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" MERI HAR SHAYRI ME USKA ZIKR.........." pata nahi ye aaj kal....? -
29th August 2006, 10:17 AM
pata nahi mera mann aaj kal itna kyu usko yaad kar raha hai
pata nahi mera dil aajkal itna kyu uske bare me soch raha hai .....
pata nahi ye kya hai par ek alag sa ehsas mujhe ho raha hai.........
isiliye shayad aaj kal uska meri har shayri me bahot zikr ho raha hai...........
pata nahi aaj kal,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,????????????
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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Re: " MERI HAR SHAYRI ME USKA ZIKR.........." pata nahi ye aaj kal....? -
29th August 2006, 10:42 AM
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Originally posted by dhavalrami4you
pata nahi mera mann aaj kal
itna kyu usko yaad kar raha hai
pata nahi mera dil aajkal
itna kyu uske bare me soch raha hai .....
pata nahi ye kya hai par ek
alag sa ehsas mujhe ho raha hai.........
isiliye shayad aaj kal uska
meri har shayri me bahot zikr ho raha hai...........
pata nahi aaj kal,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,????????????
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29th August 2006, 11:16 AM
sorry maine isme aise tarike se nahi likha sister mujhe laga k bahot chhoti lines hai to sath mehi jod deta hu ..par aapko mere lafz pasand aaye acha laga ye janke aur aapne jiska zikr kiya tha apne pm me usike liye hai ye...achha lagana aapko?
shukriya sister aap meri post pe aayi aur apna sujhav diya mujhe
aapka chhotasa bhai aur dost dhaval
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hi -
29th August 2006, 04:13 PM
bytheway aap kisske khayalon me khoye rahte hai ha , boliye boliye. mat bataiye......................
aap to aap hi hai. jitni tariff karo kam hi lagti hai.
ab bol hi deti hu ki aapne achha hi likha hai. u dont worry achha laga read karke isse.
aapki dost
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29th August 2006, 05:18 PM
bytheway aap kisske khayalon me khoye rahte hai ha , boliye boliye. mat bataiye......................
aap to aap hi hai. jitni tariff karo kam hi lagti hai.
ab bol hi deti hu ki aapne achha hi likha hai. u dont worry achha laga read karke isse.
aapki dost
pooja
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Tere aane ki khabar to nahi, phir bhi tera intazaar hai....
mujhe nahi pata kiske khayalo me khoya rehta hu ..aur tarif mujhe tumhari karni chahiye.......dhaval
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hi -
29th August 2006, 05:20 PM
kyu dhaval ji meri tarife kyu karni chahiye sher to aapne likha hai meine kya kiya???????????????????
aur aap jisske khayalon me rahte hai aapko nahi pata ki vo kon hai aisa kaise ho satkta hai ji.
aapki dost
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29th August 2006, 05:23 PM
kyu dhaval ji meri tarife kyu karni chahiye sher to aapne likha hai meine kya kiya???????????????????
aur aap jisske khayalon me rahte hai aapko nahi pata ki vo kon hai aisa kaise ho satkta hai ji.
aapki dost
pooja
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Masle huwe phoolo me khushbu ab bhi barkaraar hai,
Tere aane ki khabar to nahi, phir bhi tera intazaar hai....
tum meri zindagi me aayi to ye sher likha maine warna ye sirf khayal ban k rehjata........isiliyee main tumhari tarif karta hu
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