guzarish hai ke plz aap log bhi paras bhai ka saath den or aise cheezon ka band karen
tanha dil
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Delete The post -
30th April 2004, 10:12 AM
Hi There.
Will U PLease Delete THis POst . Its JUst So Cheap & Does Not Look good On This Forum .
JUST SEE (my own creation)
Vipul :-)
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LOVE IS A JOURNY
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VISION -
25th June 2004, 12:52 AM
AREY SAHAB
MUZE TO AISA KUCH NAZAR NAHI AATA
AAP JARA APNA NAZARIYA BADLIYE
AFTERALL
"WE SEE THE THINGS
NOT THE WAY THEY ARE BUT THE WAY WE ARE"
ANYWAYS
I AM ALLWAYS WITH U
TAKE CARE
BYE
....................RAVI
LUV IS A JOURNEY NOT A DESTINATION
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Shayar
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Re: VISION -
25th June 2004, 10:40 AM
Janab
Aap kis nazriye ki baat karte haiN jo hum badleN.
Shukr hai ke aapne ab tak wo nahiN dekha jo humne yahaN se hataya hai. Aur janab kuch bhi kehne se pehle zara soch liya kariye. bade badi baateN quote karne se pehle soch leN ke kya Khud aap unka matlab jaante haiN? Mere khayal se nahiN.
Shukria
Praveen saxena
AREY SAHAB
MUZE TO AISA KUCH NAZAR NAHI AATA
AAP JARA APNA NAZARIYA BADLIYE
AFTERALL
"WE SEE THE THINGS
NOT THE WAY THEY ARE BUT THE WAY WE ARE"
ANYWAYS
I AM ALLWAYS WITH U
TAKE CARE
BYE
....................RAVI
LUV IS A JOURNEY NOT A DESTINATION [/QUOTE]
raah meiN hi manziloN ka zikr mat chedo Praveen
manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi
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25th June 2004, 10:43 AM
mere BIG BUSY DOST,
maine kal raat hi raviji ko pm kar k yahi baat bataayi.... ke tumhe kahne se pahlaey oose sochna thha...
or oosne woh nahi dekha jo tumne hataya hai...... aksar yahi hota hai... mahenat jyada nazar nahi aati... insaan yahi par maar khata hai... khiar.... hume garv hai k tum apni duty khub jahemat se oothhate ho.
cool yaar.
good morning coffee k sathh.
khush raho.
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30th July 2004, 12:27 PM
aapko bas thanx khungi aap jante hi honge kyun??
sakhi
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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main aur meri tanhayee...
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28th October 2004, 03:57 PM
prasaxena sahab
ab main kya kahu
yaha logon ne humourous shayri section ko bhi nahi choda
janab "kapil 00" sahab kya ghatiya language use karte hai yaha
accha hoga agar aap inhe warning de
aur ho sake to seedha inhe nikaal de site pe se
kyu ki mere khayal se ye shayri ke liye site hai
faltugiri k liye nahi
plz look into this matter as it is serious
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)
log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
{nt mine}
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22nd November 2004, 06:02 PM
Praveen ji.....
Aman phir haazir hai.... aur ye DIL KA DARD post from pinyk27 datd 22nd Nov... pe gabbar singh ji ne galat meaining mein jawab diya hai.....
aap padh lijiye.... apka kya khayal hai...us hisaab se action lijiye
Apka apna
**(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)**
*·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·*
**(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)**
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si.....
aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae......
AMAN RAHI
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LOVE IS A JOURNY
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ok -
24th February 2005, 11:57 PM
pravin bhai
bahut dino baad reply de raha hoo
very sorry
actually
mere kehne ka matlab
aapko hurt karna nahi tha
fir bhi aapko bura laga ho to
apne
kan pakadte hai
.......ravi
(qoat ke baare me aapne jo kaha
pls uska explaination chaunga)
(i will improve it as per ur openion)
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1st March 2005, 02:00 PM
Hi
maine is baat ke liye aapke saath hun
aap jo kar rahein ho voh poori tarah teek hain
mere kahayal se aap jo bhi step loge voh teek hoga
apki dost
priti
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16th March 2005, 02:34 AM
You are right Ankit, and Dear Praveen bhai I agree, this site or any section of this site is not for dating and for words are not proper to use. it is getting worse then ever... people keep forgetting meaning of Shayri, Gazal and real fun... well, Humourous section is for fun and jokes, but not to hurt somone or to use bad language... that's only looks bad of this site! and much more... well, I just tried to keep clean this place!
Take care...
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16th March 2005, 09:36 AM
Janab Ankitraheja ji.....
Jaan kar khushi hui ki aapne ye kadam uthaya.....
aur Parul ji aapka bhi shukriya......
Janab Praveen Saxena sahab ko mail kar di gayi hai.....
vo jald hi is mudde ko hal karenge.....
aise hi is bazm ki laaz rakhiyega.....
khaaksaar......
**(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)**
*·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·*
**(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)**
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inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si.....
aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae......
AMAN RAHI
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hi -
27th March 2005, 05:02 PM
janab praveen ji,
apkai uthai kadam kai hum shukrgujar hai aur isi
baat ko lekar apsai kuch kehna chahoonga kai
shayri.com koi game khelnai ki jagheh nahi hai
jaisai ki hamari *AMORE* ji yaha kar rahi hai
so plz do take action to stop her .
yours truly
Ankit[dost]
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30th April 2005, 03:08 PM
DOST mae es site ka bhut purana member hu. mae likhta bhi tha per srif ese vajah se es site per likhna band ker diya tha. muje malum hai muje tabhi es type ke ek mail likhne chiye the.per mae aaj khud ko bhut kamjoor mahsoos ker reha hu kash us weqt mae bhi likh sakta .per aapne nae yeh likh per bhut he acche shruvat ke hai.
her acche kam mae aapke saath ho ga yeh ASARDAR .. vishvas rehkhan DOST!
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16th December 2005, 12:14 PM
i am withh all of you
agar mujhse bhi koi bhool hui ho tio plzp lz plz bata dena taki main bhavishya me dhyaan rakh sakoo
**** Nonu****
~*~ EK SHAYAR Anjaan~*~
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25th December 2005, 04:18 PM
Well..
This all requires lot of efforts and good moniotoring. Also members should understand.
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sure -
27th April 2006, 12:03 PM
hum hain to kuch bhi nahi
but we try jo bhi yahaan kharaab hai use thik karne mein aapke saath hain.
with best wishes
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11th December 2006, 05:09 PM
Bade ajeeb hain ye zindagi ke raaste, anjane mod par kuchh log dost ban jate hain, milne ki khushi de ya na de bichhadne ka gam zarur de jate hain.
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11th December 2006, 05:11 PM
Bade ajeeb hain ye zindagi ke raaste, anjane mod par kuchh log dost ban jate hain, milne ki khushi de ya na de bichhadne ka gam zarur de jate hain.
friends?????????/
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23rd December 2007, 11:30 AM
kisi khas ko nazarandaz kiya nahi jata,
jinhe bhool sakte nahi unhe yaad kiya nahi jata.
ye yadein toh sahil hain un lamhon ki,
Jin lamhon ko dobara jiya nahi jata.
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just for share poetry -
9th March 2008, 02:45 AM
Bushpan kay wo dukh bhi kitnay achay tha
tab to srf khilonay tota kartay the
wo khushiyan bhi janay kesi khushiyan thi
titli kay par noch kar uchla kartay the
ab to aik ansu bhi ruswa karta hai
tab to dil khol kay roya kartay the
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03442044188 for direct shyri if any -
9th March 2008, 02:53 AM
kahin dil chor aye ho
bht chup rehtay ho na bante na sanwarte ho
na koi bat kartay ho
bahri mehfil main b
hamesha khe rehtay ho
udas ankh lay kar
har ksi ko taktay ho
koi jabyad ata hai
to tandi
aah bartain ho
to
khol kar kun nahi kehtay
sohal say pyar kartay ho
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10th March 2008, 01:24 AM
kya kehti hai ye nazrein
kya ye dhadkano ki aawaz ko sunti hain
kya ye us andekhe anjaane dhundhle chehre ko dekh paati hain
kya ye yaadon ki kitab mein uski tasweer dhundh paati hain
kya ye haya ki rangat se bani muskaan pe uska aks dhundh paati hain
kya ye khamoshi ki chadar ode shabdo se us ajnabee ka naam puchh pati hain
kya ye un uth ti palko se aur un jhukti palko se uska pata jaan paati hain
kya ye un ehsaaso ko mehsus kar paati hain jo hamesha hamein us ajnabee ki yaad dilati hain
kya kahu
gehri hain par inmein khwabo ki rangat hain
khamosh hain par ankahe shabdo ka inmein sagar hain
kaali gehri hain par inmein haya ka noor hain
jo kuch na kehkar bhi bahot kuch keh jaati hain
har kisi ko sirf apna deewana bana jaati hain
ye nazrein
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10th March 2008, 03:12 AM
Khud ko khud se hamklaam kar k dekhna
kitna mushkil hai ye kamm kar k dekhna
kis kadar udas guzarti hain mery shamain
yad kisi ko ksi sham main kar k dekhna 
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